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#It is '''reasonably well written'''. |
#It is '''reasonably well written'''. |
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#:a ''(prose)'': {{GAList/check|y}} b ''([[Wikipedia:Manual of Style|MoS]] for [[WP:LEAD|lead]], [[WP:LAYOUT|layout]], [[WP:WTW|word choice]], [[WP:WAF|fiction]], and [[Wikipedia:Embedded list|lists]])'': {{GAList/check|y}} |
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#:: Generally well written. Could the '''Interior''' section be expanded slightly. Perhaps some idea of the layout?[[User:Jezhotwells|Jezhotwells]] ([[User talk:Jezhotwells|talk]]) 13:19, 4 June 2013 (UTC) |
#:: Generally well written. <s>Could the '''Interior''' section be expanded slightly. Perhaps some idea of the layout?[[User:Jezhotwells|Jezhotwells]] ([[User talk:Jezhotwells|talk]]) 13:19, 4 June 2013 (UTC)</s>{{done}} |
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:::Expanded.— [[User:Rodw|Rod]] <sup>[[User talk:Rodw|talk]]</sup> 21:21, 4 June 2013 (UTC) |
#:::Expanded.— [[User:Rodw|Rod]] <sup>[[User talk:Rodw|talk]]</sup> 21:21, 4 June 2013 (UTC) |
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#:: "causing national scandal" - I think this would read better as "causing ''a'' national scandal". [[User:Jezhotwells|Jezhotwells]] ([[User talk:Jezhotwells|talk]]) 13:23, 4 June 2013 (UTC) |
#:: <s>"causing national scandal" - I think this would read better as "causing ''a'' national scandal".</s> <s>[[User:Jezhotwells|Jezhotwells]] ([[User talk:Jezhotwells|talk]]) 13:23, 4 June 2013 (UTC</s>) {{DONE}} |
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:::Changed— [[User:Rodw|Rod]] <sup>[[User talk:Rodw|talk]]</sup> 21:21, 4 June 2013 (UTC) |
#:::Changed— [[User:Rodw|Rod]] <sup>[[User talk:Rodw|talk]]</sup> 21:21, 4 June 2013 (UTC) |
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#It is '''factually accurate''' and '''[[Wikipedia:Verifiability|verifiable]]'''. |
#It is '''factually accurate''' and '''[[Wikipedia:Verifiability|verifiable]]'''. |
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#:a ''([[WP:FNNR|reference section]])'': {{GAList/check|}} b ''(citations to [[WP:RS|reliable sources]])'': {{GAList/check|}} c ''([[Wikipedia:No original research|OR]])'': {{GAList/check|}} |
#:a ''([[WP:FNNR|reference section]])'': {{GAList/check|y}} b ''(citations to [[WP:RS|reliable sources]])'': {{GAList/check|y}} c ''([[Wikipedia:No original research|OR]])'': {{GAList/check|y}} |
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#:: ref #3 Annual Archæological Review 2001–2002" - I can find nothing there that supports "but the evidence, based on excavations to the South of the house in 1961/62, is now known to be uncertain.". Perhaps I missed it? [[User:Jezhotwells|Jezhotwells]] ([[User talk:Jezhotwells|talk]]) 13:19, 4 June 2013 (UTC) |
#:: <s>ref #3 Annual Archæological Review 2001–2002" - I can find nothing there that supports "but the evidence, based on excavations to the South of the house in 1961/62, is now known to be uncertain.". Perhaps I missed it? [[User:Jezhotwells|Jezhotwells]] ([[User talk:Jezhotwells|talk]]) 13:19, 4 June 2013 (UTC)</s>{{DONE}} |
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:::I've reworded this as I agree the claim is not fully supported but this seems to be the only reference to Roman remains - its not in more recent sources so I have left the word speculation.— [[User:Rodw|Rod]] <sup>[[User talk:Rodw|talk]]</sup> 21:21, 4 June 2013 (UTC) |
#:::I've reworded this as I agree the claim is not fully supported but this seems to be the only reference to Roman remains - its not in more recent sources so I have left the word speculation.— [[User:Rodw|Rod]] <sup>[[User talk:Rodw|talk]]</sup> 21:21, 4 June 2013 (UTC) |
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#:: ref #13 "Mary Elton Primary School". - There is nothing there to confirm that the school was named after this Mary Elton. I am sure that it was named after her, but we need evidence. [[User:Jezhotwells|Jezhotwells]] ([[User talk:Jezhotwells|talk]]) 13:19, 4 June 2013 (UTC) |
#:: <s>ref #13 "Mary Elton Primary School". - There is nothing there to confirm that the school was named after this Mary Elton. I am sure that it was named after her, but we need evidence. [[User:Jezhotwells|Jezhotwells]] ([[User talk:Jezhotwells|talk]]) 13:19, 4 June 2013 (UTC)</s>{{done}} |
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:::New reference which states this.— [[User:Rodw|Rod]] <sup>[[User talk:Rodw|talk]]</sup> 21:21, 4 June 2013 (UTC) |
#:::New reference which states this.— [[User:Rodw|Rod]] <sup>[[User talk:Rodw|talk]]</sup> 21:21, 4 June 2013 (UTC) |
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#:: what makes The Gardening website (ref #38), TourUK (ref #24), Britain's Finest (ref #26) and AboutBritain.com (ref #39) [[WP:RS|reliable sources]]? [[User:Jezhotwells|Jezhotwells]] ([[User talk:Jezhotwells|talk]]) 15:44, 4 June 2013 (UTC) |
#:: <s>what makes The Gardening website (ref #38), TourUK (ref #24), Britain's Finest (ref #26) and AboutBritain.com (ref #39) [[WP:RS|reliable sources]]? [[User:Jezhotwells|Jezhotwells]] ([[User talk:Jezhotwells|talk]]) 15:44, 4 June 2013 (UTC)</s>{{done}} |
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:::Removed/replaced— [[User:Rodw|Rod]] <sup>[[User talk:Rodw|talk]]</sup> 21:21, 4 June 2013 (UTC) |
#:::Removed/replaced— [[User:Rodw|Rod]] <sup>[[User talk:Rodw|talk]]</sup> 21:21, 4 June 2013 (UTC) |
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#:: {http://www.davenapier.pwp.blueyonder.co.uk/mayors/history1.htm} is a personal website, not RS [[User:Jezhotwells|Jezhotwells]] ([[User talk:Jezhotwells|talk]]) 15:49, 4 June 2013 (UTC) |
#:: <s>{http://www.davenapier.pwp.blueyonder.co.uk/mayors/history1.htm} is a personal website, not RS [[User:Jezhotwells|Jezhotwells]] ([[User talk:Jezhotwells|talk]]) 15:49, 4 June 2013 (UTC)</s>{{done}} |
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:::Replaced— [[User:Rodw|Rod]] <sup>[[User talk:Rodw|talk]]</sup> 21:21, 4 June 2013 (UTC) |
#:::Replaced— [[User:Rodw|Rod]] <sup>[[User talk:Rodw|talk]]</sup> 21:21, 4 June 2013 (UTC) |
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#:: same for {http://www.leighrayment.com/baronetage/baronetse.htm} [[User:Jezhotwells|Jezhotwells]] ([[User talk:Jezhotwells|talk]]) 15:49, 4 June 2013 (UTC) |
#:: <s>same for {http://www.leighrayment.com/baronetage/baronetse.htm} [[User:Jezhotwells|Jezhotwells]] ([[User talk:Jezhotwells|talk]]) 15:49, 4 June 2013 (UTC)</s>{{done}} |
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:::Replaced— [[User:Rodw|Rod]] <sup>[[User talk:Rodw|talk]]</sup> 21:21, 4 June 2013 (UTC) |
#:::Replaced— [[User:Rodw|Rod]] <sup>[[User talk:Rodw|talk]]</sup> 21:21, 4 June 2013 (UTC) |
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#It is '''broad in its coverage'''. |
#It is '''broad in its coverage'''. |
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#:a ''([[WP:Scope|major aspects]])'': {{GAList/check|y}} b ''([[WP:LENGTH|focused]])'': {{GAList/check|y}} |
#:a ''([[WP:Scope|major aspects]])'': {{GAList/check|y}} b ''([[WP:LENGTH|focused]])'': {{GAList/check|y}} |
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#:: stable |
#:: stable |
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#It is illustrated by '''[[Wikipedia:Images|images]]''' and other media, where possible and appropriate. |
#It is illustrated by '''[[Wikipedia:Images|images]]''' and other media, where possible and appropriate. |
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#:a ''(images are tagged and non-free content have [[WP:FUR|fair use rationales]])'': {{GAList/check|}} b ''([[WP:IMAGE RELEVANCE|appropriate use]] with [[WP:CAP|suitable captions]])'': {{GAList/check|}} |
#:a ''(images are tagged and non-free content have [[WP:FUR|fair use rationales]])'': {{GAList/check|y}} b ''([[WP:IMAGE RELEVANCE|appropriate use]] with [[WP:CAP|suitable captions]])'': {{GAList/check|y}} |
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#:: I am worried about the copyright status of [[:File:W Phot c1950.jpg ]] and [[:File:W Phot c1920.jpg ]] ands have nomitaed for deletion at commons so that a judgement can be made. Same applies to [[:File:Clevedon Court.jpg]] [[User:Jezhotwells|Jezhotwells]] ([[User talk:Jezhotwells|talk]]) 16:06, 4 June 2013 (UTC) |
#:: <s>I am worried about the copyright status of [[:File:W Phot c1950.jpg ]] and [[:File:W Phot c1920.jpg ]] ands have nomitaed for deletion at commons so that a judgement can be made. Same applies to [[:File:Clevedon Court.jpg]] [[User:Jezhotwells|Jezhotwells]] ([[User talk:Jezhotwells|talk]]) 16:06, 4 June 2013 (UTC)</s> Well two have been deleted and the other kept so that is now satsfied. [[User:Jezhotwells|Jezhotwells]] ([[User talk:Jezhotwells|talk]]) 13:35, 17 June 2013 (UTC){{done}} |
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:::If necessary I can replace these with other images - however they do help with the historical perspective which isn't really provided by the other pics in the commons cat.— [[User:Rodw|Rod]] <sup>[[User talk:Rodw|talk]]</sup> 21:29, 4 June 2013 (UTC) |
:::If necessary I can replace these with other images - however they do help with the historical perspective which isn't really provided by the other pics in the commons cat.— [[User:Rodw|Rod]] <sup>[[User talk:Rodw|talk]]</sup> 21:29, 4 June 2013 (UTC) |
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#'''Overall''': |
#'''Overall''': |
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#:''Pass/Fail'': {{GAList/check|}} |
#:''Pass/Fail'': {{GAList/check|y}} |
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#::All good now, I am happy to promote this. Sorry about the delay before getting back to this, real life intervened. [[User:Jezhotwells|Jezhotwells]] ([[User talk:Jezhotwells|talk]]) 13:35, 17 June 2013 (UTC) |
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Latest revision as of 13:35, 17 June 2013
GA Review
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Reviewer: Jezhotwells (talk · contribs) 12:52, 4 June 2013 (UTC)
I shall be reviewing this article against the Good Article criteria, following its nomination for Good Article status.
Disambiguations: none found.
Linkrot: two found and fixed. Jezhotwells (talk) 12:57, 4 June 2013 (UTC) Found and tagged another dead link. Jezhotwells (talk) 15:50, 4 June 2013 (UTC)
- I could only find one tagged deadlink - which I have fixed.— Rod talk 21:38, 4 June 2013 (UTC)
Checking against GA criteria
[edit]- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose):
b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- Generally well written.
Could the Interior section be expanded slightly. Perhaps some idea of the layout?Jezhotwells (talk) 13:19, 4 June 2013 (UTC)Done
- Expanded.— Rod talk 21:21, 4 June 2013 (UTC)
"causing national scandal" - I think this would read better as "causing a national scandal".Jezhotwells (talk) 13:23, 4 June 2013 (UTC)Done
- Changed— Rod talk 21:21, 4 June 2013 (UTC)
- Generally well written.
- a (prose):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
ref #3 Annual Archæological Review 2001–2002" - I can find nothing there that supports "but the evidence, based on excavations to the South of the house in 1961/62, is now known to be uncertain.". Perhaps I missed it? Jezhotwells (talk) 13:19, 4 June 2013 (UTC)Done
- I've reworded this as I agree the claim is not fully supported but this seems to be the only reference to Roman remains - its not in more recent sources so I have left the word speculation.— Rod talk 21:21, 4 June 2013 (UTC)
ref #13 "Mary Elton Primary School". - There is nothing there to confirm that the school was named after this Mary Elton. I am sure that it was named after her, but we need evidence. Jezhotwells (talk) 13:19, 4 June 2013 (UTC)Done
- New reference which states this.— Rod talk 21:21, 4 June 2013 (UTC)
what makes The Gardening website (ref #38), TourUK (ref #24), Britain's Finest (ref #26) and AboutBritain.com (ref #39) reliable sources? Jezhotwells (talk) 15:44, 4 June 2013 (UTC)Done
- Removed/replaced— Rod talk 21:21, 4 June 2013 (UTC)
{http://www.davenapier.pwp.blueyonder.co.uk/mayors/history1.htm} is a personal website, not RS Jezhotwells (talk) 15:49, 4 June 2013 (UTC)Done
- Replaced— Rod talk 21:21, 4 June 2013 (UTC)
same for {http://www.leighrayment.com/baronetage/baronetse.htm} Jezhotwells (talk) 15:49, 4 June 2013 (UTC)Done
- Replaced— Rod talk 21:21, 4 June 2013 (UTC)
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- Broad and of suitable length, focussed. Jezhotwells (talk) 15:46, 4 June 2013 (UTC)
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- stable
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
I am worried about the copyright status of File:W Phot c1950.jpg and File:W Phot c1920.jpg ands have nomitaed for deletion at commons so that a judgement can be made. Same applies to File:Clevedon Court.jpg Jezhotwells (talk) 16:06, 4 June 2013 (UTC)Well two have been deleted and the other kept so that is now satsfied. Jezhotwells (talk) 13:35, 17 June 2013 (UTC)Done
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- If necessary I can replace these with other images - however they do help with the historical perspective which isn't really provided by the other pics in the commons cat.— Rod talk 21:29, 4 June 2013 (UTC)
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- All good now, I am happy to promote this. Sorry about the delay before getting back to this, real life intervened. Jezhotwells (talk) 13:35, 17 June 2013 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail: