Introduction: Eyes can be deceiving...So don't give up with a snap because Its only the beginning. Fight it, ease in your future and make it glow from the gray vicinity.
We exist in an age of shadow,
Shadows that we blindly follow
The moments when we feel so cold,
That is where we need to mold
There are many roads to take,
And judgments to make
No one's going to make our choice,
It's something we hold within our voice
At times the path seems to be a dead-end,
That's the part where everything really extend
We still got a long way to go,
So, don't stroll out and believe it's the end
Very well written, Aqeb! This one flows very well, and I love your style of writing!
Interesting title and reflections on poetry. It will be interesting to read your poetic reflections across the years. Regards Terence :)
That is right and its never end and you keep going to you stop.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
this leaves you thinking about the life in this world...how it fades in and out, how it all functions with human-emotion and directions. my fav is 'There are many roads to take and judgments to make', what an amazing aspect on life you expressed in two lines! Also you showed a great deal of 'holding onto hope' within this msg. I'm really loving your work! wow, so far I read 3 poems (this is the 3rd out of 9) and Already all three got 10/10 lol...Masha'Allah You are some poet man! good stuff...