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You Shouldn't Be Here: A Novel Kindle Edition

3.9 3.9 out of 5 stars 7,344 ratings

Two strangers search for the truth behind bizarre occurrences no one else dares to discuss—only to discover that they’re connected by secrets that could destroy them both. A thrilling and twisty novel by the acclaimed author of the Mindy’s Book Studio pick I’ll Stop the World.

When sixteen-year-old Angie Stewart starts hearing a mysterious voice in her house, she’s thrilled at the possibility of a ghost. Finally, something interesting is happening in her boring hometown of East Henderson, Pennsylvania. But why is she the only one who can hear it? And what does it want from her?

Meanwhile, first-year teacher Madelyn Zhao just got the keys to her new home, which is located close to her job, within walking distance of a dog park—and, most importantly, in the town where her cousin went missing several years ago. No one in East Henderson wants to talk about what happened, but Madelyn is determined to find answers.

As the two strangers search for clues, their investigations begin to point toward the same dark place. But by the time they realize that the truth could be deadly, it’s too late to turn back. And someone out there will stop at nothing to make sure their secrets stay buried.


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Editorial Reviews

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You Shouldn’t Be Here

“An original and deftly crafted novel of murder, suspense and cover-up revealed…” Midwest Book Review

“A hip, fresh, mind-bending mystery with characters you’ll love to pieces. Madelyn is incredibly real, and her clever sleuthing skills bring to mind a modern-day paranormal Nancy Drew—righting serious wrongs and bringing justice to the land. Not to mention she’s the perfect foil to the jaw-droppingly yummy Alex. Loved it!” —J. T. Ellison, New York Times bestselling author

You Shouldn’t Be Here is the best kind of dual timeline story—where everything is connected, nothing is as it seems, and I never saw the final twist coming. Lauren Thoman’s latest is the perfect blend of authentic characters and page-turning mystery: unsettling, surprising, and deliciously satisfying.” —Jessica Strawser, USA Today bestselling author of The Last Caretaker

You Shouldn’t Be Here will touch your heart in ways you could never expect. Thoman has created a charming but tense story that drew me in and wouldn’t let go. I was riveted from the first page.” —R. J. Jacobs, author of This Is How We End Things

I’ll Stop the World

“Lauren Thoman’s I’ll Stop the World is a whip-smart mystery with a vibrant cast of characters that gives off great eighties vibes. I was absolutely dazzled by this unputdownable genre-bending novel that’s equal parts coming-of-age suspense and an emotional tale of forgiveness and second chances.” —Mindy Kaling

“Thoman’s ambitious timeline of events is both expansive and compressed, with the storyline unfolding over the course of both one week and thirty-eight years, and her portrayal of teenagers in varying degrees of crisis is sympathetic. A novel look at strange (and stranger) things.” Kirkus Reviews

“Thoman’s sweeping debut defies categorization. A multigenerational mystery, a compulsively readable love story, an intricately woven sci-fi—whatever it is, I’ll Stop the World is the mind-bendy time-travel eighties romp we all need right now. I’m obsessed with this book.” —David Arnold, New York Times bestselling author

I’ll Stop the World layers mystery upon mystery, from the everyday secrets in the lives of teens coming of age in a small town now to the dark shock waves still radiating out from deaths that took place decades before. Lauren Thoman’s debut novel is a time-bending page-turner packed with twists no one will see coming. This is a story that continues to resonate long after you finish.” —Gwenda Bond, New York Times bestselling author of Stranger Things: Suspicious Minds

“In this standout debut, Lauren Thoman takes the reader on a wild ride, deftly wrapping a coming-of-age story with a clever mystery, sprinkled with eighties nostalgia that’ll have you reaching for your Bubble Yum. As I tore through the pages, I fell in love with the cast of flawed and funny characters, who felt as real as the friends I grew up with. Best of all, Thoman delivers an impossibly satisfying ending in a way only the very best time-travel storytellers can. This one should go at the top of everyone’s must-read list!” —Brianna Labuskes, Wall Street Journal bestselling author

“A brilliant, thought-provoking page-turner that so deeply sucked me into a world of richly drawn characters and fast-paced action that I never wanted to leave.” —Sonali Dev, USA Today bestselling author of The Vibrant Years

“A page-turning, time-bending mystery full of heart. I’ll Stop the World gave me a chance to solve a cold crime from a refreshing new perspective. Lauren Thoman is an exciting new talent not to be missed!” —Kara Thomas, bestselling author of That Weekend and Out of the Ashes

From the Publisher

Lauren Thoman, author of Mindy Kaling’s book pick I’ll Stop the World, delivers a new mystery that’s a mind-bending take on a classic ghost story.

When Madelyn Zhao moves to smalltown Pennsylvania in search of her missing cousin, she uncovers far more than she bargained for. Her cousin isn’t the only person who’s gone missing here, and she’s determined to connect the crimes. In the same town, high-school senior Angie Stewart is hearing voices in her home. Great, a ghost—something to cut through the boredom of East Henderson life. But why is she the only one who can hear it?

As Madelyn and Angie dig into the secrets of their town, Thoman masterfully weaves their journeys—and the mystery—in a way that shocked me. Trust me, you don’t have this one figured out.

—Megha Parekh, Editor

Product details

  • ASIN ‏ : ‎ B0CL84R1VN
  • Publisher ‏ : ‎ Thomas & Mercer (August 1, 2024)
  • Publication date ‏ : ‎ August 1, 2024
  • Language ‏ : ‎ English
  • File size ‏ : ‎ 4778 KB
  • Text-to-Speech ‏ : ‎ Enabled
  • Screen Reader ‏ : ‎ Supported
  • Enhanced typesetting ‏ : ‎ Enabled
  • X-Ray ‏ : ‎ Enabled
  • Word Wise ‏ : ‎ Enabled
  • Print length ‏ : ‎ 381 pages
  • Page numbers source ISBN ‏ : ‎ 1662517696
  • Customer Reviews:
    3.9 3.9 out of 5 stars 7,344 ratings

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Lauren Thoman
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Lauren Thoman writes speculative fiction for teens and adults. Her debut novel, I'll Stop the World, was selected for publication in 2023 by six-time Emmy nominee Mindy Kaling through her eponymous imprint, Mindy's Book Studio. Lauren's pop culture writing has also appeared in numerous online outlets including Parade and Vulture. Lauren lives outside of Nashville, Tennessee, with her husband and two children in a house full of dogs and fish. When she's not writing, she's probably on the hunt for tacos or coffee, poking around her flowerbeds, or buried underneath a pile of dogs.

Customer reviews

3.9 out of 5 stars
7,344 global ratings

Customers say

Customers find the storyline promising, with interesting twists and turns. They describe the book as a fun, enjoyable read with well-developed characters. However, some readers find the pronouns confusing and hard to follow. Opinions are mixed on the grammar and pacing, with some finding it extraordinary and easy to read, while others say it's bad and foul language.

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116 customers mention "Storyline"93 positive23 negative

Customers find the plot of the story complicated. They say it's an incredible thriller with enough twists and turns to keep it interesting. Readers also mention the romance in the storyline is acceptable and meaningful to the suspense.

"...I loved the characters, the friendships, the twists, and secrets...." Read more

"...The basic story is promising, and the characters are well developed, Alex\Bas the exception. The disappearances of Angie and her dad, Piper's..." Read more

"Just finished Lauren Thoman’s "You Shouldn’t Be Here," a gripping psychological thriller / murder mystery/ ghost story that keeps you guessing until..." Read more

"...The plot itsself is good but as a reader, i had suspicians of the twists long before they were revealed...." Read more

76 customers mention "Readability"71 positive5 negative

Customers find the book fun, enjoyable, and interesting. They describe it as a delightful, well-paced mystery with solid twists. Readers also mention it's a quick and exciting read.

"I really enjoyed the story line and the characters. It was entertaining and I was always ready to get back to the book...." Read more

"...The way the author brought both perspectives together was seamless and exciting. I loved the characters, the friendships, the twists, and secrets...." Read more

"Let me 1st explain that this is a terrific young adult book, but perhaps less so for the average mystery reading adult like myself...." Read more

"...Beyond my personal attachments, this book was fast paced, engaging, and played with a small aspect of science fiction...." Read more

59 customers mention "Character development"44 positive15 negative

Customers find the characters well-drawn and realistic. They also say the storyline is interesting.

"I really enjoyed the story line and the characters. It was entertaining and I was always ready to get back to the book...." Read more

"...I loved the characters, the friendships, the twists, and secrets...." Read more

"...The basic story is promising, and the characters are well developed, Alex\Bas the exception. The disappearances of Angie and her dad, Piper's..." Read more

"...who the bad guy was pretty much from the beginning and his character was very cliche and one dimensional...." Read more

51 customers mention "Grammar"26 positive25 negative

Customers have mixed opinions about the grammar of the book. Some mention it's well-written and easy to read, while others say it has foul language, confusing pronouns, and a fair amount of profanity.

"...The writing was great. It's a fast-paced, dual pov. The way the author brought both perspectives together was seamless and exciting...." Read more

"...I have an open mind — but I’m sorry — to me it is just bad grammar — and I keep waiting for what “they” was being referred to...." Read more

"...Strong character development, strong dialogue, and emotionally complex all around...." Read more

"...which bogged things down for this male reader. Reading also became cumbersome when plural pronouns were suddenly used for one individual..." Read more

32 customers mention "Pacing"15 positive17 negative

Customers have mixed opinions about the pacing of the book. Some mention it gets to the point quickly and holds their interest. Others say it becomes annoying and tiresome.

"...But it's confusing and disruptive to the reading flow to suddenly encounter they/them/their throughout a paragraph where, with traditional grammar,..." Read more

"...The writing was great. It's a fast-paced, dual pov. The way the author brought both perspectives together was seamless and exciting...." Read more

"...The love story aspect of the book seems very banal. The decisions made by Madeline and Alex seem very reckless...." Read more

"...Lol.Beyond my personal attachments, this book was fast paced, engaging, and played with a small aspect of science fiction...." Read more

41 customers mention "Confusion"10 positive31 negative

Customers find the book confusing, hard to follow, and not complex. They also say the final showdown is too simple for an antagonist who had spent years doing as he did. Readers mention that the beginning is reprehensible but predictable. They say some situations seem too involved, coincidental, or unbelievable.

"...It made the story confusing and I had to keep correcting it in my head.Could also have totally done without the Trump reference. Really?..." Read more

"...the villain is known from the beginning, reprehensible but cliched and predictable, which does detract from the suspense...." Read more

"...This author has a way of grasping my attention and keeping me guessing...." Read more

"...A number of situations seemed too involved, coincidental or unbelievable...." Read more

Top reviews from the United States

Reviewed in the United States on September 24, 2024
I really enjoyed the story line and the characters. It was entertaining and I was always ready to get back to the book. It’s been a while since I found a book that held my attention so well.

However - I really disliked the “pronoun” issue. I have an open mind — but I’m sorry — to me it is just bad grammar — and I keep waiting for what “they” was being referred to. It made the story confusing and I had to keep correcting it in my head.

Could also have totally done without the Trump reference. Really? I get enough of that on a daily basis — don’t need it in my relaxation time.

So I would probably avoid Lauren Thoman books in the future because of those two things.

Sorry.
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Reviewed in the United States on September 23, 2024
You Shouldn't Be Here by Lauren Thoman is a mysterious thriller that had me hooked from the very start! It follows two people who are connected by a dark and dangerous secret. One is hearing mysterious voices while the other is in search of her cousin who disappeared.

This was my second book by Thoman, and just like the other book, I read this in one sitting! This author has a way of grasping my attention and keeping me guessing. I truly had no idea how this book was going to end, and I was so pleased.

The writing was great. It's a fast-paced, dual pov. The way the author brought both perspectives together was seamless and exciting. I loved the characters, the friendships, the twists, and secrets. I especially enjoyed reading (or rage reading) the quotes at the start of each chapter from a particular character. Absolutely recommend!!!
Reviewed in the United States on September 28, 2024
Let me 1st explain that this is a terrific young adult book, but perhaps less so for the average mystery reading adult like myself. The basic story is promising, and the characters are well developed, Alex\Bas the exception.
The disappearances of Angie and her dad, Piper's disappearance prompting the investigation by Madeline 2 years later, and the sudden use of plural pronouns when referring to Syzygy was all confusing. When the timelines are introduced showing that Madeline was the "ghost" that Angie heard even though Madeline didn't arrive on the scene until 10 years later was about 3 too many literary licenses to hold this story. While it was nice to see some justice to the Bad Guy, he didn't receive nearly what I felt he deserved even though there were only two scenes that actually convinced us that he was a bad guy; I would have liked a little more "bad," and a little less fearful small town gossip.
The last chapter made me feel that I wad caught in a basement with other teens, the lights are low, the music is soft, and every couple is wondering if this night will finally end the way they dreamed.
Reviewed in the United States on September 14, 2024
Just finished Lauren Thoman’s "You Shouldn’t Be Here," a gripping psychological thriller / murder mystery/ ghost story that keeps you guessing until the very end.

The pacing keeps the tension and the momentum building. The main characters are well-developed, and the protagonist's internal struggles add depth to the story. Unfortunately,  the villain is known from the beginning, reprehensible but cliched and predictable, which does detract from the suspense.  Also, the author's political views work their way into the characters and dialogue but don't seem to add to the narrative.

At times, I felt this to be a book geared for a younger reader. I only later discovered that the author is a young adult genre writer. Despite this, "You Shouldn’t Be Here" delivers an edge-of-your-sea, page-turner read with enough suspense to keep you hooked. A plus with the setting near Philadelphia, which brings along a few Wawa, Phillies, and Eagles references.

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Reviewed in the United States on August 7, 2024
I loved this thriller for more than its plot. The references to my home state and old stomping grounds tugged at my heart strings. Not to mention, I'm a teacher who bought a Honda Fit as her first car. Lol.

Beyond my personal attachments, this book was fast paced, engaging, and played with a small aspect of science fiction. The blurbs at the beginning of every chapter were an inventive way to provide character development, especially of our most unsavory character, Doug Raymond.

The plot itsself is good but as a reader, i had suspicians of the twists long before they were revealed. I enjoyed the development of romantic vs. friend relationships that shapes the movement of this story.

Would I recommend this book to anyone? Definitely an 8 or 9 out of 10 for me!
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Top reviews from other countries

Louise
4.0 out of 5 stars Great book
Reviewed in Canada on July 27, 2024
This book kept me guessing
Cara
4.0 out of 5 stars A ghost story with a twist
Reviewed in the United Kingdom on August 25, 2024
This was a well written story with developed characters and a plot that kept me guessing all the way through. It had an interesting twist and enough depth to make it a really enjoyable read overall. There were some parts where I felt the humour was at odds with the serious elements of the story but this would be my only criticism.
E who Reads a Thousand Mysteries
5.0 out of 5 stars Fascinating!
Reviewed in Canada on August 3, 2024
This vibrant, exciting tale grabbed my attention right away, while the intricate detail of the mystery is highly entertaining and ultra realistic.
Jin
5.0 out of 5 stars Good read
Reviewed in the United Kingdom on September 5, 2024
This book is well written and keeps you entertained, it has likeable characters and good storyline which comes to a satisfying conclusion
Amazon Customer
5.0 out of 5 stars Enjooyable
Reviewed in Australia on September 14, 2024
Great book.

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