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That's all. [[User:WikiOriginal-9|<span style="color: blue">'''''~WikiOriginal-9~'''''</span>]] ([[User talk:WikiOriginal-9|<span style="color: blue">'''talk'''</span>]]) 14:44, 18 October 2024 (UTC) |
That's all. [[User:WikiOriginal-9|<span style="color: blue">'''''~WikiOriginal-9~'''''</span>]] ([[User talk:WikiOriginal-9|<span style="color: blue">'''talk'''</span>]]) 14:44, 18 October 2024 (UTC) |
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* {{ping|WikiOriginal-9}} [[User:BeanieFan11|BeanieFan11]] ([[User talk:BeanieFan11|talk]]) 23:38, 19 October 2024 (UTC) |
* {{ping|WikiOriginal-9}} [[User:BeanieFan11|BeanieFan11]] ([[User talk:BeanieFan11|talk]]) 23:38, 19 October 2024 (UTC) |
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Latest revision as of 23:52, 19 October 2024
GA Review
[edit]The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 02:02, 18 October 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 14:44, 18 October 2024 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
- Added cats
- "Mary Ann Hitchens (born 1944 or 1945)" Remove the ref from the lead. Her birth year should be cited in the body.
- Moved to body.
- Link basketball in lead I guess.
- Linked.
- Link softball in body.
- Linked.
- "Hitchens began serving as a teacher, the women's basketball and field hockey coach at Springer Junior High School in 1967" I had to read this sentence twice. Change to "In 1967, Hitchens began serving as a teacher as well as the women's basketball and field hockey coach at Springer Junior High School"
- Changed.
- "was named the ECC of the year" Is that supposed to say coach of the year or something?
- Oops – fixed.
- Maybe add a little bit to the lead.
- Expanded – does that look alright?
- Two of the infobox highlight links are misleading. There are not articles for the Delaware Fightin' Blue Hens HOF or the ECAC HOF.
- Delinked UD HoF – delinked 'hall of fame' from the ECAC although I kept ECAC linked.
- Change infobox highlight to "University of Delaware Athletics Hall of Fame" since that's what the body calls it.
- Changed.
That's all. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 14:44, 18 October 2024 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.