Template:Did you know nominations/Josh Hose

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The result was: promoted by — Crisco 1492 (talk) 10:02, 2 September 2012 (UTC)

Josh Hose

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... that 2012 Australian Paralympic wheelchair rugby player Josh Hose broke his back when a roof on a house a car he was riding in fell on him?

Reviewed: Center Square/Hudson–Park Historic District
Comment: Moved from user space. Save for Paralympics?

Created/expanded by LauraHale (talk). Self nom at 02:41, 31 July 2012 (UTC)

The hook makes no sense, either here or in the article, and does not match the explanation in the cited source. The source further says it was neck vertebrae, not back. BlueMoonset (talk) 21:56, 2 August 2012 (UTC)

Comment - I have clarified the incident in the article. Perhaps an alternative hook could be something like,

ALT1: ... that 2012 Australian Paralympic wheelchair rugby player Josh Hose became a quadraplegic after a car rollover?— Preceding unsigned comment added by Hack (talk • contribs) August 3, 2012

Full DYK review needed. BlueMoonset (talk) 05:06, 12 August 2012 (UTC)

Left a note for LauraHale about ALT1: - apparently, she'd not previously been notified.

ALT1:, if used, is short enough at 109 characters, sourced at the end of the sentence
QPQ done by LauraHale on July 31, 2012
Article moved from LauraHale's user page on July 31, 2012 and has 1,944 characters of usable prose
NPOV article about Paralympics rugby athlete
All paragraphs sourced
Duplication Detector run, no copyvio
Time spent on this review approximately 30 minutes

Maile66 (talk) 21:51, 18 August 2012 (UTC)

SPECIAL HOLDING AREA FOR PARALYMPICS

Isn't this good to go? What is there for Laura to respond on? Mentoz86 (talk) 20:52, 21 August 2012 (UTC)

The hook. BlueMoonset's comments above say that the original hook does not make sense and does not match the source. Therefore, there needs to be an alternative hook. User Hack suggested Alt 1 hook above. But we need agreement from LauraHale on the Alt 1. Right? If she doesn't like this hook, she needs to provide one of her own that matches the article and its sourcing. Maile66 (talk) 21:01, 21 August 2012 (UTC)

Ah okei. I've poked her again on her talk-page, but I'd say this can be approved without her approval. Mentoz86 (talk) 21:09, 21 August 2012 (UTC)

Fine with alt. --LauraHale (talk) 21:10, 21 August 2012 (UTC)

Good to go with Alt 1 Maile66 (talk) 21:12, 21 August 2012 (UTC)

SPECIAL HOLDING AREA FOR PARALYMPICS