Talk:USS Yancey/GA1
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GA Review
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Below is my review:
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose):
b (MoS):
- Something is not right here: 'The cargo ship sailed with three other transports and a pair of screening destroyers Saipan and then to Espiritu Santo'. Or maybe it is right but confusing.
- There was a missing to: now reads …sailed with three other transports and a pair of screening destroyers to Saipan… — Bellhalla (talk) 13:21, 19 April 2009 (UTC)
- Something is not right here: 'The cargo ship sailed with three other transports and a pair of screening destroyers Saipan and then to Espiritu Santo'. Or maybe it is right but confusing.
- a (prose):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars etc.:
- No edit wars etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
- In general, the article is very well written. Thanks - DSachan (talk) 10:38, 19 April 2009 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. — Bellhalla (talk) 13:21, 19 April 2009 (UTC)