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GA Reassessment
[edit]The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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- Result: No consensus to delist. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 08:35, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
Editor added {{GAR request}}
tag on t/p last month. 2006 listing has valid cleanup banners and citation issues. Unusually, updating doesn't seem to be an issue. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 12:39, 13 July 2023 (UTC)
- I'm so confused. Why was this listed for review, who performed the review, and who decided "not enough improvement"? What does "not enough improvement" even mean? What did the article need to improve? Which specific sections should we be looking at? I don't even understand the English in this section, what does "unusually, updating doesn't seem to be an issue" mean? You made zero effort to contact editors, or engage with the large community on this page and related WikiProject. This is terrible! -- Patrick Neil, oѺ∞/Talk 18:50, 23 July 2023 (UTC)
- Patrickneil, this was listed for review because the article "has valid cleanup banners and citation issues". Relevant sentence of the GA criteria:
An article can be failed without further review (known as a quick fail) if, prior to the review it has, or needs, cleanup banners that are unquestionably still valid ... All content that could reasonably be challenged ... must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph.
- I decided "not enough improvement", because the article still has "cleanup banners and citation issues". Relevant sentence of the GAR instructions:
After at least one week, if the article's issues are unresolved and there are no objections to delisting, the discussion may be closed as delist.
- The sections you should be looking at are the ones with the "cleanup banners and citation issues" i.e. Kosovo intervention, Membership, and Structure. "Unusually, updating doesn't seem to be an issue" means that the article is well-updated, which not an issue but is unusual. Are any other of my English phrases unclear?
- "You made zero effort to contact editors, or engage with the large community on this page and related WikProject. This is terrible!" This is a verifiably incorrect claim: see Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Vital Articles, Wikipedia talk:WikiProject NATO, Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Military history/Archive 170, Wikipedia talk:WikiProject International relations, Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Organizations, Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Politics, User talk:Morgoonki, User talk:Fw-us-hou-8.bmc.com, User talk:FutureTrillionaire, and User talk:H1nkles. I would appreciate if you would strike this unjustified accusation, Patrickneil.
- You have reverted my closure of this discussion against the GAR instructions:
A GAR closure should only be contested if the closure was obviously against consensus or otherwise procedurally incorrect...Before disputing a GAR closure, first discuss your concerns with the closing editor on their talk page.
Am I to understand that you wish to improve the article back to GAR standard? In the future, please leave a note on the relevant GA reassessment page; that would save us all a lot of bother. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 19:15, 23 July 2023 (UTC)- There is one clean up banner and five Template:Cns, yes, I see that. If that's the issue, then say that. I'll work on finding citations today, or removing the unsourced claims, but "Not enough improvement" is not a GA review.
- How on earth did you pick those editors to notify? User:Fw-us-hou-8.bmc.com has 14 edits total, from two days in 2001, none of which have anything to do with this topic. User:H1nkles and User:FutureTrillionaire have both been inactive for around four years, and again, have never edited this article. And User:Morgoonki was only active for a month, just enough to engage in a pro-Vladimir Putin edit war. And when you say "Editor added {{GAR request}} tag" again, I have to question how much you looked into this, because by "editor" you mean User: Real4jyy, an editor whose only Wikipedia activity so far has been to indiscriminately list GAs for review and add talk page headers.
- Here is a list of active editors. If you want good faith here, the best I can give you is that, in this specific scenario, you weren't doing some basic due diligence with this GAR and the users involved. -- Patrick Neil, oѺ∞/Talk 19:48, 23 July 2023 (UTC)
- The GAR script automatically notifies all previous GA reviewers (if it can find any), in addition to previous reassessers, Patrickneil. I then notified six WikiProjects, in addition to linking on the the article talk page (and tidying that up, incidentally). I don't particularly know why User:Fw-us-hou-8.bmc.com was notified, however.
- "There is one clean up banner and five Template:Cns, yes, I see that. If that's the issue, then say that." I ... did?
- "by "editor" you mean User: Real4jyy, an editor whose only Wikipedia activity so far has been to indiscriminately list GAs for review and add talk page headers" I don't see anything in there that requires the word editor to be put in scare quotes? If they want to gnome around, I don't see why they should be denigrated for that. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 20:02, 23 July 2023 (UTC)
- Maybe you shouldn't be using a GAR script then. What percent of the article did you read prior to delisting? What percent of the talk page and it's archive? Which of the five Template:Cns did you feel were the issue that put the article over the top? -- Patrick Neil, oѺ∞/Talk 20:14, 23 July 2023 (UTC)
- I read all of the article personally Patrickneil, hence I could say "no update needed". Same could be said for the talk page (diff of my archiving), even though that is not necessary. If you look at the structure section, you will see the citations needed banner; a large percentage of this section is uncited and grounds for delisting. Is anything else unclear? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 20:24, 23 July 2023 (UTC)
- Maybe you shouldn't be using a GAR script then. What percent of the article did you read prior to delisting? What percent of the talk page and it's archive? Which of the five Template:Cns did you feel were the issue that put the article over the top? -- Patrick Neil, oѺ∞/Talk 20:14, 23 July 2023 (UTC)
- Patrickneil, this was listed for review because the article "has valid cleanup banners and citation issues". Relevant sentence of the GA criteria:
- This article is no where near Good article status. Only 5000 words on a topic this important? There is a massive lack of deep coverage. Every source, but one, in the Works cited is cited only a single time. There is a large Further reading which doubtlessly has content that should be in the main article. There are at least 30 sources published by NATO itself instead using any of the works cited or the vast amount of scholarship on this topic no where in the article. The Military operations section is a mess, with rambling paragraphs and no clear division of weight on its respective subsections. I see numerous topics in List of NATO operations not even mentioned.
- This article became good status in 2006, when standards for GAs were considerably lower and more lenient. It has since had three article reassessment requests. Any article with that much repeated concern over its quality will need a substantial reconfiguration to remain good status, and not just end up at GAR again next year. An obvious delist Aza24 (talk) 20:56, 23 July 2023 (UTC)
- Thank you, that's at least something we can work on. I'll say that since 2006, the subarticles History of NATO and Enlargement of NATO have been created out of those sections when they became too sprawling. I might quibble with describing nine items in Further reading as "large", and that, yes, more citations than I would like are sourced to NATO itself. Those do tend to be uncontroversial statements, to source things more routine like "the Chair of the Military Committee is the head of the Military Committee." I'm not sure which operation from List of NATO operations needs to be added, but I'm happy to help if there is something major that's getting left out of the current sections and subsections. -- Patrick Neil, oѺ∞/Talk 21:10, 23 July 2023 (UTC)
- I don't think Operation Display Deterrence is mentioned and I really think Resolute Support Mission and International Security Assistance Force should be separate. These last two being conflated into one section makes both of their scopes confusing, and disrupts the otherwise chronological layout of the operations.
- It is not the exact size of the further reading section itself, or specifically the preponderance of NATO citations which worries me, it is simply the lack of academic scholarship used in general. (As I mentioned) the single citations from the Works cited section are particularly concerning, and representative of this article's biggest fault. The thing with uncontroversial statements is that sure, we could cite them to NATO, but wouldn't it be better to cite them to reliable independent sources? Either way, the Military operations section is really the core of the article, and what needs to be better sourced. The Gulf of Aden anti-piracy section, for instance, is solely cited to NATO, which is certainly inappropriate – Aza24 (talk) 21:48, 23 July 2023 (UTC)
- I hear that. I do though want to keep this is as an overview article. I think that's always been an element here, that the scope can't go into too much detail given the 75 years of institutional history that need to fit in its sections. We do have these two reservoirs of sources, published international policy books and news articles about a NATO-related event that just happened somewhere, the trouble being that neither type of source is actually all that great at being a source for the basic questions readers come here for, like, "what is NATO?" or "why is NATO expanding?", that the article tries to give answers for.
- Lastly, if I am a bit defensive, it might be somewhat that there is a literal cyberarmy out to manipulate Wikipedia, and we've been dealing with it for years on this topic. The most recent GAR request, last year, was because a user wanted to include a chunk what I see as pro-Russian propaganda. They were asked politely to not disrupt Wikipedia to make a point. The two previous GARs were 14 years ago, all three have, I would note, resulted in speedily keeping it as a GA. I'm well aware the article needs attention, perhaps WP:PR is more what the article needs or at least a thorough section by section review, because there are large chunks that are at a high quality, but other parts that let it down. It's just difficult to see almost 20 years of maintenance here boiled down to three words, "not enough improvement." -- Patrick Neil, oѺ∞/Talk 01:04, 24 July 2023 (UTC)
- Your defensiveness is certainly understandable. But I'm fairly certain where Airship is coming from. The GA process & community was only recently reinvigorated and prior to which although the standards had risen, older GAs had not. Thus, there is a lot of cleanup now taking place with older GAs, huge numbers of which are far below standards. See here for instance, where one author of 100+ GAs was discovered to frequently be using copyrighted material. Certainly the NATO article is nothing like the articles delisted by the now-banned user, but its importance as a topic gives it further scrutiny, since its so important to get right! Aza24 (talk) 03:44, 24 July 2023 (UTC)
- Thank you, that's at least something we can work on. I'll say that since 2006, the subarticles History of NATO and Enlargement of NATO have been created out of those sections when they became too sprawling. I might quibble with describing nine items in Further reading as "large", and that, yes, more citations than I would like are sourced to NATO itself. Those do tend to be uncontroversial statements, to source things more routine like "the Chair of the Military Committee is the head of the Military Committee." I'm not sure which operation from List of NATO operations needs to be added, but I'm happy to help if there is something major that's getting left out of the current sections and subsections. -- Patrick Neil, oѺ∞/Talk 21:10, 23 July 2023 (UTC)
- I'll note that all the citation needed instances have been resolved. The article is a bit on the short side, but that's not necessarily a bad thing - there are plenty of links to other articles that cover sections in greater depth, like Structure of NATO and Enlargement of NATO. I could understand the argument that the main article could use a bit more material, but for such a complex topic I think it's better to keep a relatively concise article and allow readers easy access to more in-depth and narrowly focused articles. To pick a topic I'm intimately familiar with, Train was promoted to GA in 2021 and is currently at 4273 words, 27331 characters, and I'd argue it could be expanded but is still comprehensive enough and gives sufficient links to other articles that it meets the criteria. Trainsandotherthings (talk) 22:28, 25 July 2023 (UTC)
- I tend to agree with this concept of an overview article. It's also better in my view to keep it this way because it's easier to update, change, or remove supporting articles than it is to hack through a massive parent article. So long as the citation issues have been addressed and there's solid overview information, I see no real reason to delist. Intothatdarkness 14:23, 27 July 2023 (UTC)
- I maintain a habit of avoiding closing GARS where I have opined, but I do not see a consensus to delist. Trainsandotherthings (talk) 15:37, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
F-16 "taking off" is incorrect
[edit]It is landing. If you open the Operation Deliberate Force page, it is correct. If anybody needs proof, the air brakes are deployed(open). Tb-3000 (talk) 17:27, 15 January 2024 (UTC)
Done Fixed! -- Patrick Neil, oѺ∞/Talk 17:26, 7 March 2024 (UTC)
Sweden in NATO
[edit]Sweden has joined NATO earlier today after finally being accepted by Hungary.
This article needs to be updated accordingly to appropriate with reality. Please remain focused and quick. 87.120.102.13 (talk) 18:46, 26 February 2024 (UTC)
- From NATO’s website: “7. Upon depositing their instruments of accession with the US State Department, invitees formally become NATO members”
- There’s no doubt Sweden will complete this last step, but they’re not an official member till then. Just one bit of bureaucracy left. Radio Adept (talk) 19:46, 26 February 2024 (UTC)
- Even after depositing the "instruments of accession" with the U.S. State Department, there will be a formal ceremony in Brussels to make it all official. It might be worth looking at how all this played out with Finland in the talk page archives. But don't worry, Wikipedia won't miss it. -- Patrick Neil, oѺ∞/Talk 20:15, 26 February 2024 (UTC)
- The ceremony is recognition, it doesnt confer anything. 2001:48F8:3022:75D:5A12:BD0B:AF56:9919 (talk) 23:45, 26 February 2024 (UTC)
- The ceremony will likely be a mirror to Finland's last year. It'll be at the NATO headquarters outside Brussels, and a representative of Sweden, probably Foreign Minister Tobias Billström, but maybe PM Ulf Kristersson, will hand over a fancy folder to a representative of the U.S. State Department, probably Anthony Blinken, while a representative of NATO, probably Secretary Jens Stoltenberg, will acknowledge the receipt. That's the process, recognition is what confers anything. Let me blow your mind though: It's all ceremony, the whole premise of the organization is built on ceremony! Finland's ceremony happened to be timed for NATO's 74th birthday, 4 April 2023, and while Sweden's could happen in March, I wouldn't be shocked if it takes Orbán a few weeks to do his formal submission to the U.S. Dept of State so that Sweden joins on NATO's 75th birthday on 4 April 2024. But until then, it is inaccurate to include Sweden as a "member" on this article or related ones. -- Patrick Neil, oѺ∞/Talk 13:43, 27 February 2024 (UTC)
- Update, looks like noon CET on Monday, 11 March 2024 is when they'll making it official. -- Patrick Neil, oѺ∞/Talk 21:09, 6 March 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for the note. Whenever someone has added Sweden recently, I keep checking the news to confirm status. It gets mildly tiresome ;-) CAVincent (talk) 05:08, 7 March 2024 (UTC)
- Update, looks like noon CET on Monday, 11 March 2024 is when they'll making it official. -- Patrick Neil, oѺ∞/Talk 21:09, 6 March 2024 (UTC)
- The ceremony will likely be a mirror to Finland's last year. It'll be at the NATO headquarters outside Brussels, and a representative of Sweden, probably Foreign Minister Tobias Billström, but maybe PM Ulf Kristersson, will hand over a fancy folder to a representative of the U.S. State Department, probably Anthony Blinken, while a representative of NATO, probably Secretary Jens Stoltenberg, will acknowledge the receipt. That's the process, recognition is what confers anything. Let me blow your mind though: It's all ceremony, the whole premise of the organization is built on ceremony! Finland's ceremony happened to be timed for NATO's 74th birthday, 4 April 2023, and while Sweden's could happen in March, I wouldn't be shocked if it takes Orbán a few weeks to do his formal submission to the U.S. Dept of State so that Sweden joins on NATO's 75th birthday on 4 April 2024. But until then, it is inaccurate to include Sweden as a "member" on this article or related ones. -- Patrick Neil, oѺ∞/Talk 13:43, 27 February 2024 (UTC)
- The ceremony is recognition, it doesnt confer anything. 2001:48F8:3022:75D:5A12:BD0B:AF56:9919 (talk) 23:45, 26 February 2024 (UTC)
- Even after depositing the "instruments of accession" with the U.S. State Department, there will be a formal ceremony in Brussels to make it all official. It might be worth looking at how all this played out with Finland in the talk page archives. But don't worry, Wikipedia won't miss it. -- Patrick Neil, oѺ∞/Talk 20:15, 26 February 2024 (UTC)
Puerto Rico and French Guiana
[edit]Why are Puerto Rico and French Guiana in dark green? I thought that there were outside the Treaty, since they are south of the Tropic of Cancer (and Guiana not being an island.). Alexander K. Cox (talk) 21:12, 4 March 2024 (UTC)
- These areas are outside the mutual defense area defined by the NATo charter, but they are still integral territory of member states. An attack on these areas does not invoke the treaty obligations. This also applies to other overseas territories not shown on the map, such as French Polynesia, Guam, or the Falkland Islands. Mediatech492 (talk) 03:23, 5 March 2024 (UTC)
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"Finland is the newest member; it joined on 4 April 2023, spurred on by Russia's invasion of Ukraine" is no longer an accurate statement as Sweden, for similar reasons as Finland, has joined the alliance on 3/7/2024 after Turkiye and Hungary dropped their dissent against it. S22N (talk) 16:36, 7 March 2024 (UTC)
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Under the "Membership" section, it still mentions NATO having thirty-one members three different times. This should be changed to saying thirty-two instead:
"NATO has thirty-one members, all in Europe and North America"
"Twelve of these thirty-one are original members"
"Membership has subsequently grown to 31 through several enlargements"
In addition to this, it mentions Finland being the newest member under the Enlargement subsection of Membership. This should be changed to Sweden. Lowkschwonz (talk) 17:08, 7 March 2024 (UTC)
Membership map needs updating
[edit]The map in the Membership section needs to be updated to show Sweden as a member.—Anita5192 (talk) 17:32, 7 March 2024 (UTC)
- Already updated. If you are not seeing it, hit Ctrl+F5 to force reload the page. Human Transistor (talk) 04:45, 8 March 2024 (UTC)
Weird border in Romania on the map
[edit]I checked the new map and saw that an old, albeit very nitpicky problem, is back again (which was fixed in the last version). There's some kind of a white border in Romania showing Transylvania. I know it's very very nitpicky, but I just had to mention it, haha. Seems to be something with the base map
You can see what I mean by just zooming in on Romania on the map (linked the map here for ease of access). There's a clear outline of Transylvania for some reason. https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/4/4a/North_Atlantic_Treaty_Organization_%28orthographic_projection%29_in_NATO_blue.svg
Once again, I know that it's very nitpicky but I don't know why it's there, lol. Thanks! (Also, there's some green colored parts at Alaska) But thanks! MeManBlaze (talk) 21:16, 7 March 2024 (UTC)
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=== Enlargement === {{Main|Enlargement of NATO}} {{stack|[[File:History of NATO enlargement.svg|thumb|upright=1.0|right|NATO has added 15 new members since [[German reunification]] and the end of the [[Cold War]].|alt=A map of Europe with countries labelled in shades of blue, green, and yellow based on when they joined NATO.]]}}
Sweden has joined. Can you please change "15" to "16"? Human Transistor (talk) 22:42, 7 March 2024 (UTC)
NATO Member Territory outside Aritcle 5
[edit]Upon reviewing the map representation of NATO members, I noticed that territories like Hawaii (USA) and others such as French Guiana (France) and the Falkland Islands (UK) are depicted similarly to mainland territories. While these territories are integral parts of NATO countries, there exists a significant nuance concerning Article 5's mutual defense commitments that might not be immediately apparent from the map.
Article 5 is the cornerstone of NATO's foundation, stipulating that an armed attack against one or more members is considered an attack against all members. However, the application of Article 5 is geographically limited.
Specifically, it applies to the territories of member states in North America, Europe, the Turkish Straits, and the Mediterranean Sea islands. This definition excludes certain territories like Hawaii, which, despite being a part of the United States, falls outside the geographic scope of Article 5's mutual defense commitment.
Given this, I propose that the map could benefit from a visual differentiation between territories where NATO's Article 5 commitment is applicable and those where it is not. This adjustment would not only provide clarity but also align with the factual geographical limitations of Article 5, enhancing the map's informational precision. Implementing such a distinction could prevent misunderstandings about the exact scope of NATO's mutual defense obligations and accurately represent the geographical coverage of Article 5. Would it be possible to revisit the map's design to reflect these critical distinctions?
- Atfyfe (talk) 23:59, 7 March 2024 (UTC)
- I'd strongly oppose replacing a simple map of member states with a map of only the territory covered by Article 6. The limitations of Article 6 are way too complicated to explain in a map in a way that most readers would quickly and easily understand. Indeed, your description of the geographic limits of NATO is also slightly incorrect as to these nuances. In fact, because you mentioned it, I just checked and this article currently contains two references to Article 6 which are also slightly wrong on the details. (It's late, I'm tired and lazy, so I'm not fixing them at least tonight; it's largely nitpicky stuff e.g. nothing in the Pacific is covered, whether north or south of the Tropic of Cancer.) CAVincent (talk) 07:12, 8 March 2024 (UTC)
Map not updated
[edit]This map is not updated, can anyone rectify it ?
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BlackSun3988 (talk) 03:18, 8 March 2024 (UTC)
- See Membership map needs updating section above.—Anita5192 (talk) 03:38, 8 March 2024 (UTC)
- It was updated yesterday. It may be your browser's cache, hit Ctrl+F5 to reload the page. Human Transistor (talk) 04:41, 8 March 2024 (UTC)
- Yep. That did it. Thanks.—Anita5192 (talk) 04:49, 8 March 2024 (UTC)
Links to aspiring members
[edit]Are the links to the Bosnia and Herzegovina, Georgia, and Ukraine as the recognized aspiring members intentionally excluded? As a reader, I would have found them convenient. Junghyeon Park (talk) 03:08, 10 March 2024 (UTC)
Done Fixed!—Anita5192 (talk) 04:58, 10 March 2024 (UTC)
Discussion at c:File talk:History of NATO enlargement.svg about color scheme.
[edit]Just notifying that a discussion about the color scheme of c:File:History of NATO enlargement.svg is being done at c:File talk:History of NATO enlargement.svg Abzeronow (talk) 17:44, 11 March 2024 (UTC)
Hawaii
[edit]Based on this article - https://edition.cnn.com/2024/03/29/us/nato-treaty-hawaii-intl-hnk-ml-dst/index.html, Hawaii is not part of NATO, so at the map Hawaii should be grey.
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Dasomm (talk) 19:41, 30 March 2024 (UTC)
- Hawaii is a state of the United States, which is a NATO member. This is why it is shown in blue. According to Article 5 of the NATO treaty, members are only obligated in the event of an attack on a member state's territory in Europe or North America. The fact that Hawaii is not included in the NATO treaty zones does not change this. By strict reading of the treaty, an attack on Hawaii does not require a response from the other NATO members, while an attack on Florida would. This condition applies equally to other NATO member territories outside the treaty zone, including the Asian portion of Turkey, French Guiana,and the Falkland Islands. Mediatech492 (talk) 09:46, 31 March 2024 (UTC)
- There are two different ideas here that we can talk about how to discuss on the article and illustrate on the maps like this one. All of the United States, including Hawaii, is in NATO. Hawaii is outside of the area that signers of the North Atlantic Treaty agree to respond to an armed attack as an attack on all. That area is loosely defined by Article 6 as "in Europe or North America." As the CNN article you link to mentions, Hawaii however would be included in the language in Article 4, which allows for discussion with possible action to respond to threats to the "territorial integrity" of members.
- I don't think this article or the maps on it should be exclusively limited to the Article 6 area and ignore the Article 4 area or the area of the countries that participate in NATO. Hawaiians elect representatives who then appoint NATO ambassadors and NATO parliamentary members, and approve NATO leadership. And Hawaiians serve in the military who would be called upon to respond to an Article 5 level attack. They are in NATO even if not covered by the language in Article 6. And obviously replace "Hawaii" with "French Guiana" or "Caribbean Netherlands" etc in this comment. -- Patrick Neil, oѺ∞/Talk 13:45, 31 March 2024 (UTC)
- I wanted to correct this: all of Turkey is indeed covered by Article 6, not just the European portion. An attack on the Asian part of Turkey is certainly eligible for an Article 5 response. Separately, yes, Hawaii is part of NATO, even if not covered by the Article 6 geographic limitations. CAVincent (talk) 07:20, 1 April 2024 (UTC)
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185.12.14.2 (talk) 06:39, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
I'm going to make the text in this article clearer and more presentable to read.
Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate.
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New Secretary-General
[edit]Mark Rutte has been appointed as the new Secretary General 62.166.212.160 (talk) 11:30, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
- He doesn't assume office until October 2nd. Sisuvia (talk) 12:19, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
Criticism section
[edit]There should absolutely be a criticism (or similar) section here. This is done for other major bodies like the EU, the UN, BRICS, etc. JDiala (talk) 21:02, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, assuming that it is actually substantial, relevant criticism that doesn't constitute undue weight or represent fringe beliefs, (for instance, criticisms that are not promulgated as part of the Russian information warfare campaign against NATO). For instance, we probably should have more criticism about NATO members failing to meet their defense expenditure expectations, as that has been a major point of contention between the U.S. and European allies for the past like 30 years, and the current section doesn't adequately address it. Similarly, non-disinformation-oriented criticisms of NATO expansion (plenty of which pre-date the Ukraine war) should also be there. (e.g. [1] ⇒SWATJester Shoot Blues, Tell VileRat! 21:43, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
- I was thinking Mearsheimer, for starters. JDiala (talk) 22:15, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
- Wikipedia specifically discourages criticism sections, instead, factual, well sourced statements should be integrated into existing sections. Articles should be neutral and not give undue weight to opinions, and I agree that adding a criticism section here would be a magnet for just such opinions, as well as fringe ideas and Russian troll farms. If you are a fan of the theories of John Mearsheimer, like his idea that Ukraine was asking to be bombed by, you know, being democratic, I would suggest avoiding his opinion pieces and seeing if he lists his sources, and integrating those where appropriate.
- I might further suggest that much of this "criticism" is not exactly to do with the organization that is this article's subject. It's not like "NATO should function differently", but instead has to do with a larger philosophy of postwar international relations. So I might also suggest that better places do exist on Wikipedia, such as John Mearsheimer's own article, International relations since 1989, or History of United States foreign policy. -- Patrick Neil, oѺ∞/Talk 14:29, 13 July 2024 (UTC)
- I don't disagree with your points generally, particularly with regard to Mearsheimer and whether this is the right page for his views, but I'd caveat that WP:CSECTION is an essay, and the policy it's based on, WP:NPOV is much more ambiguous about criticism sections; it states that
Segregation of text or other content into different regions or subsections, based solely on the apparent POV of the content itself, may result in an unencyclopedic structure, such as a back-and-forth dialogue between proponents and opponents.
with the footnote thatArticle sections devoted solely to criticism, and pro-and-con sections within articles, are two commonly cited examples. There are varying views on whether and to what extent such structures are appropriate; see guidance on thread mode, criticism, pro-and-con lists, and the criticism template.
IMO it's probably inaccurate to say that "Wikipedia specifically discourages criticism sections", and more accurate to say that "Wikipedia does not disallow criticism sections if they can be written in an NPOV manner without an unencyclopedic structure." It is of course ideal to integrate the content inline somewhere else; but that may not always be feasible.⇒SWATJester Shoot Blues, Tell VileRat! 16:55, 13 July 2024 (UTC)
- I don't disagree with your points generally, particularly with regard to Mearsheimer and whether this is the right page for his views, but I'd caveat that WP:CSECTION is an essay, and the policy it's based on, WP:NPOV is much more ambiguous about criticism sections; it states that
- I was thinking Mearsheimer, for starters. JDiala (talk) 22:15, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
"Not one inch to the east" revisited
[edit]Under the heading "History: 20th century", the final sentence of the fourth paragraph makes this assertion: "In 1990, several Western leaders gave assurances to Mikhail Gorbachev that NATO would not expand further east, as revealed by memoranda of private conversations." This gives too definitive of a characterization, eliding the multiplicity of interpretations of what was, or wasn't said. Even Mikhail Gorbachev himself gave contradictory claims -- in 2008 he claimed that US Secretary of State James Baker made such assurances, but then he reversed himself in 2014 when, being directly asked by a German newspaper to clarify, he said that the assurances given only pertained to East Germany, and that the resulting agreement was upheld by NATO. His top aid, Eduard Shevardnadze confirmed this, saying that the question of NATO expansion was never even raised during the alleged conversations. Indeed, as far as I am aware, no one who was party to those discussions around which the promises were allegedly made, has made the claim that they were indeed made; they all come from people who were not there.
Furthermore, there are at least five nonsensical elements to this puzzle, the first being that a US Secretary of State in no way has the authority to declare what NATO -- a coalition of 15 different nations (at that time) -- would or would not do. So even if Baker did give the Russians such an assurance, it could not possibly be considered binding. It would be like say, Belarus making a promise to another country as to what the CSTO would, or would not do. All parties involved would understand that Belarus lacked the authority to set policy for all CSTO member-states.
Second, it defies all logic to claim that a promise of such potential import would remain verbal. After all, at that very same time the US, UK and France were hashing-out and signing an official agreement with the USSR and Germany (the Treaty on the Final Settlement with Respect to Germany), and that being just one in a series of dozens of official documents of agreement between one or more of these parties. But a verbal promise is supposed to be sufficient to carry the force of law?! There is an old saying: "Good fences make good neighbors". In other words, no matter how good two neighbors' intentions might be, and no matter how unnecessary it might seem to build a fence on the border between their properties, building the fence anyway removes any ambiguity and helps prevent problems. All of the parties involved knew very well how important it was to draft and sign formal agreements, to prevent potential conflicts, rather than leaving them verbal. Nothing verbal could possibly be binding, as all parties knew.
Third, those making the assertion that such verbal promises were made rely largely upon memoranda, notes, etc. In legal terms these would constitute weak evidence, carrying even less weight than say, an affidavit sworn by someone who was a party to such discussions. There is nothing that can guarantee that memoranda, notes, etc., are accurate, complete or authoritative. It is a misleading overstatement to refer to these as "proofs". In a court of law they would be considered hearsay -- possibly true or possibly false, but dependent upon corroboration from other evidence. Such evidence has never been found or presented.
Fourth, "to the east" is nonsensical due to its very ambiguity. Looking at east and west along lines of longitude, parts of Italy and all of Greece (both already NATO members by that time) lay "to the east" of Germany. And "to the east" of the newly-reunified Germany in Europe, there lay about a dozen countries, but most of them were, at that time, members of the Warsaw Pact, and they would continue to garrison hundreds of thousands of Soviet troops for at least another year (at the time, for all anyone knew, they would remain for decades). So why would anyone think that it would make sense to declare that "NATO won't expand any further to the east" into Warsaw Pact countries, when that would have been impossible anyway? The Warsaw Pact was, in many ways, an alternative to NATO. None of its members could possibly belong to it and to NATO simultaneously, so the entire point was moot.
And fifth, in 2000, newly-installed Russian president Vladimir Putin himself was interested in having Russia join NATO. How could this have even been a possibility if NATO had promised to not expand further to the east? Apparently that "fact" was not a problem for Putin. Waiting, however, was; he made it clear that Russia should not be required to submit to the same process that every other aspirant is required to undergo. When he was told that there could not be an exception made for Russia's accession, he effectively said "Fine; I didn't want to join your smelly old club anyway".
In summation, due to these and other reasons, I would argue that the statement should be changed to reflect the fact that there are conflicting accounts of what happened, and that there are reasons to doubt the validity of any such claims, when applying logical standards. Bricology (talk) 11:59, 20 July 2024 (UTC)
- Such assurances were not included in the signed treaties, and this could be added to that sentence as context. While it seems to me all sources discuss only verbal assurances, do you have a source that all such assurances during negotiation were made only verbal? HudecEmil (talk) 11:33, 21 July 2024 (UTC)
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