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Gira Sarabhai

Gira Sarabhai in 1951
Gira Sarabhai in 1951

Moved to mainspace by Kill joyarchivist (talk). Nominated by KCVelaga (talk) at 13:03, 26 March 2021 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough

Policy compliance:

  • Adequate sourcing: No - "She lives in Ahmedabad, Gujarat" is unsourced
  • Neutral: No - "one couldn't place a nail where it was not meant to be" is a strange phrase and currently presented in wiki-voice. Is that a quote from Shinde?
  • Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing: No - The third paragraph of "National Institute of Design" is a copyvio, see Earwig. This paragraph will need to be rewritten significantly
  • Other problems: No - there are multiple "clarification needed" tags within the article that will need to be resolved before this can be approved

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited: No - Need an inline citation directly after the hook sentence within the article (first sentence of "National Institute of Design"
  • Interesting: Yes

Image eligibility:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: @KCVelaga: see above, couple issues to resolve. I left a "?" on the image because it's kind of small at 100px, but I will approve it once the other issues are fixed and the promoter can decide whether to use it. I think the hook could be rewritten as "... that Gira Sarabhai (pictured) and her brother Gautam were crucial in the formation of the National Institute of Design in Ahmedabad?" DanCherek (talk) 03:40, 12 April 2021 (UTC)

@DanCherek: Hi, thanks for the review. I am actually helping a new user to get this through, and the clarification needed tags were actually placed by me :) Since it is not me directly editing, it might take a little more time than usual. I am also quite busy now, so I will get back to you on this by the end of next week. KCVelaga (talk) 17:00, 12 April 2021 (UTC)
Admirable work, thanks! Take your time, I'll be around. DanCherek (talk) 17:05, 12 April 2021 (UTC)