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*I think United States should be added to the lead and info box, because a lot of people won't necessarily know where Rhode Island is.
:: Done. [[User:ChrisGualtieri|ChrisGualtieri]] ([[User talk:ChrisGualtieri|talk]])
*Which leads me on to perhaps a map of the US being included in the info box to give a geographical location of Rhode Island itself?
:: I do not know how to make such a map and it is not a requirement. [[User:ChrisGualtieri|ChrisGualtieri]] ([[User talk:ChrisGualtieri|talk]]) 15:12, 26 August 2015 (UTC)
*Why isn't the designer's name in the info box? Does a parameter not exist?
:: Maybe the Sculptor tag is defunct? I do not know it is in there. [[User:ChrisGualtieri|ChrisGualtieri]] ([[User talk:ChrisGualtieri|talk]]) 15:12, 26 August 2015 (UTC)
*Quotations in the lead need to have an inline citation after it.
:: Done. [[User:ChrisGualtieri|ChrisGualtieri]] ([[User talk:ChrisGualtieri|talk]]) 15:12, 26 August 2015 (UTC)
*, particularly in New York were → Comma after New York
:: Fixed.
*the war dead → Does this mean people who died in the war? If so, which war?
:: For a World War I Memorial... the war dead applies to World War I. [[User:ChrisGualtieri|ChrisGualtieri]] ([[User talk:ChrisGualtieri|talk]]) 15:12, 26 August 2015 (UTC)
*The success this the earlier → Doesn't make sense
:: Fixed. [[User:ChrisGualtieri|ChrisGualtieri]] ([[User talk:ChrisGualtieri|talk]]) 15:12, 26 August 2015 (UTC)
*Do we know what gave them reason to call the original design too brutal?
:: No, but it is not hard to imagine why. Though in such sculpture it is a more brutal depiction. You can liken it to a statue of the Terminator in a power pose except this is a memorial... it is pretty intense whereas most others are somber and peaceful. [[User:ChrisGualtieri|ChrisGualtieri]] ([[User talk:ChrisGualtieri|talk]]) 15:12, 26 August 2015 (UTC)
*Onorato describes the sculpture → Who is this?
:: Fixed [[User:ChrisGualtieri|ChrisGualtieri]] ([[User talk:ChrisGualtieri|talk]]) 15:12, 26 August 2015 (UTC)
*sculpture as, → I don't think a comma is needed here.
:: Fixed [[User:ChrisGualtieri|ChrisGualtieri]] ([[User talk:ChrisGualtieri|talk]]) 15:12, 26 August 2015 (UTC)
*The front relief is states → Doesn't make sense
:: Fixed [[User:ChrisGualtieri|ChrisGualtieri]] ([[User talk:ChrisGualtieri|talk]]) 15:12, 26 August 2015 (UTC)
*It was added to the National Register of Historic Places on October 19, 2001. → Source?
:: Linked it. [[User:ChrisGualtieri|ChrisGualtieri]] ([[User talk:ChrisGualtieri|talk]]) 15:12, 26 August 2015 (UTC)
*The references use different date formats. Pick one and be consistent with it.
:: Done. [[User:ChrisGualtieri|ChrisGualtieri]] ([[User talk:ChrisGualtieri|talk]]) 15:12, 26 August 2015 (UTC)
;Outcome
On hold for 7 days. Neat article. — [[User:Calvin999|<b style="color:#595454">Calvin999</b>]] 19:52, 19 August 2015 (UTC)
: Unfortunately, I'm failing this article. 7 days has passed since I placed the article on hold. No response or acknowledgment from the nominator, and the nominator has been very inactive. Act on my suggestions above and I'm sure it will pass next time. — [[User:Calvin999|<b style="color:#595454">Calvin999</b>]] 07:57, 26 August 2015 (UTC)
::: {{yo|Calvin999}} - I was busy with life. Fixes done before the end of the 7 day period though. Please check it. [[User:ChrisGualtieri|ChrisGualtieri]] ([[User talk:ChrisGualtieri|talk]]) 15:12, 26 August 2015 (UTC)
After checking at GAN, it is okay for me to remove the failed template and replaced with passed template. — [[User:Calvin999|<b style="color:#595454">Calvin999</b>]] 17:33, 26 August 2015 (UTC)
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