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GA Review

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These are some of the reasons that I failed this article:

  • There are Spelling errors in the lead.
  • There are WP:ACCESS violations at every opportunity, and are especially egregious in the lead.
  • The article is short to the point that it may not be comprehensive.
  • The explanation of Dvorak T-numbers is clumsy and probably unnecessary.
  • Other instances of jargon (i.e. deep convection) are unlinked and unexplained.
  • The citations are bare.
  • The Reference heading is a casual "Refs", and External links has been abbreviated to "Links".
  • There is no "See also" section, which may or may be justified.

I would continue, but I think these are sufficient grounds. Plasticup T/C 20:57, 11 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Mabey I can fix this up a little. Add see Also, an External links, and a references section.Leave Message orYellow Evan home

You have fixed one of the many problems. That is good, but this article is still a long way from Good Article status. Plasticup T/C 03:40, 13 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

"The last advisory was issued by JTWC that afternoon." - Am I missing something here? -CWY2190(talk • contributions) 04:02, 13 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]


I ma justing saying it a little differently. More in a moment.Leave Message orYellow Evan home 04:07, 13 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I have fixed two. I will be fixing one more.Leave Message orYellow Evan home 04:11, 13 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I tried to fix the refs but it does not work. Leave Message ,Yellow Evan home ,Sandbox[ 04:14, 6 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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