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Hi. I know you're also familiar with ''[[Resident Evil]]'' and are also a fan of it (like me) since I'm pretty sure [[User:Homeostasis07|Homeostasis07]] is already inactive. I wish that the character in the future will be FA like Jill, but its harder than I expected. Would you be able to check if the reception section at the [[Ada Wong]] article reads fine for you? (I am not native in English unfortunately and I was told to rewrite at first FAC before it was closed as unsuccessful. 🍕[[User:Boneless Pizza!|<span style="background:orange;border-radius:9999px;padding:1px 8px;color:white;"><span style="font-weight:bold">Boneless</span> Pizza!</span>]]🍕 ([[User talk:Boneless Pizza!|🔔]]) 03:19, 19 August 2024 (UTC)
Hi. I know you're also familiar with ''[[Resident Evil]]'' and are also a fan of it (like me) since I'm pretty sure [[User:Homeostasis07|Homeostasis07]] is already inactive. I wish that the character in the future will be FA like Jill, but its harder than I expected. Would you be able to check if the reception section at the [[Ada Wong]] article reads fine for you? (I am not native in English unfortunately and I was told to rewrite at first FAC before it was closed as unsuccessful. 🍕[[User:Boneless Pizza!|<span style="background:orange;border-radius:9999px;padding:1px 8px;color:white;"><span style="font-weight:bold">Boneless</span> Pizza!</span>]]🍕 ([[User talk:Boneless Pizza!|🔔]]) 03:19, 19 August 2024 (UTC)
*I can have a look, sure. &nbsp;—&nbsp;[[User:Crisco 1492|Chris Woodrich]] ([[User talk:Crisco 1492|talk]]) 11:38, 19 August 2024 (UTC)
*I can have a look, sure. &nbsp;—&nbsp;[[User:Crisco 1492|Chris Woodrich]] ([[User talk:Crisco 1492|talk]]) 11:38, 19 August 2024 (UTC)

*Hi [[User:Boneless Pizza!]], a couple comments:
:*"Later ports of ''Resident Evil 4'' include a new scenario featuring Ada as the playable character." - The average reader is not going to know that the game was originally released for GameCube, and that this began with the PS2 port. Is it worth clarifying?
:*asymmetric online multiplayer game ''[[Dead by Daylight]]'' (2016) as a playable character - Might be worth a footnote indicating that she was added with a later DLC; she hasn't been available since 2016, only 2022.
:*You mention ''[[Resident Evil: The Darkside Chronicles]]'' (and ''[[Resident Evil: The Umbrella Chronicles]]'' is mentioned in the timeline), but the average reader is not going to know that these were retellings of the original scenarios; it may be worth mentioning that the events of ''2'' and ''4'' were revisited in these games.
:*Are there any sources that compare/contrast Ada's experiences in the original releases of ''2'' and ''4'' with the remakes? You mention the trenchcoat, but off the top of my head there's also the section where Ada has to unlock the door with her gadget.
:*On Leon and Ada's relationship, is the section where she tends to his wound mentioned in any sources? She's manipulative, yes, but she does have actions that aren't necessarily furthering her goals. Overall, I'm wondering if their relationship could be fleshed out more, especially since you mention that she's been criticized for having no other development.
:*It surprises me that the sources identifying Ada as feeding the male gaze don't mention her [[cheongsam]]. I'd expect the fetishization of Chinese culture implicit there to have been mentioned.
:*Has anyone drawn parallels between/contrasted Ada and Fong Ling from ''Resident Evil: Dead Aim''?
:*Are there any reliable sources dealing with fan response, aside from the review bombing of the ''4'' remake? &nbsp;—&nbsp;[[User:Crisco 1492|Chris Woodrich]] ([[User talk:Crisco 1492|talk]]) 12:18, 19 August 2024 (UTC)

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Wikiproject

Hi, I see you've contributed a lot to Lenong, would you be interested in joining a wikiproject on oral tradition? Kowal2701 (talk) 18:32, 25 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Happy 19th First Edit Day, Chris!

August music

story · music · places

Today I have three "musicians" on the Main page, one is also the topic of my story, like 22 July but with interview and the music to be played today -- Gerda Arendt (talk) 15:04, 8 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

On 13 August, Bach's cantata was 300 years old, and the image one. The cantata is an extrordinary piece, using the chorale's text and famous melody more than others in the cycle. It's nice to have not only a recent death, but also this "birthday" on the Main page. And a rainbow in my places. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:59, 13 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

DYK for H. Wortman Pumping Station

On 13 August 2024, Did you know was updated with a fact from the article H. Wortman Pumping Station, which you recently created, substantially expanded, or brought to good article status. The fact was ... that the H. Wortman Pumping Station has four pumps, but is only used in exceptional circumstances? The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/H. Wortman Pumping Station. You are welcome to check how many pageviews the nominated article or articles got while on the front page (here's how, H. Wortman Pumping Station), and the hook may be added to the statistics page after its run on the Main Page has completed. Finally, if you know of an interesting fact from another recently created article, then please feel free to suggest it on the Did you know talk page.

RoySmith (talk) 00:03, 13 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Question

Hi. I know you're also familiar with Resident Evil and are also a fan of it (like me) since I'm pretty sure Homeostasis07 is already inactive. I wish that the character in the future will be FA like Jill, but its harder than I expected. Would you be able to check if the reception section at the Ada Wong article reads fine for you? (I am not native in English unfortunately and I was told to rewrite at first FAC before it was closed as unsuccessful. 🍕Boneless Pizza!🍕 (🔔) 03:19, 19 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

  • "Later ports of Resident Evil 4 include a new scenario featuring Ada as the playable character." - The average reader is not going to know that the game was originally released for GameCube, and that this began with the PS2 port. Is it worth clarifying?
  • asymmetric online multiplayer game Dead by Daylight (2016) as a playable character - Might be worth a footnote indicating that she was added with a later DLC; she hasn't been available since 2016, only 2022.
  • You mention Resident Evil: The Darkside Chronicles (and Resident Evil: The Umbrella Chronicles is mentioned in the timeline), but the average reader is not going to know that these were retellings of the original scenarios; it may be worth mentioning that the events of 2 and 4 were revisited in these games.
  • Are there any sources that compare/contrast Ada's experiences in the original releases of 2 and 4 with the remakes? You mention the trenchcoat, but off the top of my head there's also the section where Ada has to unlock the door with her gadget.
  • On Leon and Ada's relationship, is the section where she tends to his wound mentioned in any sources? She's manipulative, yes, but she does have actions that aren't necessarily furthering her goals. Overall, I'm wondering if their relationship could be fleshed out more, especially since you mention that she's been criticized for having no other development.
  • It surprises me that the sources identifying Ada as feeding the male gaze don't mention her cheongsam. I'd expect the fetishization of Chinese culture implicit there to have been mentioned.
  • Has anyone drawn parallels between/contrasted Ada and Fong Ling from Resident Evil: Dead Aim?
  • Are there any reliable sources dealing with fan response, aside from the review bombing of the 4 remake?  — Chris Woodrich (talk) 12:18, 19 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]