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===[[What's It Gonna Be (Beyoncé Knowles song)]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|What's It Gonna Be (Beyoncé Knowles song)|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:50, 1 September 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:50, 1 September 2008 (UTC)

===[[Poundland]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Poundland|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:50, 1 September 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Guide to layout]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#gtl|[?]]]</sup>
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:50, 1 September 2008 (UTC)

===[[Washington State Route 531]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Washington State Route 531|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:50, 1 September 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:What is a featured article?]], [[WP:IMAGE|Images]] should have concise captions.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#caption|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''2007mm'', use ''2007&nbsp;mm'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>2007&amp;nbsp;mm</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:50, 1 September 2008 (UTC)

===[[Moons of Jupiter]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Moons of Jupiter|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:41, 31 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''9 km'', use ''9&nbsp;km'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>9&amp;nbsp;km</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, ''the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#spellnum|[?]]]</sup> Specifically, an example is 9 km.
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''it has been''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''favorite'' (A) (British: ''favourite''), ''meter'' (A) (British: ''metre''), ''metre'' (B) (American: ''meter''), '' gray'' (A) (British: '' grey''), '' grey'' (B) (American: '' gray'').
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:41, 31 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Security and safety features new to Windows Vista]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Security and safety features new to Windows Vista|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:41, 31 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''meter'' (A) (British: ''metre''), ''criticise'' (B) (American: ''criticize''), ''ization'' (A) (British: ''isation''), ''analyze'' (A) (British: ''analyse''), ''enrollment'' (A) (British: ''enrolment''), ''cosy'' (B) (American: ''cozy''), ''program '' (A) (British: ''programme'').
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 38 additive terms, a bit too much.
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:41, 31 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Lost (season 5)]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Lost (season 5)|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:41, 31 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:41, 31 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Pilot (30 Rock)]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Pilot (30 Rock)|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:41, 31 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''isn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:41, 31 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[List of recurring characters in The Simpsons]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|List of recurring characters in The Simpsons|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:41, 31 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long – consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''apparently''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''flavor'' (A) (British: ''flavour''), ''behavior'' (A) (British: ''behaviour''), ''neighbor'' (A) (British: ''neighbour''), ''favorite'' (A) (British: ''favourite''), ''moustache'' (B) (American: ''mustache''), ''criticize'' (A) (British: ''criticise''), ''any more'' (B) (American: ''anymore''), '' gray'' (A) (British: '' grey'').
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''don't, doesn't, can't, didn't, didn't, doesn't, doesn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:41, 31 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Hillsgrove Covered Bridge]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Hillsgrove Covered Bridge|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:41, 31 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''correctly''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:41, 31 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[NBA All-Rookie Team]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|NBA All-Rookie Team|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:41, 31 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[WP:CONTEXT]]. Guides recommend having greater than 3% words in links, but be sure not to overlink words just to add more links.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#overlink|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:41, 31 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Welcome to Our Neighborhood]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Welcome to Our Neighborhood|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:58, 30 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:58, 30 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Slipknot Demo]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Slipknot Demo|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:58, 30 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:58, 30 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Zinfandel]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Zinfandel|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:58, 30 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km<sup>2</sup>, and pounds -> lb.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#abbrev|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:58, 30 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Mangalorean Catholics]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Mangalorean Catholics|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:58, 30 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''harbour'' (B) (American: ''harbor''), ''favorite'' (A) (British: ''favourite''), ''defence'' (B) (American: ''defense''), ''colonise'' (B) (American: ''colonize''), ''ization'' (A) (British: ''isation'').
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''don't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:58, 30 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Homosexuality in speculative fiction]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Homosexuality in speculative fiction|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:36, 29 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long – consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''Don't, Don't, can't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:36, 29 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[List of British monarchs]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|List of British monarchs|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:36, 29 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[WP:CONTEXT]]. Guides recommend having greater than 3% words in links, but be sure not to overlink words just to add more links.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#overlink|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Guide to layout]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#gtl|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:36, 29 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Harry Potter]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Harry Potter|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:22, 28 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long – consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:22, 28 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Spider-Man (film series)]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Spider-Man (film series)|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:22, 28 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:22, 28 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Utah State Route 68]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Utah State Route 68|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:22, 28 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''wasn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:22, 28 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Real Madrid C.F.]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Real Madrid C.F.|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:22, 28 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], please do not [[WP:LINK|link]] words in headings.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headinglink|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long – consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''honor'' (A) (British: ''honour''), ''honour'' (B) (American: ''honor''), ''neighbour'' (B) (American: ''neighbor''), ''recognize'' (A) (British: ''recognise''), ''isation'' (B) (American: ''ization'').
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''wasn't, didn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:22, 28 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Royal Tunbridge Wells]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Royal Tunbridge Wells|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:22, 28 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*When writing standard abbreviations, the abbreviations should not have a 's' to demark plurality (for example, change kms to km and lbs to lb).
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:22, 28 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Yttrium]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Yttrium|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:22, 28 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''10 µm'', use ''10&nbsp;µm'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>10&amp;nbsp;µm</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:22, 28 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Battery (electricity)]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Battery (electricity)|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:23, 27 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''000 tons'', use ''000&nbsp;tons'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>000&amp;nbsp;tons</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:23, 27 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Smithfield, London]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Smithfield, London|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:23, 27 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*Avoid including [[WP:IG|galleries]] in articles, as per [[Wikipedia:Galleries#Policy|Wikipedia:Galleries]]. Common solutions to this problem include moving the gallery to [http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Main_Page wikicommons] or integrating images with the text.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#ig|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*When writing standard abbreviations, the abbreviations should not have a 's' to demark plurality (for example, change kms to km and lbs to lb).
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''Don't, Don't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:23, 27 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[StarCraft II]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|StarCraft II|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:22, 26 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], avoid using special characters (ex: &+{}[]) in headings.
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''it has been''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 12 additive terms, a bit too much.
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[British National Party]]===
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*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long – consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''doesn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Scott Carson]]===
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*The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at [[WP:LEAD]]; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadlong|[?]]]</sup>
*If this article is about a person, please add <code><nowiki>{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}</nowiki></code> along with the required parameters to the article - see [[Wikipedia:Persondata]] for more information.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#persondata|[?]]]</sup>
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''Don't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Judgment Day (2005)]]===
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*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Czech Republic national football team]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[WP:CONTEXT]]. Guides recommend having greater than 3% words in links, but be sure not to overlink words just to add more links.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#overlink|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*The article will need references. See [[WP:CITE]] and [[WP:V]] for more information.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#ref|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Rampton Secure Hospital]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''3 km'', use ''3&nbsp;km'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>3&amp;nbsp;km</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, ''the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#spellnum|[?]]]</sup> Specifically, an example is 2.3 km.
*Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Guide to layout]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#gtl|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''are considered''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[The Other Woman (Lost)]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Oldham Athletic A.F.C. seasons]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[List of characters in The Simpsons]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|List of characters in The Simpsons|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:22, 26 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[WP:CONTEXT]]. Guides recommend having greater than 3% words in links, but be sure not to overlink words just to add more links.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#overlink|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], please do not [[WP:LINK|link]] words in headings.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headinglink|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], avoid using special characters (ex: &+{}[]) in headings.
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long – consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''haven't, can't, can't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Chicago Midway International Airport]]===
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*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km<sup>2</sup>, and pounds -> lb.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#abbrev|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Burger King legal issues]]===
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*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[List of chemical element name etymologies]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[WP:CONTEXT]]. Guides recommend having greater than 3% words in links, but be sure not to overlink words just to add more links.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#overlink|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Guide to layout]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#gtl|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long – consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 29 additive terms, a bit too much.
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''Don't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 00:22, 23 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Voyage of the Damned (Doctor Who)]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Voyage of the Damned (Doctor Who)|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 00:22, 23 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 00:22, 23 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[KitKat Crescent]]===
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*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''75 yards'', use ''75&nbsp;yards'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>75&amp;nbsp;yards</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*When writing standard abbreviations, the abbreviations should not have a 's' to demark plurality (for example, change kms to km and lbs to lb).
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''it has been''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[2007–08 Boston Celtics season]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|2007–08 Boston Celtics season|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 00:22, 23 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[WP:CONTEXT]]. Guides recommend having greater than 3% words in links, but be sure not to overlink words just to add more links.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#overlink|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:What is a featured article?]], [[WP:IMAGE|Images]] should have concise captions.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#caption|[?]]]</sup>
*Avoid including [[WP:IG|galleries]] in articles, as per [[Wikipedia:Galleries#Policy|Wikipedia:Galleries]]. Common solutions to this problem include moving the gallery to [http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Main_Page wikicommons] or integrating images with the text.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#ig|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*When writing standard abbreviations, the abbreviations should not have a 's' to demark plurality (for example, change kms to km and lbs to lb).
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], please do not [[WP:LINK|link]] words in headings.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headinglink|[?]]]</sup>
*Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Guide to layout]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#gtl|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long – consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[The Boys from Baghdad High]]===
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*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[4chan]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''it has been''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Al Gore]]===
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*The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at [[WP:LEAD]]; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadlong|[?]]]</sup>
*The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per [[WP:LEAD]]. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leaddetail|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km<sup>2</sup>, and pounds -> lb.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#abbrev|[?]]]</sup>
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''didn't, didn't, Won't, aren't, Won't, Isn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Battle of Marston Moor]]===
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*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Old Trafford]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Old Trafford|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:30, 22 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:What is a featured article?]], [[WP:IMAGE|Images]] should have concise captions.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#caption|[?]]]</sup>
*When writing standard abbreviations, the abbreviations should not have a 's' to demark plurality (for example, change kms to km and lbs to lb).
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''it has been''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[List of number-one Billboard Top Latin Albums of 2002]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|List of number-one Billboard Top Latin Albums of 2002|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:30, 22 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[WP:CONTEXT]]. Guides recommend having greater than 3% words in links, but be sure not to overlink words just to add more links.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#overlink|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''Won't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Fethullah Gülen]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Fethullah Gülen|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:30, 22 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If this article is about a person, please add <code><nowiki>{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}</nowiki></code> along with the required parameters to the article - see [[Wikipedia:Persondata]] for more information.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#persondata|[?]]]</sup>
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''allege''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''honor'' (A) (British: ''honour''), ''honour'' (B) (American: ''honor''), ''organize'' (A) (British: ''organise''), ''recognize'' (A) (British: ''recognise''), ''criticize'' (A) (British: ''criticise''), ''ization'' (A) (British: ''isation''), ''isation'' (B) (American: ''ization''), ''analyze'' (A) (British: ''analyse''), ''traveled'' (A) (British: ''travelled'').
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''can't, don't, don't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[List of The Open Championship champions]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|List of The Open Championship champions|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:30, 22 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[WP:CONTEXT]]. Guides recommend having greater than 3% words in links, but be sure not to overlink words just to add more links.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#overlink|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''don't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:30, 22 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Kiki's Delivery Service]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Kiki's Delivery Service|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:30, 22 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''apparently''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:30, 22 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Liberalism]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Liberalism|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:30, 22 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
**'''Question''': What image could possibly work for that? [[User:Master&amp;Expert|Master&amp;Expert]] ([[User talk:Master&amp;Expert|talk]]) 04:59, 23 August 2008 (UTC)
*Per [[Wikipedia:What is a featured article?]], [[WP:IMAGE|Images]] should have concise captions.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#caption|[?]]]</sup>
*<s>You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)</s>
**Already has an infobox. [[User:Master&amp;Expert|Master&amp;Expert]] ([[User talk:Master&amp;Expert|talk]]) 05:07, 23 August 2008 (UTC)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
**'''Done''' Unless necessary, mentions of "Liberalism" removed from headings. [[User:Master&amp;Expert|Master&amp;Expert]] ([[User talk:Master&amp;Expert|talk]]) 04:59, 23 August 2008 (UTC)
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long – consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''apparently''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''behavior'' (A) (British: ''behaviour''), ''defense'' (A) (British: ''defence''), ''organize'' (A) (British: ''organise''), ''criticize'' (A) (British: ''criticise''), ''ization'' (A) (British: ''isation''), ''isation'' (B) (American: ''ization''), ''analyze'' (A) (British: ''analyse''), ''fulfillment'' (A) (British: ''fulfilment''), ''program '' (A) (British: ''programme''), ''programme'' (B) (American: ''program ''), ''skeptic'' (A) (British: ''sceptic'').
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
**Avoid misplaced formality: “in order to/for” (-> to/for), “thereupon”, “notwithstanding”, [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a#Saying good-bye to misplaced formality|etc]].
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''doesn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Šalata]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Šalata|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:25, 21 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
**'''Done.''' Expanded to two paragraphs. [[User:Admiral Norton|Admiral Norton]] <sup>([[User talk:Admiral Norton|talk]])</sup> 12:13, 21 August 2008 (UTC)
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
**'''Not done.''' Problems with finding an infobox for a neighborhood. [[User:Admiral Norton|Admiral Norton]] <sup>([[User talk:Admiral Norton|talk]])</sup> 11:23, 21 August 2008 (UTC)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
**'''Done.''' It was used to break up the monotony, but I guess it has to go. [[User:Admiral Norton|Admiral Norton]] <sup>([[User talk:Admiral Norton|talk]])</sup> 11:23, 21 August 2008 (UTC)
*Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Guide to layout]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#gtl|[?]]]</sup>
**'''Done.''' [[User:Admiral Norton|Admiral Norton]] <sup>([[User talk:Admiral Norton|talk]])</sup> 11:23, 21 August 2008 (UTC)
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 12 additive terms, a bit too much.
***'''Done.''' Down to 4 terms. [[User:Admiral Norton|Admiral Norton]] <sup>([[User talk:Admiral Norton|talk]])</sup> 11:23, 21 August 2008 (UTC)
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[1995 Pacific Grand Prix]]===
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*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''wasn't, didn't, can't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Unforgiven (2005)]]===
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*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''hasn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[William Hanna]]===
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*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''23MM'', use ''23&nbsp;MM'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>23&amp;nbsp;MM</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[30 Rock]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km<sup>2</sup>, and pounds -> lb.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#abbrev|[?]]]</sup>
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''realize'' (A) (British: ''realise''), ''criticize'' (A) (British: ''criticise''), ''criticise'' (B) (American: ''criticize''), ''programme'' (B) (American: ''program '').
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''don't, didn't, didn't, can't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Climate of the Arctic]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Climate of the Arctic|[[User:SriMesh|SriMesh]] | [[User talk:SriMesh|<small>talk</small>]] 21:58, 20 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''3DG'', use ''3&nbsp;DG'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>3&amp;nbsp;DG</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km<sup>2</sup>, and pounds -> lb.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#abbrev|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long – consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''are considered''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''meter'' (A) (British: ''metre''), ''metre'' (B) (American: ''meter''), ''organize'' (A) (British: ''organise''), ''realize'' (A) (British: ''realise''), ''analyse'' (B) (American: ''analyze''), ''cosy'' (B) (American: ''cozy''), ''program '' (A) (British: ''programme'').
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
*This article needs [[WP:FOOTNOTE|footnotes]], preferably in the [http://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/Cite/Cite.php cite.php] format recommended by [[WP:WIAFA]]. Simply, enclose inline citations, with [[WP:CITE]] or [[WP:CITE/ES]] information, with <nowiki><ref>THE FOOTNOTE</ref></nowiki>. At the bottom of the article, in a section named “References” or “Footnotes”, add <code><nowiki><div class="references-small"><references/></div></nowiki></code>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#foot|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:SriMesh|SriMesh]] | [[User talk:SriMesh|<small>talk</small>]] 21:58, 20 August 2008 (UTC)
===[[Southern Cross Expedition]]===
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*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''4Dl'', use ''4&nbsp;Dl'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>4&amp;nbsp;Dl</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Christina Aguilera]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Christina Aguilera|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 10:55, 19 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[WP:CONTEXT]]. Guides recommend having greater than 3% words in links, but be sure not to overlink words just to add more links.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#overlink|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], avoid using special characters (ex: &+{}[]) in headings.
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''don't, don't, didn't, doesn't, Don't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[List of Memphis Grizzlies head coaches]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|List of Memphis Grizzlies head coaches|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 10:55, 19 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[WP:CONTEXT]]. Guides recommend having greater than 3% words in links, but be sure not to overlink words just to add more links.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#overlink|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[List of Toronto Raptors head coaches]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|List of Toronto Raptors head coaches|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 10:55, 19 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[WP:CONTEXT]]. Guides recommend having greater than 3% words in links, but be sure not to overlink words just to add more links.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#overlink|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Philadelphia Phillies team records]]===
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*Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[WP:CONTEXT]]. Guides recommend having greater than 3% words in links, but be sure not to overlink words just to add more links.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#overlink|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Discography of Final Fantasy VII]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], avoid using special characters (ex: &+{}[]) in headings.
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[List of Arizona Cardinals head coaches]]===
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*Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[WP:CONTEXT]]. Guides recommend having greater than 3% words in links, but be sure not to overlink words just to add more links.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#overlink|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[The Noah Family]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*<s>Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup></s> Dates, months, years, and centuries are only wikilinked if it provides context
*<s>You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)</s> No applicable infobox
*<s>Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup></s> 'The' is necessary in heading 
*<s>Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], avoid capitalizing words in section headings unless they are [[proper noun]]s or the first word of the heading.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingcap|[?]]]</sup></s> Each heading is properly capitalized
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 10:55, 19 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Piedmont College]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Piedmont College|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 10:55, 19 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at [[WP:LEAD]]; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadlong|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Satake clan]]===
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*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Guide to layout]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#gtl|[?]]]</sup>
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 10:55, 19 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Sarracenia]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Sarracenia|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 10:55, 19 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''5 mm'', use ''5&nbsp;mm'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>5&amp;nbsp;mm</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km<sup>2</sup>, and pounds -> lb.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#abbrev|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, ''the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#spellnum|[?]]]</sup> Specifically, an example is 10 cm.
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''arguably''
**''are considered''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''meter'' (A) (British: ''metre''), ''recognize'' (A) (British: ''recognise''), ''recognise'' (B) (American: ''recognize''), ''ization'' (A) (British: ''isation''), ''modelling'' (B) (American: ''modeling''), ''any more'' (B) (American: ''anymore''), ''cosy'' (B) (American: ''cozy''), ''curb'' (A) (British: ''kerb''), ''program '' (A) (British: ''programme'').
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''doesn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 10:55, 19 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Mother and Child Reunion (Degrassi: The Next Generation)]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Mother and Child Reunion (Degrassi: The Next Generation)|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 10:55, 19 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 10:55, 19 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[The Five Heartbeats]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|The Five Heartbeats|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 10:55, 19 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''0Nl'', use ''0&nbsp;Nl'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>0&amp;nbsp;Nl</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''wasn't, wasn't, Haven't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*The article will need references. See [[WP:CITE]] and [[WP:V]] for more information.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#ref|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 10:55, 19 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Legal disputes over Harry Potter]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Legal disputes over Harry Potter|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 10:55, 19 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''honor'' (A) (British: ''honour''), ''defense'' (A) (British: ''defence''), ''organise'' (B) (American: ''organize''), ''recognise'' (B) (American: ''recognize''), ''criticize'' (A) (British: ''criticise''), ''criticise'' (B) (American: ''criticize''), ''isation'' (B) (American: ''ization'').
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''Don't, doesn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 10:55, 19 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Meteorological history of Tropical Storm Allison]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Meteorological history of Tropical Storm Allison|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 10:55, 19 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''3 feet '', use ''3&nbsp;feet '', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>3&amp;nbsp;feet </tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km<sup>2</sup>, and pounds -> lb.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#abbrev|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 10:55, 19 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Amaranthus brownii]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Amaranthus brownii|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 10:55, 19 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''4 km'', use ''4&nbsp;km'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>4&amp;nbsp;km</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km<sup>2</sup>, and pounds -> lb.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#abbrev|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, ''the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#spellnum|[?]]]</sup> Specifically, an example is 0.4 km.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 10:55, 19 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Paul McDermott (comedian)]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Paul McDermott (comedian)|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:50, 17 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:50, 17 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Kingdom Hearts coded]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Kingdom Hearts coded|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:06, 16 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:06, 16 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Werner Heisenberg]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Werner Heisenberg|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:06, 16 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at [[WP:LEAD]]; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadlong|[?]]]</sup>
*The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per [[WP:LEAD]]. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leaddetail|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''40 cm'', use ''40&nbsp;cm'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>40&amp;nbsp;cm</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, ''the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#spellnum|[?]]]</sup> Specifically, an example is 40 cm.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], avoid using special characters (ex: &+{}[]) in headings.
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:06, 16 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[List of Drexel University alumni]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|List of Drexel University alumni|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:06, 16 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[WP:CONTEXT]]. Guides recommend having greater than 3% words in links, but be sure not to overlink words just to add more links.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#overlink|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:06, 16 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Matt Sydal]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Matt Sydal|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:06, 16 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If this article is about a person, please add <code><nowiki>{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}</nowiki></code> along with the required parameters to the article - see [[Wikipedia:Persondata]] for more information.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#persondata|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''80 kg'', use ''80&nbsp;kg'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>80&amp;nbsp;kg</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, ''the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#spellnum|[?]]]</sup> Specifically, an example is 5 ft.
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:06, 16 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Fauna of Scotland]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Fauna of Scotland|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:06, 16 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km<sup>2</sup>, and pounds -> lb.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#abbrev|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long – consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:06, 16 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Michael Atiyah]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Michael Atiyah|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:06, 16 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''honor'' (A) (British: ''honour''), ''honour'' (B) (American: ''honor''), ''favorite'' (A) (British: ''favourite''), ''meter'' (A) (British: ''metre''), ''fiber'' (A) (British: ''fibre''), ''fibre'' (B) (American: ''fiber''), ''realise'' (B) (American: ''realize''), ''ization'' (A) (British: ''isation''), ''analyse'' (B) (American: ''analyze''), ''travelled'' (B) (American: ''traveled''), ''program '' (A) (British: ''programme'').
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''don't, don't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:06, 16 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Schubert's last sonatas]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Schubert's last sonatas|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:06, 16 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''meter'' (A) (British: ''metre''), ''realize'' (A) (British: ''realise''), ''isation'' (B) (American: ''ization''), ''analyse'' (B) (American: ''analyze''), ''molt'' (A) (British: ''moult''), ''program '' (A) (British: ''programme'').
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:06, 16 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Stevenson High School (Lincolnshire, Illinois)]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Stevenson High School (Lincolnshire, Illinois)|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:06, 16 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''50 meter'', use ''50&nbsp;meter'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>50&amp;nbsp;meter</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km<sup>2</sup>, and pounds -> lb.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#abbrev|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long – consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''shouldn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:06, 16 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[In-N-Out Burger menu items]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|In-N-Out Burger menu items|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:53, 15 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''don't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:53, 15 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Shimabara Rebellion]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Shimabara Rebellion|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:53, 15 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Guide to layout]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#gtl|[?]]]</sup>
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:53, 15 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Bone Wars]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Bone Wars|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:53, 15 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''didn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:53, 15 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[New York in the American Civil War]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|New York in the American Civil War|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:53, 15 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*Avoid including [[WP:IG|galleries]] in articles, as per [[Wikipedia:Galleries#Policy|Wikipedia:Galleries]]. Common solutions to this problem include moving the gallery to [http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Main_Page wikicommons] or integrating images with the text.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#ig|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:53, 15 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Say Anything (band)]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Say Anything (band)|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:45, 14 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long – consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:45, 14 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Jena Six]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Jena Six|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:45, 14 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long – consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''it has been''
**''allege''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''Won't, Don't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:45, 14 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Odwalla]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Odwalla|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:45, 14 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], please do not [[WP:LINK|link]] words in headings.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headinglink|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:45, 14 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[List of UEFA Super Cup winners]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|List of UEFA Super Cup winners|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:45, 14 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[WP:CONTEXT]]. Guides recommend having greater than 3% words in links, but be sure not to overlink words just to add more links.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#overlink|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:45, 14 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Sweeney Todd: The Demon Barber of Fleet Street (2007 film)]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Sweeney Todd: The Demon Barber of Fleet Street (2007 film)|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:45, 14 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''behavior'' (A) (British: ''behaviour''), ''favourite'' (B) (American: ''favorite''), ''recognize'' (A) (British: ''recognise''), ''recognise'' (B) (American: ''recognize''), ''realize'' (A) (British: ''realise''), ''criticize'' (A) (British: ''criticise'').
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''hadn't, don't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:45, 14 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Anna Anderson]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Anna Anderson|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:45, 14 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*If this article is about a person, please add <code><nowiki>{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}</nowiki></code> along with the required parameters to the article - see [[Wikipedia:Persondata]] for more information.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#persondata|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''allege''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''behaviour'' (B) (American: ''behavior''), ''favourite'' (B) (American: ''favorite''), ''organize'' (A) (British: ''organise''), ''recognize'' (A) (British: ''recognise''), ''recognise'' (B) (American: ''recognize''), ''realise'' (B) (American: ''realize''), ''isation'' (B) (American: ''ization''), ''skeptic'' (A) (British: ''sceptic'').
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''couldn't, didn't, didn't, doesn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:45, 14 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[James W. Faulkner]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|James W. Faulkner|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:32, 13 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at [[WP:LEAD]]; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadlong|[?]]]</sup>
*If this article is about a person, please add <code><nowiki>{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}</nowiki></code> along with the required parameters to the article - see [[Wikipedia:Persondata]] for more information.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#persondata|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:32, 13 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Germany women's national football team]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Germany women's national football team|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:32, 13 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:What is a featured article?]], [[WP:IMAGE|Images]] should have concise captions.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#caption|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''honor'' (A) (British: ''honour''), ''honour'' (B) (American: ''honor''), ''favourite'' (B) (American: ''favorite''), ''meter'' (A) (British: ''metre''), ''organise'' (B) (American: ''organize''), ''criticize'' (A) (British: ''criticise''), ''isation'' (B) (American: ''ization''), ''program '' (A) (British: ''programme'').
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:32, 13 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Hekla]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Hekla|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:32, 13 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*When writing standard abbreviations, the abbreviations should not have a 's' to demark plurality (for example, change kms to km and lbs to lb).
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], avoid using special characters (ex: &+{}[]) in headings.
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long – consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''is considered''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:32, 13 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[2007 USC Trojans football team]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|2007 USC Trojans football team|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:32, 13 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:What is a featured article?]], [[WP:IMAGE|Images]] should have concise captions.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#caption|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long – consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''hadn't, Don't, hasn't, hasn't, didn't, Don't, Can't, Don't, can't, Don't, can't, Don't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:32, 13 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[List of Extreme Makeover: Home Edition episodes]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|List of Extreme Makeover: Home Edition episodes|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:32, 13 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''16 tons'', use ''16&nbsp;tons'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>16&amp;nbsp;tons</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, ''the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#spellnum|[?]]]</sup> Specifically, an example is . ft.
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], avoid capitalizing words in section headings unless they are [[proper noun]]s or the first word of the heading.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingcap|[?]]]</sup>
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''apparently''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 63 additive terms, a bit too much.
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''doesn't, wasn't, doesn't, don't, can't, can't, can't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:32, 13 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Iraq War misappropriations]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Iraq War misappropriations|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:32, 13 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Guide to layout]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#gtl|[?]]]</sup>
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''it has been''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:32, 13 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Habbush letter]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Habbush letter|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:32, 13 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''allege''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''haven't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:32, 13 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Onychodus]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Onychodus|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:32, 13 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''22 mm'', use ''22&nbsp;mm'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>22&amp;nbsp;mm</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, ''the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#spellnum|[?]]]</sup> Specifically, an example is 4 cm.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:32, 13 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Roman Abramovich]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Roman Abramovich|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:32, 13 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at [[WP:LEAD]]; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadlong|[?]]]</sup>
*The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per [[WP:LEAD]]. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leaddetail|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''7CG'', use ''7&nbsp;CG'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>7&amp;nbsp;CG</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km<sup>2</sup>, and pounds -> lb.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#abbrev|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long – consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''allege''
**''apparently''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''favourite'' (B) (American: ''favorite''), ''aluminum'' (A) (British: ''aluminium''), ''aluminium'' (B) (American: ''aluminum''), ''meter'' (A) (British: ''metre''), ''metre'' (B) (American: ''meter''), ''organize'' (A) (British: ''organise''), ''ization'' (A) (British: ''isation''), ''curb'' (A) (British: ''kerb''), ''programme'' (B) (American: ''program '').
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**“In <font color='red'><s>the year [of]</s></font> 2005”
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''won't, don't, don't, won't, can't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:32, 13 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[List of most wealthy historical figures]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|List of most wealthy historical figures|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:32, 13 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Guide to layout]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#gtl|[?]]]</sup>
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''doesn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please provide citations for all of the <code><nowiki>{{fact}}</nowiki></code>s.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#fact|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:32, 13 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[List of most wealthy historical figures]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|List of most wealthy historical figures|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:32, 13 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Guide to layout]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#gtl|[?]]]</sup>
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''doesn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please provide citations for all of the <code><nowiki>{{fact}}</nowiki></code>s.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#fact|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:32, 13 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Leonardo da Vinci]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Leonardo da Vinci|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:32, 13 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''100 cm'', use ''100&nbsp;cm'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>100&amp;nbsp;cm</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, ''the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#spellnum|[?]]]</sup> Specifically, an example is 250 cm.
*When writing standard abbreviations, the abbreviations should not have a 's' to demark plurality (for example, change kms to km and lbs to lb).
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Guide to layout]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#gtl|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long – consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''apparently''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''favourite'' (B) (American: ''favorite''), ''recognize'' (A) (British: ''recognise''), ''realise'' (B) (American: ''realize''), ''isation'' (B) (American: ''ization''), ''analyse'' (B) (American: ''analyze''), ''modelling'' (B) (American: ''modeling''), ''travelled'' (B) (American: ''traveled''), ''mold'' (A) (British: ''mould''), ''programme'' (B) (American: ''program '').
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''Don't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:32, 13 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Galactik Football]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Galactik Football|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:32, 13 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], avoid using special characters (ex: &+{}[]) in headings.
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long – consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''favorite'' (A) (British: ''favourite''), ''favourite'' (B) (American: ''favorite''), ''defense'' (A) (British: ''defence''), ''organise'' (B) (American: ''organize''), ''realise'' (B) (American: ''realize''), ''analyse'' (B) (American: ''analyze''), ''paralyze'' (A) (British: ''paralyse''), ''skillful'' (A) (British: ''skilful'').
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''doesn't, doesn't, doesn't, don't, don't, aren't, doesn't, don't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Matthew Jarvis]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Matthew Jarvis|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:32, 13 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*If this article is about a person, please add <code><nowiki>{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}</nowiki></code> along with the required parameters to the article - see [[Wikipedia:Persondata]] for more information.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#persondata|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Los Angeles Lakers]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Los Angeles Lakers|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:32, 13 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:What is a featured article?]], [[WP:IMAGE|Images]] should have concise captions.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#caption|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], avoid using special characters (ex: &+{}[]) in headings.
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''don't, wasn't, didn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Anna Politkovskaya]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Anna Politkovskaya|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:32, 13 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''harbor'' (A) (British: ''harbour''), ''harbour'' (B) (American: ''harbor''), ''meter'' (A) (British: ''metre''), ''organize'' (A) (British: ''organise''), ''organise'' (B) (American: ''organize''), ''criticize'' (A) (British: ''criticise'').
*Please provide citations for all of the <code><nowiki>{{fact}}</nowiki></code>s.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#fact|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:32, 13 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Sunderland A.F.C. seasons]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Sunderland A.F.C. seasons|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:35, 12 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[WP:CONTEXT]]. Guides recommend having greater than 3% words in links, but be sure not to overlink words just to add more links.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#overlink|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*This article does not have any [[WP:CAT|categories]]. Please categorize it with relevant <code><nowiki>[[Category:Categories]]</nowiki></code>.
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:35, 12 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Batman (1989 film)]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Batman (1989 film)|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:35, 12 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''wasn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:35, 12 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Premiere (The O.C.)]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Premiere (The O.C.)|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:35, 12 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:35, 12 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Stonewall riots]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Stonewall riots|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:35, 12 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''allege''
**''many people sa''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''didn't, couldn't, wasn't, weren't, weren't, didn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Margaret Fuller]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Margaret Fuller|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:35, 12 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''is considered''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:35, 12 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[2008 Chino Hills earthquake]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|2008 Chino Hills earthquake|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:35, 12 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:35, 12 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[German Shepherd Dog]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|German Shepherd Dog|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:08, 11 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:08, 11 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Sean Sherk]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Sean Sherk|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:08, 11 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*If this article is about a person, please add <code><nowiki>{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}</nowiki></code> along with the required parameters to the article - see [[Wikipedia:Persondata]] for more information.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#persondata|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''70 kg'', use ''70&nbsp;kg'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>70&amp;nbsp;kg</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:08, 11 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Flytoget]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Flytoget|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:08, 11 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''210 km'', use ''210&nbsp;km'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>210&amp;nbsp;km</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, ''the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#spellnum|[?]]]</sup> Specifically, an example is 71.93 km.
*Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Guide to layout]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#gtl|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:08, 11 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Half-Life 2: Episode Three]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Half-Life 2: Episode Three|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:08, 11 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:08, 11 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[The Office (U.S. TV series) season 5]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|The Office (U.S. TV series) season 5|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:11, 10 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at [[WP:LEAD]]; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadlong|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Guide to layout]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#gtl|[?]]]</sup>
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''it has been''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[List of former Football League clubs]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|List of former Football League clubs|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:11, 10 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[WP:CONTEXT]]. Guides recommend having greater than 3% words in links, but be sure not to overlink words just to add more links.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#overlink|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Temporal terms like “over the years”, “currently”, “now”, and “from time to time” often are too vague to be useful, but occasionally may be helpful. “I am <font color='red'><s>now</s></font> using a semi-bot to generate your peer review.”
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Mangalore]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Mangalore|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:11, 10 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''175 Tons'', use ''175&nbsp;Tons'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>175&amp;nbsp;Tons</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''honour'' (B) (American: ''honor''), ''harbour'' (B) (American: ''harbor''), ''organize'' (A) (British: ''organise''), ''organise'' (B) (American: ''organize''), ''recognise'' (B) (American: ''recognize''), ''categorize'' (A) (British: ''categorise''), ''ization'' (A) (British: ''isation''), ''isation'' (B) (American: ''ization''), ''travelled'' (B) (American: ''traveled''), ''program '' (A) (British: ''programme''), ''programme'' (B) (American: ''program '').
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Pilot (30 Rock)]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Pilot (30 Rock)|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:46, 9 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''isn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Aquarium]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Aquarium|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:46, 9 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''10 gallon'', use ''10&nbsp;gallon'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>10&amp;nbsp;gallon</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km<sup>2</sup>, and pounds -> lb.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#abbrev|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], avoid using special characters (ex: &+{}[]) in headings.
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''behavior'' (A) (British: ''behaviour''), ''behaviour'' (B) (American: ''behavior''), ''meter'' (A) (British: ''metre''), ''metre'' (B) (American: ''meter''), ''fiber'' (A) (British: ''fibre''), ''colonize'' (A) (British: ''colonise''), ''ization'' (A) (British: ''isation''), ''cosy'' (B) (American: ''cozy'').
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 25 additive terms, a bit too much.
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:46, 9 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Leonard Harrison State Park]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Leonard Harrison State Park|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:46, 9 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''2 miles '', use ''2&nbsp;miles '', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>2&amp;nbsp;miles </tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
**Uses {{tl|nowrap}} templates [[User:Ruhrfisch|Ruhrfisch]]  '''[[User talk:Ruhrfisch|<sub style="color:green;">&gt;&lt;&gt;</sub><small>&deg;</small><sup><small>&deg;</small></sup>]]''' 05:00, 9 August 2008 (UTC)
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''it has been''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
**Fixed [[User:Ruhrfisch|Ruhrfisch]]  '''[[User talk:Ruhrfisch|<sub style="color:green;">&gt;&lt;&gt;</sub><small>&deg;</small><sup><small>&deg;</small></sup>]]''' 05:00, 9 August 2008 (UTC)
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''can't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:46, 9 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Sabah Tshung Tsin Secondary School]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Sabah Tshung Tsin Secondary School|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:46, 9 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''2 km'', use ''2&nbsp;km'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>2&amp;nbsp;km</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], avoid using special characters (ex: &+{}[]) in headings.
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''honor'' (A) (British: ''honour''), ''honour'' (B) (American: ''honor''), ''organize'' (A) (British: ''organise''), ''recognize'' (A) (British: ''recognise''), ''enrollment'' (A) (British: ''enrolment''), ''enrolment'' (B) (American: ''enrollment'').
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:46, 9 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Bryan Adams discography]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Bryan Adams discography|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:46, 9 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''didn't, wasn't, Can't, Don't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:46, 9 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[2000 Football League Second Division playoff final]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|2000 Football League Second Division playoff final|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:46, 9 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:46, 9 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[The O.C. (season 2)]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|The O.C. (season 2)|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:46, 9 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''don't, Wasn't, doesn't, won't, won't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:46, 9 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Amaranthus tuberculatus]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Amaranthus tuberculatus|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:46, 9 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''32 inch'', use ''32&nbsp;inch'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>32&amp;nbsp;inch</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''it has been''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:46, 9 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Federal government of the United States]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Federal government of the United States|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:46, 9 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:What is a featured article?]], [[WP:IMAGE|Images]] should have concise captions.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#caption|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''are considered''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:46, 9 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Manchester, Bolton and Bury Canal]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Manchester, Bolton and Bury Canal|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 00:30, 8 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*Avoid including [[WP:IG|galleries]] in articles, as per [[Wikipedia:Galleries#Policy|Wikipedia:Galleries]]. Common solutions to this problem include moving the gallery to [http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Main_Page wikicommons] or integrating images with the text.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#ig|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''100 yards'', use ''100&nbsp;yards'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>100&amp;nbsp;yards</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Newton's theorem of revolving orbits]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Newton's theorem of revolving orbits|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 00:30, 8 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''doesn't, doesn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 00:30, 8 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Dysart, Fife]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Dysart, Fife|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 00:30, 8 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''500 pounds'', use ''500&nbsp;pounds'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>500&amp;nbsp;pounds</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 00:30, 8 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Fenwick High School (Oak Park, Illinois)]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Fenwick High School (Oak Park, Illinois)|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 00:30, 8 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''3 meter'', use ''3&nbsp;meter'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>3&amp;nbsp;meter</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], avoid using special characters (ex: &+{}[]) in headings.
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''honor'' (A) (British: ''honour''), ''meter'' (A) (British: ''metre''), ''metre'' (B) (American: ''meter''), ''defense'' (A) (British: ''defence''), ''recognize'' (A) (British: ''recognise''), ''enrollment'' (A) (British: ''enrolment''), ''enrolment'' (B) (American: ''enrollment''), ''program '' (A) (British: ''programme'').
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 00:30, 8 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Bill Lange]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Bill Lange|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 00:30, 8 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*If this article is about a person, please add <code><nowiki>{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}</nowiki></code> along with the required parameters to the article - see [[Wikipedia:Persondata]] for more information.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#persondata|[?]]]</sup>
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 00:30, 8 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[New Halo Project]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|New Halo Project|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 00:30, 8 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 00:30, 8 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Halo: Chronicles]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Halo: Chronicles|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 00:30, 8 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*When writing standard abbreviations, the abbreviations should not have a 's' to demark plurality (for example, change kms to km and lbs to lb).
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''isn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 00:30, 8 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[List of founding Fellows, Scholars and Commissioners of Jesus College, Oxford]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|List of founding Fellows, Scholars and Commissioners of Jesus College, Oxford|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:39, 7 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:What is a featured article?]], [[WP:IMAGE|Images]] should have concise captions.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#caption|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:39, 7 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Avatar: The Last Airbender (season 1)]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Avatar: The Last Airbender (season 1)|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:39, 7 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:39, 7 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Avatar: The Last Airbender (season 2)]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Avatar: The Last Airbender (season 2)|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:39, 7 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:39, 7 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Thomas Francis Meagher]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Thomas Francis Meagher|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:39, 7 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:39, 7 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Halo: The Cole Protocol]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Halo: The Cole Protocol|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:39, 7 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[WP:CONTEXT]]. Guides recommend having greater than 3% words in links, but be sure not to overlink words just to add more links.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#overlink|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], avoid capitalizing words in section headings unless they are [[proper noun]]s or the first word of the heading.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingcap|[?]]]</sup>
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:39, 7 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Sergei Bodrov, Jr.]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Sergei Bodrov, Jr.|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:39, 7 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Guide to layout]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#gtl|[?]]]</sup>
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
**Avoid misplaced formality: “in order to/for” (-> to/for), “thereupon”, “notwithstanding”, [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a#Saying good-bye to misplaced formality|etc]].
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''didn't, couldn't, couldn't, couldn't, don't, can't, doesn't, doesn't, doesn't, can't, don't, didn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[List of The Simpsons comics]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|List of The Simpsons comics|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:39, 7 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], avoid using special characters (ex: &+{}[]) in headings.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[United States Academic Decathlon]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|United States Academic Decathlon|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:39, 7 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:What is a featured article?]], [[WP:IMAGE|Images]] should have concise captions.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#caption|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], avoid using special characters (ex: &+{}[]) in headings.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Kirkcaldy]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Kirkcaldy|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:06, 6 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at [[WP:LEAD]]; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadlong|[?]]]</sup>
*The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per [[WP:LEAD]]. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leaddetail|[?]]]</sup>
*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km<sup>2</sup>, and pounds -> lb.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#abbrev|[?]]]</sup>
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long – consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Halo Wars]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Halo Wars|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:06, 6 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''isn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Britney Spears]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Britney Spears|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:06, 6 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''it has been''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''can't, hasn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Léon M'ba]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Léon M'ba|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:06, 6 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*If this article is about a person, please add <code><nowiki>{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}</nowiki></code> along with the required parameters to the article - see [[Wikipedia:Persondata]] for more information.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#persondata|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''250 kilometres'', use ''250&nbsp;kilometres'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>250&amp;nbsp;kilometres</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''metre'' (B) (American: ''meter''), ''defense'' (A) (British: ''defence''), ''organize'' (A) (British: ''organise''), ''organise'' (B) (American: ''organize''), ''realize'' (A) (British: ''realise''), ''ization'' (A) (British: ''isation''), '' aging'' (A) (British: '' ageing'').
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Space Invaders]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Space Invaders|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:06, 6 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Low-carbohydrate diet]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Low-carbohydrate diet|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:06, 6 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''130 grams'', use ''130&nbsp;grams'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>130&amp;nbsp;grams</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], avoid using special characters (ex: &+{}[]) in headings.
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long – consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''it has been''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''doesn't, don't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:06, 6 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Darwin Rebellion]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Darwin Rebellion|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:06, 6 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''correctly''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:06, 6 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Sebastian Shaw (actor)]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Sebastian Shaw (actor)|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:06, 6 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
:{{Done}}, although the footnotes may require another look --[[User:Old Moonraker|Old Moonraker]] ([[User talk:Old Moonraker|talk]]) 14:45, 6 August 2008 (UTC)
*If this article is about a person, please add <code><nowiki>{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}</nowiki></code> along with the required parameters to the article - see [[Wikipedia:Persondata]] for more information.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#persondata|[?]]]</sup>
:{{Done}}
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
:{{Done}} The section head was a book title–''The Christening''– now italicised--[[User:Old Moonraker|Old Moonraker]] ([[User talk:Old Moonraker|talk]]) 14:11, 6 August 2008 (UTC)
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[History of the National Hockey League (1942–1967)]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|History of the National Hockey League (1942–1967)|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:05, 5 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''didn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:05, 5 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Sildenafil]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Sildenafil|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:05, 5 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''20 mg'', use ''20&nbsp;mg'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>20&amp;nbsp;mg</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km<sup>2</sup>, and pounds -> lb.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#abbrev|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, ''the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#spellnum|[?]]]</sup> Specifically, an example is 20 mg.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:05, 5 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Barbiturate]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Barbiturate|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:05, 5 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Avoid including [[WP:IG|galleries]] in articles, as per [[Wikipedia:Galleries#Policy|Wikipedia:Galleries]]. Common solutions to this problem include moving the gallery to [http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Main_Page wikicommons] or integrating images with the text.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#ig|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 13 additive terms, a bit too much.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:05, 5 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Cleared the neighbourhood]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Cleared the neighbourhood|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:05, 5 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at [[WP:LEAD]]; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadlong|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:05, 5 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Lucknow]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Lucknow|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:05, 5 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:What is a featured article?]], [[WP:IMAGE|Images]] should have concise captions.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#caption|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''20 km'', use ''20&nbsp;km'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>20&amp;nbsp;km</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, ''the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#spellnum|[?]]]</sup> Specifically, an example is 20 km.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long – consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''favourite'' (B) (American: ''favorite''), ''meter'' (A) (British: ''metre''), ''organise'' (B) (American: ''organize''), ''ization'' (A) (British: ''isation''), ''any more'' (B) (American: ''anymore'').
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 32 additive terms, a bit too much.
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:05, 5 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Purdue University]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Purdue University|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:05, 5 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Avoid including [[WP:IG|galleries]] in articles, as per [[Wikipedia:Galleries#Policy|Wikipedia:Galleries]]. Common solutions to this problem include moving the gallery to [http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Main_Page wikicommons] or integrating images with the text.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#ig|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''10 feet '', use ''10&nbsp;feet '', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>10&amp;nbsp;feet </tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], avoid using special characters (ex: &+{}[]) in headings.
*Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Guide to layout]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#gtl|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long – consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''allege''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:05, 5 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Dickman-de Bruijn function]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Dickman-de Bruijn function|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 09:47, 4 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 09:47, 4 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Metallic bond]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Metallic bond|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 09:47, 4 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 09:47, 4 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Montreal]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Montreal|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 09:47, 4 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:What is a featured article?]], [[WP:IMAGE|Images]] should have concise captions.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#caption|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''8 kilometre'', use ''8&nbsp;kilometre'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>8&amp;nbsp;kilometre</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km<sup>2</sup>, and pounds -> lb.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#abbrev|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, ''the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#spellnum|[?]]]</sup> Specifically, an example is 122.5 cm.
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
*Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Guide to layout]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#gtl|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long – consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''are considered''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''honour'' (B) (American: ''honor''), ''harbour'' (B) (American: ''harbor''), ''neighbour'' (B) (American: ''neighbor''), ''meter'' (A) (British: ''metre''), ''metre'' (B) (American: ''meter''), ''fibre'' (B) (American: ''fiber''), ''organize'' (A) (British: ''organise''), ''recognize'' (A) (British: ''recognise''), ''ization'' (A) (British: ''isation''), ''fulfilment'' (B) (American: ''fulfillment'').
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''doesn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 09:47, 4 August 2008 (UTC)

===[[Charing Cross, Euston and Hampstead Railway]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Charing Cross, Euston and Hampstead Railway|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 09:47, 4 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], avoid using special characters (ex: &+{}[]) in headings.
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''meter'' (A) (British: ''metre''), ''metre'' (B) (American: ''meter''), ''isation'' (B) (American: ''ization''), ''signalling'' (B) (American: ''signaling''), ''travelled'' (B) (American: ''traveled''), ''routing'' (A) (British: ''routeing'').
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Alan Shearer]]===
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*The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at [[WP:LEAD]]; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadlong|[?]]]</sup>
*The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per [[WP:LEAD]]. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leaddetail|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''don't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Guitar Hero: Metallica]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[WP:CONTEXT]]. Guides recommend having greater than 3% words in links, but be sure not to overlink words just to add more links.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#overlink|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Guitar Hero On Tour: Decades]]===
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*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[United States v. LaRouche]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''weren't, won't, Can't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[List of number-one Billboard Top Latin Albums of 2001]]===
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*Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[WP:CONTEXT]]. Guides recommend having greater than 3% words in links, but be sure not to overlink words just to add more links.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#overlink|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[List of Avatar: The Last Airbender episodes]]===
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*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Slackers CDs and Games]]===
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*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Epikleros]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
**Avoid misplaced formality: “in order to/for” (-> to/for), “thereupon”, “notwithstanding”, [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a#Saying good-bye to misplaced formality|etc]].
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Farthest South]]===
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*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*When writing standard abbreviations, the abbreviations should not have a 's' to demark plurality (for example, change kms to km and lbs to lb).
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], avoid capitalizing words in section headings unless they are [[proper noun]]s or the first word of the heading.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingcap|[?]]]</sup>
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Guitar Hero World Tour]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 27 additive terms, a bit too much.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[New York Yankees seasons]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[WP:CONTEXT]]. Guides recommend having greater than 3% words in links, but be sure not to overlink words just to add more links.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#overlink|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Dwain Chambers]]===
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*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''can't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[List of Roman Emperors]]===
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*The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at [[WP:LEAD]]; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadlong|[?]]]</sup>
*The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per [[WP:LEAD]]. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leaddetail|[?]]]</sup>
*Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[WP:CONTEXT]]. Guides recommend having greater than 3% words in links, but be sure not to overlink words just to add more links.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#overlink|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''30 mm'', use ''30&nbsp;mm'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>30&amp;nbsp;mm</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Guide to layout]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#gtl|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''is considered''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*This article needs [[WP:FOOTNOTE|footnotes]], preferably in the [http://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/Cite/Cite.php cite.php] format recommended by [[WP:WIAFA]]. Simply, enclose inline citations, with [[WP:CITE]] or [[WP:CITE/ES]] information, with <nowiki><ref>THE FOOTNOTE</ref></nowiki>. At the bottom of the article, in a section named “References” or “Footnotes”, add <code><nowiki><div class="references-small"><references/></div></nowiki></code>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#foot|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Layered clothing]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Layered clothing|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 11:45, 2 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at [[WP:LEAD]]; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadlong|[?]]]</sup>
*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
*This article needs [[WP:FOOTNOTE|footnotes]], preferably in the [http://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/Cite/Cite.php cite.php] format recommended by [[WP:WIAFA]]. Simply, enclose inline citations, with [[WP:CITE]] or [[WP:CITE/ES]] information, with <nowiki><ref>THE FOOTNOTE</ref></nowiki>. At the bottom of the article, in a section named “References” or “Footnotes”, add <code><nowiki><div class="references-small"><references/></div></nowiki></code>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#foot|[?]]]</sup>
*The article will need references. See [[WP:CITE]] and [[WP:V]] for more information.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#ref|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[NoHomers.net]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|NoHomers.net|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 11:45, 2 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 8 additive terms, a bit too much.
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant -  “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Defense Technical Information Center]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Defense Technical Information Center|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 02:53, 1 August 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at [[WP:LEAD]]; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadlong|[?]]]</sup>
*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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