User contributions for 71.255.77.207

14 September 2024

• 15:3315:33, 14 September 2024 diff hist +11 Jane's Addiction →2024–present: Navarro's return, classic line-up reunion, and new material: Required comma, better wording

10 January 2024

• 16:5616:56, 10 January 2024 diff hist +9 Lloyd Austin →Tenure: Syntax fix. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 15:4915:49, 10 January 2024 diff hist +46 Bibb City, Georgia Should be mentioned in first paragraph. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 15:4415:44, 10 January 2024 diff hist +37 Bibb City, Georgia →Demographics: Clarity Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

9 January 2024

• 23:4823:48, 9 January 2024 diff hist +3 Lloyd Austin →Tenure: Fix preposition for clarity. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 22:0222:02, 9 January 2024 diff hist +13 Adan Canto →Personal life and death: Added. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 21:4421:44, 9 January 2024 diff hist +2 David Soul →Personal life: Proper form. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 17:3617:36, 9 January 2024 diff hist 0 Columbus, Georgia The year was 2000, not 2010. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 16:4816:48, 9 January 2024 diff hist +40 Lloyd Austin →Tenure: Syntax fix. Content unchanged. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 16:4016:40, 9 January 2024 diff hist −4 Lloyd Austin →Secretary of Defense (2021–present): Word "present" is not italicized in Wikipedia. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 16:3516:35, 9 January 2024 diff hist +35 Bibb City, Georgia Syntax improvements. First sentence recast per Wikipedia usage for cities. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 02:2402:24, 9 January 2024 diff hist +12 Columbus, Georgia →From the Civilized Tribes to incorporation: Columbus wasn't founded until 1828, long after Georgia's "Colonial era." No colonists lived there, so "From the Civilzed Tribes to incorporation" or perhaps "Early years" is more appropriate. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 02:1502:15, 9 January 2024 diff hist −1 David Soul →Personal life: And it should read "Come," not "Comes." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

8 January 2024

• 23:0723:07, 8 January 2024 diff hist 0 David Soul →Personal life: Hyphen here, not a slash. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 22:4622:46, 8 January 2024 diff hist +4 David Soul →Personal life: Italics for TV series. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

7 January 2024

• 23:2223:22, 7 January 2024 diff hist +31 David Soul Restoring consensus. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 18:5918:59, 7 January 2024 diff hist −1 David Soul →Personal life: Back to one word. WP's article is soulmate. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 18:5718:57, 7 January 2024 diff hist +13 David Soul →Personal life: WP style: required comma, avoid first names (except in quotations); "soul mate" is generally two words. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 00:1700:17, 7 January 2024 diff hist +16 Charleston, South Carolina Separate sentences better. Also, "metropolitan statistical area" must appear after first in the series, not delayed at very end. It applies to all three rankings. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

6 January 2024

• 22:5422:54, 6 January 2024 diff hist +6 China Soul Use hyphen (or word "and") instead of a slash: Wikipedia English style rules Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 21:5621:56, 6 January 2024 diff hist +1 David Soul "A career spanning five decades, he rose..." is a dangling participle and must be corrected. "With" is one way to fix what is a grammatical error. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 15:5615:56, 6 January 2024 diff hist +11 David Soul Syntax (avoid awkward "and" string). Also, his role on ''Salem's Lot'' was not just an "appearance," but the lead. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 02:0302:03, 6 January 2024 diff hist +33 Columbus, Georgia Flesh out sentence for clarity. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 01:5501:55, 6 January 2024 diff hist +1 Universidad de las Américas, A.C. →Continuing education: Acute accent (á) added. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 00:5800:58, 6 January 2024 diff hist +19 David Soul Restoring the original wording. (1) Soul held dual citizenship, and it's standard to mention both in Wikipedia (see Joni Mitchell). (2). Soul was also a singer. Removing "singer" in first sentence is incompatible with later sentence that says, "As a singer..." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

5 January 2024

• 23:5523:55, 5 January 2024 diff hist +163 User talk:71.255.77.207 →January 2024: Reply Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Reply
• 23:5323:53, 5 January 2024 diff hist −1 User talk:Dirkbb →Misspelling in Lenny Baker Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 23:4323:43, 5 January 2024 diff hist −2 Lenny Baker →Death: Again, friends: the correct spelling is "vocal cords." "Vocal chords" is a misspelling that belongs in no encyclopedia. Thanks. Tags: Manual revert Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 23:3923:39, 5 January 2024 diff hist −1 User talk:Dirkbb →Misspelling in Lenny Baker Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 23:3823:38, 5 January 2024 diff hist +528 User talk:Dirkbb →Misspelling in Lenny Baker: new section Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit New topic
• 23:2623:26, 5 January 2024 diff hist +8 David Soul Actors and singers with dual citizenship are described this way throughout Wikipedia. See Joni Mitchell; there are many others. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 23:1723:17, 5 January 2024 diff hist +5 David Soul Year added back in Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 22:2722:27, 5 January 2024 diff hist +26 David Soul →Personal life: Hyphens per WP-EN style. Word "prior" needs a referent (added). Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 22:2122:21, 5 January 2024 diff hist −47 David Soul →Personal life: Fix text glitch. Also, correct spelling is "Solberg." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 21:4821:48, 5 January 2024 diff hist +29 David Soul Clarity. Also, TV movies aren't "hits". They're popular or highly rated. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 19:4619:46, 5 January 2024 diff hist +72 Universidad de las Américas, A.C. Syntax, wording. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 16:3616:36, 5 January 2024 diff hist +11 David Soul Proper WP-EN formats. Also, "CAN" as abbreviation for Canada is never used in WP. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

4 January 2024

• 17:3117:31, 4 January 2024 diff hist +217 User talk:71.255.77.207 →December 2023: Reply Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Reply
• 17:2817:28, 4 January 2024 diff hist +435 User talk:Macaddct1984 →No, the spelling is indeed in error: new section Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit New topic
• 17:1417:14, 4 January 2024 diff hist −2 Lenny Baker →Death: Sorry, but the correct spelling is vocal cords, not "chords." Musical chords are different from anatomical cords. Please consult any dictionary of the English language. Tags: Manual revert Reverted Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 16:4216:42, 4 January 2024 diff hist −17 William Austin Dickinson Emily Dickinson wasn't an acclaimed poet until the 20th century, after William Austin's death. Also, "world-famous" is an unencyclopedic term and should be avoided. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 00:1300:13, 4 January 2024 diff hist −20 Trial of Hamid Nouri →Arrest: WP-English punctuation, style Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

3 January 2024

• 21:4221:42, 3 January 2024 diff hist +9 Rapini →Culinary use: Word "it" is easily confused with antecedent, "sandwich." For clarity, repeat correct term: "rapini" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

2 January 2024

• 19:2419:24, 2 January 2024 diff hist +221 Talk:United States →Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 1 January 2024: Reply Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Reply

31 December 2023

• 21:2721:27, 31 December 2023 diff hist −1 Dan Seals →Later albums, career and death: No comma. Delete. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

30 December 2023

• 21:4421:44, 30 December 2023 diff hist −6 Green Haven Correctional Facility →Notable inmates: Match syntax, each entry. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 21:0221:02, 30 December 2023 diff hist −2 Lenny Baker →Death: Spelling fixes. Tags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 19:3619:36, 30 December 2023 diff hist +320 Talk:Tina Turner →RfC: Restore nationality Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 19:2619:26, 30 December 2023 diff hist +21 Tina Turner The consensus, what little there is, is to restore the standard Wikipedia usage: born here, took only one citizenship there. Every WP article -- no exceptiins -- states a singer's or actor's nationality in first sentence; to drop any reference entirely is POV bias. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

28 December 2023

• 23:0123:01, 28 December 2023 diff hist +3 Rawa Majid Typo fix. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit