Template talk:Did you know/Approved/week-3
This page transcludes a subset of the nominations found on the page of all the approved nominations for the "Did you know" section of the Main Page. It only transcludes the nominations filed under dates of the fourth-most recent week. The page is intended to allow editors to easily review recent nominations that may not be displaying correctly on the complete page of approved nominations if that page's contents are causing the page to hit the post-expand include size limit.
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Science Fiction Chronicle
[edit]- ... that an American magazine Science Fiction Chronicle was described as "an alternative voice for the sf community" and "something of an East Coast institution"? Source: https://sf-encyclopedia.com/entry/science_fiction_chronicle
Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 02:24, 10 December 2024 (UTC).
- Piotrus The article is long enough and enough with no copyright violations. Two QPQs have been completed while in backlog mode. The hook is directly cited and interesting. A big issue is that sf-encyclopedia, Fancyclopedia, and ISFDB are user-edited. SL93 (talk) 02:16, 17 December 2024 (UTC)
- @SL93: Thanks for taking a look. SFE aka The Encyclopedia of Science Fiction is a very reliable outlet and not user generated (unless we consider Britannica etc. user generated). Now, you are right about the two others, but they are just used as an easy online backup ref for reliable refs (just check "[9]" and "[11]"); I don't think they are used for any facts that are not backed up by more reliable sources. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:09, 17 December 2024 (UTC)
- That works for me. Approved. SL93 (talk) 14:12, 17 December 2024 (UTC)
Abortion in Mauritius
[edit]- ... that Mauritius's abortion law was "dormant for nearly two centuries", as one newspaper put it?
- Source: [1] First, the courage posted by the government proposing an amendment to a part of the legislation that has remained dormant for nearly two centuries must be recognized.
— Vigilant Cosmic Penguin 🐧 (talk | contribs) 20:57, 3 December 2024 (UTC).
- Article was moved into mainspace on December 2 and was nominated on December 3, making it new enough. It is long enough, and is cited throughout to reliable sources. No copyright violation detected, and I'm assuming good faith that it isn't a close paraphrase of the many foreign language references used. Hook fact is interesting, a good length, and verifiable to the article, but the source is cited one sentence beyond the hook fact. This is a minor problem, but there must be an end-of-sentence citation directly after the quote. This will mean repeating a citation, but we do have to have it there in order to approve the hook per policy at WP:DYKHFC. Once this minor issue is fixed, please ping me and I will approve the hook. Best.4meter4 (talk) 15:22, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- @4meter4: Done. — Vigilant Cosmic Penguin 🐧 (talk | contribs) 18:05, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
All issues resolved. This hook can be promoted.4meter4 (talk) 18:19, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
Jijin
[edit]- ... that for cultural reasons, jijin were permitted to be worn by Catholic priests in China even while celebrating Mass?
- Source: Dipippo, Gregory. "The Chinese Sacrificial Hat, and Reflections on Inculturation in China". New Liturgical Movement. Retrieved 5 December 2024.
~Darth StabroTalk • Contribs 04:03, 7 December 2024 (UTC).
- I'll review this one. Clovermoss🍀 (talk) 06:33, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- New enough and long enough? Created on December 2 and nominated on December 6. Exceeds 1600 characters of prose according to Google Docs.
- Well sourced, neutral, BLP-compliant and copyvio free? While I don't have any copyright violation concerns, I would appreciate a second set on eyes on whether the block quote is proportional considering this is a shorter article.
- Presentable?
- The hook is cited to a reliable source, short enough, and interesting?
- The two images present are released under the public domain and I do not see any reason to doubt that.
- QPQ?
- Looks good to me, so I'll approve it. I'd appreciate if the prep builder double checks my commentary above as this is my second review. Clovermoss🍀 (talk) 06:59, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
William Hamm Jr.
[edit]- ... that the first time the FBI successfully used silver nitrate to lift fingerprints was when solving the kidnapping of a brewery executive?
- Source: "Barker/Karpis Gang". Famous Cases and Criminals. Federal Bureau of Investigation. Retrieved December 2, 2024.
- ALT1: ... that William Hamm Jr., the president of Hamm's Brewery, was kidnapped and held for $100,000 ransom? Source: "Barker/Karpis Gang". Famous Cases and Criminals. Federal Bureau of Investigation. Retrieved December 2, 2024.
- ALT2: ... that the first successful uses of silver nitrate to lift fingerprints were on ransom notes for William Hamm Jr., president of Hamm's Brewery? Source: "Barker/Karpis Gang". Famous Cases and Criminals. Federal Bureau of Investigation. Retrieved December 2, 2024.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Operation Blooming Onion
- Comment: Open to suggestions on hook phrasing
~Darth StabroTalk • Contribs 13:52, 2 December 2024 (UTC).
- I'll take a look at this one. — Red-tailed hawk (nest) 03:38, 3 December 2024 (UTC)
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June 15, 1933, at 12:15 p.m.
, but the cited source gives the time that Hamm was last sean as 12:20. Can you explaim where the 12:15 time comes from? - Neutral: - The article currently states in WP:WIKIVOICE that
Hamm married Dorothy Heywood on October 1, 1927
, which is supported by the second cited source. However, the first cited source gives the marriage as having been in November 1927. Unless there is a very good reason for rejecting one source in favor of the other, we should probably not be so definite in the article. Can you explain a bit about this editorial choice? - Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:
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Overall: Not much to add to the above, though it's possible I missed something in my spot checks. Generally quite an interesting read. I prefer hook Alt2, as it has his name and mentions the silver nitrate; this is a biography, not an article on the event that is his kidnapping. — Red-tailed hawk (nest) 04:41, 4 December 2024 (UTC)
- User:Red-tailed hawk good catch on the marriage date there, I genuinely hadn't noticed. The source with the November date I had used to get her maiden name and I didn't realize the mismatch. These all seem to indicate the October date. As for the time of kidnapping, on that same page 12:15pm is also indicated under the "Events in Kidnapping" side column. I'll amend it to "shortly after noon". ~Darth StabroTalk • Contribs 05:08, 4 December 2024 (UTC)
- I had missed the side column; no need to correct that part, the decision makes sense. — Red-tailed hawk (nest) 05:11, 4 December 2024 (UTC)
- In light of the above, this looks good to go. — Red-tailed hawk (nest) 05:27, 4 December 2024 (UTC)
Anthony E. Wills
[edit]- ... that it was only after his death at a relatively young age that several of Anthony E. Wills's plays were adapted into films?
- Alt1 ... that films were made of plays written by Anthony E. Wills (pictured) after his death at a relatively young age?
- Sources: Youth at time of death in 1912- "Anthony E. Willis Dies". Billboard. Vol. 24, no. 31. August 3, 1912. p. 6.
"Despite his youth, Mr Wills had gained considerable of a reputation as an author and producer."
- Vitagraph Studios obtaining film rights in 1913 after his death: "Film Co. Feeling Around; Trying Hard to Be Friendly". Variety. 30 (12): 8. May 23, 1913.
- Two film reviews: ""Our Wives"". The Moving Picture World. 18 (1): 49. October 4, 1913., "Empire". Bridgeport Evening Farmer. June 23, 1913. p. 8.
- A third film covered in Erish, Andrew A. (2021). Vitagraph: America's First Great Motion Picture Studio. University Press of Kentucky. ISBN 9780813181219.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Pem Nem, Template:Did you know nominations/Peri Alypias
- Comment: Moved into main space on December 3, 2024 at 17:32.
4meter4 (talk) 02:07, 9 December 2024 (UTC).
- Will review this. BeanieFan11 (talk) 16:44, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
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Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px. |
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Overall: Looks good. Nice work. BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:17, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
1957 Ruskin Heights tornado
[edit]- ... that the 1957 Ruskin Heights tornado threw an occupied car into a water tower, and the inhabitants survived?
- ALT1: ... that a check lifted by the 1957 Ruskin Heights tornado was found 165 miles away? Source: https://www.tornadotalk.com/ruskin-heights-f5-tornado-may-20-1957/
- ALT2: ... that the 1957 Ruskin Heights tornado has been described as having the appearance of several tentacles? Source: https://www.weather.gov/eax/RuskinHeights
- ALT3: ... that a memorial erected to honor the victims of the 1957 Ruskin Heights tornado was later damaged in a car crash? Source: https://fox4kc.com/news/push-to-rebuild-after-ruskin-heights-tornado-memorial-damaged/
- ALT4: ... that pilots reported flying debris at 30,000 feet altitude after the 1957 Ruskin Heights tornado? Source: https://www.tornadotalk.com/ruskin-heights-f5-tornado-may-20-1957/
- Reviewed:
- Comment: EF5 helped with the article a lot but did not write these hooks.
( ͡° ( ͡° ( ͡° ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) ͡°) ͡°) ͡°) 02:10, 3 December 2024 (UTC).
- Personally, I like ALT1. Although I didn’t technically start the nom, I’ll still do a QPQ just to be fair. :) EF5 02:28, 3 December 2024 (UTC)
- Although technically the nom doesn't require a QPQ since you aren't the nominator, if you're going to do QPQs, just note that DYK is currently in backlog mode, meaning people with over 20 nominations will need to do two reviews instead of one. I think you still have less than 20 nominations so this doesn't apply to you so for now you only need to do just one review and not two, it's just something to keep in mind in case you get affected in the future. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 06:14, 3 December 2024 (UTC)
On first inspection, the article looks good. The only issue I have is that there's a few uncited sentences near the end of the first paragraph of the summary section; I've left a CN tag there. I'm definitely thinking the originally proposed blurb about the water tower is the best one; claim is verified in the article from this non-political Fox News source, the hook is short and interesting, no QPQ needed, Earwig shows no copyvio concern. My other minor issue is the status of the main image in the infobox - it's up for deletion on Commons, but this can feasibly be re-added as NFC later on if it's removed. I'd advise against using the image provided as it doesn't really illustrate the water tower or any of the other hooks, though. Almost there. Departure– (talk) 16:36, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Departure–: My QPQ is done, since I'm technically a nominator. All issues have been addressed. :) EF5 16:44, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- That was my only main issue. As it stands, the article's a little short but seems good enough for DYK as it stands. Good to go. Departure– (talk) 16:46, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Departure–:Note that I will be under a self-requested block until December 20th. For DYK matters, please contact @EF5:. Wildfireupdateman (talk)
- I am back. Wildfireupdateman (talk)
Influencer
[edit]- ... that the 2021 Supreme Court NCAA v. Alston ruling made student athlete influencers (pictured) eligible for compensation?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Aquilegia chrysantha
- Comment: 2 QPQs in one.
TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:38, 9 December 2024 (UTC).
- Interesting article. No problems with copyright and hook mentioned in the article with proper source. Images have no copyright problems and freely licensed. Overall, the article has no problems with citations. Good to go. Toadboy123 (talk) 12:25, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
Hanta Road
[edit]- ... that the historic Hanta Road in Okinawa was used by both Ryukyuan armies and the U.S. Navy's Perry Expedition?
- Source: 同盟するものにとっては人や物の交流の道、敵対するものにとっては戦の道とし使用されていましたIt was used by allies as a route for the exchange of people and goods, and by enemies as a route of war.[1]
Jpatokal (talk) 07:12, 6 December 2024 (UTC).
- Outstanding little article. QPQ done, hook is extraordinarily fascinating and appropriately cited (AGF on sources as they are in Japanese). No copyvios noticed. Great job! Note to promoters: consider dropping "historic" as extraneous glossing when placing this in a prep or the queue. ~ Pbritti (talk) 01:51, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
References
Council of District Dumas
[edit]- ... that in order to raise funds for the Council of District Dumas, its chairman Mikhail Vladimirsky (pictured) led an armed squad storming the Moscow headquarters of the State Bank?
- Source: Timothy J. Colton. Moscow: Governing the Socialist Metropolis. Harvard University Press, 1995. pp. 93-95, 105, 110
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Abortion in Gabon, Template:Did you know nominations/Qian Xingcun
Soman (talk) 09:44, 3 December 2024 (UTC).
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QPQ: Done. |
Overall: New enough, long enough. Hook fact is interesting and verified (though I note the source says 2 million rubles, not one). Both QPQs are done, Earwig has no qualms. Good to go! — Chris Woodrich (talk) 15:48, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
Yanou Collart
[edit]- ... that Yanou Collart has been called a courtesan for food and friendship?
- Source: 1
- ALT1: ... that Yanou Collart's career was motivated by a desire to "never be dependent on a man"? Source: 1
- Reviewed:
🌸wasianpower🌸 (talk • contribs) 04:19, 4 December 2024 (UTC).
- Article is new enough, long enough, and without any serious issues. Image in article is fair use, but she's still alive—pretty sure that's not allowed. The first hook is questionable as to appropriateness for a BLP. The second is a tad vague. I would appreciate an ALT2. ~ Pbritti (talk) 21:25, 6 December 2024 (UTC)
- Image has been removed. How about ALT2: ... that Yanou Collart helped Rock Hudson get medical treatment when Nancy Reagan would not? 1. For a less vague ALT1, ALT1a: ... that Yanou Collart's career as one the world's most prominent publicists was originally motivated by a desire to "never be dependent on a man"? 🌸wasianpower🌸 (talk • contribs) 21:37, 6 December 2024 (UTC)
- ALT1a is GTG. ALT2 is sourced to before Buzzfeed News became worse than useless, so that's approved and my preference as a hook. Excellent work! ~ Pbritti (talk) 22:31, 6 December 2024 (UTC)
- Image has been removed. How about ALT2: ... that Yanou Collart helped Rock Hudson get medical treatment when Nancy Reagan would not? 1. For a less vague ALT1, ALT1a: ... that Yanou Collart's career as one the world's most prominent publicists was originally motivated by a desire to "never be dependent on a man"? 🌸wasianpower🌸 (talk • contribs) 21:37, 6 December 2024 (UTC)
BLKBOK
[edit]- ... that pianist BLKBOK (pronounced "Black Bach") has composed works based on the murder of George Floyd, the Little Rock Nine, and The Negro Motorist Green Book?
- Reviewed:
Cbl62 (talk) 00:54, 11 December 2024 (UTC).
- Nominated 54 minutes late. Hoping this can be forgiven. Cbl62 (talk) 00:55, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- Size and date check out, well-referenced, interesting hook, no apparent copyvio concerns. Believe this is good to go.
1st Separate Airborne Brigade
[edit]- ... that a brigade of Russian paratroopers served under NATO command in the 1990s?
- Source: Kipp, Jacob W.; Warren, Tarn (2003). "The Russian Separate Airborne Brigade – Peacekeeping in Bosnia-Herzegovina". In Mackinlay, John; Cross, Peter (eds.). Regional peacekeepers: The paradox of Russian peacekeeping (PDF). Tokyo: United Nations University. pp. 49–50. ISBN 92-808-1079-0.
- ALT1: ... that a brigade of Russian paratroopers took part in a NATO-led peacekeeping mission during the 1990s? Source: Kipp, Jacob W.; Warren, Tarn (2003). "The Russian Separate Airborne Brigade – Peacekeeping in Bosnia-Herzegovina". In Mackinlay, John; Cross, Peter (eds.). Regional peacekeepers: The paradox of Russian peacekeeping (PDF). Tokyo: United Nations University. pp. 49–50. ISBN 92-808-1079-0.
- ALT2: ... that Russia contributed an airborne brigade to a NATO-led peacekeeping mission in former Yugoslavia? Source: Kipp, Jacob W.; Warren, Tarn (2003). "The Russian Separate Airborne Brigade – Peacekeeping in Bosnia-Herzegovina". In Mackinlay, John; Cross, Peter (eds.). Regional peacekeepers: The paradox of Russian peacekeeping (PDF). Tokyo: United Nations University. pp. 49–50. ISBN 92-808-1079-0.
- Reviewed:
Romanov loyalist (talk) 21:29, 5 December 2024 (UTC).
- What a fantastic article, I had never heard of this before and this page does it credit. New enough, more than long enough, well cited. Prefer Alt 1 for readability. No QPQ needed, GTG. Maury Markowitz (talk)
Home and Beauty
[edit]- ... that Somerset Maugham's play Home and Beauty has been described as both a "little masterpiece of polite merriment" and "a misogynist comedy dipped in vitriol"?
- Source: "little masterpiece of polite merriment" - "Home and Beauty". The Times. 1 September 1919. p. 8.
- "a misogynist comedy dipped in vitriol"- Billington, Michael (30 October 2002). "Home and Beauty: Lyric Theatre, London". The Guardian.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/GlucoBoy, Template:Did you know nominations/Eric Rimmington
- Comment: Article was previously a redirect; article created December 4
4meter4 (talk) 16:03, 10 December 2024 (UTC).
- Interesting article about a play with a title like a women's magazine and a cover picture to match, on fine sources, offline sources accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. As the hook seems to be what you want to say, I approve it. - A few suggestions for the article, and in general:
- Don't have any pic next to the Roles table. It may look fine on large devices but on smaller ones it shrinks the table to many lines for each item.
- Don't have any image size larger than upright=1.3, because more can't be displayed (any larger) on mobile devices.
- In the plot, say once more that Victoria is that widow, - not all readers read sequentially, and her name is not even in the lead, just the image caption.
- You will guess what I'd suggest in order to avoid the impression that the article is about a woman ;)
- The review that impressed me most was "fun of the choicest sort, quiet fun". --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:53, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
Al-Moghraqa
[edit]- ... that terracotta cones found at al-Moghraqa in Palestine are unique in the region but resemble artefacts from Ancient Egypt?
- Source: "These artefacts are unique amongst the cultural assemblages of the Levant and are most closely paralleled by Egyptian funerary cones of the Eighteenth Dynasty from Thebes": Steel, Louise; Manley, Bill; Clarke, Joanne; Sadeq, Moain (2004b). "Egyptian 'Funerary Cones' from El-Moghraqa, Gaza". The Antiquaries Journal. 84: 319. doi:10.1017/S0003581500045856.
Richard Nevell (talk) 19:29, 9 December 2024 (UTC).
- Date, size, refs, hook, neutrality, QPQ, etc. all GTG. Would be nice to add a picture to the article, but that's not a DYK concern. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 02:27, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- Good suggestion - I don't recall a photo of the site in any of the papers, but there were at least drawings of the cones. As they'll be under fair use that's (I assume) not suitable for DYK but could still be useful for the article. I'll look into it. Richard Nevell (talk) 20:59, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
American Wedding (song)
[edit]- ... that Frank Ocean's song "American Wedding" was pulled from streaming platforms after the Eagles threatened legal action for its unauthorized use of "Hotel California"?
- Reviewed: None
jolielover♥talk 06:39, 5 December 2024 (UTC).
- Review by Tbhotch
General eligibility:
- New enough:
- Long enough:
- Other problems:
Policy compliance:
- Adequate sourcing:
- Neutral:
- Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:
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QPQ: Done. |
Overall: A former redirect that is long enough. The hook is interesting. No QPQ required. There are no copyvios, only quoted text. There are some unsourced statements that I tagged and must be resolved before approval. Refer to WP:NOR at the sentence beginning with "Ocean references the 1990 film Pretty Woman and the 1999 film Runaway Bride in the lyrics. (CC) Tbhotch™ 20:00, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Jolielover: You're only missing the paragraph that starts with "Ocean continued to perform the song..." since the source doesn't say that he continued doing it (at most I found "I guess if I play it at Coachella it'll cost me a couple hundred racks") or that "Many critics defended Ocean, highlighting that the track was part of a non-commercial mixtape". (CC) Tbhotch™ 01:04, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- The newer additions doesn't represent an issue and the unsourced text was removed accordingly. Ready to go. (CC) Tbhotch™ 05:10, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
Black Slave's Cry to Heaven
[edit]- ... that the first modern Chinese play (playbill pictured) was staged in Tokyo and based on an American novel?
- Source: Liu, Siyuan (2013). Performing Hybridity in Colonial-Modern China. New York: Palgrave Macmillan. ISBN 978-1-137-30611-1., among others
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/The Last Dance (2024 film), Template:Did you know nominations/Backflip (figure skating)
— Chris Woodrich (talk) 22:28, 4 December 2024 (UTC).
- Length, date, hook, close paraphrase check, qpq (x2) ok. Image free on Commons. --Soman (talk) 12:21, 5 December 2024 (UTC)
Melichrus procumbens
[edit]- ... that jam tarts (pictured) are pollinated by ants?
- Source: [1]
- Reviewed:
Gderrin (talk) 23:17, 4 December 2024 (UTC).
- Neat article that's just about long and new enough. Interesting hook, no discernible signs of copyvio (AGF on the offline sources). QPQ not needed. Seems like all is in order! Great work. Cheers, KINGofLETTUCE 👑 🥬 06:58, 5 December 2024 (UTC)
References
- ^ Fairley, Alan; Moore, Philip (1989). Native Plants of the Sydney District. Kenthurst: Kangaroo Press. p. 88.
Pisidice of Methymna
[edit]- ... that in Greek mythology, Achilles promised to marry Pisidice if she would help him conquer her homeland, but afterwards he had her executed for treason?
- Source: Käppel, Lutz (October 1, 2006). "Peisidice". In Cancik, Hubert; Schneider, Helmuth (eds.). Brill's New Pauly. Kiel: Brill Reference On line. doi:10.1163/1574-9347_bnp_e912120. ISSN 1574-9347. Retrieved December 5, 2024.
- Reviewed:
Deiadameian (talk) 22:07, 5 December 2024 (UTC).
- This is a new article, that is long enough, is well sourced and free from any copyvio issues. No QPQ is required. The hook is interesting and works well as it is. The content of the hook is verified by the quoted source, and there are appropriate citations in the article in the right places. This is a nice article, accessible and interesting. Good to go! Chaiten1 (talk) 23:05, 5 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Chaiten1 and Deiadameian: this hook falls under WP:DYKFICTION and cannot run. I would suggest focusing another hook on a fact in the "Origins" or "Connections" sections. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 04:52, 14 December 2024 (UTC)
- @AirshipJungleman29: Thank you for informing us. However given that now it's been more than seven days after the article's creation, nomination and (mistaken) approval that I'm being informed of its ineligibility, it is likely no longer suitable for DYK anyway. Deiadameian (talk) 7:56, 14 December 2024 (UTC)
- Deiadameian, that only applies to starting the nomination. Workshopping the hook can take up to two months. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 09:09, 14 December 2024 (UTC)
- @AirshipJungleman29: Thank you for informing us. However given that now it's been more than seven days after the article's creation, nomination and (mistaken) approval that I'm being informed of its ineligibility, it is likely no longer suitable for DYK anyway. Deiadameian (talk) 7:56, 14 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Chaiten1 and Deiadameian: this hook falls under WP:DYKFICTION and cannot run. I would suggest focusing another hook on a fact in the "Origins" or "Connections" sections. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 04:52, 14 December 2024 (UTC)
- Apologies for not having realised about DYKFICTION - happy to help workshop a new hook Chaiten1 (talk) 14:22, 14 December 2024 (UTC)
- Are we really applying DYKFICTION to mythology and legends now? I get the idea but that doesn't seem to follow the spirit of the guideline as originally proposed. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 05:08, 19 December 2024 (UTC)
- Per the discussion on the talk page, IMO, this interpretation of DYKFICTION is a minority one and should not block the hook lest it become a naysayer's veto. The hook reads fine to me. DYKFICTION is about "creative works", i.e. novels or the like. Citing serious, scholarly mythology sources like Brill's New Paulys about the nature of mythology or folklore is not fiction. I would suggest the hook be approved as is. SnowFire (talk) 03:44, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- Apologies for not having realised about DYKFICTION - happy to help workshop a new hook Chaiten1 (talk) 14:22, 14 December 2024 (UTC)
Noah Knigga
[edit]- ... that American football player Noah Knigga went viral for his last name and had to clarify its pronunciation?
- Source: Dyer, Kristian (January 12, 2024). "Noah Knigga is hoping to make a name for himself on the football field, not just on social media". USA Today Sports. Retrieved December 5, 2024.
- ALT1: ... that Eastern Michigan's football program needed a linebacker to play for them next year and luckily "Noah guy"? Source: https://twitter.com/EMUFB/status/1864288197523722707
- Reviewed: Jorts and Argos (dog)
- Comment:
QPQs to come
Soulbust (talk) 20:55, 12 December 2024 (UTC).
- @Soulbust: Please provide QPQs promptly as the nomination may be closed without further warning if no QPQs are done. Given that this nomination has already been open for almost four days, I will give you 24 hours to do the QPQs, otherwise the nomination will be closed. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 01:44, 16 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5: QPQs have been completed. Soulbust (talk) 00:19, 17 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you. This is ready for a full review. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 04:34, 17 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5: QPQs have been completed. Soulbust (talk) 00:19, 17 December 2024 (UTC)
- The article was nominated within a week of its creation and is well over the minimum character requirement. Every claim is sourced, and the copyvio detector didn't come up with any violations. The first hook is straight to the point, interesting, and well-sourced; I don't think the second hook could work, as it relies on a present tense construction in order for "Noah" to land. The article has no images to check. As noted above, QPQs have been completed promptly. Ultimately, there are no problems with the nomination. It should be good to go! Thank you for your work. Phibeatrice (talk) 07:45, 17 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Phibeatrice: Thank you for your review, I really appreciate it! Do you think the second hook would work if it was rephrased as "Did you know... that the Eastern Michigan Eagles "Noah guy" who will play linebacker for them in 2025?". I think the pun aspect is amusing and is able to both accurately quote the team's social media announcement of his signing and provide a tame alternative to (and maneuver away from) what would otherwise be a more eyebrow-raising pun that could be made here. Soulbust (talk) 08:07, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Soulbust: I think that could work—I just went through a bunch of archived DYKs and found that sometimes a present-tense construction makes it through as long as it makes sense time-wise. In your case, this hook would simply have to run before Noah arrives on the team, which wouldn't be hard to do at all! I still think the first hook is more unique and engaging—as someone who has been aware of Noah for a while mostly due to his last name—but the pun is fun and would still encourage people to click to his page while being, of course, tamer. I'll say here, for anyone preparing the hooks later, that both hooks should work. Phibeatrice (talk) 16:22, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Phibeatrice: Thank you for your review, I really appreciate it! Do you think the second hook would work if it was rephrased as "Did you know... that the Eastern Michigan Eagles "Noah guy" who will play linebacker for them in 2025?". I think the pun aspect is amusing and is able to both accurately quote the team's social media announcement of his signing and provide a tame alternative to (and maneuver away from) what would otherwise be a more eyebrow-raising pun that could be made here. Soulbust (talk) 08:07, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
Jack Browning
[edit]- ... that in 2022, college football player Jack Browning was named All-Mountain West Conference at three different positions?
- Source: SDSU website ("Also earned first-team all-MW accolades at punter [1] by Pro Football Focus, Phil Steele Magazine and College Football Network, and as a kickoff specialist [2] by College Football Network, and a fourth-team honoree at kicker [3] by Phil Steele Magazine")
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Mohamed Aw-Ali Abdi & Template:Did you know nominations/Anthony E. Wills
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Will complete QPQ within 24 hours.
BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:39, 12 December 2024 (UTC).
- Intresting, factual, QPQ done, earwig doenst flag anything major. Good job Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 21:46, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
Katerina Clark
[edit]- ... that Australian academic Katerina Clark received a letter where her friend, actress Miriam Margolyes, came out as lesbian? Source: It was through Katerina, a brilliant academic who is professor of Russian comparative literature at Yale, that Margolyes met her partner, Heather, also an Australian academic. Margolyes wrote to Katerina to inform her that she had “become a gay woman, a lesbian!”, and received a letter back saying how interesting, that she knew one too who was studying at Yale. They were introduced and have been together since.
- ALT1: ... that actress Miriam Margolyes came out as lesbian in a letter to Australian academic Katerina Clark? Source: Same as ALT0
- ALT2: ... that Australian academic Katerina Clark introduced her former schoolmate Heather Sutherland to the latter's future partner, actress Miriam Margolyes? Source: "On one European trip in 1968, she introduced Margolyes, already a prominent actor, to an old Canberra school friend, Heather Sutherland, a specialist in Indonesian studies and later a professor at the Vrije Universiteit, Amsterdam, in the Netherlands. The two became lifetime partners."
- ALT3: ... that Australian academic Katerina Clark introduced actress Miriam Margolyes to the latter's future partner, historian Heather Sutherland? Source: Same as ALT2
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Pula Nikolao Pula (two articles)
ミラP@Miraclepine 16:37, 8 December 2024 (UTC).
- I shall review this nomination. Schwede66 02:29, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- The article is new in main space and plenty long enough. Everything is suitably sourced. Neutral. Earwig is clean. With regards to hooks, I find ALT0 and ALT1 rather bland. ALT2 and ALT3, on the other hand, find my approval (note that I've fixed the link in ALT2 to point to Heather Sutherland (historian)) and I have a slight preference for ALT2. QPQs have been done. This is good to go; good work! Schwede66 02:51, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
Thomas Fenner (sea captain)
[edit]- ... that Thomas Fenner was an Elizabethan era sea captain who commanded an English warship during the Spanish Armada?
- Source: Loades, David (2008). "Fenner, Thomas". Oxford Dictionary of National Biography (online ed.). Oxford University Press. doi:10.1093/ref:odnb/9290. (Subscription or UK public library membership required.)
4meter4 (talk) 01:10, 8 December 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Created on 5 December; 4,762 characters; 2 x QPQ Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:24, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
Ketchup chip
[edit]- ... that ketchup chips were introduced in the 1970s along with other flavours such as grape and orange?
- ALT1: ... that ketchup chips are Canadiana? Source: https://www.vice.com/en/article/how-ketchup-chips-became-edible-canadiana/
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Jijin
Clovermoss🍀 (talk) 06:27, 9 December 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Promoted to GA 5 December; currently 3,315 characters long; 7.4% Earwig. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 19:18, 9 December 2024 (UTC) Good to go with main or ALT - main preferred. @Clovermoss: You should have included the image! Hawkeye7 (discuss) 19:18, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Hawkeye7: I have a slight preference for the main hook. :) As for the image, I know that there's more images than spots to put them, so I'm okay if the hook doesn't include it. Clovermoss🍀 (talk) 19:21, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, hooks without images run much sooner, but the lead image attracts more page views. I could not help think of this. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 19:26, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
Anna Weisman
[edit]- ... that in 1902 the paramedic student Anna Weisman smuggled fonts to set up an underground revolutionary publishing house in Saratov?
- Source: Владлен Николаевич Степанов. Адресовано в Москву. Московский рабочии, 1987. p. 214
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Black Slave's Cry to Heaven, Template:Did you know nominations/St Bride's Church, Mauku
Soman (talk) 12:35, 5 December 2024 (UTC).
- @Soman: Hello - just to say that you need to complete a 2nd QPQ review for this to proceed, due to the current backlog. Chaiten1 (talk) 08:25, 6 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Chaiten1:, ok ok, added 2nd qpq now. --Soman (talk) 09:29, 6 December 2024 (UTC)
Article is new, and long enough; it is an interesting bio of a person about whom there is nothing written in English. It is well written, neutral, and sourced to a series of Russian-language texts which are not acessible so AGF on these. QPQs have been done. ALT0 is very close, and perhaps just needs a little rewording: 'the paramedic student' - is the 'paramedic' part needed in the hook? The words 'fonts' is perhaps not quite the right word (both in the hook and article) - do you mean printing materials? or printers blocks? and did Weisman set up a 'printing house' or just a 'printing press'? @Soman:Chaiten1 (talk) 18:30, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
- Per Font, "In a manual printing (letterpress) house the word "font" would refer to a complete set of metal type that would be used to typeset an entire page." Priting house is the term used for the Bolshevik underground, see for example Nina Printing House. 'Paramedic' is not absolutely necessary for the hook, but gives a bit more detail. --Soman (talk) 00:31, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
Thank you for the explanations; happy to approve the hook as it is! Good to go. Chaiten1 (talk) 08:09, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
Darrell Hogan
[edit]... that NFL player Darrell Hogan was named an All-Pro as an undrafted rookie in 1949?
~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 21:07, 5 December 2024 (UTC).
- Starting review. Updates to follow. Ktin (talk) 06:08, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Article meets eligibility criteria -- recently expanded 5x. No concerns with length, tone, or neutrality. Earwig shows no copyvio. No problems with overall sourcing -- sourced to a couple of databases and a couple of obituaries. All good there.
Have two questions re: the hook. I think I understand the gist of it. Hogan was named into the All-Pro team before being drafted into a professional team? Can we try any other hook to make this score higher on the interestingness scale? If there is not much to improve the hook, I will go with the nominator's choice. That said, the hook still needs to be used in the article. I do not see that currently. The article does say that he was first-team All-Pro, but does not state the other parts of the hook.
Handing this back to the nominator. Thanks. Ktin (talk) 06:24, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- Everything in the hook is in the article. See pro career section: "After going undrafted in the 1949 NFL draft, Hogan signed with the Pittsburgh Steelers on February 27, 1949.[5] He started all 12 games for the Steelers during his rookie year in 1949, recording one interception and two fumble recoveries.[1] He was named a first-team All-Pro by the International News Service for the 1949 season." It's in the lead also.
I added some more alts below. Those might be better anyway. Thank you.
- ALT1: ... that NFL player Darrell Hogan was an Old West aficionado?
- Sources: "Even before his 1985 retirement, Hogan was enamored with the Old West. A line in his obituary reads that he watched Gunsmoke re-runs every day with his dogs Little Bit and Blue." "traveled the western states every summer, hitting Western art and memorabilia shows." "An avid fan of all things western"
- ALT2: ... that NFL player Darrell Hogan watched Gunsmoke everyday?
~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 10:13, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- ALT0 needs to be introduced into the article. Currently it needs to be synthesized from different parts of the article. ALT1 and ALT2 are good and are approved. Minor point -- I would recommend updating the sentence "His obituary stated that ..." to "An obituary in the San Antonio Express News stated that ...". Adding for ALT1 and ALT2. Striking ALT0. Ktin (talk) 16:53, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
Life Till Bones
[edit]- ... that one critic described some of Life Till Bones's melodies as akin to "trying to dig a hole in a bowl full of sugar"?
- ALT1: ... that Oso Oso wrote some of the songs for their fifth studio album before they had even released their third? Source: Some of the songs being brought into these sessions were older than the band’s 2019 record Basking in the Glow
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Kurt Burris
ThaesOfereode (talk) 04:01, 5 December 2024 (UTC).
- Verified that the article is long enough, that there are no plagiarism concerns through the Copyvios tool and spotchecking, and that the hook is sourced in the article. Cunard (talk) 13:04, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- Both hooks are verified. A point of feedback is that the lead is one sentence and does not discuss how the album was received. It could be expanded to include a summary of the "Reception" section. Cunard (talk) 13:04, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- Great point; I've expanded the lede to be more of a summary. Thanks for the review! ThaesOfereode (talk) 16:03, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you for expanding the lead! Cunard (talk) 11:33, 16 December 2024 (UTC)
Richard Stratton (diplomat)
[edit]- ... that Richard Stratton's diplomatic career took him from the Pitcairn Islands to "South America to Japan, and from Southern Africa to the foothills of the Himalayas"?
- Source: quote is from The Times - I also added to the hook his relation to the Pitcairn Islands (see e.g. [2] as a ref for him being the territory's governor)
- ALT1: ... that Richard Stratton's diplomatic career took him "from South America to Japan, and from Southern Africa to the foothills of the Himalayas"? Source: same
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Always Happy to Explode & Template:Did you know nominations/Yvonne Francis-Gibson
- Comment: To do QPQ within 24 hours. ALT1 is just the ALT0 hook without the Pitcairn Islands, which I thought might be an interesting addition. This would be just the fourth DYK bio ever relating to Pitcairn (which is understandable, since they only have a population of 30!)
BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:44, 13 December 2024 (UTC).
- New enough, long enough and within policy. The hooks are fine and supported by inline citation from reliable sources, but since they contain quotes these should be attributed in the hooks as well, according to WP:DYKHOOKCITE. Only one QPQ done, but I guess backlog-mode was not enabled then? Otherwise we would need another QPQ as well. Yakikaki (talk) 15:44, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Yakikaki: Thanks for the review. We're still in backlog mode, thus I needed to complete two QPQs – I just added the second in Template:Did you know nominations/Yvonne Francis-Gibson. BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:03, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks! The only thing that remains is to re-phrase the hook suggestions, then. Yakikaki (talk) 16:14, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Yakikaki: Sorry for taking so long to respond. Is there a requirement that quotes need to be attributed in the hook? All I read is that
if the source is not willing to say the fact in its own voice, the hook should attribute back to the original source as well.
– but I don't think that'd apply, as The Times had that wording in their own voice. But anyway, if it is required, would the modification be something like ALT2: ... that Richard Stratton's diplomatic career, according to The Times, took him "from South America to Japan, and from Southern Africa to the foothills of the Himalayas"? That does seem kind of less "hook-y," though. BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:37, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for getting back about this. On closer look and second though I realise you are probably – and hopefully – right. I would also prefer the original hook to be honest, but thanks for providing an ALT in any case. Yakikaki (talk) 08:51, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Yakikaki: Sorry for taking so long to respond. Is there a requirement that quotes need to be attributed in the hook? All I read is that
The House of Bijapur
[edit]- ... that The House of Bijapur (pictured) has been called a "painted curtain call" since the dynasty it depicts was overthrown only a few years later?
- Source: Hutton, Deborah (2016). "Memory and Monarchy: A Seventeenth-Century Painting from Bijapur and its Afterlives". South Asian Studies. 32 (1): 22–41. ISSN 0266-6030.
Thus, within a few years of the paintings completion, the sultanate it celebrated was gone. Stuart Cary Welch, in characteristically evocative prose, called the work ' a painted curtain call ': the main characters appearing together for one last ovation before the play ended and the stage went dark.
- ALT1: ... that The House of Bijapur (pictured) depicts eight members of the Adil Shahi dynasty? Source: Hutton, Deborah (2016). "Memory and Monarchy: A Seventeenth-Century Painting from Bijapur and its Afterlives". South Asian Studies. 32 (1): 22–41. ISSN 0266-6030.
it is larger than most manuscript paintings), its arresting lavender and saffron landscape, and its subject matter: it depicts eight rulers of the ʿAdil Shahi dynasty seated together on a carpet. Technically, it is not all of the ʿAdil Shahi rulers, as the artists left out the unfortunate Mallū ʿĀdil Khān(r. 1534–35), who ruled for a mere seven months before he was deposed.
- Reviewed:
AmateurHi$torian (talk) 15:47, 8 December 2024 (UTC).
- The article is new enough, long enough and the hook proposals good, particular the first one. They are also supported by inline citations. However, stylistically the article needs work. I would say it currently fails the presentability criterion. The lead section does not summarise the article. The "Significance" section starts abruptly, stating it is larger than ordinary manuscript pictures, but until now the reader hasn't even been informed it IS a manuscript picture. The "Description" section starts like this: "In the middle is the principal subject; The painting depicts eight of the nine rulers of the Bijapur Sultanate; leaving out only Mallu Adil Khan, whose reign lasted for only seven months." Why the semi-colons? These are just a few immediate points I spotted. I think the nominator should go through the article and bring it up to common Manual of Style standards before we can proceed with this nomination. Let me know when you have done so and I will take another look. Kind regards, Yakikaki (talk) 15:35, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- Tidied up the article a bit. Expanded the lead, removed the semicolons, and added some information regarding the painting's status as a (presumed) manuscript picture.AmateurHi$torian (talk) 11:39, 17 December 2024 (UTC)
- Very nice improvement of the article! It should be good to go now. Yakikaki (talk) 16:13, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- Tidied up the article a bit. Expanded the lead, removed the semicolons, and added some information regarding the painting's status as a (presumed) manuscript picture.AmateurHi$torian (talk) 11:39, 17 December 2024 (UTC)
Manger on McNichols
[edit]- ... that the Boldy James and Sterling Toles collaborative album Manger on McNichols took over a decade to make?
- Source: Johnson, Patrick (July 22, 2020). "Boldy James and Sterling Toles' 'Manger On McNichols' Project Took Over a Decade to Make". Hypebeast. Archived from the original on June 14, 2023. Retrieved December 6, 2024.
- Reviewed:
TheseVGF (talk) 22:49, 9 December 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Epicgenius (talk) 16:00, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
Saxophone sonata (Creston)
[edit]- ... that the publishing of Paul Creston's saxophone sonata was delayed by a "rat with a toothbrush mustache"? Source: Morris, Willie (1996). The Development of the Saxophone Compositions of Paul Creston (DMA thesis). University of Missouri–Kansas City. OCLC 35239809. p 118. As quoted in article.
- Reviewed:
- Comment: Can supply other hooks if need be :)
UpTheOctave! • 8va? 19:22, 6 December 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Hook fact is brilliant; you may get some kickback that the fact is in a dropquote, but I don't mind. It does need a reference in the running text per WP:DYKHFC. Earwig spots no issues. New enough, long enough, no image to review though the one in the lede does appear to be free. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 23:08, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you for the review Chris Woodrich! I've added a reference after the relevant sentence in prose (and added a bit more detail while I had a good look at the source). UpTheOctave! • 8va? 23:35, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- Awesome. Looks good! — Chris Woodrich (talk) 23:41, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
Conestoga wagon
[edit]- ... that the Conestoga wagon (pictured) has a boat-like shape but is unsuitable for traveling on water bodies?
- Source: Conestoga Wagon 1750–1850: Freight Carrier for 100 Years of America's Westward Expansion (p. 185-187)
- ALT1: ... that between 1750 and 1775, as many as 10,000 Conestoga wagons (pictured) traveled within Pennsylvania annually? Source: The Conestoga Wagon of Pennsylvania (p. 155-163)
- ALT2: ... that of the 156 Conestoga wagons (pictured) brought to the Braddock Expedition of the French and Indian War, only one remained intact by the campaign's end? Source: Conestoga Wagons in Braddock's Campaign, 1755 (p. 142-153).
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Fictional planets of the Solar System
PrimalMustelid (talk) 14:29, 11 December 2024 (UTC).
- article is recently promoted to GA, long enough and within policy. Hook is short and interesting. Picture is freely licensed and appropriate. QPQ is complete. I prefer ALT2. ALT0 is fine too. ALT1 isn't very interesting to me. Leave it to the promoter to choose between 2 and 0. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:34, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
Onekaka Wharf and tramline
[edit]- ... that painter Doris Lusk chose the Onekaka Wharf (remnants pictured) as her main subject for five years?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Noel Hilliam and Template:Did you know nominations/Katerina Clark
- Comment:
I'll have to review another nomination.
Schwede66 02:16, 10 December 2024 (UTC).
- QPQs done. Article is long/new enough. No copyvios. Image is free to use, although the caption should start with a capital letter. Hook is interesting. Hook matches the article and source. ―Panamitsu (talk) 21:44, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
Aquilegia chrysantha, Aquilegia chaplinei
[edit]- ... that Aquilegia chaplinei is generally considered a distinct species, except in Texas, where it is considered a variety of the species Aquilegia chrysantha (pictured)?
- Source: Nold, Robert (2003). Columbines: Aquilegia, Paraquilegia, and Semiaquilegia. Portland, OR: Timber Press. ISBN 0881925888.
- Source: Nold, Robert (2003). Columbines: Aquilegia, Paraquilegia, and Semiaquilegia. Portland, OR: Timber Press. ISBN 0881925888.
- Reviewed: 1.) Template:Did you know nominations/Yanou Collart, 2.) Template:Did you know nominations/Elin Falk, 3.) Template:Did you know nominations/2018 Batman by-election, 4.) Template:Did you know nominations/George K. Teulon
Pbritti (talk) 21:28, 6 December 2024 (UTC).
- Reviewing.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 13:49, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
- I don't think either hook is grammatical. I think separate needs to be followed by the word from.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 20:45, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
- @TonyTheTiger: "Separate" replaced with "distinct", which is a more scientific and precise word. ~ Pbritti (talk) 21:27, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
- I am interpreting this change to mean a species without varieties.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 05:04, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- Sorry, @TonyTheTiger: can you rephrase your comment? I think I misunderstand how you're reading that. ~ Pbritti (talk) 05:40, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- Is "distinct" a taxonomy term that means it is a species without varieties. Otherwise, in terms of regular grammar a from is still needed. I.e., unless it is a special scientific use of the word, something needs to be distinct or separate from something else unless it is implied by the usage/context to be separate/distinct from everything or a previous referent.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 07:49, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- Sorry, @TonyTheTiger: can you rephrase your comment? I think I misunderstand how you're reading that. ~ Pbritti (talk) 05:40, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- I am interpreting this change to mean a species without varieties.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 05:04, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- @TonyTheTiger: "Separate" replaced with "distinct", which is a more scientific and precise word. ~ Pbritti (talk) 21:27, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
- The DYK check tool says Aquilegia chaplinei created from redirect on December 2. It is new enough and long enough. However, the tool says that Aquilegia chrysantha meets the 5x requirement based on November 8 at 8886 characters. Further investigation shows that the article was 1785 characters on December 1 and you need to achieve 8925 characters for 5x. Right now only 4.978x.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 14:30, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- Image is PD and in use in one of the articles.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 14:44, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- The required 4 QPQs have been completed.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 14:45, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- The copyvio detector shows no issues for either article (both under 10%).-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 16:10, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- @TonyTheTiger: The page-size tool that I'm using (WP:Prosesize) is giving me 8951 characters at present. How are you calculating this? The 8886 was my target 5x. ~ Pbritti (talk) 16:27, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- What does your tool say the December 1 size was? The standard tool here is the DYK Check tool. You can install it. I forgot how, but ask at WT:DYK if you need to. Otherwise just add 40 characters.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 21:13, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- N.B. The DYK check tool is in the toolbox here on this page.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 21:36, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- What does your tool say the December 1 size was? The standard tool here is the DYK Check tool. You can install it. I forgot how, but ask at WT:DYK if you need to. Otherwise just add 40 characters.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 21:13, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- @TonyTheTiger: The page-size tool that I'm using (WP:Prosesize) is giving me 8951 characters at present. How are you calculating this? The 8886 was my target 5x. ~ Pbritti (talk) 16:27, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- Both articles are well-sourced. They seem to have an encyclopedic and neutral tone.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 21:32, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- (edit conflict) @TonyTheTiger: Might have to download the DYK prose tool, thanks for advising me. I'm getting 1779 characters in 277 words on 1 December, but I think I've made the matter moot with an addition from a book I'd cited earlier this year on Aquilegia sibirica. Thats's getting us to 9166 characters on Prosesize, so that difference is presumably enough to nudge us over the line on DYK's tool. Regarding distinct, that means species A is indeed a species, rather than itself a variety or subspecies of species B. In this case, A. chaplinei is almost universally recognized as a distinct species, but some Texan botanical authorities disagree and claim it's only a variety of the species A. chrysantha. If you need anything else, please ping! Your patience has been dearly appreciated. Best, ~ Pbritti (talk) 21:40, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- The revised version is 9100 by DYK Check and passes 5x based on a December 2 date, which is sufficient for this December 8 nomination.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 22:40, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- (edit conflict) @TonyTheTiger: Might have to download the DYK prose tool, thanks for advising me. I'm getting 1779 characters in 277 words on 1 December, but I think I've made the matter moot with an addition from a book I'd cited earlier this year on Aquilegia sibirica. Thats's getting us to 9166 characters on Prosesize, so that difference is presumably enough to nudge us over the line on DYK's tool. Regarding distinct, that means species A is indeed a species, rather than itself a variety or subspecies of species B. In this case, A. chaplinei is almost universally recognized as a distinct species, but some Texan botanical authorities disagree and claim it's only a variety of the species A. chrysantha. If you need anything else, please ping! Your patience has been dearly appreciated. Best, ~ Pbritti (talk) 21:40, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- (ec) Regarding the hook, I don't know what it is saying on many levels because I am not really sure how regional taxonomy works. Does this mean
- Examples of this plant found in Texas are classified differently than examples of it found elsewhere?
- Texas law gives this plant different status for in terms of habitat protections, conservation and endangered species considerations than laws elsewhere?
- Texas taxonomic societies have come to a unique determination regarding this plant wherever it is found?
- Some important Texans disagree with non-Texans regarding classification in a manner that bears weight?
- Something else?-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 21:46, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- Effectively 3 and 4. Texan authorities like the Lady Bird Johnson Center are authoritative and disagree with recognizing A. chaplinei as its own species. Nold 2003 says that the designation A. chrysantha var. chaplinei "has not found general acceptance, except, it seems, in Texas". ~ Pbritti (talk) 21:58, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- I assume the hook is fully cited, but i must partially WP:AGF. The hook is interesting enough.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 22:37, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- -TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 22:40, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
KCTV
[edit]- ... that a Kansas City TV station was under contract to be sold within a week of its first regular broadcast? Source: https://www.newspapers.com/article/the-kansas-city-times-kcmo-price-2-mill/118204904/
- ALT1: ... that when a Kansas City TV station threatened to move to the suburbs, some officials suggested it take its broadcast tower with it? Source: https://www.newspapers.com/clip/118205380/kcmo-move-defended-by-manager/
- Reviewed: Artur Bubnevych and Chromakopia
Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 05:58, 7 December 2024 (UTC).
- Sammi Brie making life easy here. GA was just today, length of article is good, no copyvios detected. Hook is interesting enough that someone with no interest in the subject matter (me) paused and wanted to read what happened there. Citation appropriately placed. The Harry Truman bit not getting a mention is a bit of a surprise, but that's nitpicking. We're good to go here. ~ Pbritti (talk) 19:51, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
Jewish Ethnographic Expedition
[edit]- ... that the Jewish Ethnographic Expedition visited more than 60 shtetls in the Pale of Settlement before World War I? Source: [3]
- ALT1: ... that the questionnaire prepared after the Jewish Ethnographic Expedition had 2,087 questions? Source: [4]
- ALT2: ... that the questionnaire prepared after the Jewish Ethnographic Expedition had 2,087 questions and was called "a modern epic"? Source: [5]
- ALT3: ... that the collection of music and artifacts gathered during the Jewish Ethnographic Expedition was thought to be lost until the dissolution of the Soviet Union? Source: [6] [7]
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Blossoms Under Somewhere
Artem.G (talk) 07:51, 12 December 2024 (UTC).
- @Artem.G: Impressive work and excellent read! AGF on the quality sources. ALT1 is the least interesting hook; the others are all interesting, especially primary and ALT2. Pending QPQ for pass. Al Ameer (talk) 03:10, 14 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review! Qpq is done now. Artem.G (talk) 09:34, 14 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Al Ameer son: Courtesy ping. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 18:17, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you, pleased to pass. Al Ameer (talk) 18:20, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
Aquilegia gegica, Aquilegia colchica
[edit]- ... that Aquilegia gegica and Aquilegia colchica, two species of columbine native to the Caucasus, can produce fertile offspring?
- Source: "Biological Peculiarities of F1 Generation of Hybrids of Two Georgian Endemic Species Aquilegia colchica Kem.-Nath. and Aquilegia gegica Jabr.-Kolak". Bulletin of the Georgian National Academy of Sciences. 15 (2). 2021.
- Reviewed: 1.) Template:Did you know nominations/Rescatemos a David y Miguel, 2.) Template:Did you know nominations/Pokémon Scarlet and Violet, 3.) Template:Did you know nominations/Dear Jinri, 4.) Template:Did you know nominations/Hanta Road
Pbritti (talk) 01:09, 9 December 2024 (UTC).
- Reviewing-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 05:43, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- Both were created on December 7 and are over 1600 characters.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:01, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- With the overlap there is still 3000 characters of new content.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:56, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
- No copyvio issues, although this may be more due to inability to check.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 21:26, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- No image is at issue.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 21:27, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hook is cited offline. I WP:AGF.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:44, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hook is interesting and concise.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:44, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
- QPQs done.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:49, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
- Articles are neutral an encyclopedic, but are sourced largely offline.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:56, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
- .--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:56, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
Confederate Monument (Oxford, Mississippi)
[edit]- ... that it cost an estimated $1.2 million to move the Confederate Monument (pictured) at the University of Mississippi? Source: "The estimated cost of the move is $1.2 million, which will be paid with private donations, not public money, the board said." [8]
- ALT1: ... that the Confederate Monument (pictured) at the University of Mississippi had two explanatory plaques? Source: "After meeting with the chancellor and members of the university community, the committee expressed its desire to consider further input and reexamine whether the language on the plaque should be changed and, if so, how. After considerable input and study, the committee made its final recommendation, which was approved in June 2016 by Chancellor Vitter." [9]
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Thomas Fenner (sea captain), Template:Did you know nominations/2023 European Athletics Indoor Championships – Women's 400 metres
- Comment: Delayed nominating the article while it was at AfD. The result of the discussion was keep.
Hawkeye7 (discuss) 01:12, 13 December 2024 (UTC).
- Article looks good. There are no major copyvios but I'd like the phrase "... American Civil War, almost the entire student body ..." to be worded differently because it's the same in the source but it's not a major problem. Image is freely licensed. Reviewing ALT0: The hook is interesting, matches the article and the source. ―Panamitsu (talk) 02:42, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
- Re-worded the lead to remove the close paraphrase. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 03:22, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
Thomas P. Fenner
[edit]- ... that the first women's dorm built at Hampton University was paid for through money earned by the school's choir in tours led by Thomas P. Fenner (pictured)?
- Source: "Hampton Choir to Sing in Boston". Bay State Banner. March 12, 1970.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Grid energy storage, Template:Did you know nominations/Abortion in Mauritius
- Comment: Moved to mainspace on December 7
4meter4 (talk) 15:41, 9 December 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Per MOS:LEADCITE, the material in the lead section should be cited. As the content also appears in the remainder of the article, that should not be difficult for the article creator to accomplish. Originally I had concerns over the fact that the lead section was uncited, but given that even featured articles can have uncited lead sections as 4meter4 indicates, I am withdrawing that objection. --Metropolitan90 (talk) 03:47, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Metropolitan90 You have misunderstood the policy. The opposite is true. MOS:LEADCITE says
The presence of citations in the lead is neither required in every article nor prohibited in any article.
You are not supposed to have redundant citations in the lead. Take a look at any WP:FA status article and you will see zero citations in the lead. For example todays feature article: Algebra. Other FA class articles with zero citations in the lead from this month on the main page: Len Deighton, Shovel Knight Showdown, You Belong with Me, Wilfred Arthur, Mimodactylus, etc. Best.4meter4 (talk) 06:06, 12 December 2024 (UTC)- Fair enough. I am now giving this article a . --Metropolitan90 (talk) 00:47, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Metropolitan90 You have misunderstood the policy. The opposite is true. MOS:LEADCITE says
Pokémon Scarlet and Violet
[edit]- ... that the 2022 video games Pokémon Scarlet and Violet's ending credits music, "Celestial", was made by English singer-songwriter Ed Sheeran (pictured), and is the first song in the series to have lyrics?
- Source: https://www.thegamer.com/pokemon-scarlet-violet-ed-sheerans-song-celestial/
- "Ed Sheeran's new song Celestial will apparently feature somewhere in the game... Celestial will be the first song included in a Pokemon game that actually has lyrics."
- https://www.rpgfan.com/music-review/nintendo-switch-pokemon-scarlet%E3%83%BBviolet-the-hidden-treasure-of-area-zero-super-music-collection/
- "I wasn’t expecting the Ed Sheeran single that plays during the end credits to be on this OST."
- ALT1: ... that due to performance issues at launch in the 2022 video games Pokémon Scarlet and Violet, the games became the lowest rated mainline entries in the franchise's history?
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- "The flaws are seemingly endless, impacting gameplay so much that Scarlet and Violet have become the worst-reviewed games in the series."
- Reviewed:
- Comment: Ed Sheeran image is only for if the first hook is used.
Magneton Considerer: Pokelego999 (Talk) (Contribs) 00:42, 8 December 2024 (UTC).
- Everything seems to be in order. GA was on the 7th, article is long enough and appropriately sourced. It looks like some of the images are yours—why aren't we using this gem?—and are good to go. Hook is fascinating enough and the picture of Mr. Sheeran, while haunting, is good at 100px. Overall, great job! ~ Pbritti (talk) 01:29, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
Rescatemos a David y Miguel
[edit]- ... that you can leave a lock at the Rescatemos a David y Miguel memorial (pictured), installed six years ago today, as a symbol of demanding security?
- ALT1: ... that the Rescatemos a David y Miguel memorial (pictured) was installed seven years ago today in response to a kidnapping that occurred thirteen years ago today? Source: Excélsior: Family and friends of David Ramírez and Miguel Ángel Rivera erected a memorial on Paseo de la Reforma in memory of the young men who were kidnapped on January 5, 2012.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Charles Herman Allen and Template:Did you know nominations/American Wedding (song)
- Comment: This nomination is specific for January 5. File:Antimonumento de David y Miguel 2.jpg can also work as an image substitute.
(CC) Tbhotch™ 19:34, 7 December 2024 (UTC).
- Article is new and long enough, looks well-cited. Bad news is that I'm fairly certain that the images, including the one attached to the nom here, are copyrighted. I had a similar issue with a draft I'm working on and brought it to the Teahouse ([10]). I'm afraid you'll have to reupload the images as fair use and exclude them from the nom. ~ Pbritti (talk) 01:16, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Pbritti: Mexico has freedom of panorama. Refer to Commons:COM:Mexico for further information. (CC) Tbhotch™ 01:20, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- Briefly contemplated failing just out of shear envy, thought better of it. Can't say I know Spanish too well but I'm confident in the AGF on the citations, which are appropriately placed. QPQs done. The proposed run on 5 January is appropriate. Great work! ~ Pbritti (talk) 01:25, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- Regrettably, the QPQ done for Template:Did you know nominations/Charles Herman Allen was not adequate: while seven days is the standard for nominations to be made, DYK specifically allows a day or two latitude (typically given in general and particularly for new pre-QPQ participants as this nominator is); the nomination here was made nine days after creation. If Tbhotch will give this nomination a full review, a QPQ can be counted, or they can submit another review for that purpose. Thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 02:10, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- @BlueMoonset: It seems that you're failing this hook based on Tbhotch's literal interpretation of the reviewing guidelines. While you can contest their review (I'm not sure the term
supersede
is appropriate), this is almost certainly not sufficient ground to supersede my review of this hook. Reaffirming the AGF pass. ~ Pbritti (talk) 03:14, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- @BlueMoonset: It seems that you're failing this hook based on Tbhotch's literal interpretation of the reviewing guidelines. While you can contest their review (I'm not sure the term
- Regrettably, the QPQ done for Template:Did you know nominations/Charles Herman Allen was not adequate: while seven days is the standard for nominations to be made, DYK specifically allows a day or two latitude (typically given in general and particularly for new pre-QPQ participants as this nominator is); the nomination here was made nine days after creation. If Tbhotch will give this nomination a full review, a QPQ can be counted, or they can submit another review for that purpose. Thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 02:10, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- Briefly contemplated failing just out of shear envy, thought better of it. Can't say I know Spanish too well but I'm confident in the AGF on the citations, which are appropriately placed. QPQs done. The proposed run on 5 January is appropriate. Great work! ~ Pbritti (talk) 01:25, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
Man of Smoke
[edit]- ... that Man of Smoke, where the main character is made of smoke, is one of the most noted futurist novels?
- Source: Belfagor
- ALT1: ... that according to a scholar, the futurist novel Man of Smoke contains a hidden legal code for readers to piece together? Source: Encyclopedia of Italian Literary Studies
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Eurovision Song Contest 1984, Template:Did you know nominations/Zhang Xinsheng (film)
Uriahheep228 (talk) 18:32, 8 December 2024 (UTC).
- QPQs not required but done anyway—thank you! Article is long and new enough. No copyvios as far as I can tell but having to AGF since a lot of the sources are in Italian. Hooks are definitely fascinating and cited appropriately. Images are public domain. Overall, great work! ~ Pbritti (talk) 00:35, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
Ken Battle
[edit]- ... that a Sunday afternoon phone call to Ken Battle laid the foundations for the Canadian Child Benefit program? Source: https://www.theglobeandmail.com/canada/article-social-policy-analyst-ken-battle-sowed-seeds-for-the-canada-child/
Ktin (talk) 23:20, 7 December 2024 (UTC).
- As a courtesy, I added the citation to the necessary location in the article. Pending QPQs, I think we're good to go here. Ping me when you've gotten those done! ~ Pbritti (talk) 00:08, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Pbritti: thanks for the review. Completed the QPQ. Missed the fact that I had to complete 2 QPQs. However, I have completed them now. Ktin (talk) 17:19, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- I tagged the photo of him to have its size reduced, but that'll get resolved automatically before the article runs at DYK. The fair use rationale is valid. Otherwise, we're good to go here. A fine little article. Nice work! ~ Pbritti (talk) 18:10, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
Aquilegia parviflora
[edit]- ... that the small flowers that give Aquilegia parviflora (pictured) its name make it unpopular with gardeners?
- Source: Nold, Robert (2003). Columbines: Aquilegia, Paraquilegia, and Semiaquilegia. Portland, OR: Timber Press. p. 110. ISBN 0881925888.
- Reviewed: 1.) Template:Did you know nominations/Two Stars in the Milky Way, 2.) Template:Did you know nominations/MLS Cup 2024
- Comment:
Pbritti (talk) 19:39, 7 December 2024 (UTC).
- @Pbritti: Just as a reminder, QPQs must be provided at the time of the nomination, so the nomination may be closed without further warning if QPQs are not provided promptly. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 22:42, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5: While WP:QPQ says nominations without QPQs can be closed without warning, it also says
Your QPQ review should ideally be made at the time of your nomination
(emphasis mine). I am making a couple nominations based on articles that I'm producing under a relatively tight time constraint spurred by limited access to a particular source. The QPQs are coming, so your patience is appreciated. ~ Pbritti (talk) 23:34, 7 December 2024 (UTC)- Article size and date check out. Hook is interesting and cited. AGF to offline sources. Looks to me to be good to go. - The Bushranger One ping only 01:23, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5: While WP:QPQ says nominations without QPQs can be closed without warning, it also says
The Man Who Knew Too Much (Alexander McQueen collection)
[edit]- ... that when Alexander McQueen, following years of criticism for over-reliance on runway spectacles, presented The Man Who Knew Too Much (Autumn/Winter 2005), it was criticised for its lack of theatrics? Source: Judith Watt, Alexander McQueen: The Life and the Legacy, p 224 & Kate Bethune, Encyclopedia of Collections, p 316 (neither available on GBooks but screencaps emailed on request)
♠PMC♠ (talk) 03:31, 9 December 2024 (UTC).
Marking this as my QPQ review. Howard the Duck (talk) 03:25, 14 December 2024 (UTC)- I have withdrawn my nomination and won't be reviewing this any longer. Howard the Duck (talk) 13:55, 17 December 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: New enough, long enough, hook fact is interesting and cited to Watt and Bethune. Earwig shows 9.1%, but everything highlighted is just the title of the collection. Good to go. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 23:26, 20 December 2024 (UTC)
Aquilegia moorcroftiana
[edit]- ... that Aquilegia moorcroftiana is named after a mountaineer and is found at the highest elevation of any species of columbine?
- Source: Nold, Robert (2003). Columbines: Aquilegia, Paraquilegia, and Semiaquilegia. Portland, OR: Timber Press. ISBN 0881925888.
- Reviewed: 1.) Template:Did you know nominations/Man of Smoke, 2.) Template:Did you know nominations/Skin of My Teeth
- Comment:
Pbritti (talk) 00:27, 9 December 2024 (UTC).
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- Cited:
- Interesting:
- Other problems: - I would suggest changing the sentence in the article "named for William Moorcroft" to "named after William Moorcroft" to make the wording clearer, and likewise for the hook.
QPQ: Done. |
Overall: This is my first review so I would like a second opinion. jolielover♥talk 16:02, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Jolielover: Thanks for the review—how fun that this was your first. Welcome to the club! I think that "named for" is an Americanism and "named after" is the preference in British English; as the most relevant Engvars in this case would be British, Pakistani, or Indian English, I've adopted the suggested phrasing. By my estimation, I think your review is decent, but let me know if you want any clarifications! ~ Pbritti (talk) 18:33, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Pbritti: Thanks for the feedback, I actually had no clue it was a variation in English so sorry about that! jolielover♥talk 03:37, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Jolielover: Neither did I. Thanks for the review; consider keeping this on your watchlist in case someone has some insights for you to keep in mind in future reviews! Best, ~ Pbritti (talk) 03:40, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- Providing that second opinion - article is on time, appropriate length, well cited. No apparent copyvio concerns from online source, AGF on offline sources. Think this is good to go! - The Bushranger One ping only 22:22, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Jolielover: Neither did I. Thanks for the review; consider keeping this on your watchlist in case someone has some insights for you to keep in mind in future reviews! Best, ~ Pbritti (talk) 03:40, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Pbritti: Thanks for the feedback, I actually had no clue it was a variation in English so sorry about that! jolielover♥talk 03:37, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Jolielover: Thanks for the review—how fun that this was your first. Welcome to the club! I think that "named for" is an Americanism and "named after" is the preference in British English; as the most relevant Engvars in this case would be British, Pakistani, or Indian English, I've adopted the suggested phrasing. By my estimation, I think your review is decent, but let me know if you want any clarifications! ~ Pbritti (talk) 18:33, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
Ted Weiss Federal Building
[edit]- ... that New York City's Ted Weiss Federal Building was built next to an African burial ground? Source: Stern, Robert A. M.; Fishman, David; Tilove, Jacob (2006). New York 2000: Architecture and Urbanism Between the Bicentennial and the Millennium. New York: Monacelli Press. p. 307.
- ALT1: ... that a pavilion next to New York City's Ted Weiss Federal Building was canceled due to human remains? Source: Stern, Fishman & Tilove 2006, p. 307.
- ALT2: ... that New York City's Ted Weiss Federal Building, located next to an African burial ground, was named for a white American? Source: English, Merle (October 22, 2003). "Building's Name Draws Uproar / Critics: Title Should Reflect Historical Site". Newsday. p. A15.
- ALT3: ... that there was controversy over the name of New York City's Ted Weiss Federal Building because of its namesake's race? Source: English, Merle (October 22, 2003). "Building's Name Draws Uproar / Critics: Title Should Reflect Historical Site". Newsday. p. A15.
- ALT4: ... that during the construction of New York City's Ted Weiss Federal Building, local residents protested that not enough Asians were being hired for the project? Source: Kreitman, Matthew (July 14, 1992). "Chinatown Fights Injustice". South China Morning Post. p. 54.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Tin mining in Indonesia and Template:Did you know nominations/Tomato Industrial Museum D. Nomikos
- Comment: Thanks to User:Pretzelles, who helped me with two of the hooks.
Epicgenius (talk) 17:30, 9 December 2024 (UTC).
- Article is eligible for DYK (recently became a good article and has never been on the main page before). The image is free to use. I'll review ALT0 and ALT1. I think ALT1 is the most interesting.
- Reviewing ALT0:
- It's interesting and the hook matches the article. I can't access the provided source so I'll approve with good faith.
- Reviewing ALT1:
- I think this is much more interesting than ALT0. The hook matches the article and the source matches.
- ―Panamitsu (talk) 06:06, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
Chang Wei-chia
[edit]- ... that when future Olympian Chang Wei-chia entered high school, her elementary school swimming coach was hired full-time and continued coaching her?
- Source: Chiang, Yen-wen 江彥文 (1992-10-30). "《教練看張緯嘉》 練得少 表現好 琢磨良材 眼光要放遠" ["Coach on Chang Wei-chia" Less Training, Better Performance, A Gem in the Making—Long-Term Vision is Key]. Min Sheng Bao (in Chinese). p. 3.
The article notes: "張緯嘉北市玉成國小四年級正式開始游泳訓─練,蔡祖修是她的教練兼導師 ... 張緯嘉升入南港國中,蔡祖修也應聘為南港國中游泳專任教練,繼續訓練張緯嘉,隨著張緯嘉身高竄高,她的成績也快速進步,終於在本屆區運大放異采。"
From Google Translate: Chang Wei-chia officially started swimming training as a fourth grader at Yucheng Elementary School in Taipei City. Tsai Tzu-hsiu was her coach and mentor. ... When Chang Wei-chia was promoted to Nangang Junior High School, Tsai Tzu-hsiu was also employed as the full-time swimming coach of Nangang Junior High School and carried on training Chang Wei-chia."
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Tsybin Ts-25 and Template:Did you know nominations/Life Till Bones
Cunard (talk) 13:09, 8 December 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Cunard, this is a solid and well-sourced article. While the sources are all offline, they come from reputable Taiwanese newspapers and I will AGF on their verifiability. The hook is fairly interesting and is supported by the source. Earwig shows no signs of copyright violations (probably because the sources are in Chinese). Two QPQs done. Good to go! —Prince of Erebor(The Book of Mazarbul) 06:07, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you for the review, Prince of Erebor (talk · contribs)! Cunard (talk) 09:55, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
Skin of My Teeth
[edit]- ... that in "Skin of My Teeth", Demi Lovato declared that she barely escaped death?
- Source: Harper's Bazaar
- ALT1: ... that Demi Lovato staged a "funeral" for her pop music before releasing "Skin of My Teeth"? Source: People, Billboard
- Reviewed: [[]]
CatchMe (talk) 20:19, 8 December 2024 (UTC).
- Everything is good to go save one nitpick. I know this is an extremely minor deviation, but the article itself does not acknowledge that the song says she barely escaped death, only mentioning the lyric followed by the account of here near-fatal overdose. The Bazaar does make that link, so an extremely minor rephrase in the article would make it so ALT0 can run. Otherwise, outstanding work! ~ Pbritti (talk) 00:41, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you for reviewing this, Pbritti! I did a minor change to the article, so I think it is resolved now. CatchMe (talk) 01:39, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- Excellent work! Thanks for making that change. We're good to go here! ~ Pbritti (talk) 01:43, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you for reviewing this, Pbritti! I did a minor change to the article, so I think it is resolved now. CatchMe (talk) 01:39, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
Peri Alypias
[edit]- ... that in 2005, a French PhD student discovered the lost manuscript of Galen's Peri Alypias in what was called "one of the most spectacular finds ever of ancient literature"?
- Source: Rothschild, Clare K.; Thompson, Trevor W. (2012). "Galen's On the Avoidance of Grief : The Question of a Library at Antium". Classical Philology. 107 (2): 131–145. doi:10.1086/664028. ISSN 0009-837X. JSTOR 10.1086/664028.
- Reviewed:
- Comment: Excited for this one. Who doesn't love a good manuscript discovery?
Kazamzam (talk) 22:53, 8 December 2024 (UTC).
- Article is new enough, long enough, and within policy. No copyright violation detected. Hook fact is verified to the cited source and is a good length in addition to be interesting. Good work! This article can be promoted.4meter4 (talk) 00:36, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
Pem Nem
[edit]- ... that in the narrative epic Pem Nem, the union of two lovers is a metaphor for the union of the soul with God?
- Source: * Hutton, Deborah (2011). "The Pem Nem: A Sixteenth Century Illustrated Romance from Bijapur". Sultans of the South: Arts of India's Deccan Courts, 1323-1687. p. 44.
Works of this type employ the masnavi format, a narrative poem in rhyming couplets, to tell a love story that mirrors the quest of the Sufi for union with God
"Pem nem: a 16th-century Urdu romance goes on-line".As in other tales of the same genre, the union of the lover and beloved is a metaphor for the union of the soul with God after mistaking the image, the majaz or symbol (here the image of Mah Ji on the hero's chest) for the haqiqa, or truth.
- ALT1: ... that in the narrative epic Pem Nem, a prince and a princess fall in love after a tortoise mysteriously conveys their pictures to each other? Source: * Hutton, Deborah (2011). "The Pem Nem: A Sixteenth Century Illustrated Romance from Bijapur". Sultans of the South: Arts of India's Deccan Courts, 1323-1687. p. 44.
the two fall hopelessly in love when a tortoise mysteriously conveys their portraits to one another
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AmateurHi$torian (talk) 15:40, 8 December 2024 (UTC).
- Approving first hook only. Article is new enough, long enough, and within policy. No copyright violations detected. Both hook facts are reasonably interesting and are an appropriate length. The first hook has no issues and I can tick yes on that. However, there are some minor verifiability issues with the alt hook that should be easily fixed. To begin with the hook fact is not actually on page 44, but occurs later on page 46 and again on page 51. Secondly, the source uses the word tortoise (which is what is in the hook), but the article says turtle. They are not exactly the same thing (although tortoises are a specific type of turtle). Ping me once those issues are fixes and I can approve the alt hook, but no big deal if we just go with the first hook. Best.4meter4 (talk) 00:26, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, it's on page 46; that was a mistake on my part. As for the tortoise-turtle issue, there is another source which states that the animal was a turtle. The actual language of the manuscript is Dakhni, and like Urdu/Hindi, the word for tortoise and turtle is probably the same, ie. کچھوا or kachua. In any case, hook 1 is fine by me, and thanks for the review :) AmateurHi$torian (talk) 11:59, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
Zhang Xinsheng (film)
[edit]- ... that the 1923 film Zhang Xinsheng disgusted audiences by featuring close-up views of internal organs and was later censored?
- Source: Huang, Xuelei (2014). Shanghai Filmmaking: Crossing Borders, Connecting to the Globe, 1922–1938. Leiden: Brill. ISBN 978-90-04-27933-9.;
- ALT1: ... that cheaper tickets helped Zhang Xinsheng earn more money? Source: Huang, Xuelei (2014). Shanghai Filmmaking: Crossing Borders, Connecting to the Globe, 1922–1938. Leiden: Brill. ISBN 978-90-04-27933-9.;
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Council of District Dumas, Template:Did you know nominations/My Boy Only Breaks His Favorite Toys
— Chris Woodrich (talk) 15:41, 8 December 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: AGF on Shanghai Filmmaking and other offline/non-free sources. Good work! Uriahheep228 (talk) 17:23, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
Tsybin Ts-25
[edit]- ... that the Tsybin Ts-25 military glider was considered for use as a civilian airliner on routes including Moscow?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Austrosphecodes krampus; Template:Did you know nominations/Aquilegia parviflora
The Bushranger One ping only 01:54, 8 December 2024 (UTC).
- Verified that the article is long enough, that there are no plagiarism concerns through the Copyvios tool and spotchecking, and that the hook is sourced in the article. Cunard (talk) 12:55, 8 December 2024 (UTC)