Talk:Dracozolt, Arctozolt, Dracovish, and Arctovish/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Pokelego999 (talk · contribs) 18:07, 30 March 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Greenish Pickle! (talk · contribs) 22:10, 14 April 2024 (UTC)

Hi, this is my first GAN review. I'll start later. Greenish Pickle! (🔔) 22:10, 14 April 2024 (UTC)

Concept

• "The four are revived from different fossils-" replace the "-" into ":".
• "Fossilized Dino-" perhaps rem9ve "-" and replaced it with ","?
• ", such as Charles Dawson's Piltdown Man." remove the comma

Appearances

• Link NPC

Reception

• "ScreenRant disliked it" Who disliked it? put the name of author and link screenrant
• Link Polygon and italize it
• The journal of geek source has an author, add the name of author like ScreenRant above
• Italize the "TheGamer"
• italize the screenrant again
• "and Cara Liss's creation of them has been likened to Dawson and the Piltdown Man" who os dawson and the piltdown man???
• "In the game's competitive scene, the Pokémon have gone on to make an impact." Can you reword this to a better one?

Sources

• ref 8 - add date of the article and name of author
• ref 18 - add name of author
• ref 19 - add name of author
• ref 22 - add name of author
• ref 24 - add name of author

That's everything what I can find. Once everything has been resolved, I'm happy to pass this one. Greenish Pickle! (🔔) 22:30, 14 April 2024 (UTC)

@Greenish Pickle! Made changes where applicable. Dawson and the Piltdown Man are described as a hoax earlier in the Design and characteristics section, but if you want me to add more detail anywhere, let me know. Otherwise, I believe I've patched everything else up. Let me know if I need to make any more changes. Has one ever considered Magneton? Pokelego999 (talk) 23:32, 14 April 2024 (UTC)

Oh that make sense. Good job! Greenish Pickle! (🔔) 23:35, 14 April 2024 (UTC)

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