User contributions for Greatgray

3 September 2024

• 19:1519:15, 3 September 2024 diff hist −19‎ m Palmyrene invasion of Egypt ‎ excised superfluous "why," "as the reason," and "So" current

26 July 2024

• 04:2904:29, 26 July 2024 diff hist +50‎ m Medium egret ‎ I don't know how to deal with photos, but that is NOT a Medium Egret (see https://media.ebird.org/catalog?mediaType=photo&taxonCode=integr1).

28 April 2024

• 00:3300:33, 28 April 2024 diff hist +42‎ m Ric Bucher ‎ added high school info

28 February 2024

• 23:2223:22, 28 February 2024 diff hist +9‎ m Brown booby ‎ punctuation, placement of modifiers
• 23:1623:16, 28 February 2024 diff hist 0‎ m Brown booby ‎ moved modifier to correct location

9 November 2023

• 22:3922:39, 9 November 2023 diff hist +3‎ m Elkin's Ferry Battlefield ‎ inserted missing preposition

24 August 2023

• 00:1700:17, 24 August 2023 diff hist +2‎ m James Van Fleet ‎ inserted missing article

11 August 2023

• 03:0503:05, 11 August 2023 diff hist −8‎ m Complicity (novel) ‎ combined awkward 2nd sentence with 1st sentence

23 July 2023

• 00:0500:05, 23 July 2023 diff hist −16‎ m Dwarfism ‎ minor, but I'm unsure of it; the original wording was "2.3rd percentile," the construction of which is quite odd and makes little sense; given that the next para notes 2.3%, I made this change

17 February 2023

• 23:2223:22, 17 February 2023 diff hist +1‎ m Dusky moorhen ‎ corrected syntax

30 January 2023

• 19:4619:46, 30 January 2023 diff hist −5‎ m Alkaloid ‎ removed redundant "such"

28 August 2022

• 01:5601:56, 28 August 2022 diff hist 0‎ m Azzi Fudd ‎ unsplit the infinitive

25 July 2021

• 21:2121:21, 25 July 2021 diff hist 0‎ m List of aircraft carriers ‎ Moved restrictive modifier to position immediately adjacent to phrase modified

24 June 2021

• 21:5221:52, 24 June 2021 diff hist −15‎ m United States women's national soccer team ‎ fixed ending of para; two players cannot "score both goals"

21 April 2021

• 15:1315:13, 21 April 2021 diff hist −1‎ m Swainson's hawk ‎ removed the 's' of the incorrect plural 'birds' from the first sentence

17 March 2021

• 17:4017:40, 17 March 2021 diff hist +1‎ m Rose Lavelle ‎ "only" in correct place; serial comma
• 17:3817:38, 17 March 2021 diff hist 0‎ m Rose Lavelle ‎ moved modifier "only" to correct position
• 17:3617:36, 17 March 2021 diff hist +2‎ m Rose Lavelle ‎ set off independent clause to provide for correct meaning of sentence

20 February 2021

• 18:2018:20, 20 February 2021 diff hist +1‎ m Sino-Vietnamese War ‎ inserted comma to set off introductory adverbial clause
• 18:1618:16, 20 February 2021 diff hist +1‎ m Cenepa War ‎ fixed awkward construction and replaced non-word "undemarcated" (also spelled "undermarcated"); conjoined mini-paragraphs
• 18:1018:10, 20 February 2021 diff hist +45‎ m Cenepa War ‎ fixed awkward sentence (possibly due to language) and corrected punctuation in that sentence
• 17:5717:57, 20 February 2021 diff hist −10‎ m Cenepa War ‎ removed questionable phraseology

13 February 2021

• 15:1015:10, 13 February 2021 diff hist 0‎ m Quadratic equation ‎ moved "only" to correct place

23 November 2020

• 18:5518:55, 23 November 2020 diff hist +1‎ m Wham! ‎ punctuation and corrected placement of "only"

18 November 2020

• 14:2714:27, 18 November 2020 diff hist +3‎ m Wen Spencer ‎ changed Tinker reference from single book to a universe
• 14:2414:24, 18 November 2020 diff hist −1‎ m Wen Spencer ‎ corrected spelling

19 October 2020

• 02:3202:32, 19 October 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Penalty area ‎ moved "only" to correct position to modify "by the goalkeeper"

26 September 2020

• 20:1020:10, 26 September 2020 diff hist +13‎ m Mottled duck ‎No edit summary
• 20:0920:09, 26 September 2020 diff hist +339‎ m Mottled duck ‎No edit summary
• 20:0720:07, 26 September 2020 diff hist +476‎ Mottled duck ‎No edit summary
• 19:5819:58, 26 September 2020 diff hist +9‎ m Mexican duck ‎No edit summary
• 19:5519:55, 26 September 2020 diff hist +450‎ m Mexican duck ‎ added info to distribution, with citation
• 19:4019:40, 26 September 2020 diff hist +1‎ m Mountaingem ‎No edit summary
• 19:3919:39, 26 September 2020 diff hist −4‎ m Mountaingem ‎No edit summary Tag: Manual revert
• 19:3819:38, 26 September 2020 diff hist +4‎ m Mountaingem ‎No edit summary Tags: Manual revert Reverted
• 19:3719:37, 26 September 2020 diff hist −4‎ m Mountaingem ‎No edit summary Tag: Reverted
• 19:3619:36, 26 September 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Mountaingem ‎No edit summary
• 19:3519:35, 26 September 2020 diff hist +1‎ m Mountaingem ‎ replaced "magnificent" with "Eugenes" as the species is now split
• 19:3019:30, 26 September 2020 diff hist +1‎ m Mountaingem ‎ corrected name of American Ornithological Society
• 19:2919:29, 26 September 2020 diff hist −1‎ m Hummingbird ‎ excised space in "mountain gem"
• 19:2419:24, 26 September 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Operation Berlin (Arnhem) ‎ correcting placement of modifier "only"

11 October 2019

• 02:5102:51, 11 October 2019 diff hist −1‎ m Freshkills Park ‎ removed a superfluous 's'

10 October 2019

• 03:1503:15, 10 October 2019 diff hist −3‎ m Horizon Guyot ‎ removed superfluous word
• 03:0803:08, 10 October 2019 diff hist −9‎ m Slate-colored fox sparrow ‎ correction of breeding range
• 03:0603:06, 10 October 2019 diff hist +110‎ m Slate-colored fox sparrow ‎ grammar, accuracy

28 June 2019

• 01:2601:26, 28 June 2019 diff hist 0‎ m Walsh, Colorado ‎No edit summary
• 01:2501:25, 28 June 2019 diff hist +25‎ m Walsh, Colorado ‎ added elevation

8 May 2019

• 22:2622:26, 8 May 2019 diff hist −253‎ m Molly Hatchet ‎ grammatical, flow

30 April 2019

• 16:2516:25, 30 April 2019 diff hist +61‎ m Santa Ana National Wildlife Refuge ‎ nomenclatural, grammatical
• 16:2216:22, 30 April 2019 diff hist +168‎ m Fulvous whistling duck ‎ nomenclatural, grammatical