User contributions for Deselms

24 September 2014

• 17:2117:21, 24 September 2014 diff hist +1‎ Wikipedia:Biographies of living persons/Noticeboard ‎ →Alessandra Stanley: Oops. Forgot to indent my signature.
• 17:2017:20, 24 September 2014 diff hist +1,178‎ Wikipedia:Biographies of living persons/Noticeboard ‎ →Alessandra Stanley
• 17:1317:13, 24 September 2014 diff hist +7,826‎ Alessandra Stanley ‎ Undid revision 626918428 by Gamaliel (talk) STOP ACTING UNILATERALLY! Come to consensus in item 10 of the TALK page before reverting again!
• 17:1017:10, 24 September 2014 diff hist +708‎ Talk:Alessandra Stanley ‎ →The Shonda Rhimes incident
• 17:0017:00, 24 September 2014 diff hist +224‎ Talk:Alessandra Stanley ‎ →The Shonda Rhimes incident
• 16:5516:55, 24 September 2014 diff hist +1,253‎ Talk:Alessandra Stanley ‎ →The Shonda Rhimes incident: Appropriately indented Gamaliel's comment for easier reading; then added my properly-indented response.
• 16:5516:55, 24 September 2014 diff hist +8,134‎ Alessandra Stanley ‎ Undid revision 626914284 by Gamaliel (talk)
• 16:5416:54, 24 September 2014 diff hist −308‎ Alessandra Stanley ‎ Undid revision 626916142 by AnomieBOT (talk)
• 14:5614:56, 24 September 2014 diff hist +17‎ Talk:Alessandra Stanley ‎ Added the "References" section to accommodate someone's inline reference somewhere on the page
• 14:5314:53, 24 September 2014 diff hist +49‎ Talk:Alessandra Stanley ‎ →The Shonda Rhimes incident
• 14:4714:47, 24 September 2014 diff hist +600‎ Talk:Alessandra Stanley ‎ →The Shonda Rhimes incident
• 14:4114:41, 24 September 2014 diff hist −30‎ Alessandra Stanley ‎ →Insensitivity to women and race: Undoiing the "undue" template added by user Gamaliel; please see my note on his/her TALK page; please also see item 10 on this article's TALK page.
• 14:3814:38, 24 September 2014 diff hist +1,353‎ User talk:Gamaliel ‎ →The Alessandra Stanley article: new section

23 September 2014

• 16:3316:33, 23 September 2014 diff hist +4‎ Alessandra Stanley ‎ →Insensitivity to women and race: Wikilinked the first occurance of the phrase "Angry Black Woman" to its Wikipedia article.
• 05:3105:31, 23 September 2014 diff hist −10‎ m Alessandra Stanley ‎ →Insensitivity to women and race: Fixed comma spacing problem at the bottom of the first two quotation boxes.
• 05:2705:27, 23 September 2014 diff hist +72‎ Alessandra Stanley ‎ Created the "Professional Career" section.
• 05:2205:22, 23 September 2014 diff hist −1‎ Talk:Alessandra Stanley ‎ →The Shondra Rhimes incident
• 05:2105:21, 23 September 2014 diff hist +104‎ Talk:Alessandra Stanley ‎ →The Shondra Rhimes incident
• 05:1805:18, 23 September 2014 diff hist +3,929‎ Talk:Alessandra Stanley ‎ →The Shondra Rhimes incident: new section
• 05:1805:18, 23 September 2014 diff hist +8,623‎ Alessandra Stanley ‎ →Criticism: Expanded what had been the one-sided and inadequate 2nd paragraph of the section to what is now the "Insensitivity to women and race" sub-section; see the TALK page's item 10.

13 September 2014

• 20:2520:25, 13 September 2014 diff hist +9‎ List of Moody Bible Institute people ‎ →Alumni and faculty: Oops! Forgot to leave-in the word "alumnus" in my immediately-previous edit. It's now back. My bad; sorry.
• 20:2120:21, 13 September 2014 diff hist +813‎ List of Moody Bible Institute people ‎ →Alumni and faculty: Considerably smoothed-out the Bart D. Ehrman entry, which, among its several infirmities, was worded such that agnosticism seemed something to which one could convert, as if it were a religion or denomination.

9 August 2014

• 03:5303:53, 9 August 2014 diff hist +266‎ Septuagint ‎ →English translations: Don't know why every one got its own paragraph until the last paragraph, but said last paragraph is now broken-up as it should have originally been. Fixed a few things throughout the section. Needs more inline citations.

7 August 2014

• 15:3315:33, 7 August 2014 diff hist +26‎ The Star Thrower ‎ →External links: Added the "dead link" template to Barker's version script; just goes to a "404 Page Not Found" error; and I could not find it on that website. It appears to be for sale, only, now.

6 August 2014

• 18:0218:02, 6 August 2014 diff hist +2,502‎ Talk:Gerry Hutch ‎ →Relevant to mention 'Right to be Forgotten' in article?

1 August 2014

• 00:4000:40, 1 August 2014 diff hist +19‎ Act of Contrition ‎ →External links: Corrected the first link; found the second one to be a place-holder page, which effectively makes it a dead link, which I so labeled.

30 July 2014

• 06:0906:09, 30 July 2014 diff hist +26‎ Nina Simone ‎ →Later life (1974–2003): Added the "Illness and death" sub-section heading in the appropriate place, just before the final paragraph.
• 04:5104:51, 30 July 2014 diff hist −1‎ Life Application Study Bible ‎ →External links: Moved the rightmost bracket to the end of each entry, instead of in the middle (right after the URL), thereby removing the numbering and, instead, making each think entirely clickable.

29 July 2014

• 04:2904:29, 29 July 2014 diff hist +281‎ User:Deselms/sandbox ‎No edit summary

28 July 2014

• 22:4022:40, 28 July 2014 diff hist +26,580‎ User:Deselms/sandbox ‎No edit summary
• 19:2519:25, 28 July 2014 diff hist 0‎ Alexis Carrel ‎ →Alexis Carrel and Lourdes: Corected "sceptic" to "skeptic" in the first sentence.

27 July 2014

• 00:5300:53, 27 July 2014 diff hist +201‎ Talk:Net neutrality ‎ →Comcast and Vontage throttling rumor

26 July 2014

• 23:2123:21, 26 July 2014 diff hist −2‎ Christian Zionism ‎ →Dispensationalism and pro-Restoration detractors: Removed comma after "Horatius"; and movee the word "both" out of that which linked to Horatius Bonar's Wikipedia article, and put it on its own, before his name and link, as it should all have been.

15 July 2014

• 15:5715:57, 15 July 2014 diff hist +831‎ Berocca ‎ →Advertisements: Added June 2014's 30-second national TV "Mind and Body" ad featuring Joel McHale.

12 July 2014

• 17:3717:37, 12 July 2014 diff hist +155‎ Action-adventure (disambiguation) ‎ Added "Adventure fiction," with its description, in the apporpriate place; and linked to its Wikipedia article.
• 16:0416:04, 12 July 2014 diff hist −1‎ m Florida Historical Society ‎ Removed the errant extra single quote mark from in front of the "Florida Historical Society Quarterly," which errant mark was causing the entire paragraph to be bold.
• 15:3615:36, 12 July 2014 diff hist +87‎ Robert Blake (actor) ‎ Improved 3rd paragraph flow. Reorganized last paragraph of the "Career as an adult" section. Moved the "Lost Highway" and "Sondra Kerr" links to their 1st occurrences. Moved Newton full cite to its 1st occurrence & linked to his Wikipedia article.

10 July 2014

• 01:3001:30, 10 July 2014 diff hist +28‎ Brandi Carlile ‎ →Personal life: In the last sentence, fixed the link to the Wikipedia article on AURYN (which has become a section of the "The Never Ending Story" Wikipedia article).

6 July 2014

• 19:5619:56, 6 July 2014 diff hist −42‎ Aneta Corsaut ‎ →Early life and career: Added "Pete" before "Malloy" in the 3rd sentence of the 3rd paragraph; then removed the duplicate reference to Malloy and Adam 12 in the 4th sentence of that paragraph.
• 19:5119:51, 6 July 2014 diff hist +8‎ m Aneta Corsaut ‎ →Early life and career: Added "She" before the lower-case "began" at the beginning of the 2nd paragraph; then changed "She" to "Corsaut" at the beginning of the 3rd paragraph.

20 June 2014

• 16:5616:56, 20 June 2014 diff hist +18‎ Ivy Preparatory School League ‎ Clarified the sentence beginning "[t]here were three other original..." to differentiate simply no longer being a member from no longer being a member because of closure.

12 June 2014

• 19:5119:51, 12 June 2014 diff hist +2,028‎ Talk:North American Old Catholic Church ‎ →And the vandlism resumes: new section
• 19:3319:33, 12 June 2014 diff hist −255‎ North American Old Catholic Church ‎ Undid revision 612623715 by 68.199.222.78 (talk) Just reversing one more incident of the same vandalism that has long been done, here. See the article's "talk" page.

4 May 2014

• 08:0708:07, 4 May 2014 diff hist +15‎ Acquisition of NBC Universal by Comcast ‎ →On-air effects: Added "in real life" to the first sentence of the second paragraph to ensure that no one reading the first paragraph would think the article was still talking about the fictitious 30 Rock episode.

22 April 2014

• 15:5415:54, 22 April 2014 diff hist −29‎ m Roy Bourgeois ‎ →Support: Removed the apparently-no-longer-needed "BR" tags in the quoted text, thereby making the vertical space between paragraphs more normal looking.
• 15:5215:52, 22 April 2014 diff hist −120‎ m Roy Bourgeois ‎ →Laicization: Removed the apparently-no-longer-needed "BR" tags in the quoted text, thereby making the vertical space between paragraphs more normal looking.
• 15:4815:48, 22 April 2014 diff hist −10‎ Roy Bourgeois ‎ →Maryknoll expulsion: Removed the apparently-no-longer-needed "BR" tags in the quoted text, thereby making the vertical space between paragraphs more normal looking.
• 15:4715:47, 22 April 2014 diff hist −10‎ m Roy Bourgeois ‎ →Excommunication: Removed the apparently-no-longer-needed "BR" tags in the quoted text, thereby making the vertical space between paragraphs more normal looking.

17 April 2014

• 16:1116:11, 17 April 2014 diff hist −22‎ Heaven Is for Real ‎ →Film adaptation: Changed that the film will be released to theaters on April 16, 2014 to that it was (since this is April 17, 2014).

16 April 2014

• 02:5402:54, 16 April 2014 diff hist +1,037‎ Talk:Michael Ruppert ‎ →Says who, for godsake!