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22:5322:53, 25 May 2020 diff hist −2 The infernal names →The Infernal Names: Fix a name, based on info from the linked article Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

17:3517:35, 24 May 2020 diff hist −53 Curse and mark of Cain →Priesthood ban: rm very broad & unsourced generalization
10:5410:54, 24 May 2020 diff hist +75 Cain and Abel →Jewish and Christian interpretations: 1st paragraph: The article stated that Cain hadn't received instructions or done anything wrong, but the Bible text doesn't actually specify if he did *or* didn't.
10:2110:21, 24 May 2020 diff hist +136 Leukemia →Acute lymphoblastic: add "clarify" tag – what is the purpose of lumbar punctures?
08:4008:40, 24 May 2020 diff hist −7 Rebaptism →In the Catholic Church: Small NPOV: "admit" is probably meant in some technical sense here, but colloquially, it could be taken as meaning they refuse to acknowledge something which is nevertheless true. Rewording to remove that connotation.
08:2808:28, 24 May 2020 diff hist −43 Rebaptism rm misplaced, unsourced statement. If a particular denomination and/or notable theologian uses this passage to justify re-baptism, please provide source and put in the appropriate section.

11:3911:39, 23 May 2020 diff hist −27 Holocaust victims →Scope of usage: rm ethnic slur (would any other ethnicity be accompanied by a slur?)
07:4307:43, 23 May 2020 diff hist +606 Talk:Naji al-Ali →Location of bullet wound: new section
06:0306:03, 23 May 2020 diff hist −74 Social parasitism (offense) →Usage: rm ethnic slur (we wouldn't include a parenthetical slur for any other ethnicity)
05:2605:26, 23 May 2020 diff hist +11 Soft coup →Notable cases: add "Zimbabwean" cause it didn't say where Mugabe was from

22:5922:59, 19 May 2020 diff hist +1 Five Ks →Kachera: fix wikilink
19:3319:33, 19 May 2020 diff hist +1 Comparison of Islamic and Jewish dietary laws →Differences: missing space
19:2319:23, 19 May 2020 diff hist +99 Comparison of Islamic and Jewish dietary laws Undid revision 956782301 by Foxyc78 (talk) Those are not "extra" words. The sentences are incomplete without them, without at least a little additional editing. Tag: Undo

15:2615:26, 18 May 2020 diff hist −182 Suspension (punishment) →Out-of-School Suspension: make more concise
15:2315:23, 18 May 2020 diff hist −98 Plum Island (Wisconsin) →References: rm unnecessary reference – basic grammatical corrections don't need in-article citations
15:1915:19, 18 May 2020 diff hist +29 Grounding (discipline technique) grammar, conciseness, remove unhelpful vagueness
15:1815:18, 18 May 2020 diff hist −34 Emergency Broadcast System Undid revision 955562701 by 2604:6000:120B:81B1:15AC:4E66:E79C:6A90 (talk) RVV Tag: Undo
02:3302:33, 18 May 2020 diff hist +184 Morlock add source that Morlachs provides for the claim that Morlachs inspired Morlocks
02:1002:10, 18 May 2020 diff hist −5 Morlachs →Legacy: Rm slur. This is neither presented as a direct quote, nor essential to understanding the meaning. Per WP:OM, slurs are permitted "if and only if its omission would cause the article to be less informative, relevant, or accurate, and no equally suitable alternative is available."

04:4804:48, 17 May 2020 diff hist +39 Sibling →Pseudo: unreferenced section
04:3704:37, 17 May 2020 diff hist +14 Sibling →God: wikilink
04:3104:31, 17 May 2020 diff hist +16 Sibling →Horizontal: clarify – they are always first cousins, because their (non-shared) parents are siblings.
04:2704:27, 17 May 2020 diff hist +43 Sibling →{{anchor|Half-sibling}} Half: theoretical possibility of 0% shared genes – clarify language for folks who have less prior knowledge of genetics (more clarification is probably possible)
02:0502:05, 17 May 2020 diff hist −156 Birth control in Japan →History: Remove undersourced claim that abortion providers were responsible for keeping birth control illegal: resembles common anti-abortion conspiracy theory, so extra scrutiny is appropriate. Also assorted grammar & readability improvements.
01:2301:23, 17 May 2020 diff hist +16 Nishiyama Onsen Keiunkan →Description: add Template:Inconsistent – info about the company Yushima contradicts prior section

22:2422:24, 16 May 2020 diff hist −13 Steven Hyde rv back further (original "undo" didn't catch it all)
22:2322:23, 16 May 2020 diff hist −133 Jackie Burkhart rv: unsourced

23:4023:40, 15 May 2020 diff hist +180 List of fictional games →Combat sports: Large re-write to Hunger Games – it's not really "teams of two," ultimately it's every participant for themself. Plus other clarifications and additions.
23:2023:20, 15 May 2020 diff hist +106 List of fictional games →Athletic sports: clarify that "Taking the Stone" is only *usually* non-fatal

07:2307:23, 14 May 2020 diff hist −4 Iddah →Interpretation: correction
05:5005:50, 14 May 2020 diff hist −543 Sibling →Twins: Condense unnecessarily long narrative down to brief summary

19:1919:19, 11 May 2020 diff hist +11 Namus →Gender: Fix 2 references
19:0319:03, 11 May 2020 diff hist +154 ISBN add clarification to intro – this is what I came to learn about, and it was confusing that the intro appeared to contradict the actual book listing I was looking at, which had both
03:4503:45, 11 May 2020 diff hist +23 Animal-borne bomb attacks →Afghanistan: What camp? Where?

06:5606:56, 9 May 2020 diff hist +21 Grama (halacha) →See also: Add Pikuach nefesh – the article seems to allude to it, and it's also related to the question of when and how Shabbat rules may be suspended

17:5817:58, 5 May 2020 diff hist +42 Grounding (discipline technique) grammar and more inclusivity
17:5417:54, 5 May 2020 diff hist −36 Emergency Broadcast System rv removal of source Tag: Undo
16:3816:38, 5 May 2020 diff hist −59 Kill switch rv: please provide source for the computers being able to detect accidents in particular Tag: Undo
16:2916:29, 5 May 2020 diff hist −30 Suspension (punishment) rv addition of redundant info, removal of relevant info, and unnecessary, vague, informal language
16:2016:20, 5 May 2020 diff hist −244 Runaway (dependent) →Causes: rv: not found in the given source (please give page number if I just missed it), also not the subject of this section Tag: Undo
16:0016:00, 5 May 2020 diff hist +24 Eritrea →Cuisine: Reinstate more readable version, modified to reflect criticism. Please take any additional concerns to the talk page so this doesn't become an edit war.
15:5715:57, 5 May 2020 diff hist +2,762 Talk:Eritrea →Eritrean beverages: Start section