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Nominator: Gained (talk · contribs) 02:14, 25 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Ippantekina (talk · contribs) 07:28, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]


Reviewing this soon. Glad that this got sorted out at AfD. Ippantekina (talk) 07:28, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Good Article review progress box
Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Prose

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  • "After the release of her sixth studio album Positions (2020)" comma before album title
  • "The album's lead single "Yes, And?"" → lead single, "Yes, And?", ...
  • ""Intro (End of the World)" is reported to be the second song Grande wrote for Eternal Sunshine" reported by who?
  • "places emphasis on" emphasizes
  • "How can I tell if I'm in the right relationship?". remove the full stop after the quotation mark per MOS:"
  • singing the lyric "If it all ended tomorrow, would I be the one on your mind?". ditto
  • "The track was conceived as a companion to the song both in its sound and lyrics" which track/song are we talking about here...?

Sources

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  • Spotcheck: 1, 14, 21, 22, 33
    • 14: ""healing after a breakup"" should be "healing-from-a-breakup"
  • Include |url-access=limited in Rolling Stone refs

That's all I got! Ippantekina (talk) 07:37, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hey @Ippantekina! I have addressed your questions and done the rest. Gained (talk) 07:57, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Passing! :) Ippantekina (talk) 16:22, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]