User contributions for Kjorg23
Results for Kjorg23 talk block log uploads logs global block log global account filter log
A user with 282 edits. Account created on 26 May 2012.
3 January 2024
19 October 2023
- 01:3601:36, 19 October 2023 diff hist +10 Sid Luckman →T-formation: Fixed dangling modifier.
29 July 2023
- 15:4615:46, 29 July 2023 diff hist 0 m Suicide by cop →Overview
17 July 2023
- 03:2603:26, 17 July 2023 diff hist +2 m Grand Moff Tarkin The hyphen should be an en-dash as "sized" modifies "dwarf planet" and not merely "planet."
15 July 2023
- 15:3015:30, 15 July 2023 diff hist +8 m Drew Struzan →Creative process: Absolute phrase needed subject.
22 February 2023
19 February 2023
- 15:2515:25, 19 February 2023 diff hist +21 Curley Culp →Houston Oilers: Dangling modifier fixed.
24 July 2021
- 17:0817:08, 24 July 2021 diff hist +7 Unbreakable (film) misplaced modifier
1 May 2021
- 20:5720:57, 1 May 2021 diff hist +1 m Smith & Wesson Model 3 →Schofield revolver
- 20:5720:57, 1 May 2021 diff hist +7 Smith & Wesson Model 3 →Schofield revolver: Grammar, phrasing
23 April 2021
- 19:2519:25, 23 April 2021 diff hist +4 .38 Special →Overview: Changed present-participle adjective phrase to relative clause.
- 19:2419:24, 23 April 2021 diff hist +9 .38 Special →Overview
- 19:2119:21, 23 April 2021 diff hist −2 m .38 Special →Overview
- 19:2019:20, 23 April 2021 diff hist +98 .38 Special →Overview: Fixed grammar.
17 April 2021
- 18:0518:05, 17 April 2021 diff hist +15 Winchester rifle →Model 1876: Fixed dangling modifier.
6 April 2021
- 20:0220:02, 6 April 2021 diff hist −5 m Modern Times: A History of the World from the 1920s to the 1980s →Worldview
3 April 2021
- 02:0202:02, 3 April 2021 diff hist +33 m Kenneth S. Wherry →U.S. Senator: "Them" had no clear antecedent.
- 01:4601:46, 3 April 2021 diff hist −11 Robert A. Taft →Opposition to New Deal: "Stalled" should be the object complement of "stalled." Using the conjunction "and" accomplishes this.
15 March 2021
- 02:3302:33, 15 March 2021 diff hist −10 National meetings of the Workers' Party of Korea No edit summary
- 02:1902:19, 15 March 2021 diff hist +1 m National meetings of the Workers' Party of Korea No edit summary
- 02:1902:19, 15 March 2021 diff hist +11 m National meetings of the Workers' Party of Korea No edit summary
- 02:1502:15, 15 March 2021 diff hist +37 National meetings of the Workers' Party of Korea Added Korean and changed wording so as to be more faithful to the Korean.
- 02:1102:11, 15 March 2021 diff hist 0 m National meetings of the Workers' Party of Korea No edit summary
- 02:0702:07, 15 March 2021 diff hist +1 Politburo of the Workers' Party of Korea Undid revision 1012184560 by Vif12vf (talk) See the Election section of the article about the 1st Congress of the Workers' Party of North Korea: "It elected the 1st Political Committee (composed of five members)," wherein "Political Committee" links to the present article. "정치국" is analogous to "Political Committee." "상무위원회" is analogous to "Standing Committee." Tag: Undo
- 00:5600:56, 15 March 2021 diff hist −4 Presidium of the Politburo of the Workers' Party of Korea No edit summary
- 00:5500:55, 15 March 2021 diff hist −1 Presidium of the Politburo of the Workers' Party of Korea No edit summary
- 00:5500:55, 15 March 2021 diff hist +1 Politburo of the Workers' Party of Korea No edit summary Tag: Reverted
3 March 2021
- 20:1420:14, 3 March 2021 diff hist 0 Tyreek Hill →Child abuse investigation: Fixed comma splice, change in tense.
7 February 2021
- 04:5004:50, 7 February 2021 diff hist +22 Oklahoma City bombing →Casualties
- 04:4604:46, 7 February 2021 diff hist −1 m Oklahoma City bombing →Arrests
- 04:3904:39, 7 February 2021 diff hist −2 m Oklahoma City bombing →Arrests
- 04:3204:32, 7 February 2021 diff hist −1 m Oklahoma City bombing →Bombing
- 04:3104:31, 7 February 2021 diff hist +10 Oklahoma City bombing →Bombing: Changed syntax to improve readibility
- 04:2504:25, 7 February 2021 diff hist 0 m Livery improper semicolon
- 04:0004:00, 7 February 2021 diff hist −1 Lon Horiuchi essential relative clause
6 February 2021
- 07:4607:46, 6 February 2021 diff hist +4 William Gazecki No edit summary
3 February 2021
- 03:2903:29, 3 February 2021 diff hist +1 m Del Shofner No edit summary
- 03:2403:24, 3 February 2021 diff hist +1 m Y. A. Tittle →Personal life
- 03:2103:21, 3 February 2021 diff hist +1 m Y. A. Tittle →Profile and playing style
- 03:2003:20, 3 February 2021 diff hist −16 Y. A. Tittle →Profile and playing style
- 03:1603:16, 3 February 2021 diff hist +3 Y. A. Tittle →Profile and playing style
- 02:5802:58, 3 February 2021 diff hist +1 m Sam Adams (American football) →Professional career
- 02:3302:33, 3 February 2021 diff hist −1 m John Brodie →Personal life
- 02:3202:32, 3 February 2021 diff hist −1 m John Brodie →Professional football career
28 January 2021
- 05:3805:38, 28 January 2021 diff hist −3 Ralph Nader Undid revision 1003262102 by Elizium23 (talk)My infinitive phrase is grammatically correct. And it does not contain an omission as does the current noun clause: the omitted "that" before "he purchases." Tag: Reverted
- 04:1704:17, 28 January 2021 diff hist −1 Ralph Nader →Personality and character traits Tag: Reverted
20 January 2021
- 08:4308:43, 20 January 2021 diff hist +5 Steve Reeves →Later roles: Reeves is dead.
13 January 2021
- 20:4620:46, 13 January 2021 diff hist −5 Pete Maravich →Early life: "Former" indicated he was a player-turned-coach who then became something else. The en-dash is for the open compound "professional player."
