Talk:Mario Cárdenas Guillén
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Reorganization needed
[edit]This biography, as it is written, is very confusing. Typically, Wikipedia biographies go in standard chronological order:
- Introduction
- Early Years
- Career
- Later Career (in this case, Arrest)
- Personal Life
- Any other previously unmentioned details (like the aftermath of the arrest or death, if that had occurred)
This one is all over the map, beginning right into the middle of his life to his arrest then backing up to talk about his early life and then going to the middle. Then, his personal life is mentioned and THEN background for the whole bio is provided.
This needs someone with an extra hour on their hands and some knowledge of the subject to sort out. 69.125.134.86 (talk) 12:41, 16 July 2013 (UTC)
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