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::::The source from the publishing house of the same university she was a professor at which focuses on her academic career, is what we should use to determine [[WP:DUE]]? There is a journal article and books which mention her political career/views only, should we forget about those now? [[User:Mellk|Mellk]] ([[User talk:Mellk|talk]]) 15:29, 25 July 2024 (UTC) |
::::The source from the publishing house of the same university she was a professor at which focuses on her academic career, is what we should use to determine [[WP:DUE]]? There is a journal article and books which mention her political career/views only, should we forget about those now? [[User:Mellk|Mellk]] ([[User talk:Mellk|talk]]) 15:29, 25 July 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::The content in the diffs provided by ManyAreasExpert definitely looks like it was appropriately removed by Mellk. In addition to unsourced and promotional content, I would also note that YouTube is not an academic source, and books and blog posts written by the article subject are not helpful citations, especially when misleadingly cited as references for claims about the significance of her work. Mellk has done a great job expanding the article with a lot of useful, well-sourced information, IMO. – [[User:Notwally|notwally]] ([[User talk:Notwally|talk]]) 15:38, 25 July 2024 (UTC) |
:::::The content in the diffs provided by ManyAreasExpert definitely looks like it was appropriately removed by Mellk. In addition to unsourced and promotional content, I would also note that YouTube is not an academic source, and books and blog posts written by the article subject are not helpful citations, especially when misleadingly cited as references for claims about the significance of her work. Mellk has done a great job expanding the article with a lot of useful, well-sourced information, IMO. – [[User:Notwally|notwally]] ([[User talk:Notwally|talk]]) 15:38, 25 July 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::{{tq|1=There is a journal article and books which mention her political career/views only}}<br>If they would talk about the person in length. Those which were presented so far only mention her in passing. What is there which is not included into our article, yet?{{pb}}[[:uk:Тимошик_Микола_Степанович|Тимошик Микола Степанович — Вікіпедія (wikipedia.org)]] who is the author of the summary is not related to her university. [[User:Manyareasexpert|ManyAreasExpert]] ([[User talk:Manyareasexpert|talk]]) 15:39, 25 July 2024 (UTC) |
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Major Revision
This article really needs a major revision. I mean, "bogus Ukrainian philology", "openly Nazist All-Ukrainian Union "Svoboda"", "...a Candidate of..."? It looks like a pro-Russian sabotaged this article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 93.73.13.209 (talk) 22:02, 26 October 2014 (UTC)
- So I reverted the article to the way it was before the sabotage and I fixed some grammar errors. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 93.73.13.209 (talk) 22:09, 26 October 2014 (UTC)
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Youtube and other non-RSs
Greegints @JnpoJuwan, not sure if your edit [1] returning non-RSs was an edit conflict? ManyAreasExpert (talk) 23:05, 19 July 2024 (UTC)
- there was an edit conflict that I tried to resolve, the YouTube links were there when I first edited it. please feel free to fix it! Juwan (talk) 23:20, 19 July 2024 (UTC)
Nationalist
"Nationalist" does not inform the reader well enough that she held extreme nationalistic views. NYT and Kyiv Independent for example says "far-right". Mellk (talk) 16:56, 20 July 2024 (UTC)
- "Iryna Farion's extreme nationalist views have long made the Lviv linguist and Svoboda [Freedom] Party politician a controversial figure."[2]
- "Due to her radical position on the Russian language, Farion has repeatedly found herself in scandals and earned a reputation as a radical nationalist, especially among Russian-speaking Ukrainians."[3]
- As a senior member of Svoboda, she also admired figures such as Dontsov and Bandera: "... the leadership of the party, including Tiahnybok, Iryna Farion, and Iurii Mykhailyshyn, admire Donstov and share his anti-Semitic and fascistic views."[4]
- Mellk (talk) 17:01, 20 July 2024 (UTC)
- I suggest adding that to the article body first. ManyAreasExpert (talk) 17:14, 20 July 2024 (UTC)
- For example, the recent article from BBC Покушение на Украину. Что убитая Ирина Фарион значила для воюющей страны - BBC News Русская служба only reaches to say "radicalism in rhetorics". It looks like her profile should be written per academic sources available, attributed.Guess what! Academic sources admire her academic contributions. ManyAreasExpert (talk) 19:45, 20 July 2024 (UTC)
- I think that instead of using labels one should simply say what she is known for, or what exactly her political views were. She is mostly known for being vehemently opposed to using Russian language in Ukraine, while being herself a linguist. That needs to be said rather than just saying a "nationalist", which is just a meaningless label. My very best wishes (talk) 02:53, 25 July 2024 (UTC)
- So the sources are wrong for calling her nationalist/ultranationalist? "Nationalist" is also not a contentious label. Is referring to members of socialist parties as "socialist" derogatory or meaningless too, especially if they are known for this? Mellk (talk) 03:28, 25 July 2024 (UTC)
- None of that is derogatory, but simply not informative. Someone being a "nationalist" or a "socialist" can mean a lot of different things. My very best wishes (talk) 03:58, 25 July 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, this is something that is spread throughout the lead, and not overloading the first sentence. Of course, the lead now is far from ideal as it is quite brief. Mellk (talk) 04:03, 25 July 2024 (UTC)
- I have repeatedly spoken out against the frequent over-reliance on descriptors/labels in the lead sentence, but I do not agree that "nationalist" is "meaningless". That argument seems pretty weak as the term is a widely used and informative term in political discourse with a pretty clear definition for what it means. It is also appropriate for this article subject as it is widely used in reliable sources to describe her, often as the primary descriptor of the article subject. The problem with the other terms suggested for the lead sentence is that there is not an obvious consensus in the reliable sources, but that definitely does appear to be the case for the term "nationalist". – notwally (talk) 15:03, 25 July 2024 (UTC)
- Good point. In that case, "nationalist" is probably a better option than "far-right", which I can agree is not quite yet used enough in RS to justify including it in the first sentence. Mellk (talk) 15:08, 25 July 2024 (UTC)
- I have repeatedly spoken out against the frequent over-reliance on descriptors/labels in the lead sentence, but I do not agree that "nationalist" is "meaningless". That argument seems pretty weak as the term is a widely used and informative term in political discourse with a pretty clear definition for what it means. It is also appropriate for this article subject as it is widely used in reliable sources to describe her, often as the primary descriptor of the article subject. The problem with the other terms suggested for the lead sentence is that there is not an obvious consensus in the reliable sources, but that definitely does appear to be the case for the term "nationalist". – notwally (talk) 15:03, 25 July 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, this is something that is spread throughout the lead, and not overloading the first sentence. Of course, the lead now is far from ideal as it is quite brief. Mellk (talk) 04:03, 25 July 2024 (UTC)
So the sources are wrong for calling her nationalist/ultranationalist?
While she describes as nationalist herself, academic biography on her pays the most attention and praises her the most for her academic contributions, and for her defense of the Ukrainian language.But we can't observe this in the article. The highlight of academic works describing her as such was negated [5] . And DUE weight is given now to what press reports on her, instead of how academic work describes her [6] , with "Political career" and "Political views" chapters each larger than "Academic career" chapter. Contrary to the picture drawn in an academic bio on her - Фаріон Ірина Дмитрівна: Біобібліографічний показник - Оксана Микитюк - Тека авторів - Чтиво (chtyvo.org.ua) ManyAreasExpert (talk) 15:23, 25 July 2024 (UTC)- The source from the publishing house of the same university she was a professor at which focuses on her academic career, is what we should use to determine WP:DUE? There is a journal article and books which mention her political career/views only, should we forget about those now? Mellk (talk) 15:29, 25 July 2024 (UTC)
- The content in the diffs provided by ManyAreasExpert definitely looks like it was appropriately removed by Mellk. In addition to unsourced and promotional content, I would also note that YouTube is not an academic source, and books and blog posts written by the article subject are not helpful citations, especially when misleadingly cited as references for claims about the significance of her work. Mellk has done a great job expanding the article with a lot of useful, well-sourced information, IMO. – notwally (talk) 15:38, 25 July 2024 (UTC)
There is a journal article and books which mention her political career/views only
If they would talk about the person in length. Those which were presented so far only mention her in passing. What is there which is not included into our article, yet?Тимошик Микола Степанович — Вікіпедія (wikipedia.org) who is the author of the summary is not related to her university. ManyAreasExpert (talk) 15:39, 25 July 2024 (UTC)
- The source from the publishing house of the same university she was a professor at which focuses on her academic career, is what we should use to determine WP:DUE? There is a journal article and books which mention her political career/views only, should we forget about those now? Mellk (talk) 15:29, 25 July 2024 (UTC)
- None of that is derogatory, but simply not informative. Someone being a "nationalist" or a "socialist" can mean a lot of different things. My very best wishes (talk) 03:58, 25 July 2024 (UTC)
Article looks like fully as an russian propaganda bs.
There are nothing about scientific work. There are nothing about enlightening work. All article only about controversial statements and clams by russian nazis agains her. 85.114.204.72 (talk) 16:59, 23 July 2024 (UTC)
There are nothing about scientific work
Agree it should be here. But we need sources reviewing her contributions. ManyAreasExpert (talk) 17:01, 23 July 2024 (UTC)- Tell us, where in this NYT article are those works mentioned and not the scandals she was involved in? Or do you consider NYT to be part of the Russian Nazis? Mellk (talk) 17:19, 23 July 2024 (UTC)
- Found it, in Ukrainian Фаріон Ірина Дмитрівна: Біобібліографічний показник - Оксана Микитюк - Тека авторів - Чтиво (chtyvo.org.ua) . Finally we can do some decent work. ManyAreasExpert (talk) 17:48, 23 July 2024 (UTC)
- The article reports statements she made without commenting on them. If this influences her reputation in a negative way, that is the fault of Farion herself for making such statements. Jaguarnik (talk) 18:04, 23 July 2024 (UTC)
- The article only says the facts which that she was a ultranationalist extremist also which Russian Nazis? The RDK fights for Ukraine 2A02:587:E814:4A20:9019:C7C7:B0CD:45E7 (talk) 22:04, 24 July 2024 (UTC)
Academic monograph removal
Greetings @Mellk, your removal [7] of academic biography was not an improvement. Per WP:SCHOLARSHIP academic monographs are preferred against news sources, which the article your edit left filled with.
Here's what we the editors could do better:
- address "puffery" with rewording.
- discuss "due" in talk, as the goal of "due" is to fairly represent all significant viewpoints that have been published by reliable sources, and you removed these, which is contrary to "fairly represent".
- the text is obviously based on the academic monograph, not on primary sources, which are included only for reference and only reference the actual works.
Thanks! ManyAreasExpert (talk) 22:54, 23 July 2024 (UTC)
- The whole thing was poorly written. For example:
Among Farion's works philologists highlight:
- Monographs and scientific articles
- Teaching guides
- Publicistic and popular science articles in the press
- Numerous interviews
- This is a waste of space. It should not be the aim to dump as much text as possible and hope that someone else will fix this.
- You are using the one secondary source but also using the primary sources alone to support certain statements. And no, we are not using just news sources in the article. Mellk (talk) 23:03, 23 July 2024 (UTC)
- Ok, the issue above can be fixed with a few hits of delete key. Even you could do that, and that would be an improvement, instead of removal.
You are using the one secondary source but also using the primary sources alone to support certain statements
No, statements are based on the academic source and are a paraphrase of it. The retelling of the source can and should include editor's own words until something specific is challenged.And no, we are not using just news sources in the article.
I just checked first 10 sources and they are news websites. ManyAreasExpert (talk) 23:09, 23 July 2024 (UTC)- The point of reverting was to initiate the WP:BRD cycle. This is a large edit that cannot be immediately improved. There it can be discussed what should be included. Of course, I think some of the works can be mentioned, but without the excessive text that does not add anything.
I just checked first 10 sources and they are news websites
-- there are 76 references, and you did not look careful enough. Mellk (talk) 23:21, 23 July 2024 (UTC)without the excessive text that does not add anything
It is based on a summary chapter from an academic biography, your concerns above will be addressed.there are 76 references, and you did not look careful enough.
Well it does not matter much if the article is 90% or 95% of news sources.
ManyAreasExpert (talk) 23:41, 23 July 2024 (UTC)A former People's Deputy, Doctor of Philology, Professor, and teacher has dedicated hundreds of speeches, articles, several educational projects, and books to the protection of the Ukrainian language.
-- why do we need this? Again, this is nothing of substance and more repetition.Well it does not matter much if the article is 90% or 95% of news sources.
. Well, why not use a variety of secondary sources, rather than one for the text you added, if you are concerned that there are too many news sources? I added a journal article and few books earlier. Mellk (talk) 23:56, 23 July 2024 (UTC)- I have restored some of the key works but the other details are not important IMO. Mellk (talk) 02:59, 24 July 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you. Essentially, the book on her (Микитюк, Оксана Романівна; Харчук, Лілія Валеріївна; Ментинська, Ірина Богданівна - Фаріон Ірина Дмитрівна: доктор філологічних наук, професор : біобібліографічний показник) condenses what's important in its summary chapter. It determines four or so main directions, or areas, of her work, and describes these. Reading the book, and the chapter, we can see academics justify their premise about Farion dedicating her work to defend / protect / promote the language. We can use that chapter to determine what's important, and what to write in our article about. ManyAreasExpert (talk) 08:07, 24 July 2024 (UTC)
- We can mention that she has been noted by fellow linguists for efforts in promoting the Ukrainian language in the academic career section, but this seems like something that should only take up a few words. Mellk (talk) 16:25, 24 July 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you. Essentially, the book on her (Микитюк, Оксана Романівна; Харчук, Лілія Валеріївна; Ментинська, Ірина Богданівна - Фаріон Ірина Дмитрівна: доктор філологічних наук, професор : біобібліографічний показник) condenses what's important in its summary chapter. It determines four or so main directions, or areas, of her work, and describes these. Reading the book, and the chapter, we can see academics justify their premise about Farion dedicating her work to defend / protect / promote the language. We can use that chapter to determine what's important, and what to write in our article about. ManyAreasExpert (talk) 08:07, 24 July 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you. I found 3 books on Farion (other than biography) in the article -
Making Ethnicity in Southern Bessarabia, Extreme Reactions and Ukrainian Nationalism in the Age of Extremes, and the article has pretty much everything what could be taken from them on Farion. I havent found a journal article yet. ManyAreasExpert (talk) 07:56, 24 July 2024 (UTC)
- I have restored some of the key works but the other details are not important IMO. Mellk (talk) 02:59, 24 July 2024 (UTC)
- Ok, the issue above can be fixed with a few hits of delete key. Even you could do that, and that would be an improvement, instead of removal.
- I think there is nothing wrong with providing some details about her work. I do not see a lot of puffery; some primary sources (including those by her) can be used per WP:PRIMARY. Still, some of this should probably be placed to section "External links". My very best wishes (talk) 03:59, 24 July 2024 (UTC)
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