Talk:Move (MercyMe song)

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February 2, 2012	Good article nominee	Listed
April 24, 2012	Good topic candidate	Promoted

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Reviewer: InTheAM (talk · contribs) 03:30, 1 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Good job. Only the few issues listed below need fixed. They're mostly grammar issues that I can help with if you need it.

1. Well Written

(a)Prose

"Maroon 5" is listed as a song by Maroon 5 in the lead.

Fixed

"The lyrical content of the song revolves around perseverance through adversity." This sentence might be better if it said the "theme of the lyrics of the song is perseverance through adversity. It would be less wordy.

Done

May 23, 2011, -- needs a comma after 2011.

Done

The song did not "attain" positive reception. It was "received with positive critical reviews, especially for the arrangement of the song."

Fixed

semicolons in the series of rankings in the lead.

Not quite sure what you mean there Got it. InTheAM 02:41, 2 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

second sentence of background - no comma before "and", "overdubs" should start new sentence.

Fixed

no comma before and in next sentence, either.

Fixed

quotation marks need fixed in this sentence: "Kevin Davis of Christian Music Review commented that the song "has a fantastic rock-dance arrangement like “This Love” by Maroon 5."

Fixed

comma after "embarrassing" in McCall quote and "In" should not be capitalized.

Fixed

no commas before "and" several times in chart performance.

Fixed

Chart performance ends without finishing.

Fixed

(b)MOS

Lead - The sentences about the rankings are the same as the ones in the main section. The lead needs to be a summary. It does cover the whole article, though.

Shortened

The video section either needs expanded or moved into another section.

It is far to small and not really notable in the grand scheme of things, so I removed it.

The rankings in the "Weekly Charts" need cited. I know they are in the article, but they also need to be in the chart. Also, the citations for the other chart should be moved into the rankings column.

Fixed, but what other chart?
The "Year end" chart, but you got it. I would suggest moving the citations into the ranking column. InTheAM 02:41, 2 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

They have been moved. Is it good too pass now? Toa Nidhiki05 02:53, 2 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

2. Factually accurate and verifiable

Citations are good. Sources are good. Besides the issues mentioned in 1(b), there are no issues with citations.

3. Broad in its coverage

Article has sufficient detail and stays on topic.

4. Neutral

NPOV, balanced.

5. Stable

Article is stable. No edit wars.

6. Illustrated

I don't know if the picture is going to work. It is pretty poor in quality and I'm not sure it contributes much to the article since there is only one sentence about the video.

On hold for now. InTheAM 19:28, 1 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

All done. Listed. InTheAM 14:52, 2 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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