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| Submission declined on 24 June 2024 by Reconrabbit (talk). This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of music-related topics). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia. Declined by Reconrabbit 4 months ago. | |
Comment: The only sources added since the last time this draft was declined are not independent of the album. Sources ned to be independent to establish notability. UserMemer (chat) Tribs 21:18, 21 October 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: As Richard3120 stated a month ago, this article does not have any reliable sources to establish its notability. All of the references used are student newspapers, sources with very low or no editorial oversight (AudioPhix), or self-published sources . Reconrabbit 16:18, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: These aren't reliable sources – they are all either high school newspapers or blog posts (not "music critics"), neither of which pass WP:RS. As a university student newspaper, the Dakota Student is the best source here, and even then it's pretty weak. Richard3120 (talk) 22:35, 22 May 2024 (UTC)
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| Hawaii: Part II | |
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| Released | December 12, 2012 |
| Recorded | October 2011-August 2012 |
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| Genre | |
| Length | 42:18 |
| Label | Independent |
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| Singles from Hawaii: Part II | |
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Hawaii: Part II is the only studio album by the group Miracle Musical [3] (Japanese: ミラクルミュージカル), a sub-project of various former members of American rock band Tally Hall. It was independently released as a concept album on December 12, 2012. Telling a death-themed love story, it received favorable reviews.
Background
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When Joe Hawley went to Hawaii with his family in the summer of 1997, he became motivated to create Hawaii: Part II, stating "I heard this music in my mind and I knew I had to make it at some point".[1] Hawley later described it as a "once-in-a-lifetime musical",[4] citing the September 11 attacks as inspiration.[2] Soon after the sudden hiatus of Tally Hall in August of 2011, former co-lead vocalist Hawley started a side project titled Miracle Musical (Japanese: ミラクルミュージカル) to create Hawaii: Part II. He formed the project alongside Ross Federman, Tally Hall's drummer, and Bora Karaca, a session musician and producer associated with the band.[1] During the production of the album, the three never met in person, and additional personnel independently recorded their performances and submitted them to Hawley and Karaca.[5] Included on the album are "Murders", "The Mind Electric", and "Time Machine". These are older songs written by Tally Hall, later re-recorded for the album. Each was intended to appear on Good & Evil, but was held back for favorability or budgetary issues.[6]
Release
editOn September 11, 2012, "Variations on a Cloud" was surprise-released as a single by Rob Cantor and Joe Hawley under the pseudonym Miracle Musical.[7] Following this, a countdown was revealed to anticipate the release of Hawaii: Part II at 12:12 PM on December 12, 2012. In 2014, Miracle Musical released Hawaii: Part II: Part ii, an album featuring instrumentals, demos, and samples.[8] Later in the year, a cover of "Candle on the Water" was additionally published. An album of six chiptune renditions titled Hawaii Partii released on December 31, 2015, as the soundtrack for the promotional game Labyrinth.[9] On September 18, 2018, a one-month Kickstarter campaign was launched to fund the first vinyl pressing of the album, ultimately earning $16,544 of its $7,000 goal from 456 pledgers.[citation needed]
Reception
editHawaii: Part II has received positive reception in online publications. Talon Boudreaux of The Paper Wolf complimented the album's orchestral and vocal performances, comparing the composition of "White Ball" to Frank Sinatra and highlighting "The Mind Electric".[1] A similar review was given by Grant Hinders of SHS Today, extensively praising Hawaii: Part II as a prominent example of juxtapositioning newer production methods and techniques with older styles and additionally highlighting "The Mind Electric".[8] Ace Richards of KP Times enjoyed the progression of the album's story, describing it as "extremely well crafted and creative",[10] while Matteo Sohn of Maroon likened this to a favorable use of open interpretation to draw listeners in.[2] Hawaii: Part II has since gained a cult following, amassing over a third of a billion on-demand Spotify streams.[8] Several songs from the album, such as "Murders" and "The Mind Electric", achieved popularity on TikTok and other social media.[6]
Symbolism
editA commonly referenced symbol in the album and album cover is the stella octangula.[11] It is said that if you understand the stella octangula, you have unlocked the secrets of the universe.
Dedicated Music
editThe song, Candle on the Water, is a cover of a song that is dedicated to Diem Brown and Trevelyn Grace Campbell.
Story
editWhile not officially stated, the story usually goes along the lines as follows: 'Introduction to the Snow': The protagonist (Simon) is born into the world. 'Isle unto Thyself': Simon sails to Hawaii with his newfound love as a vacation. 'Black Rainbows': Simon and his love reach the island and interact with the locals. 'White Ball': They fall deeply in love, but their relationship is getting rocky. 'Murders': They go into a forest for a picnic and while there, the Erlking kills his lover. '宇宙ステーションのレベル, often Romanized as Space Station Level 7': Simon gets framed for the murder of his lover. 'The Mind Electric': Simon pleas insanity and gets sent to an infirmary, leading to his demise, brought on by electroshock therapy. This causes him to actually go insane. 'Labyrinth': Simon gets trapped in the clouds of his own mind. 'Time Machine': Simon recollects on what he's been through and imagines himself if he never went into the forest. 'Stranded Lullaby[e]': Simon goes off to sea to finally reconnect with his lover. 'Dream Sweet in Sea Major': Simon gets lured to drowning himself by a Siren.
Cultural Impact
editMany online trends have arisen from songs such as 'The Mind Electric' and 'Labyrinth'. The trends usually include animations or clips from movies of someone relating to the struggles of Simon in both songs. Recently, 'Dream Sweet in Sea Major' has been used to signify a bad event that is about to happen.
Track listing
edit| No. | Title | Writer(s) | Length |
|---|---|---|---|
| 1. | "Introduction to the Snow" | Joe Hawley | 1:41 |
| 2. | "Isle Unto Thyself" | Hawley | 3:47 |
| 3. | "Black Rainbows" |
| 2:29 |
| 4. | "White Ball" |
| 3:35 |
| 5. | "Murders" | Hawley | 3:42 |
| 6. | "宇宙ステーションのレベル7" |
| 3:23 |
| 7. | "The Mind Electric" | Hawley | 6:13 |
| 8. | "Labyrinth" |
| 2:32 |
| 9. | "Time Machine" |
| 4:12 |
| 10. | "Stranded Lullaby" |
| 3:40 |
| 11. | "Dream Sweet in Sea Major" |
| 7:00 |
| Total length: | 42:18 | ||
| No. | Title | Writer(s) | Length |
|---|---|---|---|
| 0. | "Variations on a Cloud" |
| 3:10 |
| Total length: | 45:28 | ||
| No. | Title | Writer(s) | Length |
|---|---|---|---|
| 12. | "Candle on the Water" |
| 3:15 |
| Total length: | 48:38 | ||
Personnel
editMiracle Musical
- Joe Hawley[a] – lead vocals (1–3, 5, 7, 9–0), electric guitar (2, 4, 7, 11), acoustic guitar (2, 6, 11), ukulele (3), additional mixing (7), harmonica (9), piano, production, drum programming (all tracks), cover artwork, art direction and design
- Ross Federman[a] – drums, drum engineering (2, 4, 7), drum programming, production, mixing (all tracks)
- Bora Karaca – additional vocals (2, 3, 7, 11, 0), bağlama (3), accordion, castanets (4), bass guitar (5, 6, 10), electric guitar (5, 8), piano programming (5), lead vocals (6), vocoded electric guitar (9), whistling, production, recording engineer (all tracks), cover artwork
Technical
- Roman Vail – mastering engineer
- Benjamin Collins – drum engineering (2, 4, 7)
- Joachim Horsley – conductor
- Dan Durda – cover artwork
- Susan Holloway – cover artwork
Additional musicians
- Cyndi Lynott – french horn (1)
- Andrew Kurtz – additional vocals (2)
- Ashley Renee – additional vocals (2)
- Ryan Brady – bass guitar (2, 4, 7), moog (3, 7)
- Madi Diaz – lead vocals (3)
- Nik Frank-Lehrer – additional vocals (3)
- Andrew Laurich – additional vocals (3)
- Ryan Scott – additional vocals (3)
- Zubin Sedghi[a] – lead vocals (4)
- Stephanie Koenig – lead vocals (4), additional vocals (6, 7, 11)
- Jay Golden – violin (4, 5)
- Alyson Montez – violin (4, 5)
- Adrianne Nigg – additional vocals (6, 7)
- Joe J. Dahl – additional vocals (7)
- Shane Maux – lead vocals (8)
- Charlene Kaye – lead vocals (8)
- Rob Cantor[a] – lead vocals (9, 0), vocoder programming (9), acoustic guitar (0)
- Allison Hanna – additional vocals (10)
- Gregory James Jenkins – additional vocals (11, 0)
- Lindsey Alvarez – additional vocals (0)
- Stephanie Wunderlich – additional vocals (0)
- Laurel Stucky - lead vocals (12)
- Robert Chesnick - additional instrumentalism and vocals (12)
- ^ a b c d Member of Tally Hall
References
edit- ^ a b c d Boudreaux, Talon (December 7, 2022). "Album Review – "Hawaii: Part II" by Miracle Musical". The Paper Wolf. Retrieved May 20, 2024.
- ^ a b c Sohn, Matteo (December 22, 2021). "Review: Joe Hawley's Miracle Musical". Maroon. Retrieved May 20, 2024.
- ^ https://www.hawaiipartii.com/
- ^ "Song of the Day: "Black Rainbows"". LemonWire. December 8, 2018. Retrieved May 20, 2024.
{{cite web}}: Unknown parameter|people=ignored (help) - ^ Federman, Ross (December 12, 2017). "Today marks the five year anniversary of an album". Facebook (Facebook post). Retrieved May 21, 2024.
- ^ a b Larson, Sarah (November 9, 2020). "Hawaii: Part II Album Review". Dakota Student. Retrieved May 20, 2024.
- ^ Becker, Sarah (April 13, 2024). "Revisiting Tally Hall's surprise hit "Hidden in the Sand"". AudioPhix. Retrieved May 20, 2024.
- ^ a b c Hinders, Grant (February 6, 2020). "Hawaii: Part II – A Hidden Masterpiece". SHS Today. Retrieved May 20, 2024.
- ^ Becker, Sarah (April 26, 2024). "Joe Hawley faces legal issues on thrilling self-titled album". AudioPhix. Retrieved May 20, 2024.
- ^ Richards, Ace (November 24, 2023). "'Hawaii: Part II' still resonates with fans almost 11 years later". KP Times. Retrieved May 20, 2024.
- ^ https://www.hawaiipartii.com
- ^ "Hawaii: Part II by Miracle Musical on Apple Music".
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