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Air-cushion supported Mega-Floaters are mega floaters that are supported by an air cushion. They were invented by Jan Van Kessel of TU Delft. |
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It would be better to just say: Air-cushion supported Mega-Floaters were invented by Jan Van Kessel of TU Delft. |
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The first sentence is 100% redundant and doesn't provide meaningful information. Maybe if it were describing their operation or providing additional information, but it's just restating the same thing twice. |
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Iceberg aircraft carrier
Doesn't Project Habakkuk, the British plan to build a huge iceberg-like floating aircraft platform to base in the Mid-Atlantic to fight U-boats during WWII, count as a variation of a VLFS? Or does the fact that it's made from ice mean it can't count as a "structure". It's made by man, out of a mixture of ice and wood pulp called Pykrete, so it's not naturally occurring. And I recall it being pretty big....45Colt 09:30, 9 November 2015 (UTC)
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Poorly Worded Section
This bit here:
Air-cushion supported Mega-Floaters are mega floaters that are supported by an air cushion. They were invented by Jan Van Kessel of TU Delft.
It would be better to just say: Air-cushion supported Mega-Floaters were invented by Jan Van Kessel of TU Delft.
The first sentence is 100% redundant and doesn't provide meaningful information. Maybe if it were describing their operation or providing additional information, but it's just restating the same thing twice.