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This page transcludes a subset of the nominations found on the page of all the approved nominations for the "Did you know" section of the Main Page. It only transcludes the nominations filed under dates of the fourth-most recent week. The page is intended to allow editors to easily review recent nominations that may not be displaying correctly on the complete page of approved nominations if that page's contents are causing the page to hit the post-expand include size limit.

Science Fiction Chronicle

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Created by Piotrus (talk). Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 536 past nominations.

Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 02:24, 10 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

Abortion in Mauritius

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  • Source: [1] First, the courage posted by the government proposing an amendment to a part of the legislation that has remained dormant for nearly two centuries must be recognized.
Moved to mainspace by Vigilantcosmicpenguin (talk). Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 21 past nominations.

— Vigilant Cosmic Penguin 🐧(talk | contribs) 20:57, 3 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

  • Article was moved into mainspace on December 2 and was nominated on December 3, making it new enough. It is long enough, and is cited throughout to reliable sources. No copyright violation detected, and I'm assuming good faith that it isn't a close paraphrase of the many foreign language references used. Hook fact is interesting, a good length, and verifiable to the article, but the source is cited one sentence beyond the hook fact. This is a minor problem, but there must be an end-of-sentence citation directly after the quote. This will mean repeating a citation, but we do have to have it there in order to approve the hook per policy at WP:DYKHFC. Once this minor issue is fixed, please ping me and I will approve the hook. Best.4meter4 (talk) 15:22, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

All issues resolved. This hook can be promoted.4meter4 (talk) 18:19, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Jijin

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  • ... that for cultural reasons, jijin were permitted to be worn by Catholic priests in China even while celebrating Mass?
  • Source: Dipippo, Gregory. "The Chinese Sacrificial Hat, and Reflections on Inculturation in China". New Liturgical Movement. Retrieved 5 December 2024.
Created by YourLocalTraditionalist (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 15 past nominations.

~Darth StabroTalk  Contribs 04:03, 7 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

  • I'll review this one. Clovermoss🍀 (talk) 06:33, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    1. New enough and long enough? Created on December 2 and nominated on December 6. checkY Exceeds 1600 characters of prose according to Google Docs. checkY
    2. Well sourced, neutral, BLP-compliant and copyvio free? checkY While I don't have any copyright violation concerns, I would appreciate a second set on eyes on whether the block quote is proportional considering this is a shorter article.
    3. Presentable? checkY
    4. The hook is cited to a reliable source, short enough, and interesting? checkY
    5. The two images present are released under the public domain and I do not see any reason to doubt that. checkY
    6. QPQ? checkY
  • Looks good to me, so I'll approve it. I'd appreciate if the prep builder double checks my commentary above as this is my second review. Clovermoss🍀 (talk) 06:59, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

William Hamm Jr.

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Converted from a redirect by Darth Stabro (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 14 past nominations.

~Darth StabroTalk  Contribs 13:52, 2 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough

Policy compliance:

  • Adequate sourcing: No - The article gives the time of the kidnapping as June 15, 1933, at 12:15 p.m., but the cited source gives the time that Hamm was last sean as 12:20. Can you explaim where the 12:15 time comes from?
  • Neutral: No - The article currently states in WP:WIKIVOICE that Hamm married Dorothy Heywood on October 1, 1927, which is supported by the second cited source. However, the first cited source gives the marriage as having been in November 1927. Unless there is a very good reason for rejecting one source in favor of the other, we should probably not be so definite in the article. Can you explain a bit about this editorial choice?
  • Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing: Yes
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Not much to add to the above, though it's possible I missed something in my spot checks. Generally quite an interesting read. I prefer hook Alt2, as it has his name and mentions the silver nitrate; this is a biography, not an article on the event that is his kidnapping. — Red-tailed hawk (nest) 04:41, 4 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Anthony E. Wills

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Anthony E. Wills
Anthony E. Wills
  • ... that it was only after his death at a relatively young age that several of Anthony E. Wills's plays were adapted into films?
  • Alt1 ... that films were made of plays written by Anthony E. Wills (pictured) after his death at a relatively young age?
  • Sources: Youth at time of death in 1912- "Anthony E. Willis Dies". Billboard. Vol. 24, no. 31. August 3, 1912. p. 6. "Despite his youth, Mr Wills had gained considerable of a reputation as an author and producer."
Vitagraph Studios obtaining film rights in 1913 after his death: "Film Co. Feeling Around; Trying Hard to Be Friendly". Variety. 30 (12): 8. May 23, 1913.
Two film reviews: ""Our Wives"". The Moving Picture World. 18 (1): 49. October 4, 1913., "Empire". Bridgeport Evening Farmer. June 23, 1913. p. 8.
A third film covered in Erish, Andrew A. (2021). Vitagraph: America's First Great Motion Picture Studio. University Press of Kentucky. ISBN 9780813181219.
Created by 4meter4 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 98 past nominations.

4meter4 (talk) 02:07, 9 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited: Yes - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
  • Interesting: Yes
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Looks good. Nice work. BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:17, 13 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

1957 Ruskin Heights tornado

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An aerial view of the damage caused by the Ruskin Heights tornado.
An aerial view of the damage caused by the Ruskin Heights tornado.
Created by Wildfireupdateman (talk) and EF5 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

( ͡° ( ͡° ( ͡° ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) ͡°) ͡°) ͡°) 02:10, 3 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

Although technically the nom doesn't require a QPQ since you aren't the nominator, if you're going to do QPQs, just note that DYK is currently in backlog mode, meaning people with over 20 nominations will need to do two reviews instead of one. I think you still have less than 20 nominations so this doesn't apply to you so for now you only need to do just one review and not two, it's just something to keep in mind in case you get affected in the future. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 06:14, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

On first inspection, the article looks good. The only issue I have is that there's a few uncited sentences near the end of the first paragraph of the summary section; I've left a CN tag there. I'm definitely thinking the originally proposed blurb about the water tower is the best one; claim is verified in the article from this non-political Fox News source, the hook is short and interesting, no QPQ needed, Earwig shows no copyvio concern. My other minor issue is the status of the main image in the infobox - it's up for deletion on Commons, but this can feasibly be re-added as NFC later on if it's removed. I'd advise against using the image provided as it doesn't really illustrate the water tower or any of the other hooks, though. Almost there. Departure– (talk) 16:36, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Departure–: My QPQ is done, since I'm technically a nominator. All issues have been addressed. :) EF5 16:44, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
That was my only main issue. As it stands, the article's a little short but seems good enough for DYK as it stands. Good to go. Departure– (talk) 16:46, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Influencer

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Cavinder Twins in action
Cavinder Twins in action
Adrien Nunez as a basketball player
Adrien Nunez as a basketball player
Moved to mainspace by TonyTheTiger (talk). Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 369 past nominations.

TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:38, 9 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

  • Interesting article. No problems with copyright and hook mentioned in the article with proper source. Images have no copyright problems and freely licensed. Overall, the article has no problems with citations. Good to go. Toadboy123 (talk) 12:25, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hanta Road

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The 1853 Perry Expedition planting the United States flag on the Hanta Road
The 1853 Perry Expedition planting the United States flag on the Hanta Road
  • Source: 同盟するものにとっては人や物の交流の道、敵対するものにとっては戦の道とし使用されていましたIt was used by allies as a route for the exchange of people and goods, and by enemies as a route of war.[1]
1853年には,米国ペリー艦隊の探検隊がハンタ道を使用している In 1853, the expedition of the U.S. Perry fleet used the Hanta Trail.[2]
Created by Jpatokal (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 9 past nominations.

Jpatokal (talk) 07:12, 6 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

  • Outstanding little article. QPQ done, hook is extraordinarily fascinating and appropriately cited (AGF on sources as they are in Japanese). No copyvios noticed. Great job! Note to promoters: consider dropping "historic" as extraneous glossing when placing this in a prep or the queue. ~ Pbritti (talk) 01:51, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

References

Council of District Dumas

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Mikhail Vladimirsky, chairman of the Council of District Dumas
Mikhail Vladimirsky, chairman of the Council of District Dumas
  • Source: Timothy J. Colton. Moscow: Governing the Socialist Metropolis. Harvard University Press, 1995. pp. 93-95, 105, 110
Moved to mainspace by Soman (talk). Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 414 past nominations.

Soman (talk) 09:44, 3 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: New enough, long enough. Hook fact is interesting and verified (though I note the source says 2 million rubles, not one). Both QPQs are done, Earwig has no qualms. Good to go!  — Chris Woodrich (talk) 15:48, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Yanou Collart

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  • Source: 1
  • ALT1: ... that Yanou Collart's career was motivated by a desire to "never be dependent on a man"? Source: 1
  • Reviewed:
Moved to mainspace by Wasianpower (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

🌸⁠wasianpower⁠🌸 (talk • contribs) 04:19, 4 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

  • Article is new enough, long enough, and without any serious issues. Image in article is fair use, but she's still alive—pretty sure that's not allowed. The first hook is questionable as to appropriateness for a BLP. The second is a tad vague. I would appreciate an ALT2. ~ Pbritti (talk) 21:25, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Image has been removed. How about ALT2: ... that Yanou Collart helped Rock Hudson get medical treatment when Nancy Reagan would not? 1. For a less vague ALT1, ALT1a: ... that Yanou Collart's career as one the world's most prominent publicists was originally motivated by a desire to "never be dependent on a man"? 🌸⁠wasianpower⁠🌸 (talk • contribs) 21:37, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

BLKBOK

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Created by Cbl62 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 380 past nominations.

Cbl62 (talk) 00:54, 11 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

  • Nominated 54 minutes late. Hoping this can be forgiven. Cbl62 (talk) 00:55, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • Size and date check out, well-referenced, interesting hook, no apparent copyvio concerns. Believe this is good to go.

1st Separate Airborne Brigade

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Created by Romanov loyalist (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

Romanov loyalist (talk) 21:29, 5 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

  • What a fantastic article, I had never heard of this before and this page does it credit. New enough, more than long enough, well cited. Prefer Alt 1 for readability. No QPQ needed, GTG. Maury Markowitz (talk)

Home and Beauty

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  • ... that Somerset Maugham's play Home and Beauty has been described as both a "little masterpiece of polite merriment" and "a misogynist comedy dipped in vitriol"?
Created by 4meter4 (talk) and Tim riley (talk). Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 100 past nominations.

4meter4 (talk) 16:03, 10 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

Interesting article about a play with a title like a women's magazine and a cover picture to match, on fine sources, offline sources accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. As the hook seems to be what you want to say, I approve it. - A few suggestions for the article, and in general:
  • Don't have any pic next to the Roles table. It may look fine on large devices but on smaller ones it shrinks the table to many lines for each item.
  • Don't have any image size larger than upright=1.3, because more can't be displayed (any larger) on mobile devices.
  • In the plot, say once more that Victoria is that widow, - not all readers read sequentially, and her name is not even in the lead, just the image caption.
  • You will guess what I'd suggest in order to avoid the impression that the article is about a woman ;)
The review that impressed me most was "fun of the choicest sort, quiet fun". --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:53, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Al-Moghraqa

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  • ... that terracotta cones found at al-Moghraqa in Palestine are unique in the region but resemble artefacts from Ancient Egypt?
  • Source: "These artefacts are unique amongst the cultural assemblages of the Levant and are most closely paralleled by Egyptian funerary cones of the Eighteenth Dynasty from Thebes": Steel, Louise; Manley, Bill; Clarke, Joanne; Sadeq, Moain (2004b). "Egyptian 'Funerary Cones' from El-Moghraqa, Gaza". The Antiquaries Journal. 84: 319. doi:10.1017/S0003581500045856.
Created by Richard Nevell (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 6 past nominations.

Richard Nevell (talk) 19:29, 9 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

Good suggestion - I don't recall a photo of the site in any of the papers, but there were at least drawings of the cones. As they'll be under fair use that's (I assume) not suitable for DYK but could still be useful for the article. I'll look into it. Richard Nevell (talk) 20:59, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

American Wedding (song)

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  • Reviewed: None
Converted from a redirect by Jolielover (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

jolielover♥talk 06:39, 5 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

  • Review by Tbhotch

General eligibility:

Policy compliance:

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited: Yes
  • Interesting: Yes
  • Other problems: Yes
QPQ: Done.

Overall: A former redirect that is long enough. The hook is interesting. No QPQ required. There are no copyvios, only quoted text. There are some unsourced statements that I tagged and must be resolved before approval. Refer to WP:NOR at the sentence beginning with "Ocean references the 1990 film Pretty Woman and the 1999 film Runaway Bride in the lyrics. (CC) Tbhotch 20:00, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jolielover: You're only missing the paragraph that starts with "Ocean continued to perform the song..." since the source doesn't say that he continued doing it (at most I found "I guess if I play it at Coachella it'll cost me a couple hundred racks") or that "Many critics defended Ocean, highlighting that the track was part of a non-commercial mixtape". (CC) Tbhotch 01:04, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The newer additions doesn't represent an issue and the unsourced text was removed accordingly. Ready to go. (CC) Tbhotch 05:10, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Black Slave's Cry to Heaven

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Playbill for Black Slave's Cry to Heaven
Playbill for Black Slave's Cry to Heaven
Created by Crisco 1492 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 718 past nominations.

 — Chris Woodrich (talk) 22:28, 4 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

Melichrus procumbens

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Jam tarts in the Australian National Botanic Gardens
Jam tarts in the Australian National Botanic Gardens
  • ... that jam tarts (pictured) are pollinated by ants?
  • Reviewed:
Created by Gderrin (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

Gderrin (talk) 23:17, 4 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

References

  1. ^ Fairley, Alan; Moore, Philip (1989). Native Plants of the Sydney District. Kenthurst: Kangaroo Press. p. 88.

Pisidice of Methymna

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  • ... that in Greek mythology, Achilles promised to marry Pisidice if she would help him conquer her homeland, but afterwards he had her executed for treason?
  • Reviewed:
Created by Deiadameian (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

Deiadameian (talk) 22:07, 5 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

Apologies for not having realised about DYKFICTION - happy to help workshop a new hook Chaiten1 (talk) 14:22, 14 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Are we really applying DYKFICTION to mythology and legends now? I get the idea but that doesn't seem to follow the spirit of the guideline as originally proposed. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 05:08, 19 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Per the discussion on the talk page, IMO, this interpretation of DYKFICTION is a minority one and should not block the hook lest it become a naysayer's veto. The hook reads fine to me. DYKFICTION is about "creative works", i.e. novels or the like. Citing serious, scholarly mythology sources like Brill's New Paulys about the nature of mythology or folklore is not fiction. I would suggest the hook be approved as is. SnowFire (talk) 03:44, 25 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Noah Knigga

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  • ... that American football player Noah Knigga went viral for his last name and had to clarify its pronunciation?
Created by Soulbust (talk). Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 39 past nominations.

Soulbust (talk) 20:55, 12 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

@Narutolovehinata5: QPQs have been completed. Soulbust (talk) 00:19, 17 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you. This is ready for a full review. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 04:34, 17 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • The article was nominated within a week of its creation and is well over the minimum character requirement. Every claim is sourced, and the copyvio detector didn't come up with any violations. The first hook is straight to the point, interesting, and well-sourced; I don't think the second hook could work, as it relies on a present tense construction in order for "Noah" to land. The article has no images to check. As noted above, QPQs have been completed promptly. Ultimately, there are no problems with the nomination. It should be good to go! Thank you for your work. Phibeatrice (talk) 07:45, 17 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    • @Phibeatrice: Thank you for your review, I really appreciate it! Do you think the second hook would work if it was rephrased as "Did you know... that the Eastern Michigan Eagles "Noah guy" who will play linebacker for them in 2025?". I think the pun aspect is amusing and is able to both accurately quote the team's social media announcement of his signing and provide a tame alternative to (and maneuver away from) what would otherwise be a more eyebrow-raising pun that could be made here. Soulbust (talk) 08:07, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
      • @Soulbust: I think that could work—I just went through a bunch of archived DYKs and found that sometimes a present-tense construction makes it through as long as it makes sense time-wise. In your case, this hook would simply have to run before Noah arrives on the team, which wouldn't be hard to do at all! I still think the first hook is more unique and engaging—as someone who has been aware of Noah for a while mostly due to his last name—but the pun is fun and would still encourage people to click to his page while being, of course, tamer. I'll say here, for anyone preparing the hooks later, that both hooks should work. Phibeatrice (talk) 16:22, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Jack Browning

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  • Source: SDSU website ("Also earned first-team all-MW accolades at punter [1] by Pro Football Focus, Phil Steele Magazine and College Football Network, and as a kickoff specialist [2] by College Football Network, and a fourth-team honoree at kicker [3] by Phil Steele Magazine")
Moved to mainspace by BeanieFan11 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 276 past nominations.

BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:39, 12 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

Katerina Clark

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Moved to mainspace by Miraclepine (talk). Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 64 past nominations.

ミラP@Miraclepine 16:37, 8 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

Thomas Fenner (sea captain)

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Created by 4meter4 (talk), Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk), and Carlstak (talk). Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 97 past nominations.

4meter4 (talk) 01:10, 8 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Created on 5 December; 4,762 characters; 2 x QPQ Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:24, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Ketchup chip

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  • ... that ketchup chips were introduced in the 1970s along with other flavours such as grape and orange?
Improved to Good Article status by Clovermoss (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 5 past nominations.

Clovermoss🍀 (talk) 06:27, 9 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]


General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Promoted to GA 5 December; currently 3,315 characters long; 7.4% Earwig. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 19:18, 9 December 2024 (UTC) Good to go with main or ALT - main preferred. @Clovermoss: You should have included the image! Hawkeye7 (discuss) 19:18, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hawkeye7: I have a slight preference for the main hook. :) As for the image, I know that there's more images than spots to put them, so I'm okay if the hook doesn't include it. Clovermoss🍀 (talk) 19:21, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, hooks without images run much sooner, but the lead image attracts more page views. I could not help think of this. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 19:26, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Anna Weisman

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  • ... that in 1902 the paramedic student Anna Weisman smuggled fonts to set up an underground revolutionary publishing house in Saratov?
  • Source: Владлен Николаевич Степанов. Адресовано в Москву. Московский рабочии, 1987. p. 214
Created by Soman (talk). Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 415 past nominations.

Soman (talk) 12:35, 5 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

Article is new, and long enough; it is an interesting bio of a person about whom there is nothing written in English. It is well written, neutral, and sourced to a series of Russian-language texts which are not acessible so AGF on these. QPQs have been done. ALT0 is very close, and perhaps just needs a little rewording: 'the paramedic student' - is the 'paramedic' part needed in the hook? The words 'fonts' is perhaps not quite the right word (both in the hook and article) - do you mean printing materials? or printers blocks? and did Weisman set up a 'printing house' or just a 'printing press'? @Soman:Chaiten1 (talk) 18:30, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

  • Per Font, "In a manual printing (letterpress) house the word "font" would refer to a complete set of metal type that would be used to typeset an entire page." Priting house is the term used for the Bolshevik underground, see for example Nina Printing House. 'Paramedic' is not absolutely necessary for the hook, but gives a bit more detail. --Soman (talk) 00:31, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the explanations; happy to approve the hook as it is! Good to go. Chaiten1 (talk) 08:09, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Darrell Hogan

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5x expanded by WikiOriginal-9 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 7 past nominations.

~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 21:07, 5 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]


General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

Hook eligibility:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: Article meets eligibility criteria -- recently expanded 5x. No concerns with length, tone, or neutrality. Earwig shows no copyvio. No problems with overall sourcing -- sourced to a couple of databases and a couple of obituaries. All good there.

Have two questions re: the hook. I think I understand the gist of it. Hogan was named into the All-Pro team before being drafted into a professional team? Can we try any other hook to make this score higher on the interestingness scale? If there is not much to improve the hook, I will go with the nominator's choice. That said, the hook still needs to be used in the article. I do not see that currently. The article does say that he was first-team All-Pro, but does not state the other parts of the hook.

Handing this back to the nominator. Thanks. Ktin (talk) 06:24, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

  • Everything in the hook is in the article. See pro career section: "After going undrafted in the 1949 NFL draft, Hogan signed with the Pittsburgh Steelers on February 27, 1949.[5] He started all 12 games for the Steelers during his rookie year in 1949, recording one interception and two fumble recoveries.[1] He was named a first-team All-Pro by the International News Service for the 1949 season." It's in the lead also.

I added some more alts below. Those might be better anyway. Thank you.

~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 10:13, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

  • ALT0 needs to be introduced into the article. Currently it needs to be synthesized from different parts of the article. ALT1 and ALT2 are good and are approved. Minor point -- I would recommend updating the sentence "His obituary stated that ..." to "An obituary in the San Antonio Express News stated that ...". Adding for ALT1 and ALT2. Striking ALT0. Ktin (talk) 16:53, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Life Till Bones

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  • ... that one critic described some of Life Till Bones's melodies as akin to "trying to dig a hole in a bowl full of sugar"?
Converted from a redirect by ThaesOfereode (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 10 past nominations.

ThaesOfereode (talk) 04:01, 5 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

Richard Stratton (diplomat)

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  • ... that Richard Stratton's diplomatic career took him from the Pitcairn Islands to "South America to Japan, and from Southern Africa to the foothills of the Himalayas"?
  • Source: quote is from The Times - I also added to the hook his relation to the Pitcairn Islands (see e.g. [2] as a ref for him being the territory's governor)
Moved to mainspace by BeanieFan11 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 278 past nominations.

BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:44, 13 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

  • @Yakikaki: Sorry for taking so long to respond. Is there a requirement that quotes need to be attributed in the hook? All I read is that if the source is not willing to say the fact in its own voice, the hook should attribute back to the original source as well. – but I don't think that'd apply, as The Times had that wording in their own voice. But anyway, if it is required, would the modification be something like ALT2: ... that Richard Stratton's diplomatic career, according to The Times, took him "from South America to Japan, and from Southern Africa to the foothills of the Himalayas"? That does seem kind of less "hook-y," though. BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:37, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for getting back about this. On closer look and second though I realise you are probably – and hopefully – right. I would also prefer the original hook to be honest, but thanks for providing an ALT in any case. Yakikaki (talk) 08:51, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The House of Bijapur

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The House of Bijapur
The House of Bijapur
  • ... that The House of Bijapur (pictured) has been called a "painted curtain call" since the dynasty it depicts was overthrown only a few years later?
Created by AmateurHi$torian (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

AmateurHi$torian (talk) 15:47, 8 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

  • The article is new enough, long enough and the hook proposals good, particular the first one. They are also supported by inline citations. However, stylistically the article needs work. I would say it currently fails the presentability criterion. The lead section does not summarise the article. The "Significance" section starts abruptly, stating it is larger than ordinary manuscript pictures, but until now the reader hasn't even been informed it IS a manuscript picture. The "Description" section starts like this: "In the middle is the principal subject; The painting depicts eight of the nine rulers of the Bijapur Sultanate; leaving out only Mallu Adil Khan, whose reign lasted for only seven months." Why the semi-colons? These are just a few immediate points I spotted. I think the nominator should go through the article and bring it up to common Manual of Style standards before we can proceed with this nomination. Let me know when you have done so and I will take another look. Kind regards, Yakikaki (talk) 15:35, 15 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Tidied up the article a bit. Expanded the lead, removed the semicolons, and added some information regarding the painting's status as a (presumed) manuscript picture.AmateurHi$torian (talk) 11:39, 17 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Very nice improvement of the article! It should be good to go now. Yakikaki (talk) 16:13, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Manger on McNichols

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  • Reviewed:
Created by TheseVGF (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

TheseVGF (talk) 22:49, 9 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: None required.

Overall: Epicgenius (talk) 16:00, 12 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Saxophone sonata (Creston)

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  • ... that the publishing of Paul Creston's saxophone sonata was delayed by a "rat with a toothbrush mustache"? Source: Morris, Willie (1996). The Development of the Saxophone Compositions of Paul Creston (DMA thesis). University of Missouri–Kansas City. OCLC 35239809. p 118. As quoted in article.
    • Reviewed:
    • Comment: Can supply other hooks if need be :)
Moved to mainspace by UpTheOctave! (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

UpTheOctave! • 8va? 19:22, 6 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: None required.

Overall: Hook fact is brilliant; you may get some kickback that the fact is in a dropquote, but I don't mind. It does need a reference in the running text per WP:DYKHFC. Earwig spots no issues. New enough, long enough, no image to review though the one in the lede does appear to be free.  — Chris Woodrich (talk) 23:08, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Conestoga wagon

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Conestoga wagon from the early 19th century
Conestoga wagon from the early 19th century
  • ... that the Conestoga wagon (pictured) has a boat-like shape but is unsuitable for traveling on water bodies?
  • Source: Conestoga Wagon 1750–1850: Freight Carrier for 100 Years of America's Westward Expansion (p. 185-187)
Improved to Good Article status by PrimalMustelid (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 9 past nominations.

PrimalMustelid (talk) 14:29, 11 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

  • article is recently promoted to GA, long enough and within policy. Hook is short and interesting. Picture is freely licensed and appropriate. QPQ is complete. I prefer ALT2. ALT0 is fine too. ALT1 isn't very interesting to me. Leave it to the promoter to choose between 2 and 0. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:34, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Onekaka Wharf and tramline

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Remnants of Onekaka Wharf
Remnants of Onekaka Wharf
Created by Schwede66 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 166 past nominations.

Schwede66 02:16, 10 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

  • QPQs done. Article is long/new enough. No copyvios. Image is free to use, although the caption should start with a capital letter. Hook is interesting. Hook matches the article and source. ―Panamitsu (talk) 21:44, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Aquilegia chrysantha, Aquilegia chaplinei

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Aquilegia chrysantha
Aquilegia chrysantha
  • Source: Nold, Robert (2003). Columbines: Aquilegia, Paraquilegia, and Semiaquilegia. Portland, OR: Timber Press. ISBN 0881925888.
  • ALT1: ... that the Chapline columbine is generally considered a distinct species, except in Texas, where it is considered a variety of the golden columbine (pictured)?
    • Source: Nold, Robert (2003). Columbines: Aquilegia, Paraquilegia, and Semiaquilegia. Portland, OR: Timber Press. ISBN 0881925888.
    5x expanded by Pbritti (talk). Number of QPQs required: 4. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 54 past nominations.

    Pbritti (talk) 21:28, 6 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    1. Examples of this plant found in Texas are classified differently than examples of it found elsewhere?
    2. Texas law gives this plant different status for in terms of habitat protections, conservation and endangered species considerations than laws elsewhere?
    3. Texas taxonomic societies have come to a unique determination regarding this plant wherever it is found?
    4. Some important Texans disagree with non-Texans regarding classification in a manner that bears weight?
    5. Something else?-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 21:46, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]


    KCTV

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    Improved to Good Article status by Sammi Brie (talk). Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 720 past nominations.

    Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 05:58, 7 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Sammi Brie making life easy here. GA was just today, length of article is good, no copyvios detected. Hook is interesting enough that someone with no interest in the subject matter (me) paused and wanted to read what happened there. Citation appropriately placed. The Harry Truman bit not getting a mention is a bit of a surprise, but that's nitpicking. We're good to go here. ~ Pbritti (talk) 19:51, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Jewish Ethnographic Expedition

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    Created by Artem.G (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 18 past nominations.

    Artem.G (talk) 07:51, 12 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    Aquilegia gegica, Aquilegia colchica

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    Created by Pbritti (talk) and Jacketpocket (talk). Number of QPQs required: 4. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 58 past nominations.

    Pbritti (talk) 01:09, 9 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    Confederate Monument (Oxford, Mississippi)

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    Confederate Monument at the University of Mississippi
    Confederate Monument at the University of Mississippi
    5x expanded by Hawkeye7 (talk) and Donner60 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 435 past nominations.

    Hawkeye7 (discuss) 01:12, 13 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Article looks good. There are no major copyvios but I'd like the phrase "... American Civil War, almost the entire student body ..." to be worded differently because it's the same in the source but it's not a major problem. Image is freely licensed. Reviewing ALT0: The hook is interesting, matches the article and the source. ―Panamitsu (talk) 02:42, 13 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Thomas P. Fenner

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    Thomas P. Fenner
    Thomas P. Fenner
    Created by 4meter4 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 99 past nominations.

    4meter4 (talk) 15:41, 9 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall: Per MOS:LEADCITE, the material in the lead section should be cited. As the content also appears in the remainder of the article, that should not be difficult for the article creator to accomplish. Originally I had concerns over the fact that the lead section was uncited, but given that even featured articles can have uncited lead sections as 4meter4 indicates, I am withdrawing that objection. --Metropolitan90 (talk) 03:47, 12 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    @Metropolitan90 You have misunderstood the policy. The opposite is true. MOS:LEADCITE says The presence of citations in the lead is neither required in every article nor prohibited in any article. You are not supposed to have redundant citations in the lead. Take a look at any WP:FA status article and you will see zero citations in the lead. For example todays feature article: Algebra. Other FA class articles with zero citations in the lead from this month on the main page: Len Deighton, Shovel Knight Showdown, You Belong with Me, Wilfred Arthur, Mimodactylus, etc. Best.4meter4 (talk) 06:06, 12 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Fair enough. I am now giving this article a . --Metropolitan90 (talk) 00:47, 13 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Pokémon Scarlet and Violet

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    Ed Sheeran as seen in 2018
    Ed Sheeran as seen in 2018
    "Ed Sheeran's new song Celestial will apparently feature somewhere in the game... Celestial will be the first song included in a Pokemon game that actually has lyrics."
    https://www.rpgfan.com/music-review/nintendo-switch-pokemon-scarlet%E3%83%BBviolet-the-hidden-treasure-of-area-zero-super-music-collection/
    "I wasn’t expecting the Ed Sheeran single that plays during the end credits to be on this OST."
    • ALT1: ... that due to performance issues at launch in the 2022 video games Pokémon Scarlet and Violet, the games became the lowest rated mainline entries in the franchise's history?
    "The flaws are seemingly endless, impacting gameplay so much that Scarlet and Violet have become the worst-reviewed games in the series."
    • Reviewed:
    • Comment: Ed Sheeran image is only for if the first hook is used.
    Improved to Good Article status by Pokelego999 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

    Magneton Considerer: Pokelego999 (Talk) (Contribs) 00:42, 8 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Everything seems to be in order. GA was on the 7th, article is long enough and appropriately sourced. It looks like some of the images are yours—why aren't we using this gem?—and are good to go. Hook is fascinating enough and the picture of Mr. Sheeran, while haunting, is good at 100px. Overall, great job! ~ Pbritti (talk) 01:29, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Rescatemos a David y Miguel

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    Rescatemos a David y Miguel
    Rescatemos a David y Miguel
    • ... that you can leave a lock at the Rescatemos a David y Miguel memorial (pictured), installed six years ago today, as a symbol of demanding security?
    Created by Tbhotch (talk). Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 49 past nominations.

    (CC) Tbhotch 19:34, 7 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Article is new and long enough, looks well-cited. Bad news is that I'm fairly certain that the images, including the one attached to the nom here, are copyrighted. I had a similar issue with a draft I'm working on and brought it to the Teahouse ([10]). I'm afraid you'll have to reupload the images as fair use and exclude them from the nom. ~ Pbritti (talk) 01:16, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    • Briefly contemplated failing just out of shear envy, thought better of it. Can't say I know Spanish too well but I'm confident in the AGF on the citations, which are appropriately placed. QPQs done. The proposed run on 5 January is appropriate. Great work! ~ Pbritti (talk) 01:25, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
      • Regrettably, the QPQ done for Template:Did you know nominations/Charles Herman Allen was not adequate: while seven days is the standard for nominations to be made, DYK specifically allows a day or two latitude (typically given in general and particularly for new pre-QPQ participants as this nominator is); the nomination here was made nine days after creation. If Tbhotch will give this nomination a full review, a QPQ can be counted, or they can submit another review for that purpose. Thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 02:10, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
        • @BlueMoonset: It seems that you're failing this hook based on Tbhotch's literal interpretation of the reviewing guidelines. While you can contest their review (I'm not sure the term supersede is appropriate), this is almost certainly not sufficient ground to supersede my review of this hook. Reaffirming the AGF pass. ~ Pbritti (talk) 03:14, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Man of Smoke

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    Created by Uriahheep228 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

    Uriahheep228 (talk) 18:32, 8 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • QPQs not required but done anyway—thank you! Article is long and new enough. No copyvios as far as I can tell but having to AGF since a lot of the sources are in Italian. Hooks are definitely fascinating and cited appropriately. Images are public domain. Overall, great work! ~ Pbritti (talk) 00:35, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Ken Battle

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    Created by Ktin (talk). Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 109 past nominations.

    Ktin (talk) 23:20, 7 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • I tagged the photo of him to have its size reduced, but that'll get resolved automatically before the article runs at DYK. The fair use rationale is valid. Otherwise, we're good to go here. A fine little article. Nice work! ~ Pbritti (talk) 18:10, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Aquilegia parviflora

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    Aquilegia parviflora flower
    Aquilegia parviflora flower
    • ... that the small flowers that give Aquilegia parviflora (pictured) its name make it unpopular with gardeners?
    • Source: Nold, Robert (2003). Columbines: Aquilegia, Paraquilegia, and Semiaquilegia. Portland, OR: Timber Press. p. 110. ISBN 0881925888.
    Created by Pbritti (talk). Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 56 past nominations.

    Pbritti (talk) 19:39, 7 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    The Man Who Knew Too Much (Alexander McQueen collection)

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    Created by Premeditated Chaos (talk). Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 58 past nominations.

    PMC(talk) 03:31, 9 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall: New enough, long enough, hook fact is interesting and cited to Watt and Bethune. Earwig shows 9.1%, but everything highlighted is just the title of the collection. Good to go.  — Chris Woodrich (talk) 23:26, 20 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Aquilegia moorcroftiana

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    • Source: Nold, Robert (2003). Columbines: Aquilegia, Paraquilegia, and Semiaquilegia. Portland, OR: Timber Press. ISBN 0881925888.
    Created by Pbritti (talk). Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 57 past nominations.

    Pbritti (talk) 00:27, 9 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

    Hook eligibility:

    • Cited: Yes
    • Interesting: Yes
    • Other problems: No - I would suggest changing the sentence in the article "named for William Moorcroft" to "named after William Moorcroft" to make the wording clearer, and likewise for the hook.
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall: This is my first review so I would like a second opinion. jolielover♥talk 16:02, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Ted Weiss Federal Building

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    The Ted Weiss Federal Building
    The Ted Weiss Federal Building
    Improved to Good Article status by Epicgenius (talk). Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 689 past nominations.

    Epicgenius (talk) 17:30, 9 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Article is eligible for DYK (recently became a good article and has never been on the main page before). The image is free to use. I'll review ALT0 and ALT1. I think ALT1 is the most interesting.
    Reviewing ALT0:
    It's interesting and the hook matches the article. I can't access the provided source so I'll approve with good faith.
    Reviewing ALT1:
    I think this is much more interesting than ALT0. The hook matches the article and the source matches.
    Panamitsu (talk) 06:06, 12 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Chang Wei-chia

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    • ... that when future Olympian Chang Wei-chia entered high school, her elementary school swimming coach was hired full-time and continued coaching her?
    • Source: Chiang, Yen-wen 江彥文 (1992-10-30). "《教練看張緯嘉》 練得少 表現好 琢磨良材 眼光要放遠" ["Coach on Chang Wei-chia" Less Training, Better Performance, A Gem in the Making—Long-Term Vision is Key]. Min Sheng Bao (in Chinese). p. 3.

      The article notes: "張緯嘉北市玉成國小四年級正式開始游泳訓─練,蔡祖修是她的教練兼導師 ... 張緯嘉升入南港國中,蔡祖修也應聘為南港國中游泳專任教練,繼續訓練張緯嘉,隨著張緯嘉身高竄高,她的成績也快速進步,終於在本屆區運大放異采。"

      From Google Translate: Chang Wei-chia officially started swimming training as a fourth grader at Yucheng Elementary School in Taipei City. Tsai Tzu-hsiu was her coach and mentor. ... When Chang Wei-chia was promoted to Nangang Junior High School, Tsai Tzu-hsiu was also employed as the full-time swimming coach of Nangang Junior High School and carried on training Chang Wei-chia."

    Converted from a redirect by Cunard (talk). Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 88 past nominations.

    Cunard (talk) 13:09, 8 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall: Cunard, this is a solid and well-sourced article. While the sources are all offline, they come from reputable Taiwanese newspapers and I will AGF on their verifiability. The hook is fairly interesting and is supported by the source. Earwig shows no signs of copyright violations (probably because the sources are in Chinese). Two QPQs done. Good to go! —Prince of EreborThe Book of Mazarbul 06:07, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Thank you for the review, Prince of Erebor (talk · contribs)! Cunard (talk) 09:55, 15 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Skin of My Teeth

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    Improved to Good Article status by CatchMe (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

    CatchMe (talk) 20:19, 8 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Everything is good to go save one nitpick. I know this is an extremely minor deviation, but the article itself does not acknowledge that the song says she barely escaped death, only mentioning the lyric followed by the account of here near-fatal overdose. The Bazaar does make that link, so an extremely minor rephrase in the article would make it so ALT0 can run. Otherwise, outstanding work! ~ Pbritti (talk) 00:41, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Thank you for reviewing this, Pbritti! I did a minor change to the article, so I think it is resolved now. CatchMe (talk) 01:39, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Excellent work! Thanks for making that change. We're good to go here! ~ Pbritti (talk) 01:43, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Peri Alypias

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    • ... that in 2005, a French PhD student discovered the lost manuscript of Galen's Peri Alypias in what was called "one of the most spectacular finds ever of ancient literature"?
    • Reviewed:
    • Comment: Excited for this one. Who doesn't love a good manuscript discovery?
    Moved to mainspace by Kazamzam (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

    Kazamzam (talk) 22:53, 8 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Article is new enough, long enough, and within policy. No copyright violation detected. Hook fact is verified to the cited source and is a good length in addition to be interesting. Good work! This article can be promoted.4meter4 (talk) 00:36, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Pem Nem

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    • ... that in the narrative epic Pem Nem, the union of two lovers is a metaphor for the union of the soul with God?
    • Source: * Hutton, Deborah (2011). "The Pem Nem: A Sixteenth Century Illustrated Romance from Bijapur". Sultans of the South: Arts of India's Deccan Courts, 1323-1687. p. 44. Works of this type employ the masnavi format, a narrative poem in rhyming couplets, to tell a love story that mirrors the quest of the Sufi for union with God
      "Pem nem: a 16th-century Urdu romance goes on-line". As in other tales of the same genre, the union of the lover and beloved is a metaphor for the union of the soul with God after mistaking the image, the majaz or symbol (here the image of Mah Ji on the hero's chest) for the haqiqa, or truth.
    • ALT1: ... that in the narrative epic Pem Nem, a prince and a princess fall in love after a tortoise mysteriously conveys their pictures to each other? Source: * Hutton, Deborah (2011). "The Pem Nem: A Sixteenth Century Illustrated Romance from Bijapur". Sultans of the South: Arts of India's Deccan Courts, 1323-1687. p. 44. the two fall hopelessly in love when a tortoise mysteriously conveys their portraits to one another
    • Reviewed:
    Created by AmateurHi$torian (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

    AmateurHi$torian (talk) 15:40, 8 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Approving first hook only. Article is new enough, long enough, and within policy. No copyright violations detected. Both hook facts are reasonably interesting and are an appropriate length. The first hook has no issues and I can tick yes on that. However, there are some minor verifiability issues with the alt hook that should be easily fixed. To begin with the hook fact is not actually on page 44, but occurs later on page 46 and again on page 51. Secondly, the source uses the word tortoise (which is what is in the hook), but the article says turtle. They are not exactly the same thing (although tortoises are a specific type of turtle). Ping me once those issues are fixes and I can approve the alt hook, but no big deal if we just go with the first hook. Best.4meter4 (talk) 00:26, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Yes, it's on page 46; that was a mistake on my part. As for the tortoise-turtle issue, there is another source which states that the animal was a turtle. The actual language of the manuscript is Dakhni, and like Urdu/Hindi, the word for tortoise and turtle is probably the same, ie. کچھوا or kachua. In any case, hook 1 is fine by me, and thanks for the review :) AmateurHi$torian (talk) 11:59, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Zhang Xinsheng (film)

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    • ... that the 1923 film Zhang Xinsheng disgusted audiences by featuring close-up views of internal organs and was later censored?
    Created by Crisco 1492 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 719 past nominations.

     — Chris Woodrich (talk) 15:41, 8 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited: Yes - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
    • Interesting: Yes
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall: AGF on Shanghai Filmmaking and other offline/non-free sources. Good work! Uriahheep228 (talk) 17:23, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Tsybin Ts-25

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    • ... that the Tsybin Ts-25 military glider was considered for use as a civilian airliner on routes including Moscow?
    Created by The Bushranger (talk). Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 236 past nominations.

    The Bushranger One ping only 01:54, 8 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]