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==Requests==
===[[The Tell-Tale Heart]]===
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''it has been''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:40, 1 November 2007 (UTC)

===[[Feeder discography]]===
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Generally, trivia sections are looked down upon; please either remove the trivia section or incorporate any important facts into the rest of the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#trivia|[?]]]</sup>
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 36 additive terms, a bit too much.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:49, 1 November 2007 (UTC)

===[[The Joy of Sect]]===
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 12 additive terms, a bit too much.
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''Can't, Can't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:49, 1 November 2007 (UTC)

===[[Catherine de' Medici's building projects]]===
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:49, 1 November 2007 (UTC)

===[[Skateboarding]]===
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
*Generally, trivia sections are looked down upon; please either remove the trivia section or incorporate any important facts into the rest of the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#trivia|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''it has been''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''aluminium'' (B) (American: ''aluminum''), ''meter'' (A) (British: ''metre''), ''fiber'' (A) (British: ''fibre''), ''ization'' (A) (British: ''isation''), ''any more'' (B) (American: ''anymore'').
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''didn't, couldn't, didn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:49, 1 November 2007 (UTC)

===[[Anberlin]]===
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''correctly''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''Aren't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:49, 1 November 2007 (UTC)

===[[Super Smash Bros. Brawl]]===
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:What is a featured article?]], [[WP:IMAGE|Images]] should have concise captions.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#caption|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''it has been''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:49, 1 November 2007 (UTC)

===[[Rogers Act]]===
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Guide to layout]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#gtl|[?]]]</sup>
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:49, 1 November 2007 (UTC)

===[[Royal Rumble (1994)]]===
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:49, 1 November 2007 (UTC)

===[[Frederick Law Olmsted]]===
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*If this article is about a person, please add <code><nowiki>{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}</nowiki></code> along with the required parameters to the article - see [[Wikipedia:Persondata]] for more information.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#persondata|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''is considered''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:49, 1 November 2007 (UTC)

===[[Bradford City A.F.C. seasons]]===
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[WP:CONTEXT]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#overlink|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:49, 1 November 2007 (UTC)

===[[Battle of Gondar]]===
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:49, 1 November 2007 (UTC)

===[[Snuffy's Parents Get a Divorce]]===
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''couldn't, didn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:49, 1 November 2007 (UTC)

===[[David Petraeus]]===
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*If this article is about a person, please add <code><nowiki>{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}</nowiki></code> along with the required parameters to the article - see [[Wikipedia:Persondata]] for more information.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#persondata|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''armour'' (B) (American: ''armor''), ''favorite'' (A) (British: ''favourite''), ''meter'' (A) (British: ''metre''), ''defense'' (A) (British: ''defence''), ''recognize'' (A) (British: ''recognise''), ''criticize'' (A) (British: ''criticise''), ''criticise'' (B) (American: ''criticize''), ''ization'' (A) (British: ''isation''), ''program '' (A) (British: ''programme'').
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:49, 1 November 2007 (UTC)

===[[1999 Sydney hailstorm]]===
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''200km'', use ''200&nbsp;km'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>200&amp;nbsp;km</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km<sup>2</sup>, and pounds -> lb.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#abbrev|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, ''the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#spellnum|[?]]]</sup> Specifically, an example is 80 km.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 13 additive terms, a bit too much.
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:49, 1 November 2007 (UTC)

===[[Hamlet]]===
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''doesn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:49, 1 November 2007 (UTC)

===[[SR Merchant Navy Class]]===
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''61 cm'', use ''61&nbsp;cm'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>61&amp;nbsp;cm</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km<sup>2</sup>, and pounds -> lb.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#abbrev|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, ''the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#spellnum|[?]]]</sup> Specifically, an example is 41.6 cm.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Guide to layout]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#gtl|[?]]]</sup>
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:49, 1 November 2007 (UTC)

===[[Metroid Prime]]===
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''doesn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:49, 1 November 2007 (UTC)


===[[FC Steaua Bucureşti]]===
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''honour'' (B) (American: ''honor''), ''neighbour'' (B) (American: ''neighbor''), ''favourite'' (B) (American: ''favorite''), ''ization'' (A) (British: ''isation''), ''anymore'' (A) (British: ''any more''), ''programme'' (B) (American: ''program '').
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''didn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 16:20, 28 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[Jane Zhang]]===
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*If this article is about a person, please add <code><nowiki>{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}</nowiki></code> along with the required parameters to the article - see [[Wikipedia:Persondata]] for more information.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#persondata|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''Don't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 16:20, 28 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[Robert Dean Frisbie]]===
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If this article is about a person, please add <code><nowiki>{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}</nowiki></code> along with the required parameters to the article - see [[Wikipedia:Persondata]] for more information.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#persondata|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*This article needs [[WP:FOOTNOTE|footnotes]], preferably in the [http://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/Cite/Cite.php cite.php] format recommended by [[WP:WIAFA]]. Simply, enclose inline citations, with [[WP:CITE]] or [[WP:CITE/ES]] information, with <nowiki><ref>THE FOOTNOTE</ref></nowiki>. At the bottom of the article, in a section named “References” or “Footnotes”, add <code><nowiki><div class="references-small"><references/></div></nowiki></code>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#foot|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 16:20, 28 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[WrestleMania III]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Transformers (film)]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''10 pounds'', use ''10&nbsp;pounds'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>10&amp;nbsp;pounds</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''honor'' (A) (British: ''honour''), ''behaviour'' (B) (American: ''behavior''), ''favorite'' (A) (British: ''favourite''), ''realize'' (A) (British: ''realise''), ''criticize'' (A) (British: ''criticise''), ''ization'' (A) (British: ''isation''), ''isation'' (B) (American: ''ization''), ''any more'' (B) (American: ''anymore''), ''programme'' (B) (American: ''program '').
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''didn't, isn't, don't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Steve Lukather]]===
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*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*If this article is about a person, please add <code><nowiki>{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}</nowiki></code> along with the required parameters to the article - see [[Wikipedia:Persondata]] for more information.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#persondata|[?]]]</sup>
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''Can't, Can't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Opera (Internet suite)]]===
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*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km<sup>2</sup>, and pounds -> lb.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#abbrev|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''doesn't, doesn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[The Thriving Cult of Greed and Power]]===
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*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''allege''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''aren't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Pauline Green]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
:{{Done}}[[User:JonStrines|JonStrines]] 12:32, 7 November 2007 (UTC)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
:{{Done}} [[User:JonStrines|JonStrines]] 10:17, 1 November 2007 (UTC)
*If this article is about a person, please add <code><nowiki>{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}</nowiki></code> along with the required parameters to the article - see [[Wikipedia:Persondata]] for more information.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#persondata|[?]]]</sup>
:{{Done}} [[User:JonStrines|JonStrines]] 09:20, 1 November 2007 (UTC)
*<S>As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup></S>
:Instance picked up by bot was in title of a source.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
:{{Done}}[[User:JonStrines|JonStrines]] 12:32, 7 November 2007 (UTC)
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
:{{Done}}[[User:JonStrines|JonStrines]] 12:32, 7 November 2007 (UTC)
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===[[Ed Hochuli]]===
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*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
:{{Done}} [[User:RyguyMN|RyguyMN]] 01:25, 27 October 2007 (UTC)
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
:{{Notdone}} No free images currently exist. [[User:RyguyMN|RyguyMN]] 01:29, 27 October 2007 (UTC)
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[The Preuss School UCSD]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Guide to layout]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#gtl|[?]]]</sup>
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 29 additive terms, a bit too much.
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Manchester Airport]]===
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*Per [[Wikipedia:What is a featured article?]], [[WP:IMAGE|Images]] should have concise captions.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#caption|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''56 ft '', use ''56&nbsp;ft '', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>56&amp;nbsp;ft </tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, ''the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#spellnum|[?]]]</sup> Specifically, an example is 56 ft.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Joey Santiago]]===
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*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Gillingham F.C. seasons]]===
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*Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[WP:CONTEXT]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#overlink|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Harold Innis]]===
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*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*If this article is about a person, please add <code><nowiki>{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}</nowiki></code> along with the required parameters to the article - see [[Wikipedia:Persondata]] for more information.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#persondata|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Guide to layout]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#gtl|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''is considered''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''honor'' (A) (British: ''honour''), ''honour'' (B) (American: ''honor''), ''defence'' (B) (American: ''defense''), ''realize'' (A) (British: ''realise''), ''ization'' (A) (British: ''isation''), ''travelled'' (B) (American: ''traveled''), ''mold'' (A) (British: ''mould''), ''skeptic'' (A) (British: ''sceptic'').
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Sara Sidle]]===
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*The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at [[WP:LEAD]]; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadlong|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''didn't, didn't, isn't, didn't, didn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Portal (video game)]]===
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*The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at [[WP:LEAD]]; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadlong|[?]]]</sup>
*The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per [[WP:LEAD]]. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leaddetail|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 00:51, 26 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[Electromagnetic spectrum]]===
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*The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at [[WP:LEAD]]; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadlong|[?]]]</sup>
*The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per [[WP:LEAD]]. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leaddetail|[?]]]</sup>
*Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[WP:CONTEXT]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#overlink|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:What is a featured article?]], [[WP:IMAGE|Images]] should have concise captions.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#caption|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''1500 nm'', use ''1500&nbsp;nm'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>1500&amp;nbsp;nm</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, ''the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#spellnum|[?]]]</sup> Specifically, an example is 600 nm.
*Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Guide to layout]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#gtl|[?]]]</sup>
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*This article needs [[WP:FOOTNOTE|footnotes]], preferably in the [http://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/Cite/Cite.php cite.php] format recommended by [[WP:WIAFA]]. Simply, enclose inline citations, with [[WP:CITE]] or [[WP:CITE/ES]] information, with <nowiki><ref>THE FOOTNOTE</ref></nowiki>. At the bottom of the article, in a section named “References” or “Footnotes”, add <code><nowiki><div class="references-small"><references/></div></nowiki></code>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#foot|[?]]]</sup>
*The article will need references. See [[WP:CITE]] and [[WP:V]] for more information.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#ref|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 00:51, 26 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[Randall Flagg]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''wouldn't, didn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 00:51, 26 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[Race of Ancient Egyptians]]===
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*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''100km'', use ''100&nbsp;km'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>100&amp;nbsp;km</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''don't, aren't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 00:51, 26 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[Shaktism]]===
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*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], avoid capitalizing words in section headings unless they are [[proper noun]]s or the first word of the heading.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingcap|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 00:51, 26 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[Brownhills]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''36km'', use ''36&nbsp;km'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>36&amp;nbsp;km</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km<sup>2</sup>, and pounds -> lb.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#abbrev|[?]]]</sup>
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 00:51, 26 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[Montgomery Canal]]===
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*The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at [[WP:LEAD]]; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadlong|[?]]]</sup>
*The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per [[WP:LEAD]]. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leaddetail|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''800 metre'', use ''800&nbsp;metre'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>800&amp;nbsp;metre</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Guide to layout]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#gtl|[?]]]</sup>
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
**Avoid misplaced formality: “in order to/for” (-> to/for), “thereupon”, “notwithstanding”, [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a#Saying good-bye to misplaced formality|etc]].
*This article needs [[WP:FOOTNOTE|footnotes]], preferably in the [http://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/Cite/Cite.php cite.php] format recommended by [[WP:WIAFA]]. Simply, enclose inline citations, with [[WP:CITE]] or [[WP:CITE/ES]] information, with <nowiki><ref>THE FOOTNOTE</ref></nowiki>. At the bottom of the article, in a section named “References” or “Footnotes”, add <code><nowiki><div class="references-small"><references/></div></nowiki></code>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#foot|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 00:51, 26 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[A Very Merry Unauthorized Children's Scientology Pageant]]===
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*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Guide to layout]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#gtl|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 00:51, 26 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[List of Washington Redskins first-round draft picks]]===
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*Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[WP:CONTEXT]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#overlink|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 00:51, 26 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[Thunder Bay Transit]]===
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*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''300 metres'', use ''300&nbsp;metres'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>300&amp;nbsp;metres</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Guide to layout]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#gtl|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 00:51, 26 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[James Milner]]===
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*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''25 yards'', use ''25&nbsp;yards'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>25&amp;nbsp;yards</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''don't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Space opera in Scientology scripture]]===
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*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
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*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''116 km'', use ''116&nbsp;km'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>116&amp;nbsp;km</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Guide to layout]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#gtl|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''apparently''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
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**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''won't, don't, DON'T'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Castlevania: Dawn of Sorrow]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''it has been''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
**Avoid misplaced formality: “in order to/for” (-> to/for), “thereupon”, “notwithstanding”, [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a#Saying good-bye to misplaced formality|etc]].
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[List of Bristol Rovers F.C. managers]]===
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*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[York City F.C. seasons]]===
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*Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[WP:CONTEXT]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#overlink|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Prayer]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], please do not [[WP:LINK|link]] words in headings.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headinglink|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''is considered''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Lance Bass]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*If this article is about a person, please add <code><nowiki>{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}</nowiki></code> along with the required parameters to the article - see [[Wikipedia:Persondata]] for more information.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#persondata|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Cowboys-Redskins rivalry]]===
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*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''13 yards'', use ''13&nbsp;yards'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>13&amp;nbsp;yards</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], please do not [[WP:LINK|link]] words in headings.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headinglink|[?]]]</sup>
*Generally, trivia sections are looked down upon; please either remove the trivia section or incorporate any important facts into the rest of the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#trivia|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''arguably''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[European Union]]===
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*The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at [[WP:LEAD]]; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadlong|[?]]]</sup>
*The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per [[WP:LEAD]]. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leaddetail|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''000 km'', use ''000&nbsp;km'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>000&amp;nbsp;km</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, ''the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#spellnum|[?]]]</sup> Specifically, an example is 000 km.
*When writing standard abbreviations, the abbreviations should not have a 's' to demark plurality (for example, change kms to km and lbs to lb).
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''it has been''
**''is considered''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''harbour'' (B) (American: ''harbor''), ''neighbour'' (B) (American: ''neighbor''), ''favourite'' (B) (American: ''favorite''), ''meter'' (A) (British: ''metre''), ''metre'' (B) (American: ''meter''), ''defence'' (B) (American: ''defense''), ''organise'' (B) (American: ''organize''), ''recognise'' (B) (American: ''recognize''), ''criticise'' (B) (American: ''criticize''), ''ization'' (A) (British: ''isation''), ''isation'' (B) (American: ''ization''), ''fulfilment'' (B) (American: ''fulfillment''), ''programme'' (B) (American: ''program ''), ''sceptic'' (B) (American: ''skeptic'').
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Universitario de Deportes]]===
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*Per [[Wikipedia:What is a featured article?]], [[WP:IMAGE|Images]] should have concise captions.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#caption|[?]]]</sup>
:{{done}} [[User:MicroX|MicroX]] 20:56, 10 November 2007 (UTC)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
:{{done}} [[User:MicroX|MicroX]] 20:56, 10 November 2007 (UTC)
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
:{{done}} [[User:MicroX|MicroX]] 20:56, 10 November 2007 (UTC)
*Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Guide to layout]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#gtl|[?]]]</sup>
:{{done}} [[User:MicroX|MicroX]] 20:56, 10 November 2007 (UTC)
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''is considered''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
:{{done}} [[User:MicroX|MicroX]] 20:56, 10 November 2007 (UTC)
*This article needs [[WP:FOOTNOTE|footnotes]], preferably in the [http://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/Cite/Cite.php cite.php] format recommended by [[WP:WIAFA]]. Simply, enclose inline citations, with [[WP:CITE]] or [[WP:CITE/ES]] information, with <nowiki><ref>THE FOOTNOTE</ref></nowiki>. At the bottom of the article, in a section named “References” or “Footnotes”, add <code><nowiki><div class="references-small"><references/></div></nowiki></code>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#foot|[?]]]</sup>
:{{done}} [[User:MicroX|MicroX]] 20:56, 10 November 2007 (UTC)
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[List of films that received the Golden Film]]===
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*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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:My response to these automated comments:
:*I don't think there is an applicable infobox for this list article.
:*I don't think the 86 dates are relevant to the context of the article in such a way that they should be wikilinked.
:*The list article should be tested against the featured list criteria instead of the featured article criteria.
:*I will ask the League of Copyeditors to look into the introduction of the list.
:– [[User:Ilse@|Ilse]][[User talk:Ilse@|@]] 21:22, 23 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[Alpha Kappa Alpha]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], avoid using special characters (ex: &+{}[]) in headings.
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Jerry Lawler]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*If this article is about a person, please add <code><nowiki>{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}</nowiki></code> along with the required parameters to the article - see [[Wikipedia:Persondata]] for more information.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#persondata|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Devi Mahatmya]]===
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*The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at [[WP:LEAD]]; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadlong|[?]]]</sup>
*The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per [[WP:LEAD]]. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leaddetail|[?]]]</sup>
*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], avoid capitalizing words in section headings unless they are [[proper noun]]s or the first word of the heading.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingcap|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''it has been''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[List of Washington Redskins players]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[WP:CONTEXT]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#overlink|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*This article needs [[WP:FOOTNOTE|footnotes]], preferably in the [http://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/Cite/Cite.php cite.php] format recommended by [[WP:WIAFA]]. Simply, enclose inline citations, with [[WP:CITE]] or [[WP:CITE/ES]] information, with <nowiki><ref>THE FOOTNOTE</ref></nowiki>. At the bottom of the article, in a section named “References” or “Footnotes”, add <code><nowiki><div class="references-small"><references/></div></nowiki></code>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#foot|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[List of Ipswich Town F.C. players]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[WP:CONTEXT]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#overlink|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Washington Park Race Track]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], avoid capitalizing words in section headings unless they are [[proper noun]]s or the first word of the heading.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingcap|[?]]]</sup>
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[London Borough of Croydon]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:What is a featured article?]], [[WP:IMAGE|Images]] should have concise captions.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#caption|[?]]]</sup>
*Please convert tables from [[HTML]] syntax to [[Help:Table]] wiki-markup.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''000m<sup>2</sup>'', use ''000&nbsp;m<sup>2</sup>'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>000&amp;nbsp;m<sup>2</sup></tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''it has been''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''neighbour'' (B) (American: ''neighbor''), ''meter'' (A) (British: ''metre''), ''recognise'' (B) (American: ''recognize''), ''criticize'' (A) (British: ''criticise''), ''ization'' (A) (British: ''isation''), ''isation'' (B) (American: ''ization''), '' aging'' (A) (British: '' ageing''), ''any more'' (B) (American: ''anymore'').
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''doesn't, don't, didn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Asha Bhosle]]===
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*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''it has been''
**''many people have''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 12:37, 21 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[Anaerobic digestion]]===
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*The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at [[WP:LEAD]]; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadlong|[?]]]</sup>
*The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per [[WP:LEAD]]. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leaddetail|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 12:37, 21 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[List of Polish flags]]===
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*Avoid including [[WP:IG|galleries]] in articles, as per [[Wikipedia:Galleries#Policy|Wikipedia:Galleries]]. Common solutions to this problem include moving the gallery to [http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Main_Page wikicommons] or integrating images with the text.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#ig|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Smedley Butler]]===
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*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Singapore Stone]]===
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*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''30 km'', use ''30&nbsp;km'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>30&amp;nbsp;km</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, ''the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#spellnum|[?]]]</sup> Specifically, an example is 30 km.
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''it has been''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:SriMesh|SriMesh]] | [[User talk:SriMesh|<small>talk</small>]] 04:58, 21 October 2007 (UTC)
===[[Chetwynd, British Columbia]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''it has been''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''honour'' (B) (American: ''honor''), ''neighbor'' (A) (British: ''neighbour''), ''metre'' (B) (American: ''meter''), ''offense'' (A) (British: ''offence''), ''enrollment'' (A) (British: ''enrolment''), ''sulfur'' (A) (British: ''sulphur'').
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:SriMesh|SriMesh]] | [[User talk:SriMesh|<small>talk</small>]] 04:51, 21 October 2007 (UTC)
===[[Burger King]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:What is a featured article?]], [[WP:IMAGE|Images]] should have concise captions.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#caption|[?]]]</sup>
*Avoid including [[WP:IG|galleries]] in articles, as per [[Wikipedia:Galleries#Policy|Wikipedia:Galleries]]. Common solutions to this problem include moving the gallery to [http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Main_Page wikicommons] or integrating images with the text.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#ig|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''4 pound'', use ''4&nbsp;pound'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>4&amp;nbsp;pound</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few sections that are too short and that should be either expanded or merged. {{#if:{{{1|}}}|For example, {{{1}}}}}{{#if:{{{2|}}}|, {{{2}}}}}{{#if:{{{3|}}}|, {{{3}}}}}{{#if:{{{4|}}}|, {{{4}}}}}{{#if:{{{5|}}}|, {{{5}}}}}{{#if:{{{6|}}}|, and {{{6}}}}} {{#if:{{{1|}}}|is/are a bit short.}}
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:SriMesh|SriMesh]] | [[User talk:SriMesh|<small>talk</small>]] 03:54, 21 October 2007 (UTC)
===[[The Sims 2]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 21 additive terms, a bit too much.
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 13:45, 16 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[Klaas-Jan Huntelaar]]===
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*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*If this article is about a person, please add <code><nowiki>{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}</nowiki></code> along with the required parameters to the article - see [[Wikipedia:Persondata]] for more information.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#persondata|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few sections that are too short and that should be either expanded or merged. {{#if:{{{1|}}}|For example, {{{1}}}}}{{#if:{{{2|}}}|, {{{2}}}}}{{#if:{{{3|}}}|, {{{3}}}}}{{#if:{{{4|}}}|, {{{4}}}}}{{#if:{{{5|}}}|, {{{5}}}}}{{#if:{{{6|}}}|, and {{{6}}}}} {{#if:{{{1|}}}|is/are a bit short.}}
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 13:45, 16 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[Powderfinger]]===
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*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 13:45, 16 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[The Wiggles]]===
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''honor'' (A) (British: ''honour''), ''honour'' (B) (American: ''honor''), ''behavior'' (A) (British: ''behaviour''), ''favorite'' (A) (British: ''favourite''), ''recognize'' (A) (British: ''recognise''), ''realize'' (A) (British: ''realise''), ''traveled'' (A) (British: ''travelled''), ''travelled'' (B) (American: ''traveled''), ''program '' (A) (British: ''programme'').
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''couldn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 13:45, 16 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[Blue Harvest (Family Guy)]]===
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''50 yards'', use ''50&nbsp;yards'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>50&amp;nbsp;yards</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''apparently''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''can't, wasn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[USA PATRIOT Act]]===
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km<sup>2</sup>, and pounds -> lb.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#abbrev|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''it has been''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''harbor'' (A) (British: ''harbour''), ''defense'' (A) (British: ''defence''), ''offense'' (A) (British: ''offence''), ''offence'' (B) (American: ''offense''), ''organize'' (A) (British: ''organise''), ''recognise'' (B) (American: ''recognize''), ''criticize'' (A) (British: ''criticise''), ''criticise'' (B) (American: ''criticize''), ''ization'' (A) (British: ''isation''), ''isation'' (B) (American: ''ization''), ''routing'' (A) (British: ''routeing''), ''program '' (A) (British: ''programme'').
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
**Avoid misplaced formality: “in order to/for” (-> to/for), “thereupon”, “notwithstanding”, [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a#Saying good-bye to misplaced formality|etc]].
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''didn't, didn't, doesn't, couldn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 13:45, 16 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[Chinua Achebe]]===
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*The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at [[WP:LEAD]]; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadlong|[?]]]</sup>
*The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per [[WP:LEAD]]. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leaddetail|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*If this article is about a person, please add <code><nowiki>{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}</nowiki></code> along with the required parameters to the article - see [[Wikipedia:Persondata]] for more information.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#persondata|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''didn't, didn't, Don't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Takeshi Kawamura]]===
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*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*If this article is about a person, please add <code><nowiki>{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}</nowiki></code> along with the required parameters to the article - see [[Wikipedia:Persondata]] for more information.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#persondata|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], avoid capitalizing words in section headings unless they are [[proper noun]]s or the first word of the heading.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingcap|[?]]]</sup>
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[William Stacy]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
::{{done}} - Modified lead from one paragraph to three paragraphs. [[User:ColWilliam|ColWilliam]] 23:02, 25 October 2007 (UTC)
*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
::{{done}} - Added more links. [[User:ColWilliam|ColWilliam]] 23:28, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
::{{done}} [[User:ColWilliam|ColWilliam]] 22:30, 28 October 2007 (UTC)
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
::{{not done}} - The suggestion is appreciated. I have not implemented, but am considering. I would agree if a portrait was available. Alternatively, the article does have a biography infobox in the top right corner. [[User:ColWilliam|ColWilliam]] 21:55, 2 November 2007 (UTC)
*If this article is about a person, please add <code><nowiki>{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}</nowiki></code> along with the required parameters to the article - see [[Wikipedia:Persondata]] for more information.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#persondata|[?]]]</sup>
::{{done}} - Added persondata. [[User:ColWilliam|ColWilliam]] 23:25, 25 October 2007 (UTC) 
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
::{{done}} [[User:ColWilliam|ColWilliam]] 22:31, 28 October 2007 (UTC)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
::{{done}} - Changed section title from "The Battle of Bunker Hill" to "Battle of Bunker Hill". [[User:ColWilliam|ColWilliam]] 00:38, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
<s>*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''correctly''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this--></s>
::{{not done}} - Reviewed javascript comment, but did not implement change. The javascript found the word "correctly", which was part of the word "incorrectly", which was not used as a weasel word. Rather, the word "incorrectly" was used regarding inaccurate dates of birth and death, "Slightly different years of birth and death have been incorrectly reported." The correct dates of birth and death are referenced-footnoted in the prior sentence of the article. [[User:ColWilliam|ColWilliam]] 01:03, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''don't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
::{{not done}} - Reviewed javascript comment, but did not implement change because the contraction "don't" is used within a quotation. [[User:ColWilliam|ColWilliam]] 10:07, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
::{{done}} [[User:ColWilliam|ColWilliam]] 22:34, 28 October 2007 (UTC)
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 13:45, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
::*'''Thank you''' to [[User:AZPR|APR]] for this review. Regards, [[User:ColWilliam|ColWilliam]] 21:58, 2 November 2007 (UTC)

===[[William Gibson]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*Generally, trivia sections are looked down upon; please either remove the trivia section or incorporate any important facts into the rest of the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#trivia|[?]]]</sup>
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''don't, don't, won't, don't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Holden]]===
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*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Barbara Gordon]]===
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*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:What is a featured article?]], [[WP:IMAGE|Images]] should have concise captions.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#caption|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], avoid using special characters (ex: &+{}[]) in headings.
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''allege''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''didn't, weren't, aren't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 13:45, 16 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[Demoscene]]===
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*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''organize'' (A) (British: ''organise''), ''modelling'' (B) (American: ''modeling''), ''program '' (A) (British: ''programme''), ''programme'' (B) (American: ''program '').
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*This article needs [[WP:FOOTNOTE|footnotes]], preferably in the [http://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/Cite/Cite.php cite.php] format recommended by [[WP:WIAFA]]. Simply, enclose inline citations, with [[WP:CITE]] or [[WP:CITE/ES]] information, with <nowiki><ref>THE FOOTNOTE</ref></nowiki>. At the bottom of the article, in a section named “References” or “Footnotes”, add <code><nowiki><div class="references-small"><references/></div></nowiki></code>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#foot|[?]]]</sup>
*The article will need references. See [[WP:CITE]] and [[WP:V]] for more information.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#ref|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[San Marino national football team]]===
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*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Instant-runoff voting]]===
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*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''it has been''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''can't, doesn't, doesn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 13:45, 16 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[List of York City F.C. players]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*This article needs [[WP:FOOTNOTE|footnotes]], preferably in the [http://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/Cite/Cite.php cite.php] format recommended by [[WP:WIAFA]]. Simply, enclose inline citations, with [[WP:CITE]] or [[WP:CITE/ES]] information, with <nowiki><ref>THE FOOTNOTE</ref></nowiki>. At the bottom of the article, in a section named “References” or “Footnotes”, add <code><nowiki><div class="references-small"><references/></div></nowiki></code>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#foot|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 13:45, 16 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[Asteroid belt]]===
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*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''100 metres'', use ''100&nbsp;metres'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>100&amp;nbsp;metres</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[B-52 Stratofortress]]===
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*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''8Mg'', use ''8&nbsp;Mg'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>8&amp;nbsp;Mg</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
**{{done}}
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km<sup>2</sup>, and pounds -> lb.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#abbrev|[?]]]</sup>
**{{done}}
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, ''the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#spellnum|[?]]]</sup> Specifically, an example is 000 lb.
**{{done}}
*When writing standard abbreviations, the abbreviations should not have a 's' to demark plurality (for example, change kms to km and lbs to lb).
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
***{{done}}
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''doesn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Thespis (opera)]]===
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:What is a featured article?]], [[WP:IMAGE|Images]] should have concise captions.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#caption|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''don't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[List of municipalities in Lycoming County, Pennsylvania]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Avoid including [[WP:IG|galleries]] in articles, as per [[Wikipedia:Galleries#Policy|Wikipedia:Galleries]]. Common solutions to this problem include moving the gallery to [http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Main_Page wikicommons] or integrating images with the text.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#ig|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Guide to layout]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#gtl|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Jonathan Clarkson Gibbs]]===
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*If this article is about a person, please add <code><nowiki>{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}</nowiki></code> along with the required parameters to the article - see [[Wikipedia:Persondata]] for more information.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#persondata|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Alanya]]===
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''15 km'', use ''15&nbsp;km'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>15&amp;nbsp;km</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km<sup>2</sup>, and pounds -> lb.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#abbrev|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, ''the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#spellnum|[?]]]</sup> Specifically, an example is 120 km.
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Guide to layout]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#gtl|[?]]]</sup>
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''wasn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Harry and the Potters]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
{{done}} [[User:Hpfan9374|Hpfan9374]] 06:55, 16 November 2007 (UTC)

*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
{{done}} [[User:Hpfan9374|Hpfan9374]] 06:28, 16 November 2007 (UTC)

*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''Can't, Can't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
{{done}} Not in quotations, however it the band's second album contains the contraction, in it's title. [[User:Hpfan9374|Hpfan9374]] 06:28, 16 November 2007 (UTC)

*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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{{done}} [[User:Hpfan9374|Hpfan9374]] 06:28, 16 November 2007 (UTC)

===[[Ethiopia]]===
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*The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at [[WP:LEAD]]; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadlong|[?]]]</sup>
*The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per [[WP:LEAD]]. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leaddetail|[?]]]</sup>
*Please convert tables from [[HTML]] syntax to [[Help:Table]] wiki-markup.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''000 metres'', use ''000&nbsp;metres'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>000&amp;nbsp;metres</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''apparently''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''honor'' (A) (British: ''honour''), ''neighbor'' (A) (British: ''neighbour''), ''neighbour'' (B) (American: ''neighbor''), ''meter'' (A) (British: ''metre''), ''metre'' (B) (American: ''meter''), ''colonize'' (A) (British: ''colonise''), ''criticise'' (B) (American: ''criticize''), ''ization'' (A) (British: ''isation''), ''isation'' (B) (American: ''ization'').
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''hadn't, don't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Speers Point, New South Wales]]===
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*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Berkley Bedell]]===
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*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 15:26, 11 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[BioShock]]===
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*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''armor'' (A) (British: ''armour''), ''armour'' (B) (American: ''armor''), ''realize'' (A) (British: ''realise''), ''criticize'' (A) (British: ''criticise''), ''criticise'' (B) (American: ''criticize''), ''ization'' (A) (British: ''isation''), ''analyze'' (A) (British: ''analyse''), ''programme'' (B) (American: ''program '').
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''Didn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 15:26, 11 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[Colmar Pocket]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''8 km'', use ''8&nbsp;km'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>8&amp;nbsp;km</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*When writing standard abbreviations, the abbreviations should not have a 's' to demark plurality (for example, change kms to km and lbs to lb).
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 15:26, 11 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[Weka]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*Avoid including [[WP:IG|galleries]] in articles, as per [[Wikipedia:Galleries#Policy|Wikipedia:Galleries]]. Common solutions to this problem include moving the gallery to [http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Main_Page wikicommons] or integrating images with the text.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#ig|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few sections that are too short and that should be either expanded or merged. {{#if:{{{1|}}}|For example, {{{1}}}}}{{#if:{{{2|}}}|, {{{2}}}}}{{#if:{{{3|}}}|, {{{3}}}}}{{#if:{{{4|}}}|, {{{4}}}}}{{#if:{{{5|}}}|, {{{5}}}}}{{#if:{{{6|}}}|, and {{{6}}}}} {{#if:{{{1|}}}|is/are a bit short.}}
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[University of California, Riverside]]===
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*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
:{{done}}[[User:Amerique| Amerique]]<small>[[User_talk:Amerique|<sup style="color:darkred;">dialectics</sup>]]</small> 16:52, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, ''the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#spellnum|[?]]]</sup> Specifically, an example is 161 ft.
:{{done}}[[User:Amerique| Amerique]]<small>[[User_talk:Amerique|<sup style="color:darkred;">dialectics</sup>]]</small> 16:52, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
*When writing standard abbreviations, the abbreviations should not have a 's' to demark plurality (for example, change kms to km and lbs to lb).
:{{done}}[[User:Amerique| Amerique]]<small>[[User_talk:Amerique|<sup style="color:darkred;">dialectics</sup>]]</small> 16:52, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup> 
:Working on this, but these dates are mainly in the ref list.[[User:Amerique| Amerique]]<small>[[User_talk:Amerique|<sup style="color:darkred;">dialectics</sup>]]</small> 16:52, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
:{{done}} For this article, a lengthy TOC is necessary.[[User:Amerique| Amerique]]<small>[[User_talk:Amerique|<sup style="color:darkred;">dialectics</sup>]]</small> 16:52, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
:{{done}}Subpages are already in place, but more could be created as article expands.[[User:Amerique| Amerique]]<small>[[User_talk:Amerique|<sup style="color:darkred;">dialectics</sup>]]</small> 16:52, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''doesn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
:{{done}} Its only use is part of a reference title.[[User:Amerique| Amerique]]<small>[[User_talk:Amerique|<sup style="color:darkred;">dialectics</sup>]]</small> 16:52, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Windows Mobile]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup> {{done}} [[User:Brianreading|Brianreading]] 18:14, 11 October 2007 (UTC)
*Per [[Wikipedia:What is a featured article?]], [[WP:IMAGE|Images]] should have concise captions.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#caption|[?]]]</sup>{{done}}, this was not necessary. [[User:Brianreading|Brianreading]] 18:31, 11 October 2007 (UTC)
*<s>Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km<sup>2</sup>, and pounds -> lb.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#abbrev|[?]]]</sup></s> - This is Inapplicable here. [[User:Brianreading|Brianreading]] 18:14, 11 October 2007 (UTC)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup> {{done}} [[User:Brianreading|Brianreading]] 18:14, 11 October 2007 (UTC)
*Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Guide to layout]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#gtl|[?]]]</sup> {{done}} [[User:Brianreading|Brianreading]] 18:31, 11 October 2007 (UTC)
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup> {{done}} [[User:Brianreading|Brianreading]] 18:31, 11 October 2007 (UTC)
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===[[Lisa del Giocondo]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
:*Lead has been expanded (good suggestion, this helped)
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
:*Found detail versions in the commons and added one. Thank you. -[[User:Susanlesch|Susanlesch]] 16:54, 11 October 2007 (UTC)
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
:*A few people made copyedits. Probably not yet "best work" but I guess this list is done for the moment. Many thanks for the review. -[[User:Susanlesch|Susanlesch]] 01:12, 21 October 2007 (UTC)
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===[[Florida Atlantic University]]===
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*Avoid including [[WP:IG|galleries]] in articles, as per [[Wikipedia:Galleries#Policy|Wikipedia:Galleries]]. Common solutions to this problem include moving the gallery to [http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Main_Page wikicommons] or integrating images with the text.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#ig|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Ashdod]]===
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:What is a featured article?]], [[WP:IMAGE|Images]] should have concise captions.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#caption|[?]]]</sup>
*Avoid including [[WP:IG|galleries]] in articles, as per [[Wikipedia:Galleries#Policy|Wikipedia:Galleries]]. Common solutions to this problem include moving the gallery to [http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Main_Page wikicommons] or integrating images with the text.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#ig|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''100 meters'', use ''100&nbsp;meters'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>100&amp;nbsp;meters</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, ''the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#spellnum|[?]]]</sup> Specifically, an example is 32 km.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''harbor'' (A) (British: ''harbour''), ''harbour'' (B) (American: ''harbor''), ''neighbor'' (A) (British: ''neighbour''), ''neighbour'' (B) (American: ''neighbor''), ''meter'' (A) (British: ''metre''), ''metre'' (B) (American: ''meter''), ''organize'' (A) (British: ''organise''), ''recognise'' (B) (American: ''recognize''), ''ization'' (A) (British: ''isation'').
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Pilot (One Tree Hill)]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup> {{done}}
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually) {{done}}
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''didn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded. {{done}}
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup> {{done}}
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===[[List of Norwich City F.C. players of the year]]===
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*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Joel Selwood]]===
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*The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at [[WP:LEAD]]; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadlong|[?]]]</sup>{{done}} [[User:Boomtish|Boomtish]] 07:41, 10 October 2007 (UTC)
—According to [[Wikipedia:Lead section|WP:Lead]] articles < 15,000 characters should be 1-2 paragraphs. This article's length is <15,000 characters, and thus the lead is 2 paragraphs.
*The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per [[WP:LEAD]]. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leaddetail|[?]]]</sup>{{done}} [[User:Boomtish|Boomtish]] 07:41, 10 October 2007 (UTC)
—Done - the lead summarises the rest of the article.
*Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[WP:CONTEXT]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#overlink|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>{{done}}
—There are very few free use images available at the moment.
-EDIT: An additional two images have been found and added to the article.
*If this article is about a person, please add <code><nowiki>{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}</nowiki></code> along with the required parameters to the article - see [[Wikipedia:Persondata]] for more information.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#persondata|[?]]]</sup>{{done}} [[User:Boomtish|Boomtish]] 07:41, 10 October 2007 (UTC)
—I believe these details are already covered within the AFL player profile template.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''100 metres'', use ''100&nbsp;metres'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>100&amp;nbsp;metres</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>{{done}} [[User:Boomtish|Boomtish]] 07:41, 10 October 2007 (UTC)
—Done.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, ''the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#spellnum|[?]]]</sup> Specifically, an example is 82 kg.{{done}} [[User:Boomtish|Boomtish]] 07:41, 10 October 2007 (UTC)
—Done.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>{{done}} [[User:Boomtish|Boomtish]] 07:41, 10 October 2007 (UTC)
—Done.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>{{done}} [[User:Boomtish|Boomtish]] 07:43, 10 October 2007 (UTC)
—"Successful debut year" doesn't come across as well, gramarically, as "A successful debut year". I think this is a minor detail.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Canberra]]===
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*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:What is a featured article?]], [[WP:IMAGE|Images]] should have concise captions.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#caption|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''100 km'', use ''100&nbsp;km'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>100&amp;nbsp;km</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''apparently''
**''are considered''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Kunichika]]===
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*The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at [[WP:LEAD]]; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadlong|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:What is a featured article?]], [[WP:IMAGE|Images]] should have concise captions.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#caption|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''is considered''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*You may wish to convert your form of references to the cite.php footnote system that [[WP:WIAFA]] 1(c) highly recommends.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Joseph Priestley]]===
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*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''honor'' (A) (British: ''honour''), ''honour'' (B) (American: ''honor''), ''neighbor'' (A) (British: ''neighbour''), ''neighbour'' (B) (American: ''neighbor''), ''defense'' (A) (British: ''defence''), ''recognize'' (A) (British: ''recognise''), ''realize'' (A) (British: ''realise''), ''ization'' (A) (British: ''isation''), ''traveled'' (A) (British: ''travelled''), ''skeptic'' (A) (British: ''sceptic''), ''sulfur'' (A) (British: ''sulphur'').
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
**Avoid misplaced formality: “in order to/for” (-> to/for), “thereupon”, “notwithstanding”, [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a#Saying good-bye to misplaced formality|etc]].
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''don't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 12:48, 9 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[Digital divide]]===
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at [[WP:LEAD]]; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadlong|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
*Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Guide to layout]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#gtl|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''it has been''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 12:48, 9 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[Kingdom of Mysore]]===
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:What is a featured article?]], [[WP:IMAGE|Images]] should have concise captions.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#caption|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''000 km'', use ''000&nbsp;km'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>000&amp;nbsp;km</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''it has been''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''honor'' (A) (British: ''honour''), ''honour'' (B) (American: ''honor''), ''metre'' (B) (American: ''meter''), ''ization'' (A) (British: ''isation''), ''isation'' (B) (American: ''ization''), ''travelled'' (B) (American: ''traveled'').
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 12:48, 9 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[Duquesne University]]===
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
{{done}} '''[[User:Alekjds|Alekjds]]''' <sup>[[User_talk:Alekjds|talk]]</sup> 20:24, 9 October 2007 (UTC)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
{{done}} '''[[User:Alekjds|Alekjds]]''' <sup>[[User_talk:Alekjds|talk]]</sup> 20:24, 9 October 2007 (UTC)
*Per [[Wikipedia:What is a featured article?]], [[WP:IMAGE|Images]] should have concise captions.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#caption|[?]]]</sup>
{{notdone}} - How important is this criterion? FA [[Duke University]] has some pretty lengthy captions. '''[[User:Alekjds|Alekjds]]''' <sup>[[User_talk:Alekjds|talk]]</sup> 20:24, 9 October 2007 (UTC)
::Consider reading through [[WP:CAPTION]] - that might help (or it might confuse you further). Trust me, if you put this up for Good Article or Featured Article, someone will say something about every little detail, right down to the captions. :) --[[User:Midnightdreary|Midnightdreary]] 20:55, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], avoid capitalizing words in section headings unless they are [[proper noun]]s or the first word of the heading.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingcap|[?]]]</sup>
{{done}} '''[[User:Alekjds|Alekjds]]''' <sup>[[User_talk:Alekjds|talk]]</sup> 20:24, 9 October 2007 (UTC)
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 12:48, 9 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[Attachment therapy]]===
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''it has been''
**''correctly''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''armor'' (A) (British: ''armour''), ''behavior'' (A) (British: ''behaviour''), ''behaviour'' (B) (American: ''behavior''), ''meter'' (A) (British: ''metre''), ''defence'' (B) (American: ''defense''), ''criticize'' (A) (British: ''criticise''), ''criticise'' (B) (American: ''criticize''), ''ization'' (A) (British: ''isation''), ''isation'' (B) (American: ''ization''), ''analyse'' (B) (American: ''analyze''), ''programme'' (B) (American: ''program '').
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:SriMesh|SriMesh]] | [[User talk:SriMesh|<small>talk</small>]] 04:22, 8 October 2007 (UTC)
===[[Alan Keyes]]===
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If this article is about a person, please add <code><nowiki>{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}</nowiki></code> along with the required parameters to the article - see [[Wikipedia:Persondata]] for more information.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#persondata|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''Wouldn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:SriMesh|SriMesh]] | [[User talk:SriMesh|<small>talk</small>]] 02:51, 8 October 2007 (UTC)
===[[Middle Road, Singapore]]===
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
<s>*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.</s><sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
: Lead expanded -- [[User:Aldwinteo|Aldwinteo]] 04:42, 8 October 2007 (UTC)
<s>*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].</s> <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
: Appropriate infobox already included earlier -- [[User:Aldwinteo|Aldwinteo]] 04:42, 8 October 2007 (UTC)
<s>*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.</s> <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
: Corrected headings for MoS -- [[User:Aldwinteo|Aldwinteo]] 04:42, 8 October 2007 (UTC)
<s>*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]].</s> See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:SriMesh|SriMesh]] | [[User talk:SriMesh|<small>talk</small>]] 02:41, 8 October 2007 (UTC)
: Check for typos and copyedit done -- [[User:Aldwinteo|Aldwinteo]] 04:42, 8 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[Papa Stour]]===
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at [[WP:LEAD]]; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadlong|[?]]]</sup>
*The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per [[WP:LEAD]]. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leaddetail|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''12 kilometres'', use ''12&nbsp;kilometres'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>12&amp;nbsp;kilometres</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km<sup>2</sup>, and pounds -> lb.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#abbrev|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, ''the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#spellnum|[?]]]</sup> Specifically, an example is 200 ft.
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], avoid using special characters (ex: &+{}[]) in headings.
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''it has been''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''wasn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:SriMesh|SriMesh]] | [[User talk:SriMesh|<small>talk</small>]] 02:28, 8 October 2007 (UTC)
===[[Gamma ray burst]]===
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*<s>Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup></s>
*<s>Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup></s>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*<s>Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup></s>
*<s>Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup></s>
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*<s>There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''it has been''
**''apparently''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this--></s>
*<s>Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)</s>
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*<s>Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup></s>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:SriMesh|SriMesh]] | [[User talk:SriMesh|<small>talk</small>]] 02:16, 8 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[Ethanol]]===
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*<s>There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)</s> - exists. 
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''3nm'', use ''3&nbsp;nm'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>3&amp;nbsp;nm</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''it has been''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:SriMesh|SriMesh]] | [[User talk:SriMesh|<small>talk</small>]] 02:00, 8 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[Muscle relaxant]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''is considered''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:SriMesh|SriMesh]] | [[User talk:SriMesh|<small>talk</small>]] 01:44, 8 October 2007 (UTC)



===[[George Kay]]===
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
:{{done}} [[User:Daemonic Kangaroo|Daemonic Kangaroo]] 12:17, 8 October 2007 (UTC)
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If this article is about a person, please add <code><nowiki>{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}</nowiki></code> along with the required parameters to the article - see [[Wikipedia:Persondata]] for more information.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#persondata|[?]]]</sup>
:{{done}} [[User:Daemonic Kangaroo|Daemonic Kangaroo]] 07:04, 8 October 2007 (UTC)
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], please do not [[WP:LINK|link]] words in headings.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headinglink|[?]]]</sup>
:{{done}} [[User:Daemonic Kangaroo|Daemonic Kangaroo]] 07:04, 8 October 2007 (UTC)
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
:{{done}} [[User:Daemonic Kangaroo|Daemonic Kangaroo]] 07:04, 8 October 2007 (UTC)
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 19:02, 7 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[Architecture of Birmingham]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''110 metre'', use ''110&nbsp;metre'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>110&amp;nbsp;metre</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Guide to layout]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#gtl|[?]]]</sup>
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 19:02, 7 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[Liverpool F.C.]]===
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''300 yards'', use ''300&nbsp;yards'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>300&amp;nbsp;yards</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''it has been''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''don't, isn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 19:02, 7 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[Real Madrid Baloncesto]]===
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[WP:CONTEXT]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#overlink|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 19:02, 7 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[Real Madrid C.F.]]===
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''didn't, wasn't, didn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 19:02, 7 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[Motorcycle club]]===
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at [[WP:LEAD]]; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadlong|[?]]]</sup>
*The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per [[WP:LEAD]]. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leaddetail|[?]]]</sup>
*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''isn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 19:02, 7 October 2007 (UTC)


===[[2005 USC Trojans football team]]===
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''294 yards'', use ''294&nbsp;yards'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>294&amp;nbsp;yards</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''didn't, wouldn't, didn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:SriMesh|SriMesh]] | [[User talk:SriMesh|<small>talk</small>]] 18:42, 7 October 2007 (UTC)
===[[Nicktropolis]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], please do not [[WP:LINK|link]] words in headings.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headinglink|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Croton Dam (Michigan)]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Guide to layout]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#gtl|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Wisden Trophy]]===
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*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup> only linked dates (from numerous checks) '''Comments -''' are in the ref section and date are a requirement for FA.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's  journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup> '''Comment -''' Can't think of a more appropriate title e.g. can't called heading Wisden cup as it is not a cup 
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], avoid using special characters (ex: &+{}[]) in headings. '''Comment -''' Only characters used are dashes which I think are needed and apostrophes for blackwash series as this was the informal name often given to this series.
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''couldn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded. '''Comment -''' Couldn't is contained in a quotation.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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'''Final comment -''' I am a bit concerned about the coverage will this be good even for FA?

===[[List of WCW World Heavyweight Champions]]===
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*Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[WP:CONTEXT]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#overlink|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], avoid capitalizing words in section headings unless they are [[proper noun]]s or the first word of the heading.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingcap|[?]]]</sup>
*Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Guide to layout]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#gtl|[?]]]</sup>
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[SummerSlam (1993)]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Britney Spears]]===
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*The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at [[WP:LEAD]]; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadlong|[?]]]</sup>
*The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per [[WP:LEAD]]. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leaddetail|[?]]]</sup>
*<strike>Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup></strike>
**Dates in this article is not that relevant to the subject mentioned and is out of context. [[User:Oidia|Oops!...I did it again]] [[User talk:Oidia|(talk)]] 14:08, 13 October 2007 (UTC)
*<strike>As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup></strike>
**Not applicable to the article. [[User:Oidia|Oops!...I did it again]] [[User talk:Oidia|(talk)]] 14:08, 13 October 2007 (UTC)
*<strike>Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], avoid using special characters (ex: &+{}[]) in headings.</strike>
**Not applicable to the article. Colons and ndashes are used in many existing Featured Articles' headings. [[User:Oidia|Oops!...I did it again]] [[User talk:Oidia|(talk)]] 14:08, 13 October 2007 (UTC)
*<strike>There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''apparently''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this--></strike>
::99% of information in this article is cited and referenced. [[User:Oidia|Oops!...I did it again]] [[User talk:Oidia|(talk)]] 14:08, 13 October 2007 (UTC)
*<strike>The script has spotted the following contractions: ''don't, can't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.</strike>
::Inside quotes. [[User:Oidia|Oops!...I did it again]] [[User talk:Oidia|(talk)]] 14:08, 13 October 2007 (UTC)
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
::{{done}} - Although I think it can still be improved. [[User:Oidia|Oops!...I did it again]] [[User talk:Oidia|(talk)]] 14:09, 13 October 2007 (UTC)
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===[[Santiago Martínez Delgado]]===
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*{{done}}Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*{{done}}Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*{{done}}As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Halotus]]===
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*The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at [[WP:LEAD]]; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadlong|[?]]]</sup>
*The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per [[WP:LEAD]]. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leaddetail|[?]]]</sup>
*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 13 additive terms, a bit too much.
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''Don't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Google]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[WP:CONTEXT]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#overlink|[?]]]</sup>
*When writing standard abbreviations, the abbreviations should not have a 's' to demark plurality (for example, change kms to km and lbs to lb).
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], avoid using special characters (ex: &+{}[]) in headings.
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''Don't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Activism at Ohio Wesleyan University]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''didn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Year Zero (album)]]===
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*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''Doesn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Georgia Tech Yellow Jackets football]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''02mg'', use ''02&nbsp;mg'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>02&amp;nbsp;mg</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], avoid using special characters (ex: &+{}[]) in headings.
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Patrick Henry College]]===
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*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Guide to layout]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#gtl|[?]]]</sup>
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Asha Bhosle]]===
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*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*If this article is about a person, please add <code><nowiki>{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}</nowiki></code> along with the required parameters to the article - see [[Wikipedia:Persondata]] for more information.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#persondata|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], please do not [[WP:LINK|link]] words in headings.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headinglink|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''it has been''
**''many people have''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Tacita Dean]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*If this article is about a person, please add <code><nowiki>{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}</nowiki></code> along with the required parameters to the article - see [[Wikipedia:Persondata]] for more information.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#persondata|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''16mm'', use ''16&nbsp;mm'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>16&amp;nbsp;mm</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], avoid capitalizing words in section headings unless they are [[proper noun]]s or the first word of the heading.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingcap|[?]]]</sup>
*Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Guide to layout]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#gtl|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''it has been''
**''apparently''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[John Knox]]===
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*The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at [[WP:LEAD]]; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadlong|[?]]]</sup>
*The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per [[WP:LEAD]]. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leaddetail|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Five Pillars of Islam]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Alan Kulwicki]]===
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*The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at [[WP:LEAD]]; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadlong|[?]]]</sup>
*The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per [[WP:LEAD]]. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leaddetail|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
**Overlinks to years have been removed. [[User:Royalbroil|<span style="color:#000000;">'''Royal'''</span><span style="color:#FFCC00;">'''broil'''</span>]] 05:01, 5 October 2007 (UTC)
*Per [[Wikipedia:What is a featured article?]], [[WP:IMAGE|Images]] should have concise captions.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#caption|[?]]]</sup>
**Changed to more concise caption on one image. [[User:Royalbroil|<span style="color:#000000;">'''Royal'''</span><span style="color:#FFCC00;">'''broil'''</span>]] 05:01, 5 October 2007 (UTC)
*If this article is about a person, please add <code><nowiki>{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}</nowiki></code> along with the required parameters to the article - see [[Wikipedia:Persondata]] for more information.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#persondata|[?]]]</sup>
**Added. [[User:Royalbroil|<span style="color:#000000;">'''Royal'''</span><span style="color:#FFCC00;">'''broil'''</span>]] 12:36, 5 October 2007 (UTC)
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
**ToC was expanded somewhat after human peer review. [[User:Royalbroil|<span style="color:#000000;">'''Royal'''</span><span style="color:#FFCC00;">'''broil'''</span>]] 05:01, 5 October 2007 (UTC)
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''isn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
**title of article used in citation. [[User:Royalbroil|<span style="color:#000000;">'''Royal'''</span><span style="color:#FFCC00;">'''broil'''</span>]] 05:01, 5 October 2007 (UTC)
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[African American culture]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
:{{done}} [[User:Crownjewel82|CJ]] 14:16, 5 October 2007 (UTC)
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
:I don't think there's an applicable box for this article. {{notdone}} [[User:Crownjewel82|CJ]] 14:16, 5 October 2007 (UTC)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
:{{done}} [[User:Crownjewel82|CJ]] 14:16, 5 October 2007 (UTC)
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
:{{done}} [[User:Crownjewel82|CJ]] 01:16, 7 October 2007 (UTC)
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
:This may need a double check but is otherwise done. {{done}} [[User:Crownjewel82|CJ]] 15:33, 13 October 2007 (UTC)
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
:{{done}} [[User:Crownjewel82|CJ]] 15:33, 13 October 2007 (UTC)
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[John Steinbeck]]===
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*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], avoid using special characters (ex: &+{}[]) in headings.
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''honor'' (A) (British: ''honour''), ''honour'' (B) (American: ''honor''), ''meter'' (A) (British: ''metre''), ''organize'' (A) (British: ''organise''), ''recognize'' (A) (British: ''recognise''), ''criticize'' (A) (British: ''criticise''), ''criticise'' (B) (American: ''criticize''), ''ization'' (A) (British: ''isation''), ''traveled'' (A) (British: ''travelled'').
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:27, 5 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[University of Dayton Ghetto]]===
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*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:27, 5 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[North Dakota State University]]===
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''24 km'', use ''24&nbsp;km'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>24&amp;nbsp;km</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 13 additive terms, a bit too much.
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Homeopathy]]===
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*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''000 meters'', use ''000&nbsp;meters'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>000&amp;nbsp;meters</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
*Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Guide to layout]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#gtl|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''meter'' (A) (British: ''metre''), ''organize'' (A) (British: ''organise''), ''recognize'' (A) (British: ''recognise''), ''criticize'' (A) (British: ''criticise''), ''criticise'' (B) (American: ''criticize''), ''ization'' (A) (British: ''isation''), ''isation'' (B) (American: ''ization''), ''analyze'' (A) (British: ''analyse''), ''analyse'' (B) (American: ''analyze''), ''programme'' (B) (American: ''program ''), ''skeptic'' (A) (British: ''sceptic'').
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''don't, doesn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[East End of London]]===
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*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
**Thank you, I don't think there is an appropriate infobox for this sub-division of London that spans several geographic areas.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''211 metre'', use ''211&nbsp;metre'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>211&amp;nbsp;metre</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
**Interesting, the automated update did the imperial units, but not the metric - but it detects the metric. It might be noted that units from sources are sometimes in conflicting systems - I'll take a look at that aspect, but in the UK we tend to still be somewhat mixed between SI and Imperial units.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
**I believe they are linked, and that overlinking of individual years has been removed.
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
**The article is itself a summary of the development and history of the area. The linking is to full articles on related topics.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
**I think somebody found an error last week ... it has been eliminated!
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**Thank you. The exercise of thinking in depth about the article is useful. [[User:Kbthompson|Kbthompson]] 12:11, 5 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[Death of Edgar Allan Poe]]===
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*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
{{not done}} - Not applicable. --[[User:Midnightdreary|Midnightdreary]] 03:36, 5 October 2007 (UTC)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
{{not done}} "The Poe Toaster" is a title, "The" seems necessary. (Anyone disagree?) --[[User:Midnightdreary|Midnightdreary]] 03:36, 5 October 2007 (UTC)
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''it has been''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:27, 5 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[Kobe]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[WP:CONTEXT]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#overlink|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*Avoid including [[WP:IG|galleries]] in articles, as per [[Wikipedia:Galleries#Policy|Wikipedia:Galleries]]. Common solutions to this problem include moving the gallery to [http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Main_Page wikicommons] or integrating images with the text.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#ig|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''931 meters'', use ''931&nbsp;meters'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>931&amp;nbsp;meters</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:27, 5 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[Cleomenean War]]===
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*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:34, 5 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[Naucratis]]===
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*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''15 meters'', use ''15&nbsp;meters'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>15&amp;nbsp;meters</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, ''the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#spellnum|[?]]]</sup> Specifically, an example is 45 mi.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Thomas Henry Flewett]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], years with full dates should be linked; for example, link [[January 15]], [[2006]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#linkdate|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''honour'' (B) (American: ''honor''), ''recognise'' (B) (American: ''recognize''), ''realize'' (A) (British: ''realise''), ''realise'' (B) (American: ''realize''), ''ization'' (A) (British: ''isation''), ''isation'' (B) (American: ''ization''), ''diarrhoea'' (B) (American: ''diarrhea''), ''travelled'' (B) (American: ''traveled'').
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:34, 5 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[Dharma]]===
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*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
*Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Guide to layout]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#gtl|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''allege''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''organize'' (A) (British: ''organise''), ''realize'' (A) (British: ''realise''), ''ization'' (A) (British: ''isation''), ''isation'' (B) (American: ''ization''), ''skilful'' (B) (American: ''skillful'').
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:34, 5 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[Calgary Tigers]]===
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*The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at [[WP:LEAD]]; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadlong|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Please provide citations for all of the <code><nowiki>{{fact}}</nowiki></code>s.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#fact|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:34, 5 October 2007 (UTC)

===[[Matrikas]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Person]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], avoid capitalizing words in section headings unless they are [[proper noun]]s or the first word of the heading.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingcap|[?]]]</sup>
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<span style="color:red;"><s>All</s></span> pigs are pink, so we thought of <span style="color:red;"><s>a number of</s></span> ways to turn them green.”
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:34, 5 October 2007 (UTC)

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