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Cause

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The whole section "cause" is speculation of "what might have happened". There is absolute no evidence of what has happened since the aircraft was never found.

Therefore i suggest to remove the whole paragraph and replace it with the facts that we know: a witness who saw the plane coming over at Sandgate, where the visibility was good.

Kind regards Saschaporsche (talk) 18:33, 4 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I've edited the section to the bare minimum which we know is true. Saschaporsche (talk) 17:09, 5 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Copyediting

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I've made revisions to the writing style, and corrected some names and lots of grammar. Seems like the body of the article was translated from the Dutch, and hadn't been proofread carefully. A great topic for an article! — Matuko (talk) 13:47, 9 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]