User contributions for LrdDimwit

25 December 2022

• 13:1213:12, 25 December 2022 diff hist −10‎ m Raven of the Inner Palace ‎ →Characters: for great grammar

20 December 2022

• 22:4222:42, 20 December 2022 diff hist +3‎ m Jack Youngblood ‎ →Acting and broadcasting: for great grammar
• 06:4506:45, 20 December 2022 diff hist −13‎ m The Winds of Winter ‎ tweak wording

10 December 2022

• 00:4700:47, 10 December 2022 diff hist +2‎ m Pedro Castillo ‎ For great grammar. Allegations, plural. Involvement, singular.

27 November 2022

• 00:1800:18, 27 November 2022 diff hist −7‎ m Twin paradox ‎ for great grammar

10 November 2022

• 21:0821:08, 10 November 2022 diff hist −25‎ m Xanth ‎ department of redundancy division

23 October 2022

• 20:0920:09, 23 October 2022 diff hist −2‎ m Wirecard scandal ‎ for great grammar: verb necessary

22 October 2022

• 12:1812:18, 22 October 2022 diff hist −224‎ m Care Bears Movie II: A New Generation ‎ →Home media: NPOV and/or original research. Marketing pablum is no more false advertising than a Hallmark greeting card saying "Best mom ever"! is a lie. If a court found this was false advertising, cite that. Citing the back of the box and leaping to 'false advertising' is original research and has NPOV problems.

18 October 2022

• 20:1120:11, 18 October 2022 diff hist −15‎ m Urawa no Usagi-chan ‎ department of redundancy division

17 October 2022

• 04:5004:50, 17 October 2022 diff hist +17‎ m Mass Effect ‎ for great grammar

15 October 2022

• 17:2617:26, 15 October 2022 diff hist +4‎ m Mad Max (2015 video game) ‎ →Development: for great grammar

7 October 2022

• 08:4308:43, 7 October 2022 diff hist −3‎ m Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles: Mutants in Manhattan ‎ →Gameplay: wrong word

22 September 2022

• 23:1223:12, 22 September 2022 diff hist −21‎ m Bannack, Montana ‎ →Bannack Days: Department of redundancy division

7 September 2022

• 08:0708:07, 7 September 2022 diff hist +2‎ m Gold Reserve Act ‎ →Roles of the FRS and Treasury: for great grammar

6 August 2022

• 20:4620:46, 6 August 2022 diff hist −1‎ m Chiong murder case ‎ →Prosecution: pretty serious typo

25 July 2022

• 19:1819:18, 25 July 2022 diff hist +1‎ m Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles ‎ →Video games: for great grammar

24 July 2022

• 12:0912:09, 24 July 2022 diff hist +4‎ m What Remains of Edith Finch ‎ →Development: that is not the word that you are looking for. you can go on about your business.

16 July 2022

• 20:5620:56, 16 July 2022 diff hist −18‎ m Urawa no Usagi-chan ‎ →Anime: Time marches on

4 July 2022

• 09:2809:28, 4 July 2022 diff hist +11‎ m OneCoin ‎ For great grammar. The immediately preceding sentence (and the cite) say she disappeared; "has not" refers to the conjunction of "disappeared or been arrested". She has not been arrested, but she HAS disappeared.

3 July 2022

• 06:4106:41, 3 July 2022 diff hist −6‎ m Barbados 4–2 Grenada ‎ →Match: grammar tweak

29 June 2022

• 19:3019:30, 29 June 2022 diff hist +7‎ m Neversoft ‎ for great grammar
• 04:1304:13, 29 June 2022 diff hist +9‎ m Kyoto Animation arson attack ‎ →Measures to prevent recurrence: To "come into force" is to make following mandatory; to "enforce" is to punish a violation of

7 June 2022

• 21:5721:57, 7 June 2022 diff hist +20‎ m Monster Musume ‎ →Volume list: Who let Okabe Rintarou edit Wikipedia?

5 June 2022

• 01:0801:08, 5 June 2022 diff hist 0‎ m Cooper's Hill Cheese-Rolling and Wake ‎ →History: for great grammar

1 June 2022

• 09:3709:37, 1 June 2022 diff hist +1‎ m Shoichi Yokoi ‎ for great grammar

28 May 2022

• 01:2001:20, 28 May 2022 diff hist −3‎ m Timothy Dexter ‎ →Biography: nit picky grammar tweak

20 May 2022

• 23:5823:58, 20 May 2022 diff hist −1‎ m Hanna-Barbera ‎ for great grammar

11 May 2022

• 05:5305:53, 11 May 2022 diff hist −5‎ m Dead Hand ‎ →System concept: for great grammar

30 April 2022

• 00:3700:37, 30 April 2022 diff hist +2‎ m Mass Effect ‎ For great grammar. "with" implies a connection between game 4 and game 5's development, which is technically wrong (game 5 is not DLC for game 4).

29 April 2022

• 02:1202:12, 29 April 2022 diff hist −9‎ m J. S. G. Boggs ‎ →Legality and arrests

28 April 2022

• 20:3120:31, 28 April 2022 diff hist −4‎ m Pee-wee Herman ‎ →Pee-wee's Playhouse: The Movie
• 20:2920:29, 28 April 2022 diff hist −2‎ m Pee-wee Herman ‎ →Appearances and television returns: for great grammar

19 April 2022

• 19:1819:18, 19 April 2022 diff hist +5‎ m Hannibal Buress ‎ →Bill Cosby routine: Technically this was grammatically correct before, but it *looked* wrong, so much so it was distracting. My general approach in such cases is reword anyway.

17 April 2022

• 07:4507:45, 17 April 2022 diff hist −3‎ m Persona 3 ‎ →Development: for great grammar
• 04:3504:35, 17 April 2022 diff hist +4‎ m Osborne effect ‎No edit summary

13 April 2022

• 09:0309:03, 13 April 2022 diff hist +8‎ m Joseph Burstyn, Inc. v. Wilson ‎ →Background: avoid starting two sentences in a row with 'however'
• 09:0109:01, 13 April 2022 diff hist +7‎ m Superman ‎ this word better captures the intended meaning
• 08:5908:59, 13 April 2022 diff hist −8‎ m Lex Luthor ‎ →Post-Crisis: for great grammar
• 08:5808:58, 13 April 2022 diff hist 0‎ m Lex Luthor ‎ →Post-Crisis: for great grammar
• 08:5308:53, 13 April 2022 diff hist −3‎ m Lex Luthor ‎ →52: for great grammar
• 08:5208:52, 13 April 2022 diff hist +10‎ m Lex Luthor ‎ →Revised backstory and removal from office: for great grammar
• 07:4207:42, 13 April 2022 diff hist +8‎ m Stan Lee ‎ →Victim of elder abuse: the ruling was "issued against" him because it is presumably one he opposed and did not desire

11 April 2022

• 03:1103:11, 11 April 2022 diff hist +4‎ m Matal v. Tam ‎ →Dissent by Judge Reyna: for great grammar
• 03:1003:10, 11 April 2022 diff hist 0‎ m Matal v. Tam ‎ →Government subsidy: for great grammar
• 03:0803:08, 11 April 2022 diff hist −132‎ Matal v. Tam ‎ →Viewpoint-based and content-based discrimination: In addition to being grammatically suspect, this is also wrong. It isn't automatic. It's close, but not quite.

10 April 2022

• 23:2323:23, 10 April 2022 diff hist 0‎ m Level-5 (company) ‎ for great grammar

8 April 2022

• 02:2202:22, 8 April 2022 diff hist −1‎ m Saitō Hajime ‎ for great grammar

5 April 2022

• 05:0705:07, 5 April 2022 diff hist −3‎ m Mega Man 11 ‎ →Plot: for great grammar

21 March 2022

• 23:1723:17, 21 March 2022 diff hist −10‎ m Saitō Hajime ‎ →Saitō in fiction: for great grammar

16 March 2022

• 09:2609:26, 16 March 2022 diff hist −4‎ m Blast Factor ‎ for great grammar