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DateProcessResult
November 25, 2014Good article nomineeListed
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GA Review

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Reviewer: Grahamec (talk · contribs) 13:14, 24 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]

This is looking good, I once did some small work on this article, but that has little to do with the current state of the article.

  • A nit-pick: "he presented a proposal to the cabinet outlining the creation of a tenchological-based university in NSW, as a separate expansion from the existing Sydney Technical College". This does not read well. Perhaps it is intended to say something like "as well as".
    • I have now slightly rewritten this.
  • The last sentence:..."which included the building named after her father forty years previously." Has this been mentioned before, I can't see it, maybe it should read: "included a building". Actually I see it now.
  • I have changed the caps at the beginning of parenthetical clauses in a couple of places to reflect my understanding of best practice.
As noted above a couple of the refs are broken and will have to be fixed if you take it to FAC.

So I am passing it.--Grahame (talk) 11:24, 25 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]

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Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: rejected by BlueMoonset (talk04:10, 5 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Article not eligible for DYK.

Created/expanded by Siegfried Nugent (talk). Self-nominated at 07:32, 30 September 2021 (UTC).[reply]