Wikipedia:Copyright problems/2023 August 7

7 August 2023

Draft:Timeline of violent events relating to the Lebanese Civil War (1975–1977) (history · last edit · rewrite) from https://www.ictj.org/sites/default/files/ICTJ-Report-Lebanon-Mapping-2013-EN_0.pdf. — Diannaa (talk) 21:25, 7 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The template was relocated out of process by the creator, exposing some problematic content. Checking content for ongoing issues. --Moonriddengirl ^(talk) 16:21, 29 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Okay, let's see.

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Clashes broke out between PLO fighters from the camps of Tel al-Zaatar and Jisral-Basha and the Kataeb in the area of Dekwaneh	Clashes broke out between Palestin Liberation Organisation fighters and Phalangists in the town of Dekwaneh
clashes spread to other areas, now between Christian militias and Shi’a Lebanese supported by Palestinian fighters in the Shi’apopulated areas such as Chiyah and Nabaa.2	Clashes spread to other areas between Christian militias and Shi’a Lebanese who aligned with the PLO
Following the assassination of a Palestinian man in downtown Beirut, between 30 and 50 Christian civilians were summarily executed in the area of Bashura in West Beirut	Following the assassination of a Palestinian man in Beirut, around 50 Christian civilians were executed in the area of Bashura in West Beirut.
Five civilians were killed and 12 wounded in the crossfire on the Chiyah- Ain al-Remmaneh front line in Greater Beirut. A mortar shell fell on a house in Furn al-Chebbak, killing one person and injuring four. When the neighbors gathered to help, another shell fell, killing five (including a woman and a child,) and wounding 14.	Five civilians were killed and twelve wounded during clashes in the Beirut suburbs of Chiyah and Ain al-Remmaneh.[6] A shell fell on a house in Furn el-Chebak killing 1 person and injuring 4 others. Another shell fell on the house as people gathered to assist the residents of the building killing 5 more and injuring 14.
The Saint George Hospital was hit, and so was the Armenian club of the Tashnag Party, where around 10 people were killed.	The Saint George Hospital was hut by RPGs and so was the headquarters of the Armenian Tashnag Party where around 10 people were killed.
: The Christian-populated village of Qa’a in northern Beqaa, which had been under siege since July 1 by neighboring Muslim Shi’a tribesmen and As-Sa`iqa,46 was attacked and seven civilians killed.47 This triggered the beginning of the Christian displacement from northern Beqaa.	The Christian-populated village of Qaa in the Baalbek district was attacked killing seven civilians.[7] This triggered a mass exodus of Christians in the Northern Beqaa.
Three people were killed and nine injured in Hawsh al-Umara	Three people were killed and nine injured in Hawsh al-Umara

Note that "On the same day, 5 people were killed in a crossfire in Dekwaneh and al-Fanar." is factually contradicted by the source, perhaps as an effort to paraphrase.

This close paraphrasing and in some places verbatim copying is persistent, although there are some good efforts at paraphrase. Given the out of process removal of the tag, I see no choice but to delete the draft. No changes were made to problematic content after the removal of the tag. --Moonriddengirl ^(talk) 16:43, 29 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]