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: "According to critics, EMP uses education as a cover for promoting anti-Semitism". What is EMP? Why isn't it quoted? And what critics say it? Nothing is specified. Sounds like an attack line in the article's lead paragraph. [[User:Gobulls|Gobulls]] ([[User talk:Gobulls|talk]]) 16:02, 12 November 2018 (UTC)
::Of course it should be AMP, fixed. The sentense is attributed to critics, so it is not an objective fact in wikipedia voice. Yes, an attack line right after a praise line, in an attempt to achieve balance.
::: The source does not say critics. The source says that is ADL's viewpoint. We can easily use more reliable sources than ADL's self-published source. [[User:Gobulls|Gobulls]] ([[User talk:Gobulls|talk]]) 15:52, 13 November 2018 (UTC)
: "The organization is also accused of rising out from Muslim Brotherhood in the United States and having an Islamist view on the Israeli–Palestinian peace process." Who accuses? [[User:Gobulls|Gobulls]] ([[User talk:Gobulls|talk]]) 17:25, 12 November 2018 (UTC)
::There is a long list: [https://www.globalmbwatch.com/american-muslims-for-palestine/] [https://clarionproject.org/american-muslims-palestine-amp/] [http://www.newantisemitism.com/antisemitism/is-the-muslim-brotherhood-losing-its-grip-on-america] [http://jcpa.org/article/are-the-muslim-brotherhood-and-hamas-mobilizing-to-take-over-the-plo/]. Currently the article only cites Asaf Romirowsky, but it's really easy to add more references. [[User_talk:WarKosign|“]][[User:WarKosign|WarKosign]][[Special:Contributions/WarKosign|”]] 21:56, 12 November 2018 (UTC)
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