The early user ratings for "What Alice Found" baffle me. The pace was so slow that counting ceiling tiles seemed interesting to several people in the audience-- instead of capturing our attention, then telling the story visually we were treated to a shot of uninteresting scenery, then of vehicles in parking lots, of people walking, of vehicles on the road, of anything handy that could be used to fill up time, then a tiny slice of the story, and back to the fillers. Hidden inside this feature was a great story, but why was it hidden? Paced properly this would have made the basis for an interesting short, and if some of the conflicts had been explored, and the characters allowed to evolve, the story could have served as the foundation of a good, quirkily presented offbeat feature length movie.
The pace was slow and there was too much padding, but even so, there is no excuse for flat, uninteresting lighting. DV does not mean boring images, and to shoot in DV requires the same care and finesse in lighting as any other motion picture image, but it sure didn't get it here. A fill light, a high kicker, a touch of sparkle light in the eyes, anything to enhance the skin tones, and the audience would have forgiven the lower image detail. Lighting is a good thing no matter if you are shooting DV or film, but it was neglected in this feature. Even if you wanted flat, uninteresting lighting for some reason, thirty dollars worth of ND film on the RV windows would have kept the background from overpowering the foreground so badly that the compromise degraded the viewer's attempt to see nuances of the performance.
Assuming you slide past the slow pace and extraneous shots, then squeeze by the flat lighting, you trip over focus and depth of field. Repeatedly the camera is not focused on the subject or point of interest, but someplace else, as if the camera operator either forgot or just didn't care where he was focused at that moment. When the buildings outside the RV are sharp and clearly defined, but the actors involved in the action taking place inside the RV are out of focus, something is wrong, because if the point of focus does not include the main action the scene simply does not work. Sometimes the depth of field was too great, and the background intruded on the action; sometimes it was too shallow, and not enough was in apparent focus at a given moment to look real. I could not accept that as an artistic choice as it plainly did not fit the story or action. Focus, point of focus, and depth of field are vital to each scene.
After you slide by the pace, squeeze by the lighting (or lack of it), and trip over the focus issues, you find yourself confronted with underdeveloped characters. No, they were not the most undeveloped characters in the history of cinema, they were ninety percent developed-- but they need that final ten percent to come to life. Alice had a life that was more boring than anything else, but there was no real cumulating of events or a triggering factor worthy of her sudden and drastic action. Maybe the supporting roles could be allowed to remain more two dimensional (although I feel it is better if they, too, are fully realized), but the protagonist should be fully developed, three dimensional, and each action should be based on cause, reason, and must be believable. Yes, being bored is bad, being unhappy is, to state the obvious, being unhappy, but there was not enough demonstrated cause for Alice's action to trigger the trip, and no arc to show why she made the choices she chose during her time in the RV. The character was somewhat too shallow.
Emily Grace may be a very good actress, but given only the role of a bored, unmotivated, semi impulsive young woman "without too many smarts" to play here, then put into a flatly lit, frequently improperly shot scene, you really cannot tell if she was brilliantly defining the role as it was presented to her, or if she was struggling to find the character, too.
Many, many of the right ingredients, but the wrong mix, prepared wrong, an edible meal, but not a gourmet feast.
And that's the pity. .