Talk:BMP development

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1. Both photographs could do with some sort of caption; something like: 'A BMP-1' and 'Canadian troops travel on a Kangaroo, Italy 1945'.
2. Para 3 of the 'Background' section would benefit from a bit of a re-write because:

a) I'm not so sure that 'the post-war era' should apply to the FV 432 (it did not enter service until the early 1960s and now I think about it, wasn't it a similar story in the case of the M113)?

b) Its wiki article states that the Saracen entered service in 1954, which, although it is more in 'the post-war era', pre-dates the FV 432 by at least six years.

c) This whole paragraph is none too clear; it gives the impression that the Saracen complimented the FV 432 on the battlefield and I don't think that that was the intention.

Thoughts, anyone ? RASAM (talk) 14:37, 17 October 2009 (UTC)

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