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A user with 3,914 edits. Account created on 21 November 2005.
5 October 2024
- 22:3722:37, 5 October 2024 diff hist +15 m Sukhoi S-70 Okhotnik-B Split up a run-on sentence
- 22:2322:23, 5 October 2024 diff hist −4 Zhou-class submarine "built at the Wuchang Shipbuilding" --> "built by Wuchang Shipbuilding" current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 18:3818:38, 5 October 2024 diff hist −19 Course: Oblivion →Plot: Copy edit of an awkwardly phrased sentence current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
3 October 2024
- 06:1306:13, 3 October 2024 diff hist +4 Grand Palais Renamed "After war current
- 06:1306:13, 3 October 2024 diff hist +12 Grand Palais Renamed "Wartime" section "World Wars I and II" since the "Wartime" is too ambiguous
- 06:1106:11, 3 October 2024 diff hist +20 Grand Palais Renamed "History" section to "Construction and early years" since there are several sections describing the site's history
- 06:1006:10, 3 October 2024 diff hist −6 Grand Palais Renamed "Grand Palais today" section to "21st century" per MOS:HEAD: "section headings should [...] not redundantly refer back to the subject of the article, e.g., Early life, not Smith's early life"
- 06:1006:10, 3 October 2024 diff hist −15 Grand Palais Renamed "Wartime and the Palais" section to simply "Wartime" per MOS:HEAD: "section headings should [...] not redundantly refer back to the subject of the article, e.g., Early life, not Smith's early life"
1 October 2024
- 05:0705:07, 1 October 2024 diff hist +26 Stunt girl →History: Marked the phrase "the modern period" as needing clarification current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 05:0205:02, 1 October 2024 diff hist +34 Lizzie Halliday →Biography: Added a note that Lizzie Brown married Paul Halliday, as the previous wording said that Brown became Halliday's housekeeper immediately before referring to their marriage current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 01:1101:11, 1 October 2024 diff hist 0 The Citadel (mall) →Shooting incidents: Capitalized the first word on a sentence current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 01:1001:10, 1 October 2024 diff hist +1 The Citadel (mall) →Shooting incidents: Added a period to the end of a sentence Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 01:0901:09, 1 October 2024 diff hist 0 The Citadel (mall) →Shooting incidents: Changed section heading to title case per MOS:HEAD Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
30 September 2024
- 01:2401:24, 30 September 2024 diff hist 0 Vickers Swallow Added hyphens to compound adjectives; real reason for the edit is to add a description for the last edit, which was to flag the term "wing-controlled anodyne" as needing clarification current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 01:2101:21, 30 September 2024 diff hist +158 Vickers Swallow No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
29 September 2024
- 17:4617:46, 29 September 2024 diff hist −141 Type 039A submarine Deleted External Links section, as the only link has been dead since 2009, and had essentially no content -- just a mention of the sub class
26 September 2024
- 14:4214:42, 26 September 2024 diff hist +10 Norman Cota →Post-war: Copy edit to remove unnecessary ellipses; also unclear why his physical is important enough to be mentioned, but I left it in current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
22 September 2024
- 19:5819:58, 22 September 2024 diff hist +2 Pablo Rodriguez (Canadian politician) →Early life and career: "their home was bombed [...] as his father was repeatedly jailed" --> "their home was bombed [...] and his father was repeatedly jailed" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
21 September 2024
- 15:5315:53, 21 September 2024 diff hist +28 New London Ledge Light →History: Expanded a caption to provide more context current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 15:5215:52, 21 September 2024 diff hist +16 New London Ledge Light Expanded a caption that just said "(2022)" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 15:4615:46, 21 September 2024 diff hist −90 Kamchatka (ship) →Sinking: Rewrote a clunky section that repeated information to be slightly less clunky Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
16 September 2024
- 05:0005:00, 16 September 2024 diff hist −2 Policlinico of Milan →History: Removed periods from captions per MOS:CAPFRAG: "Most captions are not complete sentences, but merely sentence fragments, which should not end with a period or full stop" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 04:5804:58, 16 September 2024 diff hist 0 Policlinico of Milan →History: Improper noun "University" --> "university" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 04:1904:19, 16 September 2024 diff hist 0 Mountain whitefish →Aging fish: Changed incorrectly capitalized species name to lowercase current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
14 September 2024
- 17:2017:20, 14 September 2024 diff hist −4 m Corydoras Brevity: "not too uncommon" --> "not uncommon"
- 06:1306:13, 14 September 2024 diff hist −12 Chipa →History: Removed loaded adjective "revisionist" from "some revisionist historians" per MOS:LABEL: "Value-laden labels may express contentious opinion and are best avoided unless widely used by reliable sources to describe the subject, in which case use in-text attribution" current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 06:1006:10, 14 September 2024 diff hist −3 Chipa →Variants: Removed periods from more captions per MOS:CAPFRAG: "Most captions are not complete sentences, but merely sentence fragments, which should not end with a period or full stop" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 06:1006:10, 14 September 2024 diff hist −2 Chipa →History: Removed periods from captions per MOS:CAPFRAG: "Most captions are not complete sentences, but merely sentence fragments, which should not end with a period or full stop" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
13 September 2024
- 15:2515:25, 13 September 2024 diff hist +7 m What We Do in the Shadows (TV series) Fixed broken internal link to Season 6 episode list
8 September 2024
- 19:5919:59, 8 September 2024 diff hist +12 Battle of Cape Matapan →Bletchley Park (GC&CS): Rephrased a very informally written sentence current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 16:4616:46, 8 September 2024 diff hist 0 Battle of Cape Matapan →Battle: Improper noun "Fleet" --> "fleet" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 16:4516:45, 8 September 2024 diff hist 0 Battle of Cape Matapan "Peninsula" --> "peninsula" as, far as I can tell, it's not part of the proper name of the location Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
7 September 2024
- 18:3618:36, 7 September 2024 diff hist +1 Franz von Holzhausen →Personal life: Added a comma midsentence current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
6 September 2024
- 20:0820:08, 6 September 2024 diff hist 0 Laura McBain →After Bellamy's: Clarified which company McBain left in 2019, as the previous wording was ambiguous current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 00:2400:24, 6 September 2024 diff hist −11 Attention deficit hyperactivity disorder "temporally delayed" --> "delayed"; a temporal delay is the only kind of delay Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
5 September 2024
- 05:2605:26, 5 September 2024 diff hist +38 m Pierre Trudeau Reversed unexplained deletion of Trudeau's mother's name from the infobox Tag: Reverted
- 05:1205:12, 5 September 2024 diff hist +41 m Pierre-sur-Haute military radio station Rephrased the clunky opening sentence; no content changes
3 September 2024
- 04:1104:11, 3 September 2024 diff hist +11 M51 Skysweeper →See also: Reworded a link in the See Also section current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
2 September 2024
- 01:3101:31, 2 September 2024 diff hist −4 Beaumont-Hamel Newfoundland Memorial →Site: Section heading "The Site" --> "Site" per MOS:HEAD ("Section headings should generally follow the guidance for article titles") and MOS:AT ("Do not use articles (a, an, or the) as the first word") current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
1 September 2024
- 04:2804:28, 1 September 2024 diff hist −4 Pierre Trudeau →Second World War: Section heading "The Second World War" --> "Second World War" per MOS:HEAD ("Section headings should generally follow the guidance for article titles") and MOS:AT ("Do not use articles (a, an, or the) as the first word") Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
24 August 2024
- 01:3201:32, 24 August 2024 diff hist −6 Japanese spider crab →Description: "outstanding size" --> "large size" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 01:3101:31, 24 August 2024 diff hist 0 Japanese spider crab →Description: Changed capitalized mid-sentence words to lowercase Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
20 August 2024
- 20:0020:00, 20 August 2024 diff hist 0 Cosmoline →See also: Changed a link from title case to sentence case Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
18 August 2024
- 07:5107:51, 18 August 2024 diff hist +429 Wikipedia:WikiProject Korea/Assessment Requesting reassessment of importance of Proposed Peace Treaty on the Korean Peninsula current
- 07:4307:43, 18 August 2024 diff hist +5 Proposed Peace Treaty on the Korean Peninsula Replaced "a single Korea is a jackpot for the entirety of Northeast Asia" with "would be a great benefit for neighboring countries" even though the person cited used the word "jackpot", per MOS:IDIOM ("if a literal reading of a phrase makes no sense given the context, the sentence needs rewording"), and WP:SYNTH (the original quote referred to "all neighboring countries", but the Wikipedia paraphrase referred to "the entirety of Northeast Asia") current
- 07:3907:39, 18 August 2024 diff hist +30 History of Korea Replaced vague "find unity" with an excerpt from the Panmunjom Declaration: "promote [the] common prosperity and reunification of Korea"
- 07:2107:21, 18 August 2024 diff hist −99 Proposed Peace Treaty on the Korean Peninsula Deleted image of "fictional treaty giving an idea of what one could look like" per Wikipedia:No original research: "Wikipedia articles must not contain original research [...] original research means material—such as facts, allegations, and ideas—for which no reliable, published source exists"
- 07:0307:03, 18 August 2024 diff hist −11 m History of Korea Copy edit; no content changes Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
10 August 2024
- 18:1718:17, 10 August 2024 diff hist +15 m AZP S-60 "South-East" --> "Southeast" current Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
9 August 2024
- 06:5506:55, 9 August 2024 diff hist −1 m Manfred Roeder Informal "sacking" --> "firing" current Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit