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'''Review''' – The article is in decent shape, although perhaps a little short. Here are a few observations:
* <s>The 'absolute magnitude' values in the infobox need a proper citation; just computing them isn't enough. (Kervella et al. (2008) give the absolute bolometric magnitudes for the two stars; it might be better to use that field instead.)</s>
:*Done. A better cite of stellar-database is now used. -[[User:The Herald|The Herald]] [[User talk:The Herald|<sup style="margin-left:0.5px">''the joy of the LORD''</sup>]][[Special:Contributions/The Herald|<sub style="margin-left:-47.5px">''my strength''</sub>]] 04:34, 19 March 2015 (UTC)
:** Ah, well you've replaced what was a perfectly suitable citation for the ''apparent'' magnitude with a different citation. The ''absolute'' magnitude values are not cited. :-) I would again suggest just using the Kervalla et al. (2008) citation and the absolute bolometric magnitude field of the template. [[User:Praemonitus|Praemonitus]] ([[User talk:Praemonitus|talk]]) 16:33, 19 March 2015 (UTC)
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:::** No, that reference does not supply an absolute magnitude. [[User:Praemonitus|Praemonitus]] ([[User talk:Praemonitus|talk]]) 21:18, 20 March 2015 (UTC)
:::::*stellardatabase did..:-) -[[User:The Herald|The Herald]] [[User talk:The Herald|<sup style="margin-left:0.5px">''the joy of the LORD''</sup>]][[Special:Contributions/The Herald|<sub style="margin-left:-47.5px">''my strength''</sub>]] 04:27, 21 March 2015 (UTC)
::::::* <s>stellardatabase doesn't appear to be a reliable source.</s> Fixed it for you. [[User:Praemonitus|Praemonitus]] ([[User talk:Praemonitus|talk]]) 15:51, 23 March 2015 (UTC)
* <s>The article needs to explain the meaning of the name '61 Cygni'. For example, where did it originate?</s>
:*Done. -[[User:The Herald|The Herald]] [[User talk:The Herald|<sup style="margin-left:0.5px">''the joy of the LORD''</sup>]][[Special:Contributions/The Herald|<sub style="margin-left:-47.5px">''my strength''</sub>]] 04:34, 19 March 2015 (UTC)
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