Talk:Piedmont Avenue (Oakland, California)

Latest comment: 6 years ago by EponineBunnyKickQueen in topic Updating and Improving Tone

Fenton's?

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If Fenton's is such a fixture and its history merits this much discussion, shouldn't it have its own article?

That's what I was thinking. Either delete it or start a new article. Lagringa 18:18, 15 September 2006 (UTC)Reply

photo

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maybe the photo could be taken half a block back, next to the shell station? or maybe at the picturesque MB Mall? or perhaps down at Albert Brown's?

Is this an ad?

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This article could be an ad, or a travel guide, with every other word linking to the website of this business or that establishment. I suggest the external links be changed to either internal links (and the articles be created), or moved to footnotes. — Emiellaiendiay 08:08, 24 February 2007 (UTC)Reply

Updating and Improving Tone

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There's a lot of outdated info here, and the article is still very advert-like with few references. I've deleted some out-of-date store/restaurant names and changed the photo of the old library building (now a furniture store) to one of Mountain View Cemetery's gates. I plan to edit further in the coming days. EponineBunnyKickQueen (talk) 04:32, 5 September 2018 (UTC)Reply