Talk:Cloak n Dagger

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Review: January 5, 2025. (Reviewed version).

GA Review

Passed. Medxvo (talk) 20:24, 5 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: Locust member (talk · contribs) 01:34, 12 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Medxvo (talk · contribs) 19:44, 5 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

"and Ericdoa, from their collaborative extended play (EP) Then I'll ..." - I think the comma should be removed before "from" and added before "Then ..."
- Y
"a "woozy" instrumental ..." - quotations in lead must have a source to support them even if they're stated and sourced in prose, so I suggest replacing with a synonym such as hazy perhaps ...?
- Y didn't know about this rule, so thanks for this. Changed to what was recommended.
I suggest separating the lead into two paragraphs, with the second paragraph starting with "It is a fast-paced ....", because all of these information in one paragraph is a bit too much
- Y
I also suggest separating the background section into two paragraphs, with the second one starting with "On the day of its release ..."
- Y
The "Background" section can be named "Background and release" since it has details about the release
- Y
"They also recorded a music video ..." - "Glaive and Ericdoa also recorded a music video ...", since the preceding sentence talks about fans not them
- Y
I suggest using this source and this source after "served as the lead single" to satisfy the WP:SINGLE? criteria
- Y

Another Locust member nom! Everything else looks good to me, I'll put this On hold for now. I also have two GANs, "A Place in This World" and "Coney Island (Taylor Swift song)", I would appreciate your comments anytime if you're interested ... :)) Medxvo (talk) 19:44, 5 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for always giving such quick reviews! I was able to knock these out in no time so this is probably an earlier response than you expected lol. I think I'll be able to give one of your articles a review by tomorrow, I did see that you submitted these earlier today. Thanks again! Locust member (talk) 20:07, 5 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the quick response as well! The citing quotations in lead thing can be seen at WP:WHENNOTCITE and WP:LEADCITE if you want further details, sorry for not giving these links earlier. I'll ✓ Pass the article now, congratulations! Medxvo (talk) 20:24, 5 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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... that the Airbnb homestay where a song was recorded by Glaive and Ericdoa was dubbed by fans as the "Hyperpop Hype House"?

Source: Pitchfork

ALT1: ... that fans of Glaive and Ericdoa dubbed the Airbnb recording location of a song as the "Hyperpop Hype House"? Source: Pitchfork
ALT2: ... that fans of Glaive and Ericdoa dubbed the recording location of "Cloak n Dagger" as the "Hyperpop Hype House"? Source: Pitchfork
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Improved to Good Article status by Locust member (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

Locust member (talk) 20:48, 5 January 2025 (UTC).[reply]