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I'm passing this article, as I think it meets all the criteria. I was concerned about the prose, but on a closer look, the prose itself is fine. The article layout and flow needs some work though, and parts of it feel like choppy sentences tossed together randomly, especially near the end. I'll also point out "Drumming ability and appreciation" does not mention any examples of his ability being dismissed (except for Lennon's joke), which would be fine if no one has dismissed it, but the first sentence of the section says that someone has. Tuf-Kat (talk) 02:06, 14 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]

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