Script is ok, but . . . The valid obvious, which is super reasonable is not delivered with credibility. Then the 'smudge' scene - makes it uber lame and super cheap. Then the story dialogue gets even more weak - but I get it at the same time - horrible delivery. And then super ultra tacky, and not even good tacky. At the same time, the intention is so there - and not sure how or what it would take to authentically unveil the talent that seems stifled. The dream thing at about the 12 minute mark was redonkulously horrible, and then shifts downwards to bad cheese and I think I am falling asleep now.