Latest comment: 1 month ago1 comment1 person in discussion
Hi,
Really interesting topic you've taken on!!
I've had a look at the 2023 attempt and feel there is plenty room for improvement. After reading the old chapter, my advice would be to knock-down and rebuild the structure. There's a massive chunk of unnecessary information regarding definitions of 'Violent Crime'. Obviously, a definition should be set. However, 779 words dedicated to such a definition is overkill.
Additionally, I'd recommend seeking further resources and including references throughout the chapter. In text citation is sorely neglected by the 2023 version.
Anyway, best of luck! I'm sure you'll do a great job :)
Latest comment: 12 days ago1 comment1 person in discussion
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Consider linking to your eportfolio page and/or any other professional online profile or resume such as LinkedIn. This is not required, but it can be useful to interlink your professional networks.
None summarised on user page with direct link(s) to evidence. This was explained in Tutorial 03. Looking ahead to the book chapter submission, see social contributions.