Talk:Murder of Jennifer Moore

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A New Jennifer Moore Page also discussing Nightlife Legislation

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I deleted the contents of my Sandbox. Will remove the tag as well.--MurderWatcher1 (talk) 00:46, 8 December 2007 (UTC)Reply

This Reference has its own Nightlife Legislation section

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If you will check on the Imette St. Guillen reference page, you will see an in-depth discussion of Nightlife Legislation. This page also contains material(s) which are separate for Jennifer Moore's murder case and should be seen in a somewhat different light. Specifically, topics such as underage drinking, fake IDs, and legislation in other areas are some of the differences between the two pages.--MurderWatcher1 (talk) 20:22, 11 December 2007 (UTC)Reply

Quotations

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This article feels more like a quote-farm. It would be best to trim the number of direct quotations and instead summarize the information in the article. Karanacs (talk) 17:49, 17 December 2007 (UTC)Reply

Edits

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I've tagged this article for clean up and excessive use of quotes, which are not encyclopedic. The article needs a lot more clean up work, to which I will return in the future. It's important to avoid making a page about a murder victim into a tribute page, thus I removed material discussing her family and their statements about her loss. AndToToToo (talk) 17:52, 29 January 2008 (UTC)Reply

See also section

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I have trimmed this. This is not vandalism. --70.109.223.188 (talk) 12:59, 3 April 2008 (UTC)Reply

Law & Order

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This sounds similar to the opening premise in Law & Order S18E10 episode, "Tango" aired 2008-02-27. See here: [1] [2] Worth mentioning? --ChrisRuvolo (t) 19:08, 16 April 2008 (UTC)Reply

Teen Prostitute accomplice?

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It says she is 20 - that's not a teenager. The source has been deleted. Additional information? Maladroitmortal (talk) 19:25, 11 November 2009 (UTC)Reply

Fixed, she was 20; just plain "Prostitute accomplice" now. --CliffC (talk) 20:51, 11 November 2009 (UTC)Reply
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