Talk:Victor Albisu

Latest comment: 6 days ago by Innisfree987 in topic Subscriber Sources

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 17:31, 26 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

 
Albisu prepares risotto in 2010
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  • "Albisu, who grew up in nearby Annandale" ARLnow
  • "Bulgogi Bullfight taco pays tribute to Annandale's Koreatown with bulgogi-style pork and Brussels-sprout kimchee." Washingtonian
Created by Innisfree987 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 38 past nominations.

Innisfree987 (talk) 07:26, 7 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   Interesting hook but slight problems that could be resolved before I can complete a final confirmation for it to be approved for DYK. In the hook, it mentions "lbisu created a bulgogi taco honoring the Koreatown neighborhood of his hometown of Annandale, Virginia". But in the article, it states Washingtonian magazine described the Vienna menu as a “love letter to Northern Virginia”, with a “7 Corners Shrimp” taco honoring Eden Center’s hub of Vietnamese restaurants and “Bulgogi Bullfight” drawing on Annandale’s Koreatown neighborhood. Could you edit the article to state the hook directly so that the viewers can easily view and understand it? (eg.Albisu created the “Bulgogi Bullfight”, a taco which honored the Koreatown neighborhood of his hometown of Annandale, Virginia.) Other than that, all else is good. - Toadboy123 (talk) 14:26, 9 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
  • Thanks for the ping Z1720 and the review Toadboy123. I added the note about his hometown to the entry (it was already there in the early life section but now it’s noted in the passage about the taco too). I also made a minor grammatical tweak to the hook. Thanks again both! Innisfree987 (talk) 06:15, 16 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
  Issues resolved. Now GTG. Toadboy123 (talk) 14:22, 16 September 2024 (UTC)Reply


Subscriber Sources

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I was originally going to review the Good Article Nomination, but many of the resources require subscriptions. Instead, I made some efforts to improve the article and leave the review to someone who may feel more comfortable. Matthew Yeager (talk) 01:43, 19 December 2024 (UTC)Reply

Thanks very much for your edits @Matthew Yeager! Innisfree987 (talk) 03:22, 19 December 2024 (UTC)Reply