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One change that I am going to add into this is going to be adding in am article/source about Nex Benedict. I want to add something that will make the audience think hard about when they are talking about sexuality. The whole story behind this is because that teenage girl died from her peers bullying her because of the pronouns that she used. Another thing that I am going to use is outdates information in this article. I think it is information from years ago when it should be stuff from the years of 2022-2024. I want to make the article longer because it isn't that long to begin with and the changes that the LGBTQ+ community has had over the years is a lot. Another thing that I would like to do is add more pictures. I mean the article does not have a single picture in it and adding it would make a difference. With the picture though I think i'm going to add something realistic and something sad to make the audience feel some way. These additions will for sure help because it will add more context to the term sexuality and how broad it is. |
One change that I am going to add into this is going to be adding in am article/source about Nex Benedict. I want to add something that will make the audience think hard about when they are talking about sexuality. The whole story behind this is because that teenage girl died from her peers bullying her because of the pronouns that she used. Another thing that I am going to use is outdates information in this article. I think it is information from years ago when it should be stuff from the years of 2022-2024. I want to make the article longer because it isn't that long to begin with and the changes that the LGBTQ+ community has had over the years is a lot. Another thing that I would like to do is add more pictures. I mean the article does not have a single picture in it and adding it would make a difference. With the picture though I think i'm going to add something realistic and something sad to make the audience feel some way. These additions will for sure help because it will add more context to the term sexuality and how broad it is. |
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To improve this article I would impose some of these changes. I would go through and correct some grammatical errors in the article because as I went through reading I saw some misspellings and small mistakes that can improve the article overall. I also would add more detail to the history of the rights surrounding the LGBTQ+ community what has changed over the years and how they came about because so far in my research I’ve seen that a lot of rights were already in place because of rights that applied to straight people they just eventually allowed it to apply to everyone across the diaspora due to different movements and cases that were brought up concerning the issue. Along with this, I would like to talk about some other aspects of sexuality and how it affects people of different races, ages, and genders differently where it concerns sexuality. This is because I know that many different cultures accept these things easier, they might learn more one way or the other. Why it might’ve taken so long for some of these rights to come into play and how this might look different for everyone in the LGBTQ+ community and give a more individualized feel in the article instead of generalizing everything like this article is doing. I also thought that something that would be beneficial is to delete some of those filler sentences and paragraphs and maybe fill them with some current events, figures, or interviews that could spice the article up a bit to give it more of a modern feel and not a long drawn out history book and legal work. Also to add to that modern feel I would finally add some more visual components for the visual learners out there like me. While making sure to add and cite some credible sources as I go along. |
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Latest revision as of 20:28, 3 October 2024
You will be compiling your bibliography and creating an outline of the changes you will make in this sandbox.
 | Bibliography
As you gather the sources for your Wikipedia contribution, think about the following:
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Bibliography
[edit]Edit this section to compile the bibliography for your Wikipedia assignment. Add the name and/or notes about what each source covers, then use the "Cite" button to generate the citation for that source.[1]
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Tushnet, M., & Garrow, D. J. (1995). Liberty and Sexuality: The Right to Privacy and the Making of Roe v. Wade. The Journal of Interdisciplinary History, 26(2), 356. https://doi.org/10.2307/206671
Citron, D. K. (n.d.). Sexual privacy. DigitalCommons@UM Carey Law. https://digitalcommons.law.umaryland.edu/fac_pubs/1600/#:~:text=Sexual%20privacy%20is%20a%20distinct,for%20sexual%20autonomy%20and%20consent.
Amnesty International. (2024, August 23). LGBT rights - Amnesty International. https://www.amnesty.org/en/what-we-do/discrimination/lgbti-rights/
UN makes history on sexual orientation, gender identity. (2023, August 2). Human Rights Watch. https://www.hrw.org/news/2016/06/30/un-makes-history-sexual-orientation-gender-identity?gad_source=1&gclid=Cj0KCQjwjNS3BhChARIsAOxBM6puOAgLe7evfvo1qRwX-5HyLqHXYcde4esa_uTIquYpxO_uqSUy7OgaAuqcEALw_wcB
Sexual Orientation and Gender Identity (SOGI) discrimination. (n.d.). US EEOC. https://www.eeoc.gov/sexual-orientation-and-gender-identity-sogi-discrimination
References
[edit]- ^ Mandler, C (march 22, 2024 10:25 am). "What happened to nex Benedict?".
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Outline of proposed changes
[edit]Click on the edit button to draft your outline.
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In this section, write up a concise outline of how the sources you've identified will add relevant information to your chosen article. Be sure to discuss what content gap your additions tackle and how these additions will improve the article's quality. Consider other changes you'll make to the article, including possible deletions of irrelevant, outdated, or incorrect information, restructuring of the article to improve its readability or any other change you plan on making. This is your chance to really think about how your proposed additions will improve your chosen article and to vet your sources even further. Note: This is not a draft. This is an outline/plan where you can think about how the sources you've identified will fill in a content gap. |
One change that I am going to add into this is going to be adding in am article/source about Nex Benedict. I want to add something that will make the audience think hard about when they are talking about sexuality. The whole story behind this is because that teenage girl died from her peers bullying her because of the pronouns that she used. Another thing that I am going to use is outdates information in this article. I think it is information from years ago when it should be stuff from the years of 2022-2024. I want to make the article longer because it isn't that long to begin with and the changes that the LGBTQ+ community has had over the years is a lot. Another thing that I would like to do is add more pictures. I mean the article does not have a single picture in it and adding it would make a difference. With the picture though I think i'm going to add something realistic and something sad to make the audience feel some way. These additions will for sure help because it will add more context to the term sexuality and how broad it is.
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To improve this article I would impose some of these changes. I would go through and correct some grammatical errors in the article because as I went through reading I saw some misspellings and small mistakes that can improve the article overall. I also would add more detail to the history of the rights surrounding the LGBTQ+ community what has changed over the years and how they came about because so far in my research I’ve seen that a lot of rights were already in place because of rights that applied to straight people they just eventually allowed it to apply to everyone across the diaspora due to different movements and cases that were brought up concerning the issue. Along with this, I would like to talk about some other aspects of sexuality and how it affects people of different races, ages, and genders differently where it concerns sexuality. This is because I know that many different cultures accept these things easier, they might learn more one way or the other. Why it might’ve taken so long for some of these rights to come into play and how this might look different for everyone in the LGBTQ+ community and give a more individualized feel in the article instead of generalizing everything like this article is doing. I also thought that something that would be beneficial is to delete some of those filler sentences and paragraphs and maybe fill them with some current events, figures, or interviews that could spice the article up a bit to give it more of a modern feel and not a long drawn out history book and legal work. Also to add to that modern feel I would finally add some more visual components for the visual learners out there like me. While making sure to add and cite some credible sources as I go along.